五年级英语作文范文-i miss my father

400字
主题:亲情、留守、乡愁、成长、期盼、坚守

i am a girl of ten, and i live in a small mountain village far from taiyuan. the only person that lives with me is my mother, because my father is away for eight years, working in a city.

during the spring festival, my father came back home. he looked thin and tired. he gave my mother two thousand yuan, and told her that he would work even harder, earn more money, and then he could take us to the city he stayed at home for only ten days.we are living a poor life now. but what i want most is not money, but my father. i miss him very much!

我是一个十岁的女孩,我住在离太原很远的一个小山村里。与我一起生活的人是我的母亲,因为我父亲离开了八年,在一个城市工作。

在春节期间,我爸爸回来了。他看起来又瘦又累。他给我的母亲二千元,并告诉她,他会更加努力工作,赚更多的钱,然后他可以带我们到这个城市他呆在家里只有十天,我们现在生活贫穷的生活。但是我最想要的不是钱,而是我的父亲。我非常想念他!

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“我最想要的不是钱,而是我的父亲。”,这句话像颗小石子,掉进我心里咚咚响。后文却没再碰它,太可惜了!

五年级英语作文翻译-如果我是一名教师

350字
主题:教育观、师生关系、学习体验、人文关怀、理想教师

if i were a teacher, i would not treat my students just as some know-nothing kids. i wouldn give them homework that can never be done.if i were a teacher, i would try my best to let them like me, not be afraid of me. i wouldn teach them just as if i were a sage. if i were a teacher, i would make friends with my students. i would respect them and understand them. if i were a teacher, i would make study a happy thing to my students, but not a burden to them.

如果我是老师,我不会不懂事的孩子一样对待我的学生,我不会给他们布置他们无法完成的作业.如果我是一名教师,我将尽力让他们喜欢我,而不是害怕我。我不会让他们觉得我像是圣人一样。如果我是一名教师,我将和我的学生交朋友。我会尊重他们,理解他们。如果我是一个老师,我会让我的学生觉得学习是件快乐的事情而不是一种负担。

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心里装着光呢!“让学习是件快乐的事”,这句话划了三道横线,真好。后半段中文里“圣人”那句着实亮,但“交朋友”和“尊重理解”堆一起有点赶,喘口气再写一句试试?

happy day 带翻译

250字
主题:成长喜悦、善良行为、学业进步、纯真情感

the happiest day iam ten years old today , im very happy today .but it is not the reason indeed .

when i went to school this morning , i helped a old woman passing road . and then , when i got to class , my teacher told me , i got an a at the test yesterday .

oh , my god , how happy i am.

today is the happiest day in all my life ,and i coundn help speaking out to all of you .

最开心的一天,我感到十来岁的今天,今天我很高兴。但它不是确实的原因。

当我今天早上去上学,我帮老太太过马路。然后,当我到班级,我的老师告诉我,昨天我得到一个“a”的考验。

哦,我的上帝,我怎么幸福。

今天是最开心的一天,我所有的生活,我忍不住说出来给大家。

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“帮老太太过马路”和“考了a”并列写,多真实啊!可“最开心的一天”后面怎么没写清,到底哪件更暖?哪件让你心跳快了?再补半句话就活了。

小学生五年级英语作文带翻译-i love english 我爱英语

350字
主题:语言力量、青春感悟、认知拓展、自我觉醒、学习热情

i love english!

have given me infinite interest because of him!

he lets me understand the world not having distance , person is away from successful single-step forever only.

person is flawless and perfect impossibly.

he is understood by me be going to be owning a fervency all the time to object.

work being not able to absolutely careless.

because of person will never know time as soon as may what to happened second.

i e_aggerate saying like this , seemingly a little bit.

but, english has let me understand many , many , many indeed.

我喜欢英语!

给了我无限的兴趣,因为他!

他让我明白了世界没有距离,人离成功只有一步一步的永远。

人是完美的,不可能完美的。

他理解我要拥有一个热情的对象。

工作不能够完全不小心。

因为人将永远不知道时间,只要可能发生了什么事。

我这样夸张地说,貌似有点小。

但是,英语已经让我明白了很多,很多,很多。

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英语当成了特别真实朋友,字里行间全是热乎气儿!“他让我明白世界没有距离”,多灵的直觉啊,比标准答案还闪亮。今后下回试着把“他”换成“它”,英语是语言,不是人哦~

五年级英语作文带翻译-the fairy in the forest

600字
主题:奇幻、友谊、成长、梦想、纯真、共生

one day, i went to the forest with my dragon and little dolphin.

“look,” said the little dolphin. “there’s a fairy over there!”. i saw her. so i rushed to the fairy and said: “can you take me my dragon and my, little dolphin to the fairy world?”

“ok.” she said. so she gave us some magic. suddenly, i turned into a beautiful fairy, holding a magic pen.

“i can fly!” shouted my little dolphin.

“i have a bag, it’s very very big, there’s twenty geese in it!” said my dragon, with a big big smile.

we saw big and small plant with smiles. then i saw the flower mushroom in the orchid valley. it said hello to me, i was still so happy. the fairy took us to an e_tremely beautiful bedroom. the bed was made from gold. the piano, chairs and table were made from gold. wow! everything was made from gold and silver. that was the most beautiful bedroom in the world!

i thanked the fairy and said: “we want to live in the fairy world happily ever after.

有一天,我去了森林龙和小海豚。 说:“看,小海豚。“那边有一个仙子!”我看见她。所以我冲到仙女说:“你能带我我的龙,我,小海豚童话世界吗?” “好吧。”她说。所以她给了我们一些魔法。突然,我变成了一个美丽的仙女,手里拿着一个神奇的钢笔。 “我能飞!“喊我的小海豚。 “我有一个包,非常非常大的,有二十个鹅!说:“我的龙,一个大微笑。 我们看到大大小小的植物,微笑。然后我看到花蘑菇兰花谷。我说你好,我还是很高兴。仙女把我们带到了一个非常漂亮的卧室。床是由黄金。钢琴,椅子和桌子是用黄金制成的。哇!一切都是由金和银。这是世界上最美丽的卧室! 我感谢仙女说:“我们想生活在童话的世界从此幸福地生活在一起。

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这个“花蘑菇在兰花谷说你好”,画面一下子活了!孩子心里真有童话的种子,不教都会发芽。

五年级英语作文-我最喜欢的地方

250字
主题:自我空间、童年热爱、静美生活、内在丰盈

i am a ten years old girl. not like other kids, i like quiet. and my favorite place is my study room. i like staying in it. nearly every day i will stay more than two hours in it. there are many books in it. some are for study and some are for entertainment. i do homework, read books, and play piano in it. it is my private coffer. i like it the most.

我是一个十一岁的女孩。不像其他的小孩,我喜欢安静。我最喜欢的地方是我的书房。我喜欢呆在那儿。几乎每天我都会在那待超过两个小时。我的书房有很多书。有些是学习用的,有些是娱乐用的。我在里面写作业,看书,弹钢琴。这是我的小金库。我最喜欢这里了。

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这个“小金库”用得透着灵气!悄悄把书房比作藏宝地,孩子心里那份珍重一下就冒出来了。后文要是能把哪本书翻旧了、琴键上留着啥小印子写一写,光亮就更实了。