难忘的一天 a memorable day

450字
主题:劳动教育、集体行动、责任意识、成长体验

it was sunday. our teacher mr zhu led us to a park nearby.usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. but today we went there to take part in voluntary labour.

we got there at nine o clock. mr zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working.

the students in group one planted trees and watered flowers. the studentsin group two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. they also cleaned the benches in the park. i was in group three. we went to the children s playground and cleaned all the equipment there. we worked very hard.

at about eleven we finished working. we met at the gate of the park. we all felt tired but very happy.

这是星期日。我们的老师朱先生led我们去附近的公园。通常我们去公园度过我们的假期。但是今天我们去那里参加义务劳动。

我们九点到达那里。朱老师把我们分成三组,然后我们开始工作。

学生们在一组种树、浇花。第二组的学生忙着收集垃圾留下的游客。他们还清理了公园的长椅。我是在三组。我们去了儿童游乐场、清洁所有的设备。我们工作很努力。

大约在十一点我们完成的工作。我们在公园门口。我们都感到很累,但很快乐。

精选读者点评

这个“led”功底深厚!后面还藏着个“我们”,主谓宾全齐,比光写“带我们去”有劲多了。再翻翻词典,看看“voluntary labour”能不能换成更活的词?比如“帮公园干活”啊!

a day to remember

400字
主题:劳动教育、集体责任、实践成长、服务意识、校园延伸

劳动任务安排

第一小组:种树、浇花

第二小组:清除游人丢弃的果皮纸屑,清洁座椅

第三小组:擦洗儿童游乐场的设施

it was sunday. our teacher mr zhu led us to a park nearby.usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. but today we went there to take part in voluntary labour.

we got there at nine oclock. mr zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working.

the students in group one planted trees and watered flowers. the students in group two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. they also cleaned the benches in the park. i was in group three. we went to the childrens playground and cleaned all the equipment there. we worked very hard.

at about eleven we finished working. we met at the gate of the park. we all felt tired but very happy.

注释:

1)lead us to a park nearby把我们带到附近的一个公园

2) take part in voluntary labou:参加义务劳动

3)divide us into three groups把我们分为3个小组

4) left by the tourists游人丢弃的

5) clean all the equipment there擦洗所有的设备

6) at the gate of the park在公园门口

精选读者点评

劳动场景写得挺实,擦滑梯、捡果皮这些动作都看得见摸得着。唯独“we worked very hard”太笼统啦,要是加一句手心磨红了、汗滴进眼睛里,立马就活了!

我是环保小卫士

800字
主题:责任意识、环境保护、文明习惯、成长自觉、城市美化

星期六的早上,爸爸妈妈带着我去高庙公园前面的花市上去买花。我想我可以到公园里去好好玩玩了。我们刚走进公园广场,迎面就看见了一些白色的塑料袋散落在地上,显得特别刺眼。“哼,那些乱扔东西的人真不文明!”我心里正在埋怨他们,突然,眼前一亮:对了,我是环保小卫士,难道就不能为清洁公园拣垃圾吗?

正好,妈妈手里有个纸袋可利用,我就弯腰拣起塑料袋来。妈妈给了我两根干树枝说:“用手拣多不卫生啊!”于是,我用树枝轻轻一扎,塑料袋就乖乖地跑进纸袋里了。我们一边走一边拣。来到了草坪边。我一眼就看见一个石凳下面有许多白色的塑料袋,它们像狡猾的敌人一样藏在背阴处瞧着我。我刚要冲过去,忽然看见凳子上面坐着一对爷爷奶奶。我想:如果我去拣的话,他们会不会笑话我呢?犹豫了一下,我又想:我是在保护环境,爷爷奶奶一定会支持我的。于是,我轻手轻脚地走过去用树枝往外扒拉塑料袋。我刚挑出来一个饭盒,他们伸出大拇指对我说:“你做得好啊!来这里玩的人若能都像你这样,公园一定会更美丽。”我听了有点不好意思,低下头一口气扒出凳子下面所有的塑料袋,朝老奶奶笑了笑,又向前走去。

春天到了,草坪开始返绿,可是经过一个冬天的风吹日晒,上面散落了许多纸片,各色的垃圾袋,还有一些小孩子扔上去的砖块,使昔日的草坪几乎成了垃圾场。我捡了好几大袋了,这时候又来了几个小同学和我一起捡,不一会儿就把草坪上的垃圾清理的一干二净。看着干净的草坪,我们像打了胜仗的士兵一样高兴。我想,这下小草一定感觉很舒服了,它们一定会为美化我们城市健康茁壮的成长。

爸爸和妈妈在公园前买好了花,我们就回家了。虽然到公园没有玩,可我的心里舒畅极了。我是环保小公民,有义务维护环境好城市卫生。虽然今天只有我和几个小同学在清理污染物,但我相信,人们的环保意识会一天天增强,会有更多的人来做环保卫士,我们的城市将会更美。

宁夏银川灵武市二小六年级(2)班六年级:马雨欣

精选读者点评

心明快利落!捡垃圾时心里还打小鼓,怕爷爷奶奶笑话,可转念就冲上去了,多可爱的真实感啊!树枝扎袋子那段描写得跃然纸上,像在眼前晃。结尾那句“小草一定感觉很舒服”,稚气里透着温柔,舍不得划掉。

小学五年级叙事英语作文范文

250字
主题:责任意识、集体行动、劳动教育、快乐成长

小学五年级叙事英语作文范文

it was sunday. our teacher mr zhu led us to a park nearby.usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. but today we went there to take part in voluntary labour. we got there at nine oclock. mr zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working. the students in group one planted trees and watered flowers. the studentsin group two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. they also cleaned the benches in the park. i was in group three. we went to the childrens playground and cleaned all the equipment there. we worked very hard. at about eleven we finished working. we met at the gate of the park. we all felt tired but very happy.

精选读者点评

动词用得有生命力!“planted”“watered”“collected”“cleaned”一串下来,像小扫帚唰唰扫过,画面全出来了。值得注意的是“tourist”要加s哦,游客可不止一个呀!