占据学习座位

500字
主题:学习态度、公共空间、行为规范、教育公平、责任意识

in china, students work so hard, they study day and night, for the purpose of getting the high mark, so that they can go to a better school, which will bring them more promising future. to get the study time as more as possible, some students move their books to the study room, they want to occupy the seat, so they put a lot of books as the sign that the seat has been taken by someone, other people can’t take this seat. in my opinion, studying hard is a good thing, working hard will lead people to success, while taking the seat for a long time is not a civilized behavior. it is a kind of wasting resource, when students are not here, but the seats are empty, they should be left for other students to study.

在中国,学生很努力学习,他们白天和晚上都在学习,只为了得到更高的分数,这样他们就可以进入到更好地学校,能给他们带来更加光明的前途。为了尽可能地更多时间学习,一些学生把他们的书本搬到了自习室,他们想要占位置,所以他们放了很多书,作为位置已被人占有的象征,别人不能做这个位置。在我看来,努力学习是一件好事,努力工作能让人们成功,但是长时间的占据位置不是文明的行为。这有点浪费资源,当学生不在学习时候,位置也是空的,他们应该把位置让给别的学生来学习。

精选读者点评

这个“占座”现象抓住关键!后半段说“空着座位却不让别人用”,语气里透出的困惑和一点点着急,分外真实。但是“working hard will lead people to success”这句英文直译过来,读着有点硬,试试换成“越拼越有希望”!

阅览室里的一次教训

1150字
主题:文明礼仪、自我反思、人际尊重、青春成长、规则意识

高中英语作文范文:阅览室里的一次教训

the seats in our school reading-room are not enough for all the students. many people get there very early to seize a seat every day. so do i. one day a special thing happened to me. and i learned a lesson that i shall never forget.

it happened on a wednesday morning last january, just before our final e_amation. i got to the reading-room very early to occupy a seat. i put a book on the desk and then went to have breakfast. but when i hurried back into the reading-room, i found someone was sitting on the seat which i had occupied in advance. i ran to him immediatly and shouted at him angrily, go away. its my seat. everyone raised their eyes and stared at me unfriendly. my face turned red and i felt ashamed of myself. i took my book and fled helter-skelter before so many eyes.

i dared not go to the reading-room for several days. i learned a lesson in the reading-room. since then i have been keeping the lesson in mind: to be polite to everyone.

我们学校阅览室里的座位不多。每天很多人都很早就去“抢”座,我也是如此。一天,我经历了一件特殊的事,并从中学到了令我终生难忘的教训。

这件事发生在去年一月份一个星期三的早晨,就在期末考试之前。我很早就到阅览室占了一个座位,然后去吃早饭。但当我匆忙返回到阅览室时,却发现一个人正坐在我占的座位上。我立即跑过去,对他生气地嚷道:“走开,这是我的座位。”阅览室里所有的人都抬起头来,异样地看着我。我的脸一下子变红了,我为自己的行为感到惭愧。在众目睽睽之下,我拿起书狼狈地跑了出去。

一连好几天,我都不敢去阅览室。我在阅览室里得到了一个教训。从那以后,我一直铭记着这个教训:礼貌地对待每个人。

the seats in our school reading-room are not enough for all the students. in order to seize a seat, i go there very early every morning. just because of this, a special story happened to me one day. i learned a lesson in the reading-room that i will remember all my life.

it took place on a monday morning in october. after occupying a seat in the reading-room, i went to fetch a bottle of boiled water. when i returned to the reading-room, i found that a girl student was sitting on my seat. immediately i ran to her and shouted at her angrily, why have you taken my seat? go away.! everybody in the reading-room looked up from their books at me unfriendly. at once i brushed with shame. i rushed out of the reading-room with my book. i can never forget those eyes.

this is the lesson ive learned in the reading-room: i shall respect other people.

我们学校阅览室里的座位不是很多。为了“抢”座位,我每天早晨很早就去阅览室。正是因为这个,我经历了一件很特殊的事。我在阅览室里学到一个终生难忘的教训。

这件事发生在十月的一个星期一的早晨。占了一个座位后,我就去打瓶开水,回来时却发现一位女生正坐在我的位置上。我立即跑了过去,生气地嚷道:“为什么坐我的座位?让开!”阅览室里所有的人都抬起头,异样地看着我。我很羞愧,脸一下子就红了。我拿起书,冲出了阅览室。我永远都不会忘记那些眼睛。

这就是我在阅览室里得到的教训:一定要尊重别人。

精选读者点评

这个“抢座—丢脸—醒悟”的过程真通透尤其“狼狈地跑了出去”“永远都不会忘记那些眼睛”,立体鲜活,比直接说“我错了”有力多啦。

有爱的力量

650字
主题:成长、温暖、归属、友爱、校园生活、青春印记

有爱的力量

记得那是一个金秋十月,是我刚上初中的第一个月,虽然已经过去了6个多月,但我至今还清楚地记得那一句话:快到这里来坐,我们给你占好位置了,快来吧。这是谁在说话?哦,原来是我的三个好哥们拉我去跟他们一块吃饭啊!

记得那是一个金秋十月,是我刚上初中的第一个月,上完第四节课以后,我就急匆匆的朝食堂跑去,因为我实在是太饿了!早上随便吃了几口面包就急匆匆地走出了家门,来学校上课。为了加快速度,我三步并作一步走,飞快地冲下楼梯,好似一只离弦的弓箭。我飞快的速度使我直接插到了队伍的中间。不一会儿我就进了食堂,拿到了学校食堂做的香喷喷的午饭,可新的问题又冲进了我的脑海,我坐在哪吃饭呢?我这个人有个习惯,吃饭喜欢和本班同学一块吃。我环望了一下四周,发现凡是有同学的位置上都坐满了人,这说明今天我可能要破一次例跟其他班的同学一块吃饭了,当我怀着失望的心情走向一个座位时,听到了我们班同学在叫我,他说:“快到这里来坐,我们给你占好位置了,快来吧。”我回头一看,原来是我的三个好哥们来我去跟他们一块吃饭啊!只见其中的一个把饭盘拿到了里面,而他自己也做到了里面,把外面的位置给我让了出来。在小学六年里,所来没有人给我占过位置,即使占过也是我让同学帮我占的,而同学主动帮我占位置还是头一次。当时我的心迅速被有爱的力量所占据,我感觉到此时世间处处充满了爱。

这不仅是我上初中的第一个金秋十月,更是一个充满友爱力量的金秋十月。这个金秋十月我终生不会忘记!

北京宣武区北京市第十五中学初一:王京添

精选读者点评

这“金秋十月”写了两遍,像不小心按了复制键~值得注意的是第二遍写得更细,连弓箭都射出来了,饿劲儿和冲劲儿扑面而来!那句“快到这里来坐”留着,别删,多暖的烟火气啊。