12月英语六级作文预测范文

250字
主题:生活方式、集体生活、个人选择、成长环境、校园住宿

living alone or living with roommates?

1. 有人认为大学里应独自生活 2. 另一些认为大学里应与别人同住 3. 你的看法 living alone or living with roommates

nowadays, there has appeared a heated discussion among the college students as to whether they should live alone outside the campus or live together with other roommates in the students dormitory. opinions are divided over the matter. as far as im concerned, i prefer to live with roommates because i love the feeling of belonging. besides, it is a lot cheaper to live in a dorm than to rent a apartment outside the campus.

精选读者点评

宿舍里抢到靠窗床位那会儿,你写“ belonging”时眼睛是不是亮点突出一下?这个感觉抓得妥帖,不是空泛说“热闹”,是心里有根线连着别人呢。后半段钱的事也委实,但“rent a apartment”少了个s,顺手改啦!

论海外留学

700字
主题:利弊分析、跨文化成长、教育价值、青年责任、国际视野、独立精神

on overseas study

like anything else, overseas study has both advantages and disadvantages. the main benefits of studying overseas are as follows. in the first place, the overseas students can benefit greatly from the higher academic level and the more advanced research facilities in some famous universities. in the second place, its the best way to understand a new culture and its people and language. last but not least, the e_perience will be invaluable to character building, making most students more independent, diligent and enterprising.

however, the negative effects are also obvious. to begin with, if a person does not make full preparations before going abroad, he will have great difficulty adapting to the new environment. whats more, the cultural differences will hinder the regular life in many ways. finally, money is always a big problem. many students have to find part—time jobs to earn money to pay tuition and fees.

in conclusion, the advantages of overseas study outweigh its disadvantages. once they return home, the overseas students will make great contribution to our motherland.

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论海外留学

同其他任何事情一样,海外留学生既有优点也有缺点。出国留学主要有如下好处。首先,海外留学生可以极大地受益于一些大学较高的学术水平以及先进的研究设施。其次,这是了解异域文化、民族和语言的方式。最后一点,也是非常最要的一点,这些经历对于性格培养来说非常宝贵,能够使得大多数学生更加独立、勤奋和富有进取心。

但是,负面影响也是显而易见的。首先,如果一个人在出国前没有做好充分的准备,他将很难适应新环境。此外,文化上的差异在许多方面会影响正常生活。最后,资金始终是一个大问题。许多学生不得不找兼职来赚取支付学杂费。

总之,海外留学利大于弊。一旦回到祖国,这些留学生们将为我们的祖国做出巨大贡献。

精选读者点评

这个“in conclusion”用得真稳当!结尾那句“make great contribution to our motherland”读着就劲道十足,感情扎实,不飘。值得注意的是“enterprising”拼错了,少了个r,圈出来啦~还有“e_perience”这处下划线,是手误打成下划线了吧?顺手改掉哈。

新年计划英语作文范文欣赏

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主题:传统节日、家庭团聚、文化传承、新年祈福、民俗活动

the spring festival is the tradition festival in china.it is the same as the christmas day in the west country,it is welcome the new year.

it is the day that the families get together.

the spring festival is usually in the february ,sometimes in january.in the spring festival,every family all paste the lucky inscriptions,they fire the cracker,they eat the dumplings.the day before the new years first day is the new years eve,same as the christmas eve,all the families get together to have the new yaars dinner,wishes each other,talk about the wishes about the new year.small children will receive the money given to children as a lunar new year gift.

精选读者点评

时态乱了呀!“is”和“was”混着用,像炒豆子噼里啪啦蹦,再通读一遍,把动词全圈出来,看它们是不是站对了队呢!

大学新概念英语通用版作文范文

400字
主题:儿童成长、政策反思、代际关系、社会发展

china has the largest population all over the world which makes it difficult to develop economy well. thinking about china’s economy development some hold the view that it is necessary for china to implement one child policy. while others think that one child policy does no good to children’s growing up. i am in favor of the latter opinion.

firstly one child policy will make children feel lonely. it means every couple only has one child. we know clearly that there is not everything children are willing to tell their parents. growing up with no brother or sister, the child may be easily in mental problem such as autism. in addition, parents with only one child will spoil their child overly. as a consequence the child will be the so called little emperor or little princess. when the child grows up it is difficult for the child to adapt to the world the society

all in all to some e_tent one child policy will solve the large population problem but from the perspective of long term development of china it does no good. because we must take the young generation’s healthy growing up into consideration.

精选读者点评

“little emperor”这个说法真生动!然而“autism”用得有点儿重,孩子孤单≠自闭症,换“容易焦虑”或“不善交际”更准。

对立观点型范文四

350字
主题:数字崇拜、理性思考、文化差异、迷信批判、科学精神

四级作文题目: do lucky numbers really bring good luck?

there are people who believe that some numbers bring good luck, while others bring bad luck. for instance, in china the number eight is thought to be lucky. turning our attention to the west, we find that the number seven is considered lucky, but the number 13 is avoided like the plague.

in spite of all these claims, most people would agree that there is little evidence that numbers have any influence on our lives. in fact, they say, the reverse seems to be the case. for one thing, we might e_pect calculators to break down every time they note the number 13, and for another, although every week has seven days we know that not every week is lucky for us.

weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, i am inclined to agree with the latter point of view. it is obvious that there is no scientific basis for the belief that there is a connection between luck and numbers. all in all, it seems to me to be superstition.

精选读者点评

开头中西对比挺清爽!但“avoided like the plague”这句用得有点飘,小学生可能不理解“plague”指啥,换成“people rush to avoid it”更真的是。

英语元宵节作文带翻译

300字
主题:传统节日、家庭团聚、文化传承、欢乐氛围、民间艺术

英语元宵节作文带翻译

after the annual lantern festival is the most, people took to the streets to see lanterns from all directions, there are many a variety of lanterns on the street, there are lights, lanterns and lights, but my favorite is the headlights. because on the 15th day of the first month, people will eat yuan_iao, so it is called yuan_iao festival.

on the day of the lantern festival, the family gather together to eat the reunion dinner, and also eat tangyuan together. the tangyuan symbolizes the round circle of the family, and i like to eat the bean paste. the funniest of all is the flower lamp, the street is full of all kinds of lanterns. i saw a twinkle in the sky, i look carefully, originally is kong light ah! when my mother looked at me so much, she bought me one.

the lantern festival is such a fun, e_citing and unforgettable day!

精选读者点评

元宵节吃汤圆、看花灯写得挺热闹,但“headlights”是汽车大灯啊!咋混进灯笼堆里了?还有“kong light”,该写“sky lantern”才对。小笔误,改过来就更地道啦!

学生选择讲师

650字
主题:自主学习、教学相长、教育改革、理性选择、辩证思维、育人本质

范文与译文

on students selecting lecturers

nowadays students in some universities are entitled to the choice on lecturers for some courses.this offers students a more fle_ible and efficient way of learning.

there are several factors when choosing a lecturer.to begin with,a wide academic background should be preferred,since a learned teacher will greatly enlarge his/her students’scope of knowledge in delivering his/her lessons.secondlya teacher with a liberal teaching style is desirable,because this kind of teacher will create a rela_ed and pleasant classroom atmosphere,thus making learning interesting.last but not least,the personality of the lecturer should be paid attention to when choosing a lecturer.

this campus practice can definitely urge students to take an active part in study and thus pour more efforts and interest in their learnin9.and it will also push teachers to imlbrove their teaching quality.every coin has two sides,so it can inevitably bring some side-effects.for e_ample,some top lecturers will be ignored for not pleasing the students.

关于学生选择讲师

现在一些大学的学生有权选择一些课程的讲师。这为学生提供了更加灵活和高效的学习方式。

选择讲师时会考虑几个因素。首先,广泛的学术背景应该是首选,因为一个有学问的老师在授课时将极大地拓广学生的知识范围。其次,自由的教学风格是可取的,因为这样的老师将创造一个轻松愉快的课堂气氛,从而使学习变得有趣。最后一点同样重要,选择讲师时应注意讲师的个性。

这种校园做法无疑可以让学生积极参与学习,对学习更感兴趣,倾注更多努力。它也将促使教师提高教学质量。但凡事都有两面,这种做法也不可避免地带来一些副作用。例如,一些讲师会因为不讨好学生而被忽略。

精选读者点评

这个“自由的教学风格”写得真好!后面那句“轻松愉快的课堂气氛”也自然,不硬套词。稍显“拓广”是错别字,应为“拓展”。再翻翻字典,顺手改掉哈~

我理想的工作的英语作文 my ideal work

350字
主题:职业理想、自然之美、情感表达、人文关怀

i want to set up a flower shop. it’s my ideal work. i think flower is the most beautiful gifts given by nature. and flower is a good way to e_press one’s affection. nowadays, sending flowers is more and more popular, to parents, friends, teachers and spouse. so i think this business must be good. moreover, i like flowers very much and i am familiar various flowers. i will choose different flowers for different people or preference. the most important is that i want to transmit love and happiness by flowers.

我想开一家花店,这就是我理想的工作。我认为鲜花 是大自然送给人类最美的礼物,鲜花也是表达感情的一种很好的方式。现如今,送花越来越受到大众的欢迎,送父母,送朋友,送师长,送爱人等等。所以,我想这 生意肯定很好。此外,我很喜欢鲜花,我熟悉各种鲜花,我会根据不同的人和不同的喜好来为客人选择不同的鲜花。最重要的是,我想通过鲜花传递爱和幸福。

精选读者点评

开头那句“我想开一家花店,这就是我理想的工作”,干净利落,像推开一扇带铃铛的玻璃门,叮咚一声,人就进来了。后头“传递爱和幸福”也真,不飘,但“生意肯定很好”这句,悄悄把花香混进了算盘声里,有点可惜。

职业规划英语作文范文

850字
主题:职业理想、自我认知、专业魅力、能力匹配、时代变迁

being an accountant is my dream job. accounting involves number crunching, math skills and organization. however, accounting is no longer the stereotyped dull job that it used to be. the change in the corporate culture has resulted in adding more glamour and importance to an accountants job. in fact, the hot new field is forensic accounting where you don the role of detective to figure out who has been playing funny with the money. the number crunching aspect is still there, but the role is not limited to that alone.

to be an accountant, the first step is to locate a learning institution providing classes in the field, by making absolute sure the institution is recognized by the relevant accounting agency. after that, i want to take the monster test--cpa e_amination.

i am a careful and organized person and i think these personalities are an accountants qualification. moreover, i don like adventures i hope everything in my life goes well, and accounting is fit in this point. what you need is sitting in your office and makes your work done. in addition, the pay can be lucrative as well.

like what i mentioned, accounting involves number crunching, math skills and having a good understanding of financial transactions. moreover, you have to be pretty good at memorizing rules and concepts. also, you have to be good at putting word problems into a mathematical form.

当会计是我的理想工作。会计涉及数字运算,数学能力和组织。然而,会计不再是单调乏味的工作了,它过去是。在企业文化的变化,导致增加更多的魅力和重要性,会计师的工作。事实上,热的新领域是法务会计,你的角色,侦探,找出谁一直玩有趣的钱。数字运算方面仍然存在,但作用不限于单。

作为一名会计,第一步是找到一个学习机构在该领域提供类,绝对肯定该机构是公认的相关会计机构。在那之后,我想参加这个怪物测试--注册会计师考试。

我是一个细心、有条理的人,我认为这些人格是一个会计师的资格。而且,我不喜欢冒险,我希望我生活中的一切都很好,而且会计很适合这一点。你需要的是坐在你的办公室,让你的工作完成。此外,支付可以是有利可图的。

像我前面提到的,会计涉及的数字运算,数学技能和有一个很好的理解金融交易。此外,你必须非常好的记忆规则和概念。还有,你要把文字问题变成数学形式。

精选读者点评

这个“怪物测试”写得真生动!cpa考试被你这么一说,紧张感立马出来了,稍显后文没再提它,有点可惜呀。还有,“玩有趣的钱”这句翻译味太重,改成“动歪脑筋”“做假账”是不是更准哦!

清明节英语作文阅读

350字
主题:传统节日、生死观、家族记忆、文化认同、代际联结

英语作文清明节

last qingming festival,i return home to worship my grandfather.qingming festival is a folk festival.in the past,the qingming festival was called arbor day. but today, chinese visit their family graves to tend to any underbrush that has grown. weeds are pulled, and dirt swept away, and the family will set out offerings of food and spirit money. unlike the sacrifices at a familys home altar, the offerings at the tomb usually consist of dry, bland food. one theory is that since any number of ghosts rome around a grave area, the less appealing food will be consumed by the ancestors, and not be plundered by strangers.

with the passing of time, this celebration of life became a day to the honor past ancestors. following folk religion, the chinese believed that the spirits of deceased ancestors looked after the family. sacrifices of food and spirit money could keep them happy, and the family would prosper through good harvests and more children.

精选读者点评

清明节写得挺有味道,尤其“干巴巴的祭品是留给祖先的,不是给游魂抢的”这句,像听老人讲古,下回试试把“spirit money”换成“纸钱”,更接地气些。

今天是六一儿童节英语作文

250字
主题:节日快乐、生命尊重、生态意识、纯真视角

英语资源频道为大家整理的今天是六一儿童节英语作文,小编在这里祝所有小朋友大朋友们节日快乐 永葆童心。

今天是六一儿童节(today is childrens day)

today is childrens day.my father takes me to the zoo.there are many kinds of animals,the tigers, the pandas,the lions, the elephants,the giraffes and the bears.

they are different from each other ,some are shy, some are beautiful, some are interesting , some are friendly, some are so cute. but i think these animals are unhappy, they should live in the forest,because the life in the zoo are different from that in the forest.

精选读者点评

这句“they should live in the forest”写得真好!孩子心里有光,一眼就看见铁栏外的风和树,比好多大人看得都远。

how to make friends 怎样交朋友-英语作文带翻译

400字
主题:人际交往、友情建立、心灵沟通、善意传递

everyone is not alone in the society, and everyone needs friends. but how to make friends is a question for us. in my opinion, we can make friends in the following principles.

on one hand, be a good listener .let people talking about what they really want to talk. that you are a good listener means you understand him.

on the other hand, be friendly to people. everyone will be in trouble, so at any time, we should be friendly to people. in this way, you will have a lot of friends.

actually, making friends is a easier job if you put you true heart in it.

翻译:

每个人在社会上都不是孤单的,每个人都需要朋友。但是,如何交友对我们来说却是一个问题。在我看来,我们可以遵循以下交友原则。

一方面,做一个良好的倾听者。让别人说他们真正想说的。你是一个好的聆听者就意味着你理解他。

另一方面,对人友善。每个人都会遇到困难,所以无论什么时候,我们都应该对人友善。这样,你就会拥有很多朋友。

事实上,如果你用真心对待,交友是一项很简单的工作。

精选读者点评

这个“倾听者”写得亮点突出!后半句“你理解他”比前文更有力,要是能把“让别人说”改成“眼睛看着对方听”,画面就活了。

live with thankfulness

300字
主题:感恩之心、生命敬畏、教育力量、家庭团聚、自然馈赠

live with thankfulness

do you know thanksgiving day? do you know why human thank god? thanksgiving falls on the fourth thursday of november, a different date every year. the president must proclaim that date as the official celebration. thanksgiving is a time for tradition and sharing. even if they live far away, family members gather for a reunion at the house of an older relative. all give thanks together for the good things that they have. what should we thank? the thankful great universe provides the environment of e_istence for us and give us sunlight, air, water and everything in keeping with we e_istence of space, bring storm to let us accept to toughen for us, bring to us mysterious let us look for. the thankful teacher works with diligence and without fatigue everyday of teach, give us knowledge ability, put on the wing which flies toward the ideal for us.

精选读者点评

这个标题“live with thankfulness”挺有味道,英文用得自然!但是后面几处动词形式要留心:“give us knowledge ability”建议改成“imparts knowledge and skills”,“put on the wing which flies…”这句意象很美,但语法缠住了翅膀呀~

传统节日的英语作文

700字
主题:传统文化、节日习俗、吉祥寓意、自然时序、人文传承

重阳节英语作文:中国传统节日重阳节

double ninth festival

the 9th day of the 9th lunar month is the traditional chongyang festival, or double ninth festival. it usually falls in october in the gregorian calendar. in an ancient and mysterious book yi jing, or the book of changes, number 6 was thought to be of yin character, meaning feminine or negative, while number 9 was thought to be yang, meaning masculine or positive. so the number nine in both month and day create the double ninth festival, or chongyang festival. chong in chinese means double. also, as double ninth was pronounced the same as the word to signify forever, both are jiu jiu, the chinese ancestors considered it an auspicious day worth celebration. that‘s why ancient chinese began to celebrate this festival long time ago.

the custom of ascending a height to avoid epidemics was passed down from long time ago. therefore, the double ninth festival is also called height ascending festival. the height people will reach is usually a mountain or a tower. ancient literary figures have left many poems depicting the activity. even today, people still swarm to famous or little known mountains on this day.

on this day, people will eat double ninth gao (or cake). in chinese, gao (cake) has the same pronunciation with gao (height). people do so just to hope progress in everything they are engaged in. there is no fi_ed ways for the double ninth cake, but super cakes will have as many as nine layers, looking like a tower.

the double ninth festival is also a time when chrysanthemum blooms. china boasts diversified species of chrysanthemum and people have loved them since ancient times. so enjoying the flourishing chrysanthemum also becomes a key activity on this festival. also, people will drink chrysanthemum wine. women used to stick such a flower into their hair or hang its branches on windows or doors to avoid evilness.

in 1989, the chinese government decided the double ninth festival as

精选读者点评

重阳节英文作文里,“chong”解释成“double”很准!但“jiu jiu”谐音“久久”,光写“pronounced the same as”稍显干巴,试试加个“听上去像‘永远’”?孩子读着就笑了。

腊八节英语作文

600字
主题:传统节日、文化传承、宗教影响、农耕祈愿、历史渊源

腊八节英语作文: the current laba

the majority han chinese have long followed the tradition of eating laba rice porridge on the eighth day of the twelfth lunar month. the date usually falls in min-january and is a traditional chinese festival.

legend about the origin of this festivity abounds one maintains that over 3,000 years ago sacrificial rites were held in the twelfth lunar month when people offered up their prey to the gods of heaven and earth. the chinese characters for the hunt and the twelfth month (lie and la) were interchangeable then, and ever since la has been used to refer to both. since the festival was held on the eighth day of the last month, people later appended the number eighth (ba in chinese), giving us the current laba.

腊八节英语作文: laba rice porridge

laba rice porridge was first introduced to china in the song dynasty about 900 years ago.

buddhism was well accepted in the areas inhabited by the han chinese, who believed that sakyamuni the first buddha and founder of the religion, attained enlightenment on the eighth day of the twelfth month. sutras were chanted in the temples and rice porridge with beans, nuts and dried fruit was prepared for the buddha. with the passing of time the custom e_tended, especially in rural areas where peasants would pray for a plentiful harvest in this way.

there is, however, another touching story: when sakyamuni was on his way into the high mountains in his quest for understanding and enlightenment, he grew tired and hungry. e_hausted from days of walking, he fainted away by a river in india. a shepherdess found him there and fed him her lunch -- porridge made with beans and rice. sakyamuni was thus able to continue his journey.

精选读者点评

腊八粥的由来讲得挺清楚,连“腊”字怎么来的都挖到了!但是“the current laba”这个标题有点怪,是想说“现在的腊八节”?可全文没写当下人们怎么过节呀,光讲古早故事啦。

大学生使用信用卡现象

500字
主题:理性消费、成长责任、金融启蒙、学业优先、代际支持

on credit card

at present, a wide vareity of credit cards issued by major banks and shopping malls are thriving in colleges and universities across the nation, with a multitude of college students making up a growing population of card holders. indeed, one out of five students is estimated to be in possession of at least one credit card, and the figure is e_pected to be on the steady increse, the latest data published by yangtze evening post suggests.

like anything prior to the emergence of this small piece of plastic, the increasing popularity of credit card on campus has both bright and dark sides. on the one hand, young adults in college, free from the trouble of pocketing a considerable sum of cash, could enjoy the convenience of credit cards and purchase e_pensive goods by installments. on the other hand, however, the irresponsible and e_cessive use of the cards by these youngsters, the majority of whom are fresh out of middle school incapable of budgeting their money, can make them heavily in debt which will take them years to pay off.

on my personal level, while enjoying a host of conveniences the credit card may bring, we couldn’t afford to ignore a conspicious fact: in most cases, parents are our sole financial sources.instead of spending without any restrict, we are supposed to put studies on the top of our agenda and move ourselves beyond heavy dependence upon our parents.

精选读者点评

这篇作文结构挺稳,开头数据用得巧,中间“bright and dark sides”对比也清晰。客观来说注意大小写和拼写错误:“vareity”“e_pected”“e_cessive”“conspicious”,这些词漏了字母,考试要扣分的!

勤俭节约的英语作文及翻译

250字
主题:环保意识、可持续生活、责任担当、日常实践

勤俭节约英语作文:节约水

as we all know water is very important.we should try to save it.first,when we finish washing the clothes or dishes,we can use the water to clean the floor.second,if we see the dripping tap,we must fi_ the tap as soon as possible.third,we can have a shower instead of a bath because having a bath can waste a lot of water.

带翻译:

我们都知道水是非常重要的。我们应该设法保存它。首先,当我们洗完衣服或碗时,我们可以使用水来擦地板。第二,如果我们看到滴水的水龙头,我们必须尽快修理水龙头。第三,我们可以有一个淋浴代替洗澡,因为洗澡会浪费很多水。

精选读者点评

水龙头滴水那句描写传神“必须尽快修”,像你亲眼看见水一滴一滴掉在瓷砖上似的。唯独“fi_”是漏了“x”吧?下次写完自己读一遍,耳朵比眼睛更早发现小窟窿。

考研英语二小作文范文文都版

400字
主题:文化传播、跨文化理解、节日习俗、学术交流

part a

47. directions:

suppose you are invited by professor williams to give a presentation about chinese cultur e to a group of international students. write a reply to

1)accept the invitation, and

2)introduce the key points of your presentation.

you should write about 100 words on the answer sheet.

do not use your own name. use “li ming”instead.

do not write your address.(10points).

范文

dear professor,

i am so happy to learn that there will be an activity to introduce chinese culture for the foreign students. and it is an great honor for me to be invited to give a presentation.

here are some necessary information about my presentation. to begin with, my topic is concerning the tradition of chinese spring festival. moreover, i will make clear that due to its unique geographical features, china’s customs for celebrating the lunar new year are slightly different. in addition, my statement will last about 2 hours. i am sure that would be immensely beneficial to those who are interested.

its my great pleasure to participate in this activity. please feel free to contact me for more questions.

yours sincerely,

li ming

精选读者点评

这篇回信挺有礼貌的,开头“so happy”“great honor”情绪刻画到位!客观来说“2 hours”讲春节……怕学生们坐不住呀~建议改成20分钟更合理,也别忘把“its”改成“it’s”。

体育锻炼的好处

1100字
主题:身心健康、媒介素养、成长反思、理性追星、自我认知

体育锻炼的好处 the advantages of doing physical e_ercises.

as the proverb goes, “no one knows the value of health until he loses it.” from this, we know that health is very important to everybody. but how to keep fit? many people believe that sports can offer people health and pleasure. as far as i concern, i think doing physical e_ercises have lots of advantages.

有句谚语这样说:“没人会在意健康的价值,直到失去了它”。从这一点,我们就知道健康对每个人的重要性。但是怎么保持健康呢?很多人认为运动可以保证身体健康,带来快乐。就我看来,我认为多做体育运动有很多好处。 首先,早上做运动会让我精力充沛,有个好的胃口吃早餐。更重要的是,早晨的空气干净清新,这样我就能在课堂上保持一颗清醒的头脑了。每天的运动会让我思维敏捷,及时完成作业。如果我不做运动,我就会感到精神疲惫,身体迟钝。在晚上也变得难以入睡。其次,每天都做运动可以让我的性格变得更好。做运动要花时间和耐心。有时候我真的很想放弃,但是我的朋友们鼓励我坚持下去,然后我就从中获得了极大的满足感。做运动让我变得更坚强、更健康。这就是我的个人经历。 as a student, sports are indispensable. you can pick up your favorite sport and do it every day. only in this way, you can have both pleasure and a healthy body. 作为一个学生,运动必不可少。你可以选择你最喜欢的运动,每天都锻炼。只有这样,你才能从中收获健康和快乐。

一方面,电视是一个强有力的教育工具。通过电视,人们得以知道到世界的其他地方发生了什么。因为电视,人们了解到不到的风俗习惯和时事政治。他们知道自己从未了解的事情,形成自己的见解和价值观。电视为他们开启了一扇新的大门,等待着人们去探索想要知道的事物。因为电视,很多人想去各地旅游。 另一方面,一些人或许会发现他们沉迷于电视中,不能自拔,特别是青少年。他们的大多数空闲时间都用来看电视了,而不是与同伴们一起玩。在这样的情况下,他们或许会缺乏与人高效沟通的能力。电视让他们变得更加孤单。更重要的是,有时候一些电视节目会包含一些色情血腥的镜头,不适合小孩子观看。这会对他们造成负面影响。 to sum up, i think television has both advantages and disadvantages, people should find a balance between it. make the most use of it, don’t be the salves of it. 总的来说,我认为电视有利有弊。人们应该在其中找到平衡点。充分利用电视,而不是成为它的奴隶。

篇三做个理智的粉丝 be a wise fan

a hot news shocks people lately, a teenager boy from brazil is very infatuated with the korean superstar, so he made the plastic surgery many times, making himself look like a korean. before the surgery, he is a handsome boy, but now, in people’s eyes, he disfigures himself. be a fan, people should keep wise mind, or they will destroy themselves.

精选读者点评

“e_ercises”拼错了两次,还漏了冠词,但后半段中文写得表达清爽,“早晨空气干净清新”“思维敏捷”这些短语,像小溪淌过石头,清亮又自然。稍显中英混搭得有点猛,下次试试先用中文理清思路呢!

英语四级作文预测及范文八

400字
主题:责任意识、时间管理、知行合一、青年担当、教育价值

should college students be tutors?

nowadays there are more and more provided tutors among college students. some students even take a few tutor jobs at the same time. people have different opinions about this phenomenon.

some people believe college students can benefit a lot from being tutors. on the one hand they can earn some money and lessen the burden on their family. on the other hand they can have chances to apply their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems.

however still others object to college students being a tutor. they think that a student should focus on his study instead of doing a part-time job. if they spend too much time on teaching, they will not have enough time to study, and naturally their academic performance will be affected.

in the two arguments, i’m in favor of the former one. in my opinion, to be a tutor is a good practical activity for us college students, from which we can gain practical e_perience and skills. but it is worth noting that we cannot spend too much time in being tutors. we should balance the relationship between the tutor job and study.

精选读者点评

开头这句“nowadays there are more and more provided tutors among college students”语法有点别扭,动词和主语没搭好,建议改成“more and more college students are working as tutors”,读着顺,也更地道。

幸福是什么

550字
主题:情感体验、生活哲思、人际温暖、心灵满足

what is happiness? different people have different opinions. some believe that happiness is that they have much money so that they can live a better life. however, others regard happiness as having a good job or making a progress.

actually, happiness is a true feeling from our inner heart!

we can consider carefully what our feeling is when we are in the following situations.

first, we help an elderly across the road, or give some solutions to our classmates’ learning problems.

second, we get some help from others when we are in need.

third, we make new friends, or have a meal with families, or have a conversation with parents and so on.

everyone would appreciate the people who give us a hand. what’s more, we are glad when we stay with friends and families. all of these stand for we are happy.

happiness is just simple like these!

翻译:

幸福是什么?不同的人有不同的看法。有些人认为幸福就是他们有很多的钱,让他们过上更好的生活。然而,其他人则认为幸福是有一份好的工作或者进步。

实际上,幸福就是来自内心的真实感受!

我们可以认真想想当我们遇到下面的情形时我们的感受是怎么样的。

首先,我们帮助老人过马路的时候,或者帮助同学解决学习上的问题。

第二,在我们需要帮助的时候得到他人的帮助。

第三,我们交新朋友,和家人吃东西,或者和父母聊聊天等。

大家都会很感激那些曾经给予我们帮助的人。而且,和父母或者朋友呆在一起我们也会很开心。所有这些都说明了我们很幸福。

幸福就是那么的简单!

精选读者点评

这个“幸福是简单如这些”的结尾见解透彻!把大道理落回生活细节里,不空喊口号,有温度。倒是第三段“考虑仔细”建议改成“静下心来想想”,更像孩子说话。

中秋节英语作文

200字
主题:亲情、思乡、节俗、文化认同、家庭温暖

关于中秋节的作文:中秋节英语作文

mid-autumn day

mid-autumn day is a traditional festival in china. almost everyone likes to eat mooncakes on that day. most families have a dinner together to celebrate the festival. a saying goes, he moon in your hometown is almost always the brightest and roundest. many people who live far away from homes want to go back to have a family reunion. how happy it is to enjoy the moon cakes while watching the full moon with your family members.

精选读者点评

月光下吃月饼的场景写得真暖,结尾那句“how happy it is”像孩子踮脚望月时脱口而出的话,干净,有光。

崇拜偶像

550字
主题:青春认同、价值选择、榜样力量、理性追星、自我发展

话题:

很多年轻人都有自己的偶像,这是21世纪的产物,但人们对明星偶像的看法不一,你追星吗?你心目中的明星是怎样的呢?下面我们一起来看看预测范文:“崇拜偶像”。

预测范文参考:

when asked about the question of idols,the overwhelming majority of most answer that “yes”.nowadays ,idol worship is a popular phenomenon among young people.in my opinion ,idol worship is like a coin has two sides,there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect .

there are some positive aspects .idols are our e_cellent e_amples ,we can learn the spirit of never give up from their life.the idols’ works can help us rela_ing the pressure.in contrast ,idol worship is a not good phenomenon.many young people will spend too much money to buy the hobby(明星周边) in order to support the idols.once there is a chance for them to meet their idols,they will go at all costs and forget about their study or work.what’s more,some of them make the cosmetic surgery to look like the idol he or she likes.

there is a standard when we were a fan,we should in our senses.young people should learn to e_plore the real factors of stars’ success and get self-improvement by learning from their idols.

词汇学习:

idols 神像; 偶像( idol的名词复数 )

overwhelming majority 压倒的多数

nowadays 现在,当今; 当今,现在

phenomenon 现象,事件;

in order to 为了…

self-improvement 自强; 自我改善,自我修养factors因素( factor的名词复数 )

cosmetic surgery美容外科学,整容手术

精选读者点评

这篇作文结构挺清楚,正反两面都提到了,还知道用“硬币两面”打比方,这个思路很初中生!平心而论“e_cellent e_amples”“rela_ing”这些拼写漏了字母,得回头查词典补上;还有“hobby”当“周边”用不太准,下次试试“merchandise”吧!

不必成为超人的五大理由

650字
主题:自我认知、现实主义、心理韧性、目标管理、人文关怀

2026英语作文:不必成为超人的五大理由

5 super reasons why we shouldn’t try to be super heroes in 2026

superheroes are just awesome. they race around looking after everyone and the world. they do all that is e_pected of them and then race back to their 9 to 5. you will seldom hear them brag about what they have achieved and how great they are. they never complain about how they have too much work and how stress is to blame for their grumpy behaviour.

yeah, you guessed it — i’m no wonder woman. the closest i’ll ever get to wonder woman is wearing a halloween costume (mental note: organize halloween costume for ne_t year).

before the new year comes and we all go crazy with our resolutions and goals, it’s a good idea to take some quiet time and take a look at the year gone by. acknowledge and celebrate the achievements and spend some time thinking about the things that didn’t go so well so that you can better understand the reasons why. this retrospective thinking can help us learn and grow — and ensure we don’t make the same mistakes again. my lesson to learn this year is that i’m not wonder woman and that no matter how i try i can’t achieve a workload like her.

“you can do anything but not everything” - david allen

so if you, too, are guilty of catching the “superhero bug”, here are some reasons why we shouldn’t aspire to be super heroes in 2026:

super heroes are not real.

reality bites, i know, but those costume clad heroes aren’t real and neither is it realistic to achieve all the tasks they aspire to achieve in one day. realizing what is possible and what is asking too much of yourself is an acquired skill that one learns with e_perience. there is only so much one person can do without asking for help or burning out…and we definitely don’t want the latter.

精选读者点评

这篇英文作文真有意思!把“超人情结”和新年计划联系起来,角度很新鲜。尤其喜欢你自嘲说“离神奇女侠最近就是万圣节cosplay”,又真实又幽默~然而注意几个拼写小漏洞:“e_pected”“ne_t”“e_perience”,下回检查时留心下划线部分哈!

除夕英语作文带中文

400字
主题:传统节日、家庭团聚、民俗文化、辞旧迎新、喜庆祥和

the spring festival

chinese spring festival celebrating the end of winter and the warmth of spring.it began in the last day of the lunar year,end in the 15th day of lunar new year,also is the lantern festival.during the spring festival,people use red lantern and spring festival couplets decorate a house,put on all kinds of colored clothes,often visit friends and relatives or together eat dumplings,fish,meat and other delicious food.the children are looking forward to receiving red envelope money,and together they play each other the fireworks,with happy.street with dragon and lion dance and some other carnival activities,cctv will held the grand spring festival gala.

翻译:中国的春节庆祝冬天的结束和温暖春天的来临.它开始于农历年的最后一天,结束于农历正月十五,也就是元宵节.在春节期间,人们用红灯笼和春联装饰房子,穿上各式各样的彩色衣服,经常拜访亲戚朋友或聚在一起吃饺子、鱼、肉和其他美味的食物.孩子们盼望着收到红包的压岁钱,他们一起放烟花,相互玩的跟开心.大街上有舞龙、舞狮和其他一些狂欢活动,中央电视台会举行盛大的春节联欢晚会.

精选读者点评

春节写得挺热闹!红灯笼、饺子、压岁钱、舞龙舞狮,画面感有了~客观来说“the spring festival”这句开头没大写,“cctv”也该大写哦,小细节别漏啦!