my big family

100字
主题:亲情、成长、归属感、爱

my big family

i have a big family . i have a mother a father a grandfather and a grandmother

my grandfather is tom .my grandmother is mary .my father is john and my mother

is lucy . my name is jim .we are both happy .i hope my family more happy .i like myfamily

,too.

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名字全用英文,又没大写,像在填表格,家人名字是称呼,不是密码!

my school day

250字
主题:校园生活、时间管理、学习日常、成长记录

my school day

im __. im 13 years old. im in no 79 middle school. let me tell you my school day. i get up at half past si_ and have breakfast at a quarter to seven. i go to school at seven. in the morning. we have four lessons. lessons start at five past eight. we have chinese at five past eight. we have an english lesson at five to nine, and at twenty-five to ten, we have break. at ten past ten we have p.e lesson. we have an art at eleven and then we have lunch. in the afternoon we have three lessons. then i go home at five oclock. i have dinner at half past si_. i do my homework at seven a oclock. i go to bed at ten oclock.

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标点太“省”啦!句号几乎不见影子,逗号乱跑,英文大小写也常偷懒,“i”全小写,“no 79 middle school”没大写,“p.e”该写成“p.e.”。改三处,整篇清爽一大半。

我的一天英语作文

150字
主题:成长、习惯、学习、健康、青春、自律

我的一天英语作文

i am jme. i am 13 year old.

i am in no 29 middle school . i get up at half past si_ and i have my breakfast. then i go to school on foot. i have lunch at school. i have the nine lesses. i like the sport. i like the run. so every day we after school and my friend go play teenis. i go to bed at nine.

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句子主谓基本能对上,动词时态也敢用“go play”这种活法,比抄范文强!但“tennis”拼成“teenis”了,下次写完自己读一遍,耳朵会帮你揪错~

my favorite day

150字
主题:校园生活、兴趣爱好、师生关系、课余时光

my favorite day

taday is friday. it is my favorite day. because i have music at 12:00. that is my favorite subject . i like my music teacher,mr li . he is fun . i have lunch at 2:00. my first class is at 3:00 in the afternoon. my last class is art. it is rela_ing. but my art teacher is very strict with us. aftei school, i have volleyball for two hours . then i join the chinese club . it is really interesting!

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“taday”“rela_ing”“aftei”,这几个拼写小坑,顺手改掉就更亮啦!

the talent show

150字
主题:成长、展示、合作、快乐、自信、舞台

the talent show

last weeks talent show was a great success.three was fifteen acts.eliza clark won the prize for the best performer.she played a beautiful piano piece,wang haoran was the quietest actor.he danced without music.the prize for thr most fun act went to steve tian and his dog,fido.they sang a cute song together.

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标点全乱套啦!“three was fifteen acts”这句语法错得让人心疼,逗号呢?句号呢?大小写呢?快翻翻课本p23的句子结构图,改完重抄一遍。

经典初中英语作文-吃自助餐的经验

500字
主题:欲望、平衡、享受、自省、适度、生活智慧

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today, after school, my friends asked me to have dinner with them, i felt so happy and went the restaurant with them. then i found they wanted to eat buffet, i was so happy, because i always wanted to have buffet, i could eat a lot of food. as we paid the money more than we usually spent, so all of us wanted to eat as more as possible, even though we were full enough, we still tried to eat. i would go the wash room many times, so that i could continue to eat. i found eating the buffet should be a happy thing for me, but now it seemed to be a kind of torture, i always told myself to eat more than i could bear, my stomach hurt. the e_perience to eat buffet lets me realize that i should enjoy the food instead of eat more than i could bear.

今天,下课后,我的邀请我和他们一起吃晚饭,我感到很开心,和他们一起去馆子。我发现朋友们想要吃自助餐,我很开心,因为我总是想要吃自助餐,我能吃很多食物。因为我们比平常多花了钱,所以我们都想要尽可能的多吃,即使我们足够的吃饱,仍然想要去吃。我会上很多次洗手间,这样我就能继续去吃。我发现吃自助餐对我来说应该是一件开心的事,但是却有点像是折磨,我总是告诉自己多吃,超过了承受的范围,胃都受伤了。吃自助餐的经历让我意识到我应该享受食物,而不是吃到超过自己的承受范围。

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“撑到跑厕所”写得细腻灵动!胃疼那句,真,扎心了。

我的一天英语

200字
主题:日常生活、时间管理、运动健康、家庭生活

我的一天英语作文

today i get up at eight . i have my breakfast at eight thirty . then i go for walk near my house . after about half an hour , i do my homework for about two hours . what is the time now ? oh! it is time for have lunch .in the afternoon , i ofter play basketball wish my good friends.by the way i am good at playing basketball. at about four , i go home . i have supper at si_ . at last i go to bed at half past eight. today,i have a good time.

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动词时态全乱套啦!“get up”“have breakfast”用一般现在时,后面又冒出“is time for have lunch”这种怪句,孩子,你是在写“每天routine”,还是“今天发生了啥”?标点也偷懒,逗号当句号用,英文作文里可没这规矩。

保护环境的初中英语作文

300字
主题:责任意识、从小事做起、人与自然、可持续发展

保护环境的初中英语作文

hello everyone! my name is cherry.i am a sunshine girl .i am the the student of nanshan e_perimental school . im in class 2 grade 5 and im eleven years old.

recently, shenzhen always has a haze. through the wood in the dome ,now i know how serious is very pollution.every day we will put the dust breathe into the body,the dust will affect our health, and even a threat to our lives.

so, from now , we should start protect environment.

before,i love the fireworks ,now i will try to put it less. i also love to play in the water when i was having a buth,and i waste a lot of water ,but now,i must save water.environmental protection starts from me start from the little things around us .for e_ample we driving. less as far as possible.

treat the earth is to yourself,lets make our earth better!

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开头自我介绍太长啦!保护环境才是主角,快把“我叫樱桃”这些缩成一句话带过~后面雾霾那段写得真让人担忧,灰尘进肺里那句,老师读着都咳嗽了!

我最喜欢的小动物英语

100字
主题:喜爱、陪伴、怀念、成长、离别、童真

我最喜欢的小动物英语作文

do you want to know my favorite animals? oh, my favorite is huahua .huahua is a cat.shi is very beautifui .shi likes eatting fishes very much.shi likes sleeping arrive the day but at night shi gets up.

but now shi doesn do my home .where is shi?where is shi?

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猫名“花花”拼成huahua,挺好记!但“shi”这个代词全篇混用,读着像在猜谜,猫是“她”还是“它”?下次写前先圈出所有代词,对照中文意思改一遍,试试?

how to get on with classmates

250字
主题:人际交往、校园生活、品德养成

how to get on with classmates

how do you get on with your classmates? i think it’s easy to answer that question.

if you meet up with your friends, you can say, “hello!” your friends must be happy, they will think that you are a polite girl or a boy!

if your friends have some questions, you should help them. they’ll thank you for your help.

my classmates are very helpful and polite. if one of my classmates has some problems, my classmates will help them solve it. so they are e_cited.

we help each other and take care of each other.

i hope you can be a polite and helpful child, and i hope you can get on well with all of your classmates.

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开头问得俏皮!“how do you get on with your classmates?”像拉家常,读着就亲切。话说回来第二段“a polite girl or a boy”有点生硬,孩子说话哪分男女呀?改成“a friendly kid”更自然。

my favourite singer

300字
主题:成长、追梦、榜样力量、自我认同、热爱、坚持

my favourite singer

she is such an ideal singer!

she is a girl with a lot of talent. she is a girl but she has individuality like a boy. on the stage, she sings and dances so well. she is so happy and she makes us e_cited… can you guess who she is? yes, she is li yuchun, the winner of “super girl 2026.”

she is a student of sichuan music college in grade 3. she is twenty-one this year. she is 1.74 metres tall. now she is very popular in china and even in the world. i know she worked hard in the past, and has succeeded today. i’ll learn from her and try my best to achieve my dream.

i like her because she is so cool and lovely. i love her because she makes me feel happy. i enjoy her because she is independent and she has the individuality of herself.

li yuchun, i’ll cheer for you forever!

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开头太直白啦!“my favourite singer”像抄题目,试试换成一句如临其境的话?比如“她一开口,我耳机里的世界就安静了”,你写李宇春跳舞那段多带感啊,开头也这样亮一嗓子呗!

旅行的初中英语作文

600字
主题:成长记忆、地域文化、家庭陪伴、城市印象、现代生活

有关旅行的初中英语作文

when i was a primary school student, my family and i took a trip to five cities which were in the south of china.

first, we came to nanjing by plane. that was the first time i had taken the plane and it took us an hour and a half to get there. we arrived in nanjing in the morning. at 11:30 we went to a restaurant to have lunch. the food tasted delicious. in the afternoon we went to “zhongshanling”. it was the place that preserve the tomb of mr. sugshan.

the ne_t day, we came to wu_i and then suzhou where we visited the region of rivers and lakes of “周庄”. it was a beautiful and old place. the house there were along the river and the women always washed clothes at the bank.the fourth day, we came to hangzhou where we visited “the west lake. it was very beautiful and the water was clear .

as we all know, hangzhou is famous for silk and tea, so we bought some beautiful silk and famous tea of “龙井”.the last place that we visited was shanghai. it was one of the biggest city is china. the night view in shanghai was more beautiful than beijing. we visited the tv tower of “东方明珠”. it was the third tallest tower in the world. standing in the tower you could see the whole city. in the evening, we lived in a hotel with 25 floors. i was very e_cited that evening.

this trip took us seven days and we went back to beijing by plane. the plane was very very big. there were three engine rooms. i felt happy and i would never forget the trip.

if i were to leave my home for a year, there is one thing i definitely would take with me: my cell phone. with my cell phone, i could call my friends or family if i ever was lonely, needed advice, or just wanted to talk.

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nanjing那段读着带劲“第一次坐飞机”“11:30去吃饭”“中山陵是孙先生墓地”,时间、动作、细节全在,像小镜头咔嚓咔嚓拍下来。就是“sugshan”拼错了,孙中山啊,下回查查字典再落笔~

寒假假期生活

450字
主题:成长日常、亲情互动、友情陪伴、自我认知、假期生活

when winter holiday is around corner,i have so many plans,but now i just like coughpotato. my sister and i sleep in the morning,my parents get mad at us.they force us to get up,we lock the bedroom door until we are both hungry.ha... because of final e_ams,our skin in bad condition,my sister said that sleeping is good for skin.yeah,female do care about their appearence all the time. afternoon belongs to friend.call them out and go shopping toghter.we gossip all the people we know.this feeling is so cool,you may find that friend is so important in the world,no on can live without them. my day is simple.

当寒假快要来临的时候,我有很多计划。但现在我非常懒惰。我和我姐姐早上睡懒觉,爸爸妈妈气死了。他们强迫我们起床,我们就把卧室的门锁上继续睡觉,直到我们都很饿为止。哈... 因为期末考试,我们的皮肤都不好。姐姐说睡眠对皮肤有好处。是,女人们动来都在乎自己的外表。下午是属于朋友的时间。叫他们出来一起买东西。我们谈论所有我们知道的人。这样的感觉很酷,你会发现在世上朋友是如此的重要,没有谁的生活能失去他们。我的一天很简单.

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这个“coughpotato”独具匠心!比“ couch potato”多了一点感冒的懒劲儿,还带点自嘲的俏皮,词儿造得有灵气,保留!

忙碌的一天英语

200字
主题:校园生活、时间管理、兴趣爱好、作息习惯

忙碌的一天英语作文 hello,every one. my name is tony.

do you want to know about my busy day?i usually get up at si_ oclock than, i brush my teeth and eat my breakfast i go to shool at seven oclock , i have four class at morning and i have seven class at afternoon ,

my favorite sbjuit is english because english is fun.

i eat lunch at 12:00, i have tomatoes ang eggs.

then i have pe, i don like pe, because pe is boring.

oh today is over. i go to bed at 9:30.

my busy day

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标点太调皮啦!句号逗号老爱“躲猫猫”,还有“si_ o'clock”,小手一滑?快把“six”补上,再把每句话开头字母大写,读起来就清爽多啦!

reading books is very interesting

250字
主题:热爱阅读、语言韵律、学习动力、文化启蒙、习惯养成

reading books is very interesting

a famous saying goes like this: knowledge is power. and the knowledge is in the books. i think reading books is very interesting! there is a children’s song here. take a look, it is very beautiful!

star light

star bright

first star i see tonight

wish i might

have the wish i wish tonight

it is a rhyme. it sounds spry. i’m sure you will get happy while you read this children’s song. don’t you think it is a good song?

certainly, reading famous books is good for us too. it’s good for our writing.

i hope everyone will like reading, and the reading is good for everyone!

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“star light/star bright”写得工工整整,还知道标点要占格,字迹比上回进步多了!但是“spry”这个词用得有点怪,查查词典?

my favorite sport

250字
主题:热爱运动、亲子陪伴、自信培养、健康生活

my favorite sport

i like sports very much, such as running, skating, playing basketball. but swimming is my favorite sport .

when i was si_ years old, my parents often took me to a swimming pool . they taught me how to swim. they told me not to be afraid of water , and told me to jump into water bravely. later i became very interesting in swimming. swimming is really very interesting .if you swim in the water, you will look like a lovely fish . great fun. .im sure you will feel very happy. and the most important thing is , if you swim, you’ll be strong.

by the way, i took part in the swimming match last week in our town.?i?was the winner. dear friends, swimming is really very good for us. let’s enjoy swimming .

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标点太“懒”啦!句号叠着句号,问号后面还跟个问号?还有那个si_,是six还是seven?写清楚呀~

my daily routine

200字
主题:日常生活、规律作息、校园生活、健康习惯、童年时光

my daily routine

i have the same routine from monday to friday. i usually get up at five fifty. then i have breakfast. at si_ thirty, i go to school. i don’t ride a bike. i go to school on foot. i have five lessons in the morning. i do morning e_ercises with my classmates after the second lesson. at eleven thirty, i go home for lunch. in the afternoon, i have three lessons. after class, we often have sports in the playground. at five, i go home. after supper, i do my homework. at about ten, i go to bed. i am happy every day.

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单词拼写小马虎啦!“six”写成“si_”,“exercises”漏了字母,还有“i”要大写哦~但是时间线清清楚楚,读着像踩着铃声走,真有节奏感!

清明节扫墓英语作文

450字
主题:敬祖、慎终、生命观、传统延续、家国情怀

描写清明节扫墓的初中英语作文:清明节扫墓英语作文

last qingming festival,i return home to worship my grandfather.qingming festival is a folk festival.in the past,in the past, the qingming festival was called ”arbor day”. but today, chinese visit their family graves to tend to any underbrush that has grown. weeds are pulled, and dirt swept away, and the family will set out offerings of food and spirit money. unlike the sacrifices at a family‘s home altar, the offerings at the tomb usually consist of dry, bland food. one theory is that since any number of ghosts rome around a grave area, the less appealing food will be consumed by the ancestors, and not be plundered by strangers.

with the passing of time, this celebration of life became a day to the honor past ancestors. following folk religion, the chinese believed that the spirits of deceased ancestors looked after the family. sacrifices of food and spirit money could keep them happy, and the family would prosper through good harvests and more children.

worship还可以用来指宗教礼拜,它还可以表示“祭拜”。清明节时,we return home today to worship grandfather(我们回家乡祭拜外公)。

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这篇作文把清明扫墓的细节写得挺委实!“weeds are pulled, and dirt swept away”这句画面感很强,像亲眼看见一样。美中不足“in the past,in the past”重复了,读着绊一下,顺手划掉一个就好~

what is happiness?

350字
主题:幸福观、物质与精神、人生选择、人文关怀

what is happiness?

i often think about this question. if i say what it is, some people will laugh at me. they think it is an easy question. i often ask them, “what is happiness?” some of them say to me, “you’re foolish.” the answer to the easy question is to have a lot of money. when i receive this answer, i will frown with unhappiness. some will ask me again, “why?” i will say, “well, having a lot of money isn’t a bad thing. in present time, some people begin to find jobs to make a living. they all want to be the second, the third, the fourth, even the fifth bill gates. maybe they’re millionaires now, but are they happy? i don’t think they are happy. if they want to be another bill gates, they must spend more time at their jobs and take less care of their families or the other things. though this is the reason though they have a lot of money, i don’t think they have a happy life.

in a way, if you want to be a person with a lot of happiness, then try to be like this:

be a kind, helpful and friendly person.

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用“钱多=幸福?”这个反问,把同龄人常有的迷思戳得挺准!后半段“顾不上家人”这句,写得像放学路上随口说的话,反而最有力。下次试试把“bill gates”换成咱们班谁攒钱买球鞋、谁熬夜赶作业的例子?更近一点。

want to be an astronaut

200字
主题:成长、理想、科学、好奇、勇气、未来

when i was a little girl,my grandmother used to tell me stories about the moon. even today, every time i watch the sky at night,i would imagine what is happening among the twinkling stars. i hope to be an astronaut in the future so that i can walk in space. i want to walk on the mars and meet living creatures there. i know it’s not easy to be an astronaut.so i study hard and try to learn more about space in order to be a good astronaut.

注释:

1) every time每次

2) in the future将来

3) walk in space太空行走

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眼里有星星,心里有飞船!“walk on the mars”要改成“mars”哦,专有名词大写,像给星球鞠个躬~

初中腊八节英语作文

350字
主题:亲情、民俗、节庆、成长、温暖、传承

初中腊八节英语作文

today is the lunar december eighth day - the laba festival. the laba festival in china has a long tradition and history, on this day drink the laba laba rice porridge, do is the most traditional people all over the country, is also the most pay attention to the customs.

at night, dad with red jujube, lotus seeds, beans, peanuts, black beans, wheat berry, lily, eight kinds of material such as rice stayed up the whole pot of delicious rice porridge.

mom put porridge is good, in the table. i use the spoon gently drew a few times in a bowl, good let it cool faster. then, scoop a spoonful of their mouth. porridge boil rotten rotten, quickly melted in your mouth. i said to my father: dad, you can endure to laba rice porridge is really nice. the father said, you drink a bowl of laba porridge, you will happy auspicious. listen to father said these words, i feel very warm and happiness.

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腊八粥的“烂烂的”“化在嘴里”写得真馋人!后半段对话里,爸爸那句“喝一碗就吉祥”,多像咱家灶台边飘出的话啊,稍显“烂烂的”建议改成“软糯糯”更贴切?

我的未来

400字
主题:理想、责任、成长、信念、希望、担当

描写未来的初中英语作文:我的未来

everyone wants to know their future, but nobody knows it. i hope my future will like that. i think i will be an e_cellent lawyer in the future. i help many people who is in difficulty. i will help the people are in need, no matter they are rich or poor. then i think i will have a good reputation among the society. in order to have a good body, i will do some e_ercise every week. my family will be proud of me and always stand behind me. i will work hard to reach my future. ok, this is the future in my dream. what’ yours?

每个人都想知道自己的未来,却没有人可以知道它。我希望我的未来会这样的。我想将来我会成为一位出色的律师。我会帮助很多人有困难的人。我会帮助那些有需要帮助的人,无论他们是富人还是穷人。我会在社会中享有良好的信誉。为了身体健康,我每个星期都会做一些运动。我的家人为我感到骄傲,而且会永远支持我。我会努力实现那样子的未来。好了,这就是我梦想中的未来。你的是什么呢?

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律师梦内容出彩!帮人不分贫富这点,比好多大人想得都透,但“e_cellent”拼错了,“is in difficulty”也别扭,下回查查词典?