小学四年级英语作文我的朋友

300字
主题:友情、家庭成员、校园生活、职业认知

小学四年级英语作文我的朋友

john is my good friend.

john is my good friend. he is twelve. he is english. we are in the same (同一个) school. we are not in the same class. his father mr black is a cook. he is forty-five. his mother is not a cook. she is a nurse. she is forty-two. john has a sister. her name is alice. she is twenty-one. she is a new teacher at our school.

约翰是我的好朋友

参考译文:约翰是我的好朋友。他12岁,我们在同一个学校。我们不在一个班级。他的爸爸布莱克先生是一位厨师。他今年45岁。他的吗吗不是厨师。是一位护士。她今年四十二岁。约翰还有一个姐姐。她的名字叫做爱丽丝。她今年21岁。她是一个新老师,在我们学校。

精选读者点评

句子基本通顺,人称代词“he”“she”用得挺准!但“his mother is not a cook. she is a nurse.”这句连着两个主谓宾,读着有点平,试试加个“but”?比如“his mother isn’t a cook, but she’s a nurse.”,读起来就活了。

小学四年级写人英语作文

200字
主题:友情、成长、互助、个性、理解、陪伴

小学四年级写人英语作文

my friend vivi is a lively and smart girl,she has long black hair and she is a tallest girl in our class.she is warm-hearted and good- looking so that everyone loves her.im so glad to make friend with her.im out-going too,so we have been good friends for long time.but sometimes i like quiet but she doesn .and her marks are not good as me.so,i suggested her that she should work-hard in her study so that we can go to the same university.

this person is my best friend vivi who i can tell everything to.like my deeply feelings and thoughts.

精选读者点评

vivi的长发、热心肠、爱笑,都真通透但“tallest”前少了个the,“work-hard”连字符多余,“deeply feelings”该用deep。再读两遍,小错误自己就能揪出来~

我的圣诞节

150字
主题:节日生活、日常安排、家庭陪伴、阅读兴趣

my christmas day 我的圣诞节

i am going to have a busy weekend ! on saturday , im going to clean my room and do homework. then , in the evening , i m going to the supermaket with my mother . on saturday, im going to the bookstore on foot . im going to buy some books. then, im going to go home and read the new books. in the evening , im going to watch tv. that will be fun! what about you? what are you going to do on the weekend?

精选读者点评

标题中英文混用,正文里“supermaket”拼错了,还有好几处大小写和标点不规范,这些小地方,恰恰最见基本功。