描写秋景的小学生英语作文

250字
主题:丰收喜悦、季节更迭、田园风光、劳动之美、自然馈赠、童年视角

autumn, rice has matured in the paddy field, in a glance, seems to spread all over the floor of gold, and the farmer uncle one by one to pick up the gold in their field. the breeze blowing, golden ocean layers has moved.

fruitful tree is decorated with their success : persimmon tree, far see like hang up red lanterns. persimmon you squeeze me, as if to say: pick me, pick me, my flesh is sweet. zizyphus jujube tree, zizyphus jujube fell all over the floor, people hurriedly picked up, i picked up a bite, good acid! vineyard vines have purple black, like the black pearl, to eat into his mouth a sour, sweet, let a person forget the taste.

精选读者点评

这个“金浪翻滚”真带劲后文“红灯笼”“黑珍珠”也亮眼,但“农民伯伯”和“success”混搭有点跳,孩子,咱把英文词换成“沉甸甸的果实”试试?

乡间的秋天

950字
主题:丰收、绚烂、乡愁、生机、时序、欢愉

unconsciously, the fall came to earth. soft sunlight shines in the human body, people feel warm. look at the blue sky flock of geese fly south. leading pack, quack cried, cold weather, we have to fly south for the winter. autumn, golden rice fields mature. autumn wind blowing, rice swaying, like waves on the ocean, like, really like, how glorious countryside fall ah! autumn apple orchard mature, like a picture of the little girls face run red with shame. yellow pear small above big following, like gourd. glowing red persimmons hanging in the branches, like festive red lantern. autumn, plane trees that yellow with green, green through yellow leaves are the winds, da zhezhuan down, attached to the ground, from afar, as if that one is a painters brush with color painting to the earth flower carpet. what a beautiful countryside autumn it! it is autumn maple leaf flush, gui ju full bloom. look, the red maple leaf from east to west, as if the same fire. daisy is flourish, their different shapes, different colors. white as snow, yellow like gold, pink if _ia, that do not have the characteristics of alondra chrysanthemum like countless tales of a fountain, but also like the little girls hair. look at that piece of grass, the grass has withered, which has a lot of wild flowers in full bloom. this group wearing colorful clothes children sat together, the joy of singing and dancing. i love the countryside in autumn.

不知不觉,秋天来到人间。柔和的太阳光普照在人身上,人们感觉暖洋洋的。看蓝蓝的天空中一群大雁往南飞。领头雁,嘎嘎地叫着,天气凉了,我们要飞到南方过冬去了。秋天,田野里金黄的稻子成熟了。秋风吹来,稻子摇来摇去,像海洋上的波浪一样,真让人喜爱,乡间的秋天多么辉煌啊!秋天果园里的苹果成熟了,像小姑娘一张张羞得润红的脸。黄的鸭梨上面小,下面大,像葫芦一样。红彤彤的柿子高挂在枝头,好似节日的红灯笼一样。秋天,梧桐树那黄中带绿,绿中透黄的叶子被风一吹,打着转落下,贴在地面上,远远望去,那仿佛就是画家用彩色的画笔给大地画的一层花地毯。乡间的秋天多么美丽呀!秋天正是枫叶红透,菊桂盛开的季节。瞧,枫叶从东红到西,好像着火一样。菊花更是大显身手,他们形状不同,颜色各异。白的像雪,黄的似金,粉的若霞,那别有特色的龙爪菊像无数缕喷泉,又像是小姑娘的卷发。再看那一片草地,小草已枯萎,当中却盛开着不少野花。一群穿这花花绿绿衣服的小朋友围在一起,欢乐的唱着,跳着。我爱乡间的秋天。

精选读者点评

柿子比作红灯笼、龙爪菊比作喷泉,神采奕奕!可“嘎嘎地叫着”后面那句“天气凉了,飞到南方过冬去了”,谁说的?大雁开会发言?留个问号哈~

走进秋天

250字
主题:丰收喜悦、季节之美、童心观照、自然馈赠、希望象征

秋,是一个充满希望的名字。瞧,她正在唱着歌向我们跑来。

她跑过田野,稻子一片金黄,在秋风的吹拂下,稻田掀起滚滚金浪;棉花宝宝探出雪白的脑袋,高兴地欣赏这美丽的秋景;大豆在秋风的摇动下晃动着自己饱满的身体,发出哗啦啦地声响,像是在提醒人们“我熟了” ……

她跑过果园,红通通的柿子像一盏盏小灯笼挂满枝头;紫色的葡萄像美丽的宝石,一串接一串,挤挤挨挨缀满藤架;金灿灿的大鸭梨鼓起自己的大肚皮,像一个个大将军;石榴姐姐笑裂了嘴,露出了晶莹透亮的牙齿 ……

我爱这硕果累累的秋,因为她给人们金色的希望。

精选读者点评

稻子“掀起金浪”、石榴“笑裂了嘴”,这拟人用得灵动自然!略显“棉花宝宝”“大豆在摇动下晃动”有点拗口,读两遍试试?