小学四年级下册英语作文

150字
主题:梦想启航、职业向往、自我规划、文化体验

小学四年级下册英语作文

when i grow up, im going to do what i want to do. im going to move somewhere interesting. paris sounds like a city that i could that enjoy. there are lots of art e_hibitions there. i want to be an artist . so how am i going to do it? first, imgoing to find a part-time job for a year or tow and save some money. then im going to be a student at an art school in paris.

精选读者点评

巴黎!这个词写得表达清爽,像小星星一样跳出来~后面“art e_hibitions”漏了个“x”,擦掉重写哈~

小学四年级下册英语作文

200字
主题:成长、友谊、阅读、运动

小学四年级下册英语作文

i am cendy. i am in nanhai e_perimental primary school. i am in class 9, grade 6. i am tall and thin. i live in dali. i have many good friends. i often play with them.

i have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books. but i like to read books the best. because of reading books is good for my study. i also like riding bikes. because of it does a lot of good to my body.

what’s your hobby? can you tell me?

精选读者点评

cendy同学,名字拼写错了哦~是cindy不是cendy!还有“e_perimental”中间不该有下划线,记得查词典或问老师哈~

小学四年级描写人物的英语作文

200字
主题:亲情、独立、陪伴、教育、感恩

小学四年级描写人物的英语作文

i have a great mother. she cares much about me in my life and study. in the morning, she gets up early to make breakfast for me. when i was little, she prepared my schoolbag. but now, she tells me to do it by myself. because she thinks i have been old enough to do it. besides, she always checks my homework. when i finish my homework, she checks it and points out the mistakes. she is very careful and helps me a lot. i love my mother.

精选读者点评

妈妈早起做早餐、检查作业这些细节很打动人!“现在让我自己整理书包”这句相当真实,能看出来你在长大,妈妈也在悄悄放手~

小学四年级英语作文

450字
主题:童年生活、未来憧憬、家庭温情、自我表达、语言实践

i am going to have a busy weekend ! on saturday , im going to clean my room and do homework. then , in the evening , i m going to the supermaket with my mother . on saturday, im going to the bookstore on foot . im going to buy some books. then, im going to go home and read the new books. in the evening , im going to watch tv. that will be fun! what about you? what are you going to do on the weekend?我梦想的工作 my dream job

when i grow up, im going to do what i want to do. im going to move somewhere interesting. paris sounds like a city that i could that enjoy. there are lots of art e_hibitions there. i want to be an artist . so how am i going to do it? first, imgoing to find a part-time job for a year or tow and save some money. then im going to be a student at an art school in paris.

an unforgettable thing in the summer vacation 暑期难忘的一件事

it was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too. in the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind. in a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.

精选读者点评

这个“巴黎”写得条理清楚!动词短语用得活,像“move somewhere interesting”“art exhibitions”,比课本里还地道。稍显“i could that enjoy”这句漏了词,顺手改一改哈~