小学生父亲节英语作文

300字
主题:父爱如山、孝心表达、节日文化、家庭责任、生命教育

小学生父亲节英语作文

today is fathers day, is our sacred and great fathers day.

it is said that the worlds first fathers day, 1910 was born in the united states. in 1909, live in the united states of spokane, washington state and mrs dodd, when her once the mothers day, to think: why no fathers day in the world?

mrs dodds mother died in her 13 years old that year, si_ children left behind; in washington, dc, mrs dodds father, mr wei farm, alone, father and mother job raising si_ children grew up, in the end, mr wei died of overwork.

when he was in 1909, is the years of mr weis death, when mrs dodd mother after the holiday. at that time, she knew that her father in the process of raising children, as a mother.

so, there will be a fathers day today. as children we should be in this day and greeting to my father, a chat with dad. i want to say to my father: i love you for ever!

精选读者点评

开头这句“today is father's day, is our sacred and great father's day”读着拗口,两个is连着,像没喘气,试试删掉一个?还有“si_ children”应该是“six”,抄漏了吧!

小学生my family英语作文范文

300字
主题:亲情、成长、日常、热爱、陪伴、幸福

小学生my family英语作文范文

i have a happy family. there are three people in my family. they’re my father, my mother and i.

i am a student. i am twelve. i like swimming, drawing, playing table tennis and making cakes or salad. i like to eat vegetables and fruit very much, but i don’t like meat. i go to school from monday to friday. sometimes i go to school at weekends. my father often takes me to the park at the weekend.

my father is thirty-seven. he is fat. he is always busy. because he is a manager. he likes playing table tennis, playing billiards and running. he likes to eat peaches and roasted goose. my mother is thirty-si_. she is not very tall. she is a manager, too. she likes go shopping and sleeping. she likes to eat apples, meat and vegetables. my mother often takes me to the supermarket at the weekend.

i love my family!

精选读者点评

句子挺顺溜,像小溪流水一样自然!“i like to eat vegetables and fruit very much”这句读着就让人想啃苹果~客观来说“thirty-si_”是不是漏了个x?还有“go shopping”前面少了个to哦,妈妈可不能光顾着睡,忘了动词变形呀!

梦想的小学英语作文

300字
主题:理想、榜样、学习、奉献、未来、责任

关于梦想的小学英语作文

different people have different dreams. some people dream of making a lot of money. some people dream of living a happy life. some people dream of being famous. some people dream of going abroad and so on. i have a dream,too.

when i was in school my teacher asked me what i want to be in the future i had no idea at the time because i didn’t think about the question before now i have my dream i have figured out what i want to be in the future i want to be a teacher. this is my future ideal career being a teacher not only fulfills myself i also can implant my knowledge to my students. when i look at my teachers i adore them so much they learn so much knowledge they can help us learn better whenever we have questions they can answer us immediately. i want to be one of them when i grow up so i must study hard now.

精选读者点评

开头那句“different people have different dreams”写得真顺溜!后面几个“some people dream of……”排比也挺有节奏感,像唱歌一样~唯独中间那段老师问你将来想当什么,写得有点乱,标点全跑光了,读着喘不上气,加几个句号试试?

小学生旅游的英语作文

250字
主题:家乡记忆、文化感知、自然奇观、成长足迹、地域风貌

小学生关于旅游的英语作文

last winter holiday, i went to harbin with my mother. its very cold in winter. there is snow and ice everywhere and you are always in a white world. you must wear warm clothes. the most e_citing thing is playing with snow. skating is also very interesting there.i will always remember harbin, for the snow, the ice and all the beautiful things. i love harbin.

the imperial palace noted the history. there were many antiques which we could espy the great culture .

from the great wall,it was a well-known wonder in the world.it is made of big stones which was too heavy to bring even uesing it to buil a construction( n. 建筑, 建筑物) of ruggedization. what a great grandeur!

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哈,哈尔滨的雪真够劲儿!“白世界”这个词用得俏皮又准确,读着就打了个寒颤~但“e_citing”少了个i,下次拼写前多瞄两眼哈。

以坚持为题的小学生英语作文

200字
主题:perseverance、hard work、success、courage、life

以坚持为题的小学生英语作文

ry and try until you succeed. this saying shows the importance of perseverance. i have found through e_perience that only through hard work can we succeed.many people have failed in their work or studies, precisely because they had no perseverance. life, in general, as in many things we do, has never been easy. no one promised us what it would be.

so, if we want to succeed in life, we must be brave to win. this is the standard that differentiates people who succeed in life and those who don .

精选读者点评

开头那句英文谚语用得挺巧!可“e_perience”少了个i,下次拼写前多读两遍哈~

过年的小学生英语作文

200字
主题:传统、喜庆、家庭、文化、节庆、传承

关于过年的小学生英语作文

the lunar new year is a great occasion to the chinese people. it lasts about the first four days of the year, during which people do not work e_cept for the workers on duty. students do not go to school, and shops are closed.

several days before the new year, people begin to prepare. farmers kill pigs, sheep, cocks and hens. city dwellers buy meat fish and vegetables. houses are cleaned; coupletsare posted on the doors. colourful lanterns are hung at the gate.

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哎哟,“e_cept”少了个x,还有“coupletsare”连一块儿啦!值得注意的是你把过年准备写得真热闹,灯笼、对联、杀猪宰羊全齐了,像翻开一幅年画!

妈妈的手

250字
主题:亲情、奉献、平凡伟大、成长感悟、爱的具象化

小学英语作文:妈妈的手mother’s hands

my mother is the most diligent person in my house, she takes care of me all the time and does all the housework. as i grow up, i realize that my mother is such a great woman, what she does for us surpasses everything. i find my mother’s hands are not as smooth as other person’s, but in my eyes, they are the most beautiful hands.

我妈妈是房子里最勤奋的人,她一直照顾我,做了所有的家务。当我长大了,我意识到母亲是这样一个伟大的女人,她为我们所做的事情超越了一切。我发现妈妈的手不像别人一样光滑,但是在我眼里,却是最美丽的手。

精选读者点评

手不光滑,却最美丽,这句真入心!后半段英文和中文意思不完全对得上,比如“surpasses everything”译成“超越了一切”稍显空泛,换成“比什么都重要”是不是更贴生活哦!

小学生旅游英语作文范文

250字
主题:童年记忆、集体活动、自然体验、成长足迹

小学生旅游英语作文范文

today we had a short trip to beidaihe river. we set out in the school bus at 7:20 a.m . the weather was pleasant and everyone of us was e_cited. after two hours’ ride, we arrived there at nine thirty. we began our programs as soon as we got off the bus. we played games on the sands and swam in the river happily. after that, we had lunch in a restaurant. in the afternoon we walked along the beach to nandaihe. i is also very beautiful. many photos were taken there. we enjoyed ourselves very much. time passed quickly and we had to leave,. it was half past four when we returned safe. what a good trip we had today! i’ll never forget it.

精选读者点评

标点太着急啦!句号逗号都挤在一块儿,像赶集似的。还有“i is also very beautiful”,小i可不穿大衣哦,记得它见了句首就挺直腰板变“i”!

小学暑假英语作文

350字
主题:成长、实践、规划、收获、亲情、视野

my plan for summer vacation

the longing summer vacation is approaching, it is the best part of the school year for me. i cannot let the holidays elapse meaninglessly, my vacation should be a phase of harvest. the events in my plan should give me a sense of infinite potential.

the following plan may reveal the intensity of my desire to travel, work study in this vacation. in the first few days i want to climb mount hua shan with several friends to refresh ourselves. then i tend to visit relatives, senior school teachers former classmates. besides, to find out the best ways to cultivate my abilities, i will find a part time job conduct some social investigation.

in short, i want to do interesting things in the summer vacation. whatever i do, the goal is the same: to get necessary e_perience, acquire knowledge broaden my horizons. though the si_ week vacation will pass away at lightning speed, its influence is bound to last long.

精选读者点评

这个“si_ week”和“e_perience”写得真有意思,像密码本上漏了字母的暗号,快把下划线补全啦!还有“mount hua shan”别忘了大写,山名也是有尊严的呀。

小学生国庆节英语作文

300字
主题:国家庆典、全民参与、时代变迁、生活品质、假日文化

小学生国庆节英语作文

october 1stis the national day of our country, which is a public holiday for the wholecountry. it’s an important day that marks the beginning of prc. on that day,there are plenty of celebrations holding throughout the country, from thecentral government to the general people. and public places, including bigsquares, parks are decorated in festive theme. in recent years, the national holidaymeans the golden week as well, which is a short holiday that all people e_pectto. with the improvement of living standards, people have more money and desireto travel and the golden week is a good chance for them. besides, for thosepeople who would not go out, it’s a good time to have a good rest as well. therefore,the national day means a lot to the chinese.

精选读者点评

句子通顺,时态基本正确!但“e_pect”拼错了哦,是“expect”~还有“prc”第一次出现最好写全称“the people’s republic of china”,更规范。标点空格也注意下,比如“october 1stis”中间少空格啦。

友谊的小学英语作文

350字
主题:真挚情感、生命陪伴、心灵滋养、时光沉淀、相互成就

关于友谊的小学英语作文

a life without a friend is a life without a sun. friendship is one of the most import ant things in everyones life. so, i think, e very one of us, rich or poor, should at le ast have one or two good friends.

as stu dents, we could share more time with ou r friends. the friendship in our young he arts is pure, fresh and simple. i often fee l very lucky to have a lot of good friends. my best friend is __, we grew up togethe r. she will listen to me when i want to sp eak, will wipe my eyes when i cry. she w ould sing the birthday song for me on m y birthday. she would encourage me wh en i lost confidence in. so, i think, friendship is a kind of treasur e in our lives. it is actually like a bottle of wine, the longer it is kept, and the sweet er it will be.

it is also like a cup of tea. w hen we are thirsty, it will be our best cho ice. so, i will cherish my friends, i have to wo rk hard together with my friends, encour age each other and help each other.

精选读者点评

句子有点小错误,比如“import ant”“e very”“ou r”这些空格乱入的词,还有“lost confidence in”后面缺宾语,是in什么?倒是“友谊像酒越陈越甜”这个比喻见解透彻,画个✨!