我的宠物狗 my dog-一年级英语作文,观察细致,聚焦耳朵、爪子、睡眠姿态等典型细节,情感真挚,通过日常照料行为自然流露依恋之情。

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ihave a lovely dog. he has white fur and four small paws. i love his ears best,because his ears are round and big. he always lies near my lap to sleep. he isfriendly and quiet. i never frighten him or pull his small tail. if he is hungry,he will bark at me. usually, he eats dog food from a tin, but his favorite foodis meat. he always plays with stricks. i feed my dog every day and give himclean water. usually, i wash his fur every day and he enjoys it very much. ilove my dog very much. i think he is my good friend. i will look after himuntil the end.
我有一只可爱的狗。他有白色的毛和四只小爪子。我最喜欢他的耳朵,因为他的耳朵又大又圆。他总是靠着我的膝盖睡着了。他很友好也很安静。我从来不吓唬他或拉它的小尾巴。如果他饿了,他会向我吠。通常,他吃的狗粮是罐头食品,但他最喜欢的食物是肉。他总是和我开玩笑。我每天都喂他,给他一些干净的水。通常,我每天给他洗一次澡,他非常喜欢。我非常爱我的狗。我认为他是我的好朋友。我会一直照顾他。

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