latan festival

300字
主题:传统节日、饮食文化、民间习俗、节令活动

till today, the lantern festival is still held each year around the country. lanterns of various shapes and sizes are hung in the streets, attracting countless visitors. guessing lantern riddlesis an essential part of the festival.

people will eat yuan_iao, or rice dumplings, on this day, so it is also called the yuan_iao festival.yuan_iao also has another name, tangyuan. tangyuan can be boiled, fried or steamed. it tastes sweet and delicious.

直到今天,元宵节还每年举办一次全国各地。不同的形状和大小的灯笼悬挂在街上,吸引无数的游客。“猜灯谜”是一个重要的部分的节日。人们会吃元宵,或吃粽子,在这一天,因此它也被称为“元宵的节日。“元宵也有另一个名字,汤圆。汤圆可以煮、煎或蒸。它尝起来很甜很好吃。

精选读者点评

这个“元宵节”写得真热闹!灯笼、灯谜、元宵全齐了,读着就闻到甜香啦~只是“粽子”是端午的呀,咱把“粽子”换成“糯米团子”更准哦!还有“举办一次全国各地”这句,像把地图揉成一团塞进句子里,试试“在全国各地热热闹闹地办”哦!

圣诞节会代替春节吗

350字
主题:文化认同、节日变迁、传统坚守、现代冲击

spring festival is our chinese traditional festival. it is important to us. we will celebrate it every year. but with the development of the world, christmas day plays a more and more important place. and there are more and more chinese celebrate this festival. we can see that christmas day is noisier that spring festival in the big city, because people will go back to their hometown. the big city seems very lonely. so, some people are afraid that christmas day will take the place of spring festival. but i don’t think so, because spring festival is a symbol of china.

春节是我们中国的传统节日。它对我们很重要。我们每年都会庆祝。但是,随着世界的发展,圣诞节对我们来说也越来越重要。越来越多的中国人庆祝这个节日。我们可以看到在大城市圣诞节要比春节热闹,因为大家都会家乡了。大城市就显得很冷清。所以,有些人担心圣诞节会取代春节。但我并不这么认为,因为春节是中国的一个象征。

精选读者点评

开头中英混杂有点跳,建议统一用中文写;“noisier that spring festival”这句语法小错漏了,改成“比春节更热闹”更顺。略显结尾那句“春节是中国的象征”,干净有力,戳得准!

上大学前要先工作吗

750字
主题:人生规划、教育衔接、自我认知、社会初探、价值启蒙

in china, it is the traditional for high school students attend university after they graduate from high school for about three months. many students will use these three months to stay home for rela_. however, now there are some people point out that they should use that time to gain work e_perience, instead of wasting time. i agree with them. in my opinion, going to work before entering university has many advantages.

在中国,高中生毕业约三个月后就开始上大学是一直以来的传统。很多学生会利用这三个月呆在家里放松。然而,现在有人指出他们应该利用这段时间来获取工作经验,而不是浪费时间。我同意他们的观点。在我看来,上大学前要先工作是有很多优点的。

first of all, going to work before university is helpful for high school students to figure out the most desire major they want. as most high school students are busy with study in school, they don have too much time to find what they want in the future. the most important two points in choosing university and major are interest and employment. if they work before entering college, they can have a clearer mind for themselves. they have more chances to make a right choice. in addition, working before going to university can make them treasure their school life more. life is not easy. when they work, they can realize this. having taste the bitter, they will treasure their happy life more.

首先,上大学前先工作有助于高中学生弄清楚他们最想要的是什么专业。由于大多数高中生在学校的时候都是忙于学习,他们都没有时间去了解自己将来想要的是什么。在选择学习和专业时最 重要的两点是兴趣和就业。如果在上大学前先工作,他们可以更清晰的了解自己。就有更多的机会做出正确的选择。此外,上大学前工作可以更加珍惜学校生活。生活并不容易。他们工作的时候,他们就会意识到这一点。经历过苦难后,他们才会更珍惜自己的幸福生活。

to summary, going to work before entering university is a chance for high school graduate students to see themselves or the world better. it is good for them.

精选读者点评

这个“呆家里放松”写得真像你平时说话!后半段“经历过苦难”有点突然,你真干过啥活儿?快递站?奶茶店?写具体点,比喊口号充满力量多了。

描写中秋节的英语作文

450字
主题:家庭团聚、文化传承、节日习俗、神话想象、家国情怀

描写中秋节的英语作文

august 15th in chinese lunar calendar is the mid-autumn day. it is one of the most important traditional festivals in china.

on that day people usually go back home to have family reunion. each family will have the members get together to have a big dinner. the most popular food is moon cakes. they are round and look like the moon.

the moon is the brightest this night. people ate the delicious food while they were enjoying a beautiful full moon in their yard. at this time, some old people would like to tell many past events and tell the children a story about tho rabbit. the children really believed that there was a rabbit on the moon. they wanted to go to the moon and have a look one day.

what a great festival!

农历八月十五日是中秋节,在中国它是最重要的传统节日之一。

在那一天,人们通常回家与家人团聚,一家人聚在一起饱餐一顿。最流行的食品是月饼,它们圆圆的就像月亮。

中秋节晚上的月亮特别地圆。人们都在自家的院子里一边赏月一边吃着可口的月饼。这个时候;一些老人会讲述许多古老的`故事,如月亮上的玉兔,孩子们信以为真,他们真想有一天登上月球看个究竟。

中秋是个美好的节日啊!

精选读者点评

“tho rabbit”拼错了,是“the rabbit”哦!还有“ate”时态不对,前面都用一般现在时,这里突然跳过去式,小朋友读着会懵的~

毅力的英语作文

350字
主题:成长、奋斗、人生选择、精神品质、自我超越

ry and try until you succeed. this saying shows the importance of perseverance. i have found through e_perience that only through hard work can we succeed.many people have failed in their work or studies, precisely because they had no perseverance. life, in general, as in many things we do, has never been easy. no one promised us what it would be.

so, if we want to succeed in life, we must be brave to win. this is the standard that differentiates people who succeed in life and those who don .

论毅力

“努力,努力,再努力直至成功”,这句俗语说明了毅力的重要性。我通过经验发现只有经过艰苦的努力,才能获得成功。许多人在工作或学习中失败了,恰好是因为他们缺乏毅力。总之,生活就和我们做的许多事情一样,从来就不是容易的。没有人给我们许诺未来生活是什么样子。

因此,如果我们要想获得生活的成功,我们就必须勇于拼搏。这是区别获得生活成功的人和不成功的人的标准。

精选读者点评

英文段里“e_perience”拼错了,下划线是啥?手滑还是没注意?顺手改掉哈~

英语作文带翻译

500字
主题:阅读习惯、公共空间、人文素养、社会观察、时间管理

英语作文带翻译

a popular activity that proposed by the famous actress emma waston had responsed by a lot of people. emma waston left the books in london subway and the people who picked up them were lucky guys. the purpose of this activity is to advocate people to read. so there are some people curious about the situation in china and the journalists have done the similar e_periment. they left some books in guangzhou subway, but the result frustrated the journalists, because barely had persons to pick up the books, some were taken away by the cleaners as the rubbish, some were left where they were. the result shows that less people keep reading, they are busy working and have no idea of the value of a book. everybody has their own stuff, but if we make out some time to read everyday, then we will be different.

由女演员艾玛沃森发起的一项受欢迎的活动得到了很多人的回应。艾玛沃森在伦敦地铁站留下了很多书本,捡到的人是幸运的人。这个活动的目的是倡导人们看书。所以有些人好奇在中国的情况,记者做了类似的实验。他们在广州地铁留下一些书,但结果让记者沮丧,因为几乎没有人拿起书,一些被清洁工当作垃圾拿走,一些留在原地。结果表明,很少人保持阅读,他们忙于工作,不了解一本书的价值。每个人都有自己的事情,但如果我们每天出抽出一些时间来读书,就会有所不同。

精选读者点评

这个“地铁丢书”例子选得真巧!后半段广州的对比,一下子把问题揪出来了,不是没人爱书,是节奏太快,连弯腰捡书的时间都被榨干了。结尾那句“每天抽出一点时间”,轻,但有分量。

中国网球第一人-李娜

1100字
主题:突破、荣耀、体育精神、民族自豪、时代标杆、女性力量

na li is the most incredible tennis player of china.

李娜是中国实力的网球选手。

up to now ,she got four single titles and two double titles of wta, and what`s more she is the first chinese player who got the single title during the wta tour.

到目前为止,他已经获得了四个单打冠军(作文地带提示:2026年6月5日又活得了法网冠军,单打冠军已超过5个)和两个wta双打冠军。更为重要的是,她是一位在wta世界巡回赛上获得个人单打冠军的中国选手。

besides she is the first top ten player of china who gets no.7 right now.

除此之外,她在中国十大球员中排第七位。

in 2026 beijing olympics game, she reached to semi final in the single game. and this year,she reached to the final of australia open which was the first time for an asian player to get into final of a grand slams single. and we believe that she can make more miracles in the future.

在2026年奥运会期间,他闯入单场半决赛。在同年,她还在澳网公开赛上一位打入单打决赛的亚洲选手。我们相信,不远的未来,她会取得更为骄人的成绩!

作文地带点评:

接下来的2026年6月5日法网公开赛上,李娜达到了个人网球事业的巅峰期,赢得了法网公开赛的冠军,这也是亚洲人首次打入单打决赛,且还是冠军,李娜的影响或将超越刘翔或姚明。祝福李娜!

作文地带重点词汇讲解:

incredible [ɪnkrɛdəb!] :难以置信,不可思议;

semi final:半决赛;

make more miracles:创造更多的奇迹。

本文翻译为作文地带原创,未经许可请勿转载!谢谢。

知识普及:

职业生涯大满贯也称“全满贯”:即选手分别获得australian open(澳大利亚网球公开赛)、french open(法国网球公开赛)、wimbledon tennis championships(温布尔登网球锦标赛)和us open(美国网球公开赛)四项赛事的冠军。四项赛事通常又称为“大满贯系列赛”,拿到任意一个冠军就是grand slam(大满贯)冠军。

李娜中文介绍:

李娜,祖籍湖北孝感,1982年生于湖北武汉,是中国女子网球界的领军人物,6岁开始练习网球,1999年转为职业选手,曾经在2026年退役两年。2026年复出,重返国家队后不满举国体制的训练方式于2026年“单飞”,她的网球事业也一路飞进,成绩上不断取得突破,已经成为“中国的英雄”,也成为了中国体育界的代表人物,是武汉市一张靓丽的城市名片。

2026年6月4日,李娜获得法国网球公开赛女子单打冠军,夺得苏珊·朗格朗杯。这是中国乃至亚洲历第一个网球大满贯赛事的冠军。在法国网球公开赛的女单决赛中,李娜在拿下首盘后,又在第二盘末段成功顶住了卫冕冠军、意大利名将斯齐亚沃尼的顽强反击,最终以6-4/7-6(0)的比分胜出,创造历史成为第一个捧起网球大满贯赛单打冠军奖杯苏珊·朗格朗杯的亚洲选手,书写了中国网球灿烂的辉煌时刻。凭借该场胜利,李娜成为了自1896年起第一位获得大满贯单打冠军的亚洲选手,世界排名升至世界第四,追平日本名将伊达公子此前所保持的亚洲选手纪录。

精选读者点评

李娜法网夺冠那段感染力强!“6-4/7-6(0)”这个比分都记下来了,看得出你查过资料,不是瞎编的。就是“他”和“她”混着用,读着有点懵,是笔误?还是对人物性别没留意?顺手改改哈。

元宵节的英语作文怎么写

1000字
主题:传统节日、中华文化、民间艺术、家庭团聚、岁时风俗

一年一度的元宵节又将至,小编在这里祝大家元宵节快乐,关于元宵节的英语作文应该怎么写呢,在这里,小编跟小伙伴们准备了两篇关于介绍元宵节的英语作文,希望可以供你参考。 关于介绍元宵节的英语作文

lantern festival lantern festival is a chinas traditional festival. it is celebrated on the fifteenth day of the first month of the lunar year. i,antern festival is one of the biggest holidays in china. several days before lantern festival, people begin to make lanterns. lanterns are made in the shape of different animals, vegetables, fruits and many, other things. while making lanterns people usually write riddles on lanterns. on the eve of lantern festival, all the lanterns are hung up. on lantern festival people go outside to have a look at the lanterns and guess the riddles on the lanterns. perhaps you call see some wonderful folk performances,dragon dance and yangko. everything is very interesting and everyone is very happy. our life is rich and varied. 元宵节 元宵节是中国的一个传统节日。通常在阴历年的第一个月的第十五天庆祝。 元宵节是中国的节日之一。在元宵节到来的几天前,人们就开始做灯笼,有的被做成动物,有的被做成蔬菜,有的被做成水果,各种样式都有。做灯笼时,人们通常在上面写上谜语。在元宵节前夜,所有的灯笼都被挂起来。 在元宵节这天,人们都出来看灯笼和猜灯谜,也许你还能看见一些精彩的民间表演龙舞和秧歌。每件事都很有趣,每个人都很高兴,我们的生活丰富多彩。 第 the 15-day celebration of chinese new year on the second day, the chinese pray to their ancestors as well as to all the gods. they are e_tra kind to dogs and feed them well as it is believed that the second day is the birthday of all dogs. the third and fourth days are for the sons-in-laws to pay respect to their parents-in-law. on the si_th to the 10th day, the chinese visit their relatives and friends freely. they also visit the temples to pray for good fortune and health. the seventh day of the new year is the day for farmers to display their produce. these farmers make a drink from seven types of vegetables to celebrate the occasion. the seventh day is also considered the birthday of human beings. noodles are eaten to promote longevity and raw fish for success. on the eighth day the fujian people have another family reunion dinner, and at midnight they pray to tian gong, the god of heaven. the ninth day is to make offerings to the jade emperor. the 10th through the 12th are days that friends and relatives should be invited for dinner. after so much rich food, on the 13th day you should have simple rice congee and mustard greens (choi sum) to cleanse the system. the 14th day should be for preparations to celebrate the lantern festival which is to be held on the 15th night.

精选读者点评

元宵节写得挺热闹!灯笼形状、猜谜、龙舞秧歌都点到了,画面感有了。稍显“our life is rich and varied”这句收尾太笼统,换成你亲眼看见的一个老爷爷提着兔子灯笑出皱纹,是不是更有味。

如何保持身心健康英语作文

850字
主题:身心健康、生活习惯、积极心态、人际支持、自我管理

如何保持身心健康英语作文

you can take away our money, house, car, or even our clothes and we can survive. but if our health was taken away, we would surely die. that is why

we always try to eat in a healthy way and e_ercise regularly. in order to eat healthily, i usually avoid eating food high in fat, like french fries

or cookies. i also eat little meat. i eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit which are full of vitamins. taking e_ercise every day helps us build

a strong body. regular e_ercise is an important part of keeping me healthy. what£§s more, i think friends are an important part of one£§s health.

many studies show that people with a wide range of social contacts get sick less than those who don£§t. i always feel better when i am with

friends than when i am alone. when i am with my friends, i always laugh. laughing is also an important part of health. i like to laugh with my

friends. by eating properly and e_ercising regularly, i can keep my body at a proper weight and keep healthy. by spending time with my friends, i

can keep my mind as well as my body happy. these things sound easy to do, but not many people can manage them. i think a strong will is necessary

if we want to keep healthy.

你可以拿走我们的钱、房子、汽车,甚至我们的衣服,我们可以生存。但是如果我们的健康被带走了,我们肯定会死。这就是为什么我们总是尽量吃健康的方式,定期锻炼

。为了吃得健康,我通常避免吃高脂肪的食物,比如炸薯条或甜点。我也很少吃肉。我吃很多的蔬菜和富含维他命的新鲜水果。每天做运动有助于我们建立一个强壮的身

体。有规律的运动是我们保持身体健康的一个重要组成部分。什么£§年代更多,我认为朋友是一个重要的一部分£§年代健康。许多研究表明,人们广泛的社会联系生病

比那些不£§t。我总是感觉更好,当我与朋友比当我独自一人。当我和我的朋友,我总是笑。笑也是健康的重要组成部分。我喜欢和我的朋友笑了起来。通过合理的饮食

和规律性的运动,我可以保持我的身体在一个适当的体重和保持健康。通过花时间与我的朋友,我可以让我的心灵以及身体开心。这些东西听起来容易做,但没有多少人可

以管理他们。我认为坚强的意志是必要的,如果我们想要保持健康。

精选读者点评

健康写得挺着实!“笑也是健康的重要组成部分”这句条理清楚,比背教科书强多了。话说回来“e_ercise”写了三次都漏了x,下次默写一遍?还有“什么£§s more”这种乱码,是复制粘贴没清理干净吧哦!

happiness in chiristmas day

300字
主题:宗教起源、民俗变迁、跨文化理解、节庆经济

christmas is the biggest festival in the western world, which people all over the christian countries celebrate. it is on the 25th day of each december. christians consider it as the birthday of jesus christ. but now many customs and habits are beyond religious meaning, the christmas season begins five or si_ weeks before the e_act holiday. there is always a shopping boom during this period. so its really a happy season for shop owners. bout foreign culture.

每年的12月25日,所有基督教国家的人们都欢庆圣诞节。一般认为圣诞节是耶稣诞生的日子。但是现在许多风俗和习惯都已超出了宗教意义。圣诞节季节在12月25日之前的5、6个星期就已经开始了。在这一时期总会出现一个购物潮。所以圣诞节确实是店主的快乐节日。

精选读者点评

这个中英双语对照写得挺有意思!值得注意的是英文段里“si_”明显是“six”拼漏了,“e_act”也该是“exact”吧?还有“bout foreign culture”这句突然冒出来,像没写完的半截话,小朋友是不是抄着抄着走神啦啊!

经典母亲节英语作文

400字
主题:感恩母亲、文化传承、节日习俗、亲情表达、人文关怀

mothers day is a celebration honoring mothers and celebrating motherhood, maternal bonds and the influence of mothers in society. its a day to show thanks to mothers. this festival first appeared in ancient greece and modern mothers day originated in the united states which usually falls on the second sunday of may each year. mothers usually receive gifts on this day and carnation(康乃馨) is regarded as the flower for mother. in china, the flower for mother is day lily(萱草花), also known as nepenthe(忘忧草). in addition, cleaning up the room, doing housework and a big dinner are considered to be the best mothers day gifts.

母亲节是纪念母亲,赞扬母爱和母性情结,以及社会上母亲的影响的节日。这是向母亲表达感谢的一天。这个节日最初出现于古希腊,现代母亲节源于美国,通常是在每年五月的第二个星期六。母亲们通常会在这一天收到礼物,康乃馨被看做是母亲之花。在中国,给母亲的花通常是萱草花,也叫做忘忧草。另外,打扫屋子,做家务,做一顿丰盛的晚餐都被当做是给母亲的礼物。

精选读者点评

中英文混排挺大胆!但“五月的第二个星期六”写错了,是“星期日”哦,翻翻日历就明白了。

大学学习是否有必要

750字
主题:成长价值、教育意义、自我塑造、社会适应、生命质量

with the increasing number of college students every year, a number of people start to suspect that whether college study is necessary.as far as i am concerned, college study is necessary. there are reasons accounting for my point.

随着高校毕业生数量每年的不断增加,很多人开始怀疑,上大学是否有必要。就我而言,大学学习是必须的。有几点可以支持我的观点。

first, college study is an effective way to improve ourselves. we are able to learn some major knowledge and improve our skills, which gives a basis for our future career. second, college study is a bridge between school and society and it gives us a chance to get acquaintance with society in advance. for e_ample, we need to learn how to get along with different kinds of people so that we can cooperate with others better. last but not least, college study is helpful for us forming correct view on life and sense of value. through college study, we are gradually developing the ability of thinking independently and forming our own model of thinking. and this process is definitely important for our future life and career.

首先,大学学习是自我提高的有效途径。我们可以学习一些专业知识、提高我们的能力,这些可以为我们的未来职业生涯奠定基础。第二,大学学习是学校与社会之间的桥梁,它给了我们一个机会提前了解社会。例如,我们需要学习如何与不同类型的人相处这样我们才能更好的与他人合作。最后但并非最不重要的是,大学学习有助于我们形成正确的人生观和价值观。通过大学学习,我们正在逐渐养成独立思考的能力,形成我们自己的思维方式。这个过程对我们未来的生活和事业是非常重要的。

to sum up, college study is definitely necessary if conditions allowed. therefore, once we choose to continue study on college campus, what we need to do is to make full use of time and try our best to make our life wonderful.

综上所述,如果条件允许,大学学习是绝对有必要的。因此,我们一旦选择继续在大学里学习,我们需要做的是充分利用时间,努力让我们的生活变得精彩。

精选读者点评

这个“桥梁”比喻用得真巧!第二段里“提前了解社会”后面,要是能加个你自己的小故事,比如第一次小组合作吵架又和好,就更打动人啦~

电视对社会的影响英语作文翻译

900字
主题:科技发展、媒介功能、社会影响、教育引导、理性使用

电视对社会的影响 effects of television on our society with the ever-increasing speed of technology development, television, a widespread means of recreation for centuries, has applied a soaring number of advanced technologies to it, making it far more intriguing. nevertheless, what kind of influence television has e_erted on our society has aroused heated discussion in public. there is a part of our citizen claiming that television has wasted our time and spoilt the promising future of children, whereas i am firmly convinced that television has brought about profound changes to us.

随着科技的飞速进步,作为一个世纪以来的广泛普及的娱乐方式——电视机正在把更多的先进技术可以应用于其上,把自己变得更加富有吸引力。然而,电视机对人 类社会到底有什么样的影响,这一个问题在大众之间激发了热烈的讨论。有一部分公民认为电视机浪费了我们的时间并且毁掉了孩子们的美好未来,而我却坚定的认 为电视机给我们的生活带来了极为巨大的转变。 首先,我考虑到的第一个因素是电视机是一个极好的信息源。它不仅可以在短时间内呈现大量的信息,而且可以从视听多角度呈现信息,这一点使它优于其他的媒介。 除此之外,更为重要的是,看电视是一个很好的休闲娱乐的方式。当人们看电视的时候,他们总是感到十分的放松。根据一所大学近期所做的一项调查,百分之六十 的被调查者说他们通过看电视剧或者动画片来放松,这些方式的确很有效地缓解了他们的压力。从这个例子我们可以得到以下的结论:看电视是一个化解压力的好方 法。 当然,电视机也有自身的弊病比如说吸引孩子未完成作业就看电视和让孩子们上瘾的特性。但是,和优点相比起来,这些不足显得不那么重要了。另外,对那些有自制力的人来说,这些弊病没多大问题。 from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that the positive effect tv e_erts far outweighs its deleterious impact; it is suitable to consider television as one of the most preeminent inventions in history. i advocate that everyone should be encouraged to get access to it and make full use of its potential, making our vision wider. 经过以上讨论我们可以清晰地得出结论,电视机对人类社会产生了更多积极的影响,它可以被认为是人类历最伟大的发明之一。我建议我们每一个人都应当适度看电视来拓宽我们的知识面。

精选读者点评

电视真能“拓宽视野”?你举了大学调查数据,但没说清,看什么节目、谁在看、怎么看,才真正决定视野宽不宽。下次试试把“动画片缓解压力”这个点,换成你自个儿上周看《航拍中国》时哪帧画面让你愣住三秒。

英语作文写作范文-基础知识的重要性

650字
主题:基础教育、能力发展、终身学习、自我成长、价值认同

we can see that in this picture, a teacher is teaching her pupils to deal with arithmetic questions, but some of them think that learning these mathematical skills is useless. they argue that by the time they are in the job market, these skills will be outdated. as to whether it is important to learn basic skills, people hold different views.

as far as i know, it is very important for one student to acquire basic skills. at first, mastering basic skills well can lay a solid foundation for learning advanced skills. basic skills are a floor, not a ceiling. students must learn them first so that they can move on to various advanced skills. what‘s more, learning basic skills helps to improve confidence and enhance self-esteem. individuals with basic skills are likely to be more confident and active.

all in all, if we want to keep progressing, it is important to learn basic skills well. by mastering basic skills and learning new things, we will have a bright future!

我们可以看到,在这幅图中,一位老师正在教她的学生处理算术题,但有些人认为学习这些数学技能是没有用的。他们认为,他们在就业市场的时候,这些技能将是过时的。对于学习基本技能是否重要,人们持不同的看法。

据我所知,它是非常重要的一个学生获得基本技能。一开始,掌握基本技能,能为学习先进技术打下坚实的基础。基本技能是一层楼,而不是天花板。学生必须先学习,这样他们就可以继续前进到各种先进的技能。而且,学习的基本技能有助于提高自信心和增强自尊。具备基本技能的个人有可能更加自信和主动。

所有的一切,如果我们想保持进步,学习基本技能是很重要的。通过掌握基本技能和学习新事物,我们将有一个光明的未来!

精选读者点评

这篇作文观点很清晰!“基本技能是地板不是天花板”这个比喻尤为妙,批改时忍不住画了圈,比老师讲的还生动。唯独第二段英文和中文混着写,考试可要扣分啦,下次记得统一用中文哦~