初二英语作文带翻译-我的爱好my hobby

作文类型：记叙文、说明文

适合年级：小学五年级、小学六年级、初中一年级

【成语使用】

爱不释手、百闻不如一见

【形容词】

漂亮的、著名的、外国的、中国的、年轻的、可爱的、珍贵的、有趣的

【好词好句】

1. “but i like collecting stamps best.”

2. “when i was very young, my uncle sent me a stamp from australia.”

3. “some were sent by my friends, some were collected by myself; some were from foreign countries, some were chinese.”

【修辞手法】

比喻：将邮票比作开启世界之窗的钥匙，隐含于“some were from foreign countries, some were chinese”中，展现方寸间的广阔天地

排比：连用四个“some were……”结构，节奏清晰，突出邮票来源的多样性与收藏的丰富性

【文字校对】

• "i loved it at once"应为"i loved it at once"

• "i have been collecting stamps for five years"应为"i have been collecting stamps for five years"

• "i tried to collect stamps and fell in love with it"应为"i tried to collect stamps and fell in love with it"

• "i have more than one hundred stamps"应为"i have more than one hundred stamps"

• "i like them"应为"i like them"

• "often, i take them out and show them to my friends"应为"often, i take them out and show them to my friends"

【写作亮点】

✓ 中英双语对照自然呈现，体现语言学习的真实情境

✓ 时间线索清晰，“when i was very young…since then…i have…”层层推进叙事脉络

✓ 通过具体数字“five years”“more than one hundred”增强真实感与说服力

✓ 并列结构“some were…some were…”简洁有力，展现思维条理性