怎样保持健康 how to stay healthy

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主题:身心健康、科学生活、自我管理、日常保健

怎样保持健康 how to stay healthy

as we all know, healthy is very important to everybody.but do you really know how to stay healthy? here are some useful tips. first, we should do e_ercise if we have time.for e_ample, we can go to swim in the summer holiday. or we can take a walk after supper.doing e_ercise makes us healthy and strong. second, we should take more vegetables and fruit and less candies. stop eating junk food and drinking beers. last but not least, we should go to bed early and wake up early. we should have enough sleep, or we will get sleepy in the day time. if we pay more attention to the tips above, we will have healthier body. i wish everybody has a strong and healthy body.

我们都知道,健康对每个人来说都很重要。但是你知道该如何保持健康吗? 这里有一些实用的建议。首先,我们应该做运动,如果有时间的话。例如,我们可以在暑假的时候去游泳,或者晚饭后去散步。做运动让我们的身体更强壮更健康。第二,我们应该吃更多的蔬菜和水果,少吃糖果。不吃垃圾食品和啤酒。最后,我们应该早睡早起。如果睡不够,第二天就会很疲倦。如果我们都能按照以上的建议注意自己的健康,我们的身体会更棒。我希望每个人都有个强壮和健康的身体。

精选读者点评

这个“e_ercise”写法挺有意思,空着的字母像在考老师眼力,其实拼写错误背后是语音记忆没阐述恰当,建议把exercise拆成ex-er-cise三块读几遍,下次就不会漏r啦!

初中英语作文

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主题:身心健康、科学生活、自我管理、日常保健

初中英语作文大全

关于环保 how to stay healthy would you like to keep healthy like the others do? now let me tell you something about staying healthy.

food. to keep yourself healthy, you shouldn eat something that have too much oil, calory or salt. for that can cause a lot of diseases. the right way to keep healthy is to eat more vegetables and fruits.

2. e_ercise. another way which is always be ignored is to e_cercise more. an average of steps a normal adult have per day is 10000 - 15000. youll find yourself more healthy after changing the steps to 15000 - 20000 per day, and youll get more fit easily by that.

thats my own easy methods of staying healthy. ill be glad if you have any ideas about that and have a discussion with me!

精选读者点评

标点太偷懒啦!句号逗号乱跳,像在玩蹦床。还有“e_ercise”“calory”这些拼写小迷路,得带它们回家,查词典比抄答案靠谱多啦!

减少交通事故的初中英语作文

300字
主题:安全、责任、秩序、行动、共建

减少交通事故的初中英语作文

traffic accident in our side to happen from time to tome,we should study well some knowledge to avoid traffic accidents.

first,we can red light,abide by traffic order.secondly,tell relatives don drive as drinking,safe driving.then,find road damage,inform relevant departments,early solve the problems.finally,an active part in social activities,protect our order society!

thats my advice!i wish you a happy...

翻译:交通事故在我们身边时有发生,我们要学习好一些知识来避免交通事故.

首先,我们不能闯红灯,遵守交通秩序.其次,告诉亲人开车时不要喝酒,要安全行驶.然后,发现道路损坏时,及时告诉有关部门,早解决问题!最后,积极参加社会秩序活动,保护我们的社会!

这就是我的建议!祝你们幸福快乐……

精选读者点评

“red light”当动词用了,还挺有创意!今后下次试试“run the red light”?另外,“tell relatives don’t drive as drinking”这句老师读了三遍才懂意思,咱换个更地道的说法呗吧!

阅读的初中英语作文

300字
主题:学习策略、自主阅读、终身学习、方法意识、成长思维

关于阅读的初中英语作文

we all known that reading should focus on method, but what methods are good for reading? firstly, the difficulty of the book you read should be moderate. too difficult or too easy are not so good.

if you find a book is too difficult to read, just put it aside and find an easier one instead. secondly, read the books that are beneficial for you, which can help you in your career as well as in life. thirdly, for those simple books or those without deep meanings, you can scan over them, but for those meaningful and beneficial, you should read them intensively and remember to take notes.

finally, dont be shy to ask questions, because anyone could be your teacher. these approaches are general ones and each of you should have your own reading methods that make your reading fruitful.

精选读者点评

这篇英语作文结构挺清楚,四点建议都列出来了,还知道用firstly/secondly这些词,略显“we all known”得改成“we all know”,动词时态别漏了哦!后面“dont”也少了撇,小细节要盯紧~

the culture of drinking

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主题:文化传承、社交礼仪、自我约束、历史视角

初中英语作文:the culture of drinking

in the long history of china, drinking is an important part. we can say that the lives of chinese people can not go on without drinking. people used to believe that drinking can narrow the distance between people. many things have been decided or done over drink. some people say think that there are no true friendship over drink. its true, but we still can not deny that drinking is a good way to build relationship. all in all, drinking is not a bad thing, but we should control ourselves so that we won be e_cessive drinking.

精选读者点评

开头这句“drinking is an important part”太笼统啦!能不能换成“酒坛子里泡出来的礼数”“一碗黄酒敬天地”这样带画面的?试试看~

如何减压

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主题:亲子沟通、学业减压、心理健康、自我表达、教育反思

less pressure, better life

hello, boys and girls!

pressure is a serious problem in todays world. students in our class are under too much pressure. some students can get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their e_ams。

im always under pressure, too. my parents want me to be the top student in class. so they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. last monday evening, i had a talk with my mother. i told her i was not lazy. i really felt tired. i needed time to rela_. my mother agreed with me at last. so i think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem。

thats all. thank you!

精选读者点评

标点乱得像撒了一把豆子!句首字母不大写,缩写没撇儿,exam拼成e_ams,relax写成rela_……这些小窟窿漏风,读着就硌牙。下次誊抄前,自己轻声读一遍?

初中中秋节英语作文范文

300字
主题:亲情、传统节日、文化传承、家庭团聚

英语资源频道为大家整理的初中中秋节英语作文范文,小编在这里祝大家中秋节快乐 天天快乐:)

mid-autumn festival is a popular and important lunar harvest festival celebrated by chinese people. the festival is held on the 15th day of the eighth month in the chinese calendar. there are some traditions in this holiday. for e_ample, people would have a big dinner with there families. after dinner, they often enjoy the full moon which is round and bright. the other tradition of mid-autumn festival is eating moon cake. moon cake is the essential of that day, which means reunion. as time goes by, there are various kinds of moon cakes, but they are much more e_pensive than before. i like mid-autumn festival because my families will get together and have a big dinner on that day.

精选读者点评

这个“e_ample”和“e_pensive”里的下划线,是打字时手滑了?还是故意留空让老师填?下次写完记得通读一遍哦~

relax ourselves

250字
主题:劳逸结合、亲近自然、身心健康、平衡生活

recently, we have little time to keep close contact with nature. we spend too much time on study or working. we almost forget that how green the grass is, how beautiful the flowers are, and how sweetly the birds are singing outside our windows. a saying goes, “all work and no play makes jack a dull boy”. it means that we need to rela_ ourselves and go out to breathe more fresh air. we can also climb a hill in the suburbs.its good for our health.

lets go outing.

注释:

1) keep close contact with与……保持亲密接触

2) we need to rela_ ourselves.我们雷要放松自己

3) spend time on sth.花时间在……上

精选读者点评

这个“rela_ ourselves”写得真可爱!漏了个x,但老师一眼就懂你意思啦~后面“climb a hill”多的确啊,比光喊“亲近自然”画面感十足感多了!

以吸烟为题初中英语作文

350字
主题:健康意识、公共责任、生活习惯、生命保护

以吸烟为题初中英语作文

it’s well known that smoking is bad for our health. it does much harm to our lung. smoking too much is very easy to get cancer, which is very terrible. besides, smoking also do harm to people’s teeth. those people always smoke will demage their teeth and their teeth are always yellow. that makes others feel sick. the last but not least, the people smoke the passive smoking are tend to get sick. they have do nothing wrong,but stand beside those smoking people. it’s unfair. so, in order to the health of everyone, please stop smoking.

众所周知,吸烟有害健康。它会损害我们的肺。吸烟太多的人很容易得癌症,那是很可怕的。此外,吸烟还危害人们的牙齿。那些人总是吸烟的人会损害他们的牙齿而且牙齿都是黄色的。让人感到恶心。最后但并非最不重要的,吸二手烟也容易生病。他们什么都没有做错,只是站在那些抽烟的人的旁边。这太不公平了。所以,为了大家的健康,请戒烟。

精选读者点评

肺、牙、二手烟,三个点都抓表达准确!但“do harm”“are tend”这些动词老出错,圈出来自己改三遍~