吸烟习惯

1300字
主题:健康警示、社会责任、行为反思、公共治理、习惯养成

2026年12月大学英语四级作文预测:吸烟习惯

directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled the habit of smoking with reference to the picture given below. you should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. write your essay on answer sheet 1.

参考范文 the habit of smoking

in the picture, cigarettes were put together to form a phrase he end, which vividly implies the habit of smoking does a great harm to peoples happy life. smoking poses a potential danger to both the smokers themselves and the non-smokers who breathe in the secondhand smoke, which is even more harmful.

china has a large smoker population. to make things worse, the people who smoke have been on the rise on a daily basis. some people, especially youngsters, pick up smoking because they think its cool. meanwhile,many others regard smoking cigarettes as a way to release pressure or an important lubricant in the social relationship. the sad thing about all this is that many people, knowing smoking is a bad habit, still hold on to it.

currently, perhaps it is not easy to ban the tobacco industry, but it is possible to enforce the no-smoking policy in all public places, making it more and more difficult and inconvenient for smokers to smoke and at the same time. ensuring peoole who do not smoke to have fresh air to breathe.

参考译文 吸烟的习惯

在图片中,一些香烟被拼成了一个英语短语“结束”,这生动地暗示了吸烟会严重危害人们的幸福生活。吸烟不仅对于吸烟者本身很危险,对吸二手烟的不吸烟者也是如此,而且二手烟的危害更大。中国的烟民数量十分庞大,更糟糕的是,吸烟的人数每天都在攀升。一些人(尤其是青少年)开始吸烟是因为他们觉得吸烟很酷。与此同时,还有很多人认为吸烟是一种缓解压力的方式,也是社会关系中重要的润滑剂。这一切所导致的结果就是许多人即使知道吸烟是一种不好的习惯,也仍然不肯戒烟。

目前看来,取缔整个烟草行业可能并非易事,但是我们可以执行在公共场合禁止吸烟的政策。这样,既可以使烟民吸烟更加困难和不便,又可以保证不吸烟的人能够呼吸到新鲜的空气。

要点用法

cigarette香烟 lubricant润滑剂

imply暗示 hold on to坚持,不放弃

do a great harm to…严重危害……enforce执行

secondhand smoke二手烟 ensure确保

句法点评

1.in the picture,cigarettes were put together to form a phrase“the end”,which vividly impfies the habit of smoking does a great harm to peoples happy life.

首句直入主题,介绍图画内容,被动句与非限制性定语从句相结合,句式灵活。

2.to make things worse,the people who smoke have been on the rise on a daily basis.

tomakethingsworse意为“使事情更糟糕的是……”。beonthe rise意为“在逐渐增加、上升”。on adaily basis意为“每天”,可用于替换常用表达everyday。这三个短语都是非常地道的表达方式,值得积累。

3.tbe sad thing about all this is that many people,knowing smoking is a bad habit,still hold on to it.that引导表语从句,其中的knowing smoking is a bad habit是现在分词短语作让步状语,也是插入语。hold onto意为“坚持,不放弃”,等同于stickto。

4.…but it is possible to enforce the no-smoking policy in all public places.making it more and more difficult…and at the same time.ensuring people who do not smoke…to enforce a policy为固定搭配,意为“推行某一政策”,making…和ensuring…为并列结构,均为现在分词短语作结果状语。在描述问题之后提出现实的解决方案,使文章更具深度。

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精选读者点评

这个“the end”用得亮眼!香烟拼成死亡预告,画面感一下就来了。后面写二手烟“更害人”,比光说“有害”有力多了。唯独第三段“取缔行业难”那句,改成“烟草厂一时关不了”,是不是更像真人说话呀!

低碳生活

800字
主题:可持续发展、生态文明、绿色出行、资源节约、代际责任

2026下半年英语四级作文预测:低碳生活

directions: for thisi part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a shortessay on the topic of low-carbon life. you should start your essay with abrief account of the importance of low-carbon life and then e_plain howto create it. you should zcrrite at least 120 ords but no more than ]80zuord.

写作指导:由题目要求可知,本文要谈论的话题为低碳生活。可根据如下思路行文:第一段概述低碳生活日益得到关注;第二段说明低碳生活的重要性;第三段指出为了实现低碳生活人们应采取哪些行动,段末用简短的句子说明低碳生活的好处,收束全文。

参考范文:as more and more people focus on low-carbon life, the lifestyle ofsaving energy has begun to draw more mad more attention of the public.

low-carbon life is of great importance to everyone. for one thing, itcan protect the environment to a great e_tent. for another, it can savethe limited natural resources and energy, and will leave a better worldfor our offsprings. last but not the least, it is a healthy lifestyle and willhelp mould a harmonious social atmosphere.

therefore, how to create a low-carbon life is necessary for us toconsider. to begin with, we should save energy, such as the electricity,water and domestic gas. ond, when we go out, we can walk or ridebikes instead of driving cars. third, we should not use plastic bags whichare hard to break down. if so, we can live a low-carbon life.

参考译文:随着越来越多的人关注低碳生活,节能的生活方式已经开始引起大众的关注。

低碳生活对每一个人都有非常重要的意义。一方面,它可以在很大程度上保护环境。另一方面,它可以节省有限的自然资源和能源,并为后代留下一个更好的世界。最后非常重要的一点是,它是一种健康的生活方式,将有助于创造和谐的社会氛围。

因此,我们应考虑如何以低碳的方式生活。首先,我们应该节约能源,如电力、水和家用天然气。第二,我们出门时可以步行或骑自行车来代替开车。第三,我们拒绝使用难以分解的塑料袋。如果做到这些,那我们就过上了低碳生活。

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低碳生活这事儿,你写得挺确实是!第三段那三条建议,像“走路骑车”“不用塑料袋”,都是咱身边能立马做的,不空不假。可第二段说“为后代留个好世界”,后面没接上具体画面,要是加一句“比如让孙子孙女还能看见蓝天白云”,是不是更打动人呢!

如何保持健康

300字
主题:身心健康、科学养生、生活平衡、自我管理

everybody in this world hopes to keep healthy. without a good health,one couldn even live a normal life,let alone a happy life.

there are several ways to keep healthy. to begin with,one should do regular physical e_ercise. by this,one can not only keep himself in good physical condition but also stay in a good mood every day. in addition,having a balanced diet is also of great importance to keeping healthy. according to a recent survey conducted by who,taking too much fat accounts for 34. 7 percent of the diseases that people suffered from in the year of 2026. whats more,one should pay attention not to have too much pressure.

as to me , i play table tennis for an hour every day and i take everything easy,which refreshes both my body and mind and hence keep me stay in a good health.

精选读者点评

单词拼写小错误挺多啊,“e_ercise”“who”“me , i”这些地方得圈出来改一改;标点也乱,英文逗号后要空格,句首字母要大写,别嫌啰嗦,习惯养好了,中考少扣分!

环境保护问题

400字
主题:环境保护、低碳生活、责任意识、可持续发展

as we all know,the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .in some places,we can see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. some people even have no clean water to drink. so i think we must do something to protect the environment. but what can we do?how to protect our environmemt ?for e_ample,we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go shopping,and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .in a word,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be less pollution and our life will be better。“there is only one earth”,i hope everyone will protect our environment well。

2、保护环境

( 四川乐山) 从2026年6月1日起,国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋,掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华,准备以“what can we do for the environment” 为题,写保护环境的英语演讲稿。 内容包含:

(1)。在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋;(2)。尽可能地再利用使用过的课本;(3)。离开教室应关灯;(4)。走路或骑自行车上学;(5)。简述理由:保护环境,减少污染,节约能源等。

精选读者点评

这篇英语作文真特新!动词短语用得挺准,“go to school on foot”“use both sides of the paper”都地道,还知道加“for example”引出例子,比上回进步大了!平心而论“environmemt”拼错两次,铅笔圈出来啦,顺手改掉哈~

如何保护我们的环境英语作文

250字
主题:环境保护、可持续发展、人类责任、生态平衡

如何保护我们的环境英语作文

the environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today. water is polluted; we have no clean water to drink. many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less. some factories are pouring dirty air in the sky, the population is increasing faster and faster, resources are getting less and less…etc. not only does it affect our lives and health, it but also has a great affection in the future. peoples health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. many people died of diseases. in order to live a better life, we need protect our world。

精选读者点评

句子主谓不搭、时态混乱,像“many trees are cutting down”这种表达太刺眼了,是树自己在砍自己吗哦!

new year

200字
主题:节日庆祝、自我提升、亲情温暖、新岁期许

与元旦有关的英语作文:new year‘s day

january 1st is new year‘s day. it‘s a great day for all the people throughout the world. as the saying goes, a good beginning is half the battle. so, many people go all out to celebrate the important day. on that day, i went to the book city with my classmates. we bought a lot of useful reference books and interesting story books. i believe knowledge is power. i hope i can learn a lot from these books and improve my study. in the evening, my family had a big dinner party. all the members in my family wished me a good luck in the new year

精选读者点评

开头那句谚语用得真巧!稍显“go all out”换成“make special plans”更自然哦~书城那段画面感很强,要是把“useful reference books”改成“math puzzles和science comics”,老师读着就笑了!

如何保护中华文化的英语作文

350字
主题:文化传承、时代变迁、价值取舍、社会进步、遗产保护

如何保护中华文化的英语作文

on the losing of traditional culture

it is widely noted that lots of traditional culture is disappearing along with the development of technology. many ancient architectures and traditional ways of living have been deserted. it seems that the traditional culture and craftsmanship will be replaced in this modern era.

the following reasons can account for the above phenomenon. firstly, traditional technologies are always considered ineffective while the new sciences are always highly efficient, because modern science and technology facilitate both our daily and academic life a lot, with which we can save much money and time. secondly, it is costly to protect the traditional culture, especially the maintenance and repair of the historical buildings.

in my opinion, although traditional culture is an ancient heritage, it couldn keep pace with the development of society. it is the tide of history that the traditional culture and technology will no doubt be eliminated in the end.

精选读者点评

开头两行英文标题太突兀啦!作文题目写中文就好,英文放正文里当引子也行,但别单独列,老师批改时一眼扫过去还以为是抄的呢。还有,“it is widely noted that…”这种句式太像模板了,换成“我老家祠堂去年拆了”多有温度?

如何保护自己英语作文

250字
主题:安全教育、成长意识、家庭引导、风险防范、儿童权益

如何保护自己英语作文

as a child, when people give me the things to play or eat, i will be very happy and then accept them. but recently, as there are so much news about the children being cheated, my mother starts to worry about me, she tells me that i should not accept the strangers’ things, or i will be hurt. i listen to her words and i take care of myself carefully.

作为一个孩子,当人们给予我玩的和吃的东西的时候,我会很开心,然后接受了这些东西。但是最近,由于有很多关于孩子被骗的新闻,妈妈开始担心我,她告诉我不能接受陌生人的东西,不然就会受到伤害。我听了她的话,仔细照顾自己。

精选读者点评

真听妈妈话!“仔细照顾自己”这句写得非常确实,比空喊“我要自护”强多了。平心而论“so much news”该用“so many”,下次查查词典哈~

将休闲时间利用起来

150字
主题:劳逸结合、健康生活、情绪调节、自我关怀

for those who are not so active and like to stay at home, they may listen to light music or read novels. indoor games such as chess, cards, table tennis and hobbies such as gardening and keeping pets are also enjoyable.

in this way, we will feel rela_ed, happier and more energetic. when holidays a re over and we begin to work again, we can do much better with a light heart.

精选读者点评

这个“rela_ed”拼错了,是relaxed吧?还有“a re”中间多空格了。小毛病,但考试扣分可不讲情面哦。

如何保持心理健康的英语作文

350字
主题:压力应对、心理调适、现代生活、情绪管理、积极行动

关于如何保持心理健康的英语作文

how to keep psychologically healthy?

psychologically healthy problems can cause the disease.people with the psychologically healthy problems can’t work well and enjoy the beautiful life.they fell bad without self-confident.

the reason why so many people are not quiet psychologically healthy is that the social pressure make them can’t rela_ themselves.for e_ample,nowadays many people are worry about the house and job.in order to get a house,many people fight with life.they manage their life only keep the job in their mind.they always know that just work harder and harder.even if they fell tiered and unhappy,they don’t care.for a long time,they take the pressure for themselves and can’t put down.

how to keep the psychologically healthy?people should take part in some activities to rela_ themselves and make friends with other people.do something that people interested in can make them fell more better.

精选读者点评

句子有点“赶”,像边想边写,但“他们总以为只要更努力就行”这句十分真实!把“rela_”补全,“e_ample”也顺手改了哈~

如何创造和谐的宿舍生活英语作文

350字
主题:人际和谐、集体责任、自我修养、大学生活、共同成长

如何创造和谐的宿舍生活英语作文

as we know,dormitory life is part of the college life.its important for our study and rest.sometimes,in our dormitory maybe have some controversial,owe to other things and personal hobby.

harmonious dormitory life play a positive role in our college life ; its mutually benefial for our and other members.we can live a happy life,hence we can put our heart to study and do other things.on the other hand,we can make more friends and decrease many annoy in our college.

there are numerous way to build a harmonious dormitory;but i would like to e_plore a fee of the most important ones here.for a start,its essential for our to learn tolerance.second ,we will get ride of our bad habits.at last,we will have to share with each and make more friends.at the same time ,we should often sweep our dormitory and ensure personal hygiene.we should try oue best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.

精选读者点评

单词拼写和语法小错误不少,比如“e_plore”“oue best”“get ride of”,还有主谓不一致(“harmonious dormitory life play”),但意思都传达到了,态度很认真!

美化校园环境英语作文

300字
主题:生态文明、人文关怀、青年责任、校园文化、可持续发展

美化校园环境英语作文

as we all know,a better result of study can be brought by a better study environment.as a result,it is necessary for us to build the green campus.the green campus can not only provide a good environment for our study,but also be a part of build the harmonious society.

the green campus is not only the environmental being green,but also the sprite being green,which means we should do other things like helping each other or caring each other.therefore,we should both beautify the campus environment and create a campus culture.

as university students,we enjoy the campus time while we have responsibility to build our green campus.in spiritual term,we should respect teachers,classmates and other people work for the school.in environmental term,we should have good habits to keep campus in a clean surrounding.

精选读者点评

开头这句“as we all know”太熟啦!试试换成更具体的画面?比如“推开教室窗,看见梧桐新叶”,英语作文也讲究“看见感”哦~

商业话题类

950字
主题:社会发展、消费升级、国际视野、风险意识、时代变迁、人文需求

英语四六级作文必背范文3:商业话题类

这类话题包括电子商务、汽车、饮食、境外旅_业的发展。这对题目要对发展的原因、根源进行分析。

from the bar chart given above, we can observe that the number of people traveling abroad e_perienced some changes in china during the past several years. from 1999 to 2000, the number of chinese people traveling abroad increased rapidly from 7.5 million to 10 million, and then to 12.1 million in 2026.

the bar chart reveals that people in mounting numbers are going to travel abroad. what e_actly contribute to this phenomenon? reasons can be listed as follows: for one thing, the authorities have issued some preferential policies to promote the development of the overseas tourism industry, which encourages a sudden emergence of travel agencies that can provide customers with convenient overseas tourism services. additionally, with the improvement of financial status and purchasing power, a considerable number of chinese people can afford the once-deemed-e_pensive traveling e_penses. last but not least, as there e_ists huge difference in cultures, customs and landscapes between china and overseas countries, quite a few people hold that overseas traveling is not only a perfect way to rela_ oneself, but also a good chance to enrich their knowledge and e_pand their horizons.

by observing the trend in the past, we may forecast that the growth tendency will continue. however,overseas tourism is also a highly variable industry which is vulnerable to seasons and climates, international political situation,fluctuations in e_change. (226 words)

参考译文:

如图所示,我们可以看到中国出国旅游的人数在过去几年经历了一些变化。从1999年到2000年,出国旅游的人数从750万快速地增长到1000万,然后又快速地增长到2026年的1210万。

这幅柱状图揭示了越来越多的人去海外旅游。到底是什么导致了这个现象?理由可以罗列如下:政府发布了一些优惠政策来推进境外旅_业的发展,这促使很多旅行社一夜之间就冒出来了,这些旅行社为消费者提供了便利的境外旅游服务。其次,随着财务状况和购买力的提升,相当多的中国人可以承当曾经被视为昂贵的出国旅游费用。最后,因为中国和海外国家在文化、习俗和风景上存在很大的差异,相当多的人都认为海外旅游不仅仅是放松自己的完美方式,也是一个丰富知识和拓宽视野的好机会。

通过观察过去的趋势,我们也许可以预测这种增长的趋势会继续下去。然而,境外旅游也是一个高度变化的行业,它很容易受到季节和气候、国际政治局势以及汇率波动的影响。

精选读者点评

这个数据变化抓得准!1999到2001年三组数字摆出来,节奏感就出来了。但“e_perienced”“e_pensive”这类漏字母的拼写,得回头挨个补上,别让小漏洞扯了整篇的后腿。

减少交通事故英语作文

450字
主题:生命守护、冷静应对、互助精神、规则意识

减少交通事故英语作文

one night mr lee was driving his wife home from work. she was a nurse in a hospital. it was almost midnight and she was quite tired out. she soon fell asleep. mr lee looked at her and smiled.

mr lee was a careful and e_perienced driver. he knew it was safer to drive slowly on a dark night. after some time he noticed a car following him. it was travelling very fast. suddenly it overtook his car.

the driver of the car was in a hurry. he did not see the approaching lorry. to avoid hitting it, he suddenly tuned his car. it skiddedoff the road and hit a big tree. the driver and his passenger were injured .they were badly cut by glass from the broken windscreen.mr lee quickly stopped his car by the side of the road. his wife got out of the car to help the injured. the lorry driver also stopped to help. mr lee drove off to telephone the police . about twenty-five minutes later, a police car and an ambulance arrived. the injured were carried into the ambulance and taken to hospital.

the policemen took down details of the accident. mr lee and the lorry driver told them all they could remember. the policemen thanked them for their help. mr and mrs lee got into their car and continued their journey home.

精选读者点评

这个故事讲得真顺溜!分外是“她 soon fell asleep。mr lee looked at her and smiled”这句,安静里有温度,像电影镜头,建议把“e_perienced”拼成“experienced”,还有“tuned”是不是想写“turned”哦!

如何保持健康的英语作文及翻译

500字
主题:身心健康、生活方式、自我管理、日常实践

如何保持健康的英语作文及翻译

each of us should stay healthy, which is the foundation of our activities. here are some ways to stay healthy.

我们每个人都应该保持健康,因为健康是我们活动的基础。这里有一些保持健康的方法。

first, we should spend one to two hours a day in regular e_ercise; try to walk instead of ride.

second, we should eat some healthy foods such as vegetables, fruits and so on. they are able to help us maintain a healthy body. when we are in trouble, try to rela_ our mood, listen to the soft music. it also enables us to maintain a good health.

finally there is a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. we should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep. if we can do follow these advice, i believe we can have a healthy body, a better life.

首先,我们应该花一到两个小时来做定时锻炼;尽量步行来代替乘车。

第二,我们应该多吃一些健康的食品,如蔬菜,水果等。它们能够帮助我们保持健康的身体。当我们遇到麻烦时,尽量放松心情,听听柔和的音乐。这也能让我们保持良好的健康。

最后,良好的睡眠也能保证我们有一个健康的身体。我们应该睡七到八小时来保持充足的睡眠。如果我们能够遵循这些建议,我相信我们能够有一个健康的身体,更好的生活。

精选读者点评

这个“e_ercise”和“rela_”写得真可爱,像偷偷藏了两个小秘密,下次拼写时,记得把中间的横线换成字母哦!

世锦赛女排精神英语作文

400字
主题:拼搏、信念、传承、荣耀、坚持

女排精神英语作文

chinese women’s volleyball team once achieved great honor in the last century, their spirit of never giving up inspired so many people. but during the last decade, as the old volleyball players retired and the new ones were not stronger enough, the team met difficulty. while winning an important match announced their return.

last night, chinese women’s volleyball team had an very impotant match against brazil team in the rio olympic games. the hope to win was very very little, because brazil team was such strong, they were the champion of last two olympic games and chinese team only won one match for the last 18 records. what’s more, almost all the audiences supported brazil team.

it seemed to win the match was not possible for the chinese team, but the girls were very strong and insistented to fight for the last mimute. even they lost the first game, they never gave up. especially for the last two point, they were so brave and finally won the match.

this is the spirit of women’s volleyball team, we saw these girls fight for the last minute, they are the best team.

精选读者点评

开头那句“chinese women’s volleyball team once achieved great honor”真有劲儿!但“not stronger enough”得改,“not strong enough”才对哦~后面“very very little”也可爱过头啦,试试“slim”哦!

机遇与挑战英语作文范文

300字
主题:自我提升、青春奋斗、人生选择、责任担当

关于机遇与挑战英语作文范文

if you are university student,i think you have had the more chance to find a better job,but premise you should try to study for yourself when you were stayed in the university.try to do that.if you are e_cellent student you will have the more chance to find a better job absolute doubelessly.

when you stayed in your university,you can make more friends,they will help you to do everything in the future,and you can join the make a speech group to practise your spoken english,you also should go to the cooking group to do how to independent.and i think take care of yourself you can do anything.

i think a university students will have the more chance and opportunity.they haven got more challenge in their future,if they are hard study students and join more advantageous individual develop group,their future will be better.they are life will brilliant.

精选读者点评

单词拼错好几处,“e_cellent”“absolute doubelessly”“haven't got more challenge”,基础语法和拼写得回头补补,不然意思容易跑偏。

如何获得快乐英语作文

200字
主题:内在力量、积极心态、做自己、自我悦纳

如何获得快乐英语作文

how to be happy, its really a problem that everyone is thingking about.one is just take everything easy.do not be nevirous.believe yourself and try you best to be happy.don think something is so difficult that you can do it.just think everything is ok~the other important way is interested in something you like,don think about the other ones mind,just be yourself,do everthing that is ture.

happy is from your mind,none can ctrl you,the best one who can make you laugh is yourself.

精选读者点评

句子有点小毛病,比如“nevirous”“ctrl”“everthing”,但想法着实亮!“快乐来自你的心”这句,干净又有力,划出来了,以后写作文,心里有光,笔下就有光。

如何保持身心健康英语作文

850字
主题:身心健康、生活习惯、积极心态、人际支持、自我管理

如何保持身心健康英语作文

you can take away our money, house, car, or even our clothes and we can survive. but if our health was taken away, we would surely die. that is why

we always try to eat in a healthy way and e_ercise regularly. in order to eat healthily, i usually avoid eating food high in fat, like french fries

or cookies. i also eat little meat. i eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit which are full of vitamins. taking e_ercise every day helps us build

a strong body. regular e_ercise is an important part of keeping me healthy. what£§s more, i think friends are an important part of one£§s health.

many studies show that people with a wide range of social contacts get sick less than those who don£§t. i always feel better when i am with

friends than when i am alone. when i am with my friends, i always laugh. laughing is also an important part of health. i like to laugh with my

friends. by eating properly and e_ercising regularly, i can keep my body at a proper weight and keep healthy. by spending time with my friends, i

can keep my mind as well as my body happy. these things sound easy to do, but not many people can manage them. i think a strong will is necessary

if we want to keep healthy.

你可以拿走我们的钱、房子、汽车,甚至我们的衣服,我们可以生存。但是如果我们的健康被带走了,我们肯定会死。这就是为什么我们总是尽量吃健康的方式,定期锻炼

。为了吃得健康,我通常避免吃高脂肪的食物,比如炸薯条或甜点。我也很少吃肉。我吃很多的蔬菜和富含维他命的新鲜水果。每天做运动有助于我们建立一个强壮的身

体。有规律的运动是我们保持身体健康的一个重要组成部分。什么£§年代更多,我认为朋友是一个重要的一部分£§年代健康。许多研究表明,人们广泛的社会联系生病

比那些不£§t。我总是感觉更好,当我与朋友比当我独自一人。当我和我的朋友,我总是笑。笑也是健康的重要组成部分。我喜欢和我的朋友笑了起来。通过合理的饮食

和规律性的运动,我可以保持我的身体在一个适当的体重和保持健康。通过花时间与我的朋友,我可以让我的心灵以及身体开心。这些东西听起来容易做,但没有多少人可

以管理他们。我认为坚强的意志是必要的,如果我们想要保持健康。

精选读者点评

健康写得挺着实!“笑也是健康的重要组成部分”这句条理清楚,比背教科书强多了。话说回来“e_ercise”写了三次都漏了x,下次默写一遍?还有“什么£§s more”这种乱码,是复制粘贴没清理干净吧哦!

人们如何庆祝春节英语作文

200字
主题:传统、亲情、吉祥、年俗、喜庆

人们如何庆祝春节英语作文

spring festival is the most important festival in china .in the evening before the spring festival ,families get together and have a big meal .in many places people like to set off firecrackers .dumplings are the most traditional food .children like the festival very much ,because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes .they can also get some money from their parents.this money is given to children for good luck .people put new year scrolls on the wall for good fortune .

精选读者点评

火药味儿真足!“set off firecrackers”写得像听见噼啪响了,值得注意的是“scrolls”建议改成“couplets”,老外才懂是红纸黑字贴门上的那种。

如何保持乐观心态英语作文

200字
主题:积极心理、情绪管理、成长建议

如何保持乐观心态英语作文

some people always unhappy today.so i think to be happy is a very important problem and i have some advice about how to be happy.let me tell to you.

first,you should think about what you have.some people always think what they don have.and it makes their feelings worse and worse.second,you must try your best to do everything.if you do that,you will feel better and get better grades.third,you should talk to your friends and parents more!

i hope you will be more happy through reading this article .

精选读者点评

开头这句“some people always unhappy today”语法不对哦,记得加be动词,“are unhappy”。后面几条建议挺果然,尤为是第二条,写出了自己的体会,不空洞。

低碳生活

750字
主题:可持续发展、生态文明、责任意识、生活方式、代际责任

directions: for thisi part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a shortessay on the topic of low-carbon life. you should start your essay with abrief account of the importance of low-carbon life and then e_plain howto create it. you should zcrrite at least 120 ords but no more than ]80zuord.

写作指导:由题目要求可知,本文要谈论的话题为低碳生活。可根据如下思路行文:第一段概述低碳生活日益得到关注;第二段说明低碳生活的重要性;第三段指出为了实现低碳生活人们应采取哪些行动,段末用简短的句子说明低碳生活的好处,收束全文。

参考范文:as more and more people focus on low-carbon life, the lifestyle ofsaving energy has begun to draw more mad more attention of the public.

low-carbon life is of great importance to everyone. for one thing, itcan protect the environment to a great e_tent. for another, it can savethe limited natural resources and energy, and will leave a better worldfor our offsprings. last but not the least, it is a healthy lifestyle and willhelp mould a harmonious social atmosphere.

therefore, how to create a low-carbon life is necessary for us toconsider. to begin with, we should save energy, such as the electricity,water and domestic gas. ond, when we go out, we can walk or ridebikes instead of driving cars. third, we should not use plastic bags whichare hard to break down. if so, we can live a low-carbon life.

参考译文:随着越来越多的人关注低碳生活,节能的生活方式已经开始引起大众的关注。

低碳生活对每一个人都有非常重要的意义。一方面,它可以在很大程度上保护环境。另一方面,它可以节省有限的自然资源和能源,并为后代留下一个更好的世界。最后非常重要的一点是,它是一种健康的生活方式,将有助于创造和谐的社会氛围。

因此,我们应考虑如何以低碳的方式生活。首先,我们应该节约能源,如电力、水和家用天然气。第二,我们出门时可以步行或骑自行车来代替开车。第三,我们拒绝使用难以分解的塑料袋。如果做到这些,那我们就过上了低碳生活。

精选读者点评

这个“塑料袋难分解”把握有度!后面要是能举个自己家里的例子,比如奶奶改用布袋子,就更活了。

how to be a good learner 简单英语作文带翻译

500字
主题:学习动力、高效策略、习惯养成、同伴影响、自主成长

it’s true that to be a good learner is every student’s dream. how to be a good learner? you know “interest” is the key to study lessons well, so i’m sure you should be interested in your new lesson at the beginning. of course, it’s very important also for each student to e_plore learning skills and efficient ways, because it can lead you to success in short term. in the end, i believe everybody who is good at english, maths, physics or any other lesson has a basic method, that is to learn more, to listen to more, to read more, to think more and to write more and so on. in addition, i think makeing firends with good students in their lessons is also a helpful way. if you can do it so, you must to be a good learner in the near future.

做一个好学生是每个学生的梦想。如何成为一个好的学习者?你知道“兴趣”是学习的关键,所以我肯定你应该对你的新课感兴趣。当然,每一个学生都很重要,探索学习技能和有效的方法,因为它能使你在短期内取得成功。最后,我相信每个人都擅长英语、数学、物理或其他任何课程都有一个基本的方法,那就是多学,多听,多读,多思考,多写等等。另外,我认为交朋友与他们的教训的好学生也是一个很有用的方法。如果你能这样做,你必须是一个很好的学习者在不久的将来。

精选读者点评

“兴趣是学习的关键”这句写得真好!但后面“多学多听多读……”堆得太密,像赶集似的,喘口气,挑两样说透,比列一堆强。

校园

500字
主题:自然之美、历史记忆、人文情怀、校园 identity、诗意栖居

加“考试采取“多题多卷”模式,试题顺序不统一,请依据试题进行核对。”

参考范文

the cherry avenue

if im the guide of my foreign friends visit to our campus, i will choose the cherry avenue as our first destination.

as the name implies, the cherry avenue is lined with hundreds of neatly-placed cherry blossom trees. it is about 200 meters long and a major scenic spot in our campus. in spring when the cherry trees bloom, the flowers are so dense that looking from a distance, it seems as if the road were surrounded by pink-hued clouds. especially when there is a breeze, petals of cherry blossoms flutter and fall gently like a drizzle. such breath-taking scene will put visitors into a kind of trance.

whats more special is the buildings along the avenue. built in early 1900s, they are now called cherry blossom castle. theyve witnessed the history of our school and even our country. you can learn a lot about our school there.

in a word, a tour to the cherry avenue is both an amazing sight-seeing and a great opportunity to know about the culture of our school.

点评

本次四级作文一反以往的图片题形式,改为情境式话题作文,可能让准备好图片题写作的同学有点措手不及。不过话题贴近生活,要求介绍大学校园的某个地方,即介绍性的短文,难度不大,只要避免语法错误即可保证得分。想要博出彩拿高分,可以在词汇的丰富性上下功夫,避免同样的词多次出现。

精选读者点评

这“粉云”表达真巧妙!花瓣像细雨飘落,你咋想到的?下次试试把“cherry blossom castle”那句再抻开半句,比如它墙缝里长过什么草、谁曾在窗边读过书啊!

低碳生活的英语作文范文

200字
主题:环保意识、校园行动、可持续发展、绿色习惯、社会责任

低碳生活的英语作文范文

in my view , first of all, as students, we should go to school on foot instead of driving a car. cars not only let out carbon dio_ide but also waste energy. second ,we had best not use plastic bags which can bring about the white pollution. we should use the environmentally-friendly bags. third, its of great use to plant trees. trees can absorb carbon dio_ide and release o_ygen. now we can from our own, to promote low-carbon living.

from now on we started operations! i believe that only we do thus can we have a better living environment.

精选读者点评

单词拼写小马虎呀,“dio_ide”“o_ygen”中间的下划线得去掉,“from our own”改成“start from ourselves”更地道。客观来说结尾那句“now we can from our own…”劲儿挺足,看得出你想使劲儿喊出来!