难忘的一天

250字
主题:责任意识、集体参与、劳动教育、快乐奉献、成长体验

it was sunday. our teacher mr zhu led us to a park nearby.usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. but today we went there to take part in voluntary labour.

we got there at nine o'clock. mr zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working.

the students in group one planted trees and watered flowers. the studentsin group two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. they also cleaned the benches in the park. i was in group three. we went to the children's playground and cleaned all the equipment there. we worked very hard.

at about eleven we finished working. we met at the gate of the park. we all felt tired but very happy.

精选读者点评

这个“us”用得真自然!开头就带人进现场,像拉着手一起走进公园。但“tourist”要加s哦~

小学五年级叙事英语作文范文

250字
主题:责任意识、集体行动、劳动教育、快乐成长

小学五年级叙事英语作文范文

it was sunday. our teacher mr zhu led us to a park nearby.usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. but today we went there to take part in voluntary labour. we got there at nine oclock. mr zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working. the students in group one planted trees and watered flowers. the studentsin group two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. they also cleaned the benches in the park. i was in group three. we went to the childrens playground and cleaned all the equipment there. we worked very hard. at about eleven we finished working. we met at the gate of the park. we all felt tired but very happy.

精选读者点评

动词用得有生命力!“planted”“watered”“collected”“cleaned”一串下来,像小扫帚唰唰扫过,画面全出来了。值得注意的是“tourist”要加s哦,游客可不止一个呀!

英语作文欣赏 若干......

250字
主题:集体行动、服务意识、成长体验、责任担当

it was sunday. our teacher mr zhu led us to a park nearby.usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. but today we went there to take part in voluntary labour.

we got there at nine o’clock. mr zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working.

the students in group one planted trees and watered flowers. the studentsin group two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. they also cleaned the benches in the park. i was in group three. we went to the children’s playground and cleaned all the equipment there. we worked very hard.

at about eleven we finished working. we met at the gate of the park. we all felt tired but very happy.

精选读者点评

写得挺顺溜!动词用得真心,“ planted ”“ watered ”“ collected ”“ cleaned ”,全是真干活的样子。但“ tourist ”要加s哦,小细节别漏啦~