小学一年级写人的英语作文

作文类型：看图写话、家庭介绍、英语习作翻译对照

【成语使用】

【形容词】

same、english、behind、same、same

【好词好句】

1. a picture is on my desk.

2. this is a picture of jim’s family.

3. jim and his sister are in the same school.

【修辞手法】

【文字校对】

• "a picture is on my desk"应为"a picture is on my desk."

• "jims father"应为"jim’s father"

• "jims mother"应为"jim’s mother"

• "jims sister"应为"jim’s sister"

• "kate green"应为"kate green"

• "they are english"应为"they are english."

• "a girl is in the picture, too. she is jims sister."应为"a girl is in the picture, too. she is jim’s sister."

• "a woman is behind jim. she is his mother."应为"a woman is behind jim. she is his mother."

【写作亮点】

✓ 结构清晰，按人物顺序逐一介绍

✓ 人称与物主代词使用基本准确

✓ 能运用简单句表达家庭成员关系与身份

✓ 中英文对照呈现，体现双语学习意识