断电的日子......

200字
主题:日常困境、无力感、生活意外、青春烦躁、现实错位

昨天都说了停电了,但是还是很不爽啦。因为还没全校停电的时候宿舍就停了,剩下2.9度,重新启动那仅剩的电,不久又到全校停电了,实在好无语这些事情噜。好像忙了到头来的结果还是那个样,还不如没有努力过要好。

我一向都不做那些费力不讨好的事情,现在真的让自己很无语了。停电要停到11:30,停电就算了还要停水,难道自来水公司的电都是这电力公司送的,也就影响到供水吗?哎......不知道了,不管了,现在就是无聊至极。

精选读者点评

这“2.9度”真立体像攥着手机看电量似的,焦灼感一下就蹦出来了。后头“还不如没有努力过要好”这句,停顿太短,喘稍显气,试试在“要好”前加个破折号呢!

小青蛙闹钟

300字
主题:成长陪伴、责任意识、童心想象、生活温情

大家好,我是主人最最最最最喜欢的朋友,我呢,就是一个可爱的小青蛙闹钟,我有一对水汪汪的大眼睛,全身绿衣服,还有四条腿,我的肚子就是一个表。每天早上,我都会准时叫主人起床:呱呱呱,小主人起床啦……

可有一天,我因没吃饱(电量不足)害小主人迟到15分,就这样,小主人回来骂了我一顿,小主人后来发现我没吃饱后,给我买了一堆零食(电池)。我又吃饱了,又开始准时叫主人起床了,还夸我是个尽职的闹钟,我可高兴了呢。我因为经常被摸,而弄得非常脏,小主人为我洗了个澡,还定为每个星期日洗一次澡,所以我很干净。

呱呱呱,小主人起床啦!呱呱呱……

五年级:梁恩倍

精选读者点评

这小青蛙活了!眼睛水汪汪、肚子是表、还会饿,电池写成“零食”,真逗!后半段洗洗澡、定日子,生活气扑面而来。唯独“最最最最最喜欢”连用四个“最”,像蹦豆子,留俩就够劲儿啦~

三年级英语作文

400字
主题:勤俭节约、科学思维、家国情怀、环保意识

三年级英语作文

today, i saw a problem on my math e_ercises.

the topic is: our country has about 1 billion 300 million people. if we save 1 cents per person per day, our country will save about 13 million yuan a day. so this money can provide children with no money to go to school.

looking at the information above, i thought, what a force! i suddenly thought: if these 1 billion 300 million people, each person has wasted 1 drops of water, then altogether wasted 1 billion 300 million drops of water, then, how big does 1 billion 300 million drop water have?

i made a small e_periment: dripping 1000 drops of water under the tap, weighing 200 grams with the weight of the dripping water, i counted the drikke =260 ton.

i don know. its a scare. i went to ask my father, daddy, how much electricity can 1 tons of water generate? dad said, 1 tons of water can send 100 degrees of electricity. that means 260 tons of water can make electricity. i was shocked at once. 260 tons of water had so many functions. so we must save all water and not waste a drop.

精选读者点评

算水滴的样子真可爱!“1亿3千万滴”写得工整,还自己接水称重,200克=1000滴?下回试试用小量筒,数字更准哦~