小学五年级写景英语作文

200字
主题:快乐时光、自然和谐、生活气息、亲子陪伴

小学五年级写景英语作文

it’s sunday morning .my mother and i are gong to the park. there are a lot of people in the park. some children are running. a dog is running after them . four women are sitting there they are talking. two girls are playing with a big bal near them ..three old men are standing under a big tree. they are watching the children. there is a river there. many young people are dancing near it. there is a boat on the river. and an old man is sitting in the goat.

everyone in the park is having a good time. we are having a good time, too.

精选读者点评

句子基本通顺,画面感挺强!可是“goat”是不是想写“boat”?还有“gong”“bal”这些拼写小马虎,圈出来改一改哈~

小学五年级描写动物的英语作文

250字
主题:生命之美、伙伴情谊、勇敢守护、纯真情感

小学五年级描写动物的英语作文

my favorite animals are swans.they are white.they can swim very well.i think they look like a beautiful girl in a white dress.they have a pair of wings and they can also fly well.i believe they are angles from the sky.they bring us love and make us happy.they are always friendly to us.we can hurt them,because they are our friend.i love them!i like dogs,too.they are not beautiful,but they are the best friends.they keep the thieves away.dogs have the best listening and eyes.they can hear in the nosiy,see in the dark.if we are in danger,they will help us at once.and they don mind their lives.so,i love them.

精选读者点评

白鹭?不对,是天鹅!“像穿白裙子的姑娘”这句真鲜活,眼睛亮晶晶的。后半段狗写得急了,耳朵和眼睛那句,漏了“e”,“noisy”哦,下回抄一遍。

小学五年级介绍学校的英语作文

200字
主题:童年向往、校园生活、自由成长、温馨陪伴、快乐学习

小学五年级介绍学校的英语作文

i hope my ideal school starts at 8.30 a.m. because l like to get up late. i hope my ideal school finishes at 4.30 p.m. so l can have lots of time to have a rest and do some after school activities.

my ideal school is very large, it has three tall buildings , a big dining hall,a tennis court,,a big playground and a park.

we have an hour for lunch, we can eat delicious food and chat with each other in the big dining hall.

i love my ideal school!

精选读者点评

开头时间写得真有生活味儿!“喜欢睡懒觉”这句多可爱,把孩子气写出了灵魂。但是“finishes”拼错了哦,悄悄改掉哈~

小学五年级叙事英语作文范文

250字
主题:责任意识、集体行动、劳动教育、快乐成长

小学五年级叙事英语作文范文

it was sunday. our teacher mr zhu led us to a park nearby.usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. but today we went there to take part in voluntary labour. we got there at nine oclock. mr zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working. the students in group one planted trees and watered flowers. the studentsin group two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. they also cleaned the benches in the park. i was in group three. we went to the childrens playground and cleaned all the equipment there. we worked very hard. at about eleven we finished working. we met at the gate of the park. we all felt tired but very happy.

精选读者点评

动词用得有生命力!“planted”“watered”“collected”“cleaned”一串下来,像小扫帚唰唰扫过,画面全出来了。值得注意的是“tourist”要加s哦,游客可不止一个呀!