我的狗

作文类型：写人、写物、英语习作

【形容词】

fat、white、big、small、short、smart

【好词好句】

1. dudu is fat.

2. it wears a white coat.

3. dudu has two big eyes and two small ears.

【修辞手法】

【文字校对】

• "dudu is 9 years"应为"dudu is 9 years old"

• "it has one short mouth"应为"it has a short muzzle"或"it has a small mouth"

• "my dog name is dudu"应为"my dog's name is dudu"

• "my dog is smart"宜改为"dudu is smart"以保持主语一致

【写作亮点】

✓ 观察细致，抓住狗的外形特征如眼睛、耳朵、毛色等进行描摹

✓ 句式简洁清晰，符合初学英语写作的认知水平与表达习惯

✓ 中英对照呈现，体现双语学习意识与文本互文性