粗心的我

300字
主题:成长顿悟、家庭协作、责任初识、临危反应

last night, i helped my mother steam buns. after a moment, father asked me, how much water did you put in the pot? water? oh, my! i forgot the water! i answered. what? you forgot?! father screamed into the kitchen, turned off the gas, and hurriedly put the nearly burnt pot into water to cool down. thank god that nothing happened. it would have been on fire if i hadn noticed it in time. father said. but i just stood there, too scared to say anything.

昨天晚上,我帮妈妈蒸馒头。过了一会儿,爸爸问我:“你在锅里放了多少水?”水?哦,我的!我忘了水!”我回答道。”什么?你忘了?“爸爸尖叫着进了厨房,关掉煤气,赶紧把那几乎烧成的锅放到水里凉了。感谢上帝,一切都没有发生。”如果我没有注意到它的时候,它就会着火了。”父亲说。但我只是站在那里,不敢说什么。

精选读者点评

水没加,锅差点烧穿,这事儿如见实景!你把“忘水”那一秒的慌、爸冲进来的急、锅滋啦冒烟的味儿,全生动逼真有灵气。结尾那句“不敢说什么”,比哭还让人心揪。

英语的重要性-九年级英语作文带翻译

300字
主题:语言价值、国际沟通、文化输出、信息时代、终身学习

its important to learn english

english is widely used throughout the world. so many people speak it as a second language. n line, youll find lots of information in english. if you don understand english, how can you know more about the world, how can you get more knowledge. at international conferences, english is also used as the official language. without good english, you cannot e_press your ideas well at such conferences, neither can you introduce china to the outside world.

学英语很重要

英语在世界上被广泛使用。许多人说它是一种语言。,你会发现许多英文信息。如果你不懂英语,你怎么能知道更多关于世界的知识,你怎么能得到更多的知识。在国际会议上,英语也作为官方语言使用。没有好的英语,你不能在这样的会议上表达自己的想法,也不能把中国介绍给外界。

精选读者点评

句子太“直”啦!比如“so many people speak it as a second language”,读着像查字典,试试加个例子?比如“像隔壁李阿姨学了三年,现在能看懂bbc天气预报啦!”

如何获得快乐

300字
主题:幸福观、身心健康、知足常乐、生活意义

how to get happiness

there is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world.without it, life will be empty and meaningless.if you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.

无疑的快乐是世界上最宝贵的东西。没有它,人生将是空虚的而且毫无意义的。如果你希望知道如何获得快乐,你须注意下面两点。

first, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness).only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.

健康是快乐的要诀。唯有身体强壮的人才能享受人生的乐趣。

secondly, happiness consists in contentment.a man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.

快乐在于知足。一个不满于现状的人终是处在痛苦之中。

精选读者点评

这篇作文中英文混排得挺有意思,但要注意中文作文里别夹英文句子哦~“health is the secret of happiness”这句写得挺顺,可后面直接翻译成“健康是快乐的要诀”,读着有点硬。试试把英文意思揉进自己的话里?比如“人要是总生病,再好的事也乐不起来”。

初三保护动物的英语作文带翻译

300字
主题:关爱动物、文明游览、责任意识、生态保护

it was a fine day today and the sun was bright. i visited beijing zoo with my classmate, he song. the animals were so interesting that all the people loved them. when a bear asked for some food by waving its ann, a visitor threw something to it. at once i went up to him and said without thinking,don do that. its bad for it. if you really love them, take good care of them. his face turned red and answered he wouldn do that again.

今天是个风和日丽的好天,我和同学贺松去了北京动物园。动物们是那么可爱,大家都非常喜欢它们。一只熊挥动着胳膊向人们要吃的,一个游客就投进去了什么东西。我想都没想就走过去说:“不要那样做。你的做法对它们没好处。如果真的喜欢它们,就应该爱护它们。”他的脸红了,并且回答说他不会再那么做了。

精选读者点评

熊“挥动胳膊”这个细节直击重点!比写“伸手要食”生动多了,说明你眼睛亮、心也细。

上学路上

400字
主题:责任意识、环境保护、行为自律、公共文明、成长瞬间

n the way to school

this morning, my father took me to school by bike. i sat at the back of the bike, eating a banana. after i ate it up, i threw the skin onto the street randomly.

no sooner had i done this than i realized that i had done something bad to our environment. and maybe someone would step on it and tumbleover. i must pick it up. thinking of these, i asked father to stop. i jumped offthe bike and ran back to pick up the banana skin and threw it into a roadside dustbin. seeing this, father praised me and i felt very happy.

in future i will protect the surroundings more consciously and think more about others.

上学路上

今天早晨,爸爸骑车带我去上学。我坐在后车座上,吃着香蕉。吃完后,我顺手将香蕉皮扔到了街上。

我马上意识到我的所作所为破坏了我们的环境,或许有人会踩在上面而跌倒,我必须把它拾起来。想到这些,我让爸爸停车。我跳下自行车,跑回去拾起香蕉皮,并扔到了路边的垃圾箱里。看到这些,爸爸表扬了我。我感到很高兴。

将来我要更自觉地保护周围的环境,更多地为他人着想。

精选读者点评

香蕉皮扔得快,捡得更快!后车座上那个转身跳下去的小身影,比作文里写的还亮。下次试试把“顺手扔”改成“踮脚放”呢!

我想要的初三作文

1000字
主题:成长、奋斗、荣耀、伤痛、回归、信仰

biography

ronaldo luiz nazario de lima1 was born on 22 september 1976 in a poor suburb of rio de janeiro2. like most of his childhood friends, ronaldo began his soccer career playing barefoot in the streets of his neighborhood. at the age of 14, he joined so cristovo3 soccer club and only two years later became the star of cruzeiro belo horizonte4 scoring a total of 58 goals in 60 matches and earning himself a reputation for his e_plosive5 pace and outstanding finishing skills. his goal-scoring record and unusual agility6 led him to be included in the brazilian world cup winning team the following year. after the world cup, many top european football clubs were trying to sign him. many people, including brazilian football legend pelé7, referred to him as the most promising8 footballer of his generation.

since his transfer to dutch team psv eindhoven9, ronaldo s biography10 is one of success after success. two copa américa s11, a uefa12 cup, a dutch cup, a spanish league cup, and two awards as best player in the world, all in the space of two years, are some of ronaldo s impressive13 achievements. on arrival to inter-milan in 1997, ronaldo became the idol14 of the local fans who refer to him as il fenomeno15.

since the 98 world cup he has suffered two serious knee injuries that have severely limited his appearances. just when people began to wonder whether ronaldo would be able to continue with his football career, he proved to the world that he still could play. in the world cup held in korea and japan, the magical striker16 won the golden shoe award and tied pele s brazilian record for career world cup goals with 12. he helped brazil capture17 its fifth world cup championship on june 30 with a 2-0 win over germany. it was the third time that ronaldo has ever played in the world cup.

我的体育偶像:世界球王--罗纳尔多

罗纳尔多1976年9月22日出生在里约热内卢的贫困郊区。像多数童年的伙伴一样,他的足球生涯是从小区的街道上赤脚踢球开始的。14岁的时候,他加盟圣克里斯托旺足球俱乐部,仅仅两年后他就成长为克鲁塞罗俱乐部的明星,60场比赛进了58粒球,快捷有力的步伐和非凡的射门技巧令其名声大噪。第二年,他射门得分的纪录以及超凡的敏捷使他入选巴西国家队参加世界杯。世界杯结束后,许多欧洲足球俱乐部都削尖脑袋想同他签约。许多人,包括巴西传奇人物贝利,都认为他是同代人中最有希望的足球运动员。

自从转会到荷兰的埃因霍温足球俱乐部后,罗纳尔多取得了一次又一次的成功:两次美洲杯冠军、一次欧洲足协联盟杯冠军、一次荷兰杯冠军、一次西班牙联赛冠军、两次获得世界球员奖,所有这一切都是在短短两年内取得的。1997年,他一到国际米兰队,就成为当地球迷心中的偶像,被称为“奇才”。

精选读者点评

罗纳尔多赤脚踢球那段真带感“ barefoot在街道上”和“赤脚在小区街道上”对照着读,中文这股子泥土味儿一下就出来了,你把外文材料嚼碎了再吐出来,不是硬搬,真好。