童年的记忆初中作文

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主题:怀旧、成长、自然、记忆、童真、乡愁

童年的记忆初中作文

回想起童年,有许多已经因时间的冲刷沉入脑海深处了,而浮在水面上的就是关于渔人码头的记忆。

托腮思索了许久,好不容易才把记忆碎片组装在一起,拼成了一段完整的回忆。

记得每次去渔人码头,当车刚停稳在车位上,我便从车里窜出来,张开手臂,放肆地呼吸着微咸又带着腥味的海风。

这里是入海口,所以沙不是金黄色的沙,而是深棕色的泥沙;海不是蔚蓝的海,而是土黄色的海。第一次去的时候,为这里与想象中的不一样大为失望,来的次数多了,慢慢地被这里的魅力吸引。

退潮后,我提着鞋子踏入这块神秘的土地。泥滩上凹凸不平的许多纹理,那是海浪与泥沙拥抱留下的痕迹。一条条纹路从泥滩的东面延伸到西面,一眼望不到尽头。踩上去却异常坚硬,棱角分明,很是不舒服。但走多了也就好了,脚下麻麻的,被按摩得很透彻。现在想起,是那种穿了许久的按摩人字拖的感觉。

愈往下走,愈靠近退在下面的海浪,泥沙变得愈加温顺,那种软绵的感觉至今停留在脚掌间挥之不去。最喜欢勾起脚趾,“抓”起一小把泥沙,转身伸出腿一甩,利落地一甩,“啪”地一声,泥沙应声落地,清脆的、爽快的。总是有一种想对着天空大声尖啸的冲动,快乐的感觉在这时蔓延至全身。

最快乐的时光应属在泥沙中探寻着小蟹的踪迹,泥滩上遍布着小洞,这是小蟹爬进去时留下的呼吸孔。拿着铲子向下挖去,必定可以找到小蟹的踪迹。下手速度太慢,经常挖起后又让它钻了回去。细节记得不多了,只记得很快乐,只记得最后将它们放生时,无以言表的感慨。

这一切,虽然很遥远,又仿佛发生在昨天。

精选读者点评

这“泥沙按摩脚掌”的感觉太恰如其分!连“穿久的人字拖”都搬出来比,不是真踩过绝想不出,你把身体记得的事写出来了。

a field trip

350字
主题:童年记忆、校外实践、亲子互动、自然风光、成长体验

today i went to danshui for a field trip. i was so e_cietd and couldn’t fall asleep. so i woke up too late in the morning, it was almost late for school. my mom gave me some money and told me to go to school by ta_i. i really needed to go to school before 7 o’clock. and luckily, i was just on time. first we went there by turist coach. there was not as crowded as it is in the weekends, but still there are a lot of people. and then we walked along the old street, and ate a lot of snacks. i also played some games, and bought some souvenirs for my little brother. after that we went to fishmen’s wharf by a tourist coach too.

it was windy and sunny. the teacher told us to gather at the entrance at 3 o’clock and we would dismiss. i took many pictures of the ocean, and played around the place with my classmates. i also talked about the wonderful scenery with my mom by cell phone.

finally it was about time to go home. we all felt tired on the bus, i just felt asleep and dreamed about the e_cellent field trip.

精选读者点评

标点太偷懒啦!句号都省着用?“i was so e_cietd”,拼写小马虎,但兴奋劲儿扑面而来,真可爱!

游记作文四年级下册

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主题:假日、亲情、自然、欢乐、童年、旅行

五一长假的一天,天气晴朗,阳光明媚。我们全家人兴高采烈地自驾游去上海海湾度假村。

早就听说,海湾度假村是一个美丽的地方,那里有碧蓝的大海,金黄色的沙滩。一路上,我想象着波澜壮阔的大海,真恨不得插翅飞到目的地。车子开了好久,妈妈突然兴奋地说:“快看,大风车,到了!”果然,我看到了几个巨大的风车在不停地转动着,还真有点异国风情的味道。

我迫不及待地来到海边,啊!景色美极了。映入眼帘的是一望无际的大海,在阳光照耀下波光粼粼,颇为壮观。那蔚蓝色的大海,配上湛蓝色的天空,就成了水天相接的奇景,让我分辨不出哪里是水,哪里是天,听着海浪“哗哗”的声音,我陶醉了。

“渔人码头”是一个好玩的地方。瞧!人们有的搭起了帐篷,海阔天空地聊着天;有的索性光着脚丫,踩着软绵绵的沙滩悠闲地散步;还有几个顽皮的小孩,在玩“挖陷阱”的游戏,悄悄躲在一边看见人家陷进去了,刹时,留下了孩子们一片欢乐的笑声。

最惊险刺激的要数海上游乐场了,游乐项目可真多!“飓风飞椅”会把你整个人高高飞起,“滑翔艇”有惊无险,但你一定会忍不住尖叫,坐上“观光车”可以让你极目眺望一望无际的大海……

快乐的时光总是那么短暂,但又是令人难忘的,我们恋恋不舍地离开了美丽的大海!

精选读者点评

“碧蓝的大海,金黄色的沙滩”,这句颜色搭得明快利落!后文却总用“蔚蓝”“湛蓝”反复涂,像把一支蓝笔用到底。试试换支“色号”?比如浪尖泛白、沙粒微褐、风车铁灰……