没有太阳人类就无法生存

300字
主题:自然规律、生命依赖、宇宙认知、科学启蒙、昼夜更替

every morning you can see the sun rising in the east.

the sun give us light, when ou stand in the sun you can feel the heat.

the sun gives us heat from very far away.

the sun is about one hundred fifty milion kilometers away.

it looks samll because it is so far from us. but it si actually very very big.

the earth gose around the sun. it takes the earth a year to go around the sun. plants animals and people need the sun.

we cannot live without the sun.

每天早上你都可以看到太阳从东边升起.

太阳能够发光,当年站在太阳下你都感觉到热.

太阳发热从很远的地方,距离我们大约有一亿五千万公里.

看起来是很小,因为他是太远了,但是,实际上太阳是非常大.

地球围绕太阳转,绕太阳一圈就是一年,动物,植物,人类都是需要太阳,没了太阳,我们将无法生存.

精选读者点评

太阳“give”和“goes”拼错了,标点也乱,英文句子开头没大写,句末缺句号,中文句号还混着英文句号用。下次誊抄前读一遍?

难忘的一天 a memorable day

450字
主题:劳动教育、集体行动、责任意识、成长体验

it was sunday. our teacher mr zhu led us to a park nearby.usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. but today we went there to take part in voluntary labour.

we got there at nine o clock. mr zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working.

the students in group one planted trees and watered flowers. the studentsin group two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. they also cleaned the benches in the park. i was in group three. we went to the children s playground and cleaned all the equipment there. we worked very hard.

at about eleven we finished working. we met at the gate of the park. we all felt tired but very happy.

这是星期日。我们的老师朱先生led我们去附近的公园。通常我们去公园度过我们的假期。但是今天我们去那里参加义务劳动。

我们九点到达那里。朱老师把我们分成三组,然后我们开始工作。

学生们在一组种树、浇花。第二组的学生忙着收集垃圾留下的游客。他们还清理了公园的长椅。我是在三组。我们去了儿童游乐场、清洁所有的设备。我们工作很努力。

大约在十一点我们完成的工作。我们在公园门口。我们都感到很累,但很快乐。

精选读者点评

这个“led”功底深厚!后面还藏着个“我们”,主谓宾全齐,比光写“带我们去”有劲多了。再翻翻词典,看看“voluntary labour”能不能换成更活的词?比如“帮公园干活”啊!

自我介绍

400字
主题:成长、友谊、热爱、自信、交流

hello,everyone. now please allow me to do an introduction. my name is li lei. i’m 14 year old. my birthday is on october 11th. my favourite book is twilight. i really love to read the books about vampires. my hobby is singing. some people say i’m a good singer.my favourite singer is justin biber.i think he is a great singer. i love to sing his songs. besides singing, i love shopping very much. if i have time, i will go shopping with my friends.i’m really good at english, if you have any questions, you can ask me, i will do my best to help you. we can be the best friends forever. thank you.

大家好,现在请允许我做自我介绍。我的名字叫李蕾。我今年14岁了。我的生日在10月11日。我最喜欢的小说是暮光之城。我非常喜欢那些关于吸血鬼的书籍。我的爱好是唱歌。有人说我唱得很好听。我最喜欢的歌手是贾斯汀比伯。我认为他是个很棒的歌手。我很喜欢唱他的歌。除了唱歌,我还喜欢逛街。如果我有时间,我就会和朋友去逛街。我的英语很好,如果你有什么问题,你可以问我。我会尽我的努力帮助你。我们可以成为一生的好朋友。

精选读者点评

“i’m 14 year old”,少个s哦,小马虎!后面“justin biber”拼错了,是bieber,比伯本人看了要叹气啦~还有,“twilight”首字母不大写,书名得戴帽子呀!错别字和大小写像藏在句子里的小蚂蚁,找出来就清爽多啦!

九年级学生英语作文

300字
主题:师恩难忘、成长印记、语言启蒙、节日祝福

dear mr yang,

亲爱的杨老师,

how is everything going! tomorrw is teachers’

day. i would like to e_press my sincerely wishes to you. you taught me english in the primary school. that is the time to lay our foundation. and you help me lay my interest on english, which make me feel learn english easily in middle school. i’m very appreciated that. thank you very much. if it is convenient for you, i would like to visit you this national day. happy teachers’ day again.

一切可好!明天就是教师节了。 我相向你表达我衷心的祝福。你在我小学的时候教我英语。那是打基础的时候。 是你让我对英语感兴趣。这让我在初中学习英语变得容易多了。我很感激。非常感谢你。如果方便的话,我想在今年国庆节去拜访你。再次祝你教师节快乐。

best wishes,

lucy

露西

精选读者点评

小学英语老师教得真扎实!“lay my interest on english”这句虽小错,但意思全在,兴趣着实最好的老师啊。教师节祝福里藏着十年成长线,暖。

美丽的公园-初三经典英语作文

300字
主题:亲情、自然、童年、欢乐、日常美好

yesterday morning, i got up earlier. the birds are singing in the trees. after breakfast, my mother and i went to the local park.

everything was beautiful. the sky is blue.the sun is magnificent. you can see many flowers and trees in the park.some children are playing in the park.

i saw many boats on the lake at the foot of the hills. later on, mother and i played hide-and-seek in the park.

yesterday, i had a good time.

昨天早上,我起得早。鸟儿在树上唱歌。早餐后,我和妈妈去了当地的公园。

一切都是美好的。天空是蓝色的,太阳是壮观的。公园里你可以看到许多花和树,一些孩子在公园里玩耍。

我看见山脚下的湖上有许多船。后来,妈妈和我在公园里捉了一躲。

昨天,我过得很愉快。

精选读者点评

这个“捉了一躲”太可爱了!孩子气的笔误,反而让文字活了起来,像小手突然攥住你的衣角。建议把“ magnificent”换成“暖烘烘”或“金灿灿”,英语词卡在中文句子里,有点像穿西装戴草帽。

饭后生活 life after dinner

300字
主题:童年生活、日常作息、伙伴情谊、健康习惯

i have dinner at about 6:30 p.m.. after dinner, i often go to the outside to play games with my friends. we live near to each other, so we always play together. sometimes,we play table tennis or badminton. sometimes, we ride on bicyles. anyway, anything could be funny when we are together.i usually go home at 8:00 and then take a shower. after that, i spend sometime in study or watch tv. at 10:00p.m.,i go to sleep.

我大约在下午六点半吃晚饭。晚饭过后,我经常和朋友到外面玩游戏。我们住得很近,所以我们经常一起玩。有时候我们打乒乓球或者羽毛球;有时候我们骑 自行车。不管怎么样,只要我们在一起一切都变得有趣。我通常8点回家然后洗个澡。接着,我就花点时间学习或者看电视。到了十点我就去睡觉了。

精选读者点评

“we live near to each other”这句语法小刺儿得拔,介词“to”多余啦!后头“ride on bicyles”拼写和介词也悄悄歪了,孩子,单词表翻两页,手抄三遍?

犀牛

350字
主题:动物特征、自然观察、生命习性、科普认知

rhinoceroses are distributed in asia and africa,they have a lot of kinds.the body of the rhinocero likes a cattle,the head likes a triangle.their brains are very silly,and their vision is poor,but they have strong sense of smell and hearing.although the rhinoceroes are very heavy,they can run very fast.the posture when they are asleep is special,sometimes they sleep when they are standing.

they eat all kinds of plants.they breed very slowly,they breed once throughout about five years.i like them very much.

犀牛

犀牛分布于亚洲和非洲,有很多种类。犀牛的形体像牛,头呈三角形。犀牛头脑比较迟钝,视觉很差,但嗅觉和听觉敏锐。 犀牛虽然体型笨重,但仍能以相当快的速度行走或奔跑。犀牛睡觉的姿势很特殊,它们有时卧倒,也有时站着入睡。

犀牛以各种植物为食。它们的繁殖很慢,近五年才生育一次。我很喜欢它们。

精选读者点评

英文段落里“silly”用得不太妥,说动物“傻”容易引发歧义,换成“small”或“not very large”更准确;中文写“头脑迟钝”也稍显主观,改成“脑容量相对较小”就稳妥多啦!

a family picture

450字
主题:家庭记忆、成长体悟、情感寄托、时光流转

i am so impressed by the family picture, it took when i was in grade 6. at that day, my mother woke me up in the morning, she told me that i should wash my face quickly, today our family had an important thing to do. so i got dressed, after finishing everything, i asked my mom what would i do ne_t, she said that our family would take a family picture, it meant so lot. i didn’t figure out what it was, but i thought it was so funny, so i stood as they asked, and smiled. two years pass, i now understand the meaning of the family picture, i take the picture when i am out for school. taking the picture is like my family around me.

对于全 家福,我的印象很深刻,那是我六年级时候照的。那天,妈妈一大早就叫醒我,她告诉我我应该快速洗脸,今天家里有很重要的事情去做。所以我穿好衣服,在我做 完一切以后,我问妈妈我接下来该做什么,她说家里待会要照全家福,这很重要。我不知道那是什么,但是我觉得那很有趣,所以我照他们说的站好和微笑。两年过 去了,现在我懂得了全家福的意义,当我在外学习的时候我带着。带着全家福好比家人在我身边。

精选读者点评

这张全家福照片真暖啊!六年级的你站在镜头前傻笑的样子,像颗小太阳。现在带在身边,是把家揣进书包里了呀~

introduce my friend

200字
主题:亲情、成长、健康、交流

hello! my name is liu jun. my last name is liu. my first name is jun. my phone number is 534-0261. this is a photo of my family. you can see my grandparents, my parents, my uncle, my aunt, my cousin and i. i love playing volleyball and tennis. i have si_ tennis bats and three volleyballs.

您好!我的名字叫柳俊。我姓柳。我的第一个名字是六月。我的电话号码是534-0261。这是我家的照片。你可以看到我的祖父母,我的父母,我的叔叔,姑姑,我的表弟和我。我喜欢打排球和网球。我有六个乒乓球拍和三个排球。

精选读者点评

名字写错了!“jun”是“俊”不是“六月”,拼音和汉字要对上号啊!电话号码倒挺清楚,家庭照描述得也热闹,就是“si_”这空着的字得补上,是“四”还是“六”?

九年级英语作文带翻译-my family

350字
主题:爱好、亲情、运动、校园生活、语言学习

hello,everybody! my name is tom. i have a brother. his name is mike. my family all likes playing sports. my mother likes playing tennis. she has 10 tennis balls. my father likes ping-pong. he has 8 ping-pong bats. mike likes basketball. he can play basketball very well. he has 3 basketballs. and i like playing soccer. it’s very easy for me. at school, i often play soccer with my classmates. i have 5 soccer balls. do you like sports? if you like sports, you can play with me.

大家好!我的名字是汤姆。 我有个兄弟。他的名字叫迈克。我的家人都喜欢体育运动。我妈妈喜欢打网球。她有10个网球。我父亲喜欢乒乓球。他有8支乒乓球拍。迈克喜欢篮球。他可以打篮球打得很好。他有3个篮球。而且我喜欢踢足球。这对我来说很容易。在学校里,我经常踢足球和我的同学。我有5个足球。 你喜欢体育吗?如果你喜欢运动,你可以跟我玩。

精选读者点评

句子太短啦!“my mother likes playing tennis. she has 10 tennis balls.”,试试把它们捏一块儿?比如“我妈妈超爱打网球,光网球就攒了10个!”读起来多充满力量儿~再翻翻课本里《我的家人》那篇,学学怎么让句子手拉手。

make dumplings

700字
主题:年俗、家常、劳动、饮食文化、生活美学

dumpling is a traditional chinese food. on the lunar new year’ s day, most families make a lot of delicious dumplings. to make them, follow this easy process.

the first step is to mi_ the flour with water. when the dough is ready, we can begin to make dumpling wrappers. we use a rolling pole to roll the dough into small, thin and round pieces so that they will be easy to cook. when the wrappers are done, it’ s time to prepare the filling. usually, we use meat such as beef or mutton, and some vegetables such as cabbage or carrots for filling. you may actually choose whatever you like to put into it. we must chop those things into small pieces. then put some salt, oil and other condiments into it and stir it evenly. when all these preparations are done, we can start making dumplings. first put a spoonful of filling in the center of the wrapper. then stick the two opposite sides together and then the rest. don’ t just cover the filling with the wrappers. the best shape of dumplings is that of a ship, because when they are boiling in the pan, they look like ships sailing in the sea. the smell can make your mouth water.

饺子是一种传统的中国食品。在农历新年的一天,大多数家庭赚很多美味的饺子。让他们,遵循这个简单的过程。 第一步是用水和面。当面团准备好了,我们可以开始擀皮。我们用擀面杖把面团擀成小,薄,圆片,这样很容易烹饪。当包装完成,它的时间来准备。通常,我们使用牛肉或羊肉等肉类,和一些蔬菜,如卷心菜和胡萝卜馅。你可以选择任何你喜欢。我们必须把这些东西成小块。然后放上一些盐,油和其他调料均匀搅拌。当所有这些准备工作都完成了,我们可以开始包饺子。首先放一勺馅在饺子皮的中央。然后两边粘在一起,然后把剩余的包好。不只是盖的灌装包装器。饺子的形状是一艘船,因为当它们在锅里煮的时候,它们看起来就像是大海里的船只。它们的香味会让你流口水。

精选读者点评

“dumpling is a traditional chinese food”,开头这句英文写得干净利落,主谓宾全,时态也对!后面几个动词短语(mi_ the flour, roll the dough, chop those things)虽然拼写和搭配有点小毛刺,但动作链分外清晰,看得出你脑子里真场景跃然纸上,手在动,锅在响。

怎样获得快乐

300字
主题:幸福观、身心健康、知足心态、人生意义

there is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. without it, life will be empty and meaningless. if you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.

first, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness). only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.

secondly, happiness consists in contentment. a man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.

无疑的快乐是世界上最宝贵的东西。没有它,人生将是空虚的而且毫无意义的。如果你希望知道怎样获得快乐,你须注意下面两点。

健康是快乐的要诀。唯有身体强壮的人才能享受人生的乐趣。

快乐在于知足。一个不满于现状的人终是处在痛苦之中。

精选读者点评

这句“快乐在于知足”写得真干净,像小石子落进水里,咚一声就沉到底了。后头那句“终是处在痛苦之中”,语气太满,试试把“终是”换成“常常”?读着松一口气。

旅游准备 the preparation of a trip

350字
主题:亲情、实践、成长、探索、生活、学习

last night, my parents told me the very e_citing news that they were going to travel to guilin with me. i was so happy, because it has been such a long time for our family not to go out together. i started to make some preparations, because i knew my parents were very busy and they did not have time to scan the details. i searched the information and chose the useful one. seeing other people’s e_perience, i learned so much. i knew the famous tourist sites and the delicious food. during the preparations, i opened my vision.

昨天晚上,我父母跟我说了一个非常激动人心的消息,那就是他们要和我去桂林旅游。我很开心,因为我们全家已经有很长一段时间没有一起出去玩了。我开始去做一些准备,因为我知道我的父母都很忙,他们没有时间去看一些细节问题。我去搜了一些信息,选择一些有用的。看着别人的经历,我学到了很多。我知道了哪些是景点、哪些食物比较美味。在这准备的过程中,我开阔了视野。

精选读者点评

这个“e_citing”“e_perience”拼写小陷阱,孩子是不是边打字边想词儿?下次查查词典再敲键盘哈~

制定的计划

400字
主题:成长体验、亲情陪伴、友情萌芽、夏日记忆、远行见闻

my summer holiday begun on july 7th.i love summer holiday because i don have to go to school and i can enjoy myself with my friends.i often spend the mornings doing my homework.and i always watch tv in the afternoon at home because its very hot outside.and in the evening,i go swimming with my family and then hang out with my friends.i love swimming very much.

我的暑假7月7日开始。我喜欢暑假,因为我不用去学校,可以和朋友玩。我经常在上午做作业,下午在家看电视,因为外面很热。傍晚,我和家人去游泳然后和朋友去逛街。我很喜欢游泳。

my plan for august is travelling.i travel with my family every summer holiday.i like travelling because i can go to different places and meet different people.sometimes i make good friends during the journey.and its very sad to say goodbye to them when the journey ends.

我八月份的计划是去旅游。我每个暑假都和家人去旅游。我喜欢旅游是因为我可以去不同的地方认识不同的人。有时候我在旅途中交到了好朋友。旅途结束和他们告别的时候我觉得很难过。

精选读者点评

暑假安排得挺确实是!游泳、逛街、旅游,样样不落空。略显“i love”出现四次,像在喊口号,试试换几个动词?比如“泡在泳池里不想上岸”“和朋友挤在小吃摊前抢最后一串烤肠”……画面就活了。