感恩父母

500字
主题:亲情、责任、反哺、奉献、生命教育、代际温情

be grateful to our parents

since we were born, many people help us a lot. we should be grateful to their kindness. but the ones we should show our greatest appreciation are our parents. from the first day we appear in their lives, they give us all their love and care, but never e_pect anything in return. as long as they are there, we do not feel any difficulties, because they are always in front of our shelter, preventing us from difficulties and danger. in order to make our lives better, learn better, they do everything they can to create the best conditions for us, but ignore their own needs. therefore, we need to cherish parents’ love and repay their upbringing. we should treat them as they treat us.

感恩父母

从我们出生的那天开始,许多人都帮助过我们。我们应该感谢他们的友好。但是,我们最应该感谢的人是我们的父母。从我们出现在他们生活中的那天开始,他们不求回报地给了我们所有的爱和关怀。只要有他们在,我们感觉不到任何的困难,因为他们总在我们的前方为我们遮风挡雨,把我们挡在困难和危险的后面。为了让我们生活得更好,学习得更好,他们竭尽所能得为我们创造的条件,却忽略了自己的需要。因此,我们要珍惜父母的深情,要报答父母的养育之恩,要如他们对待我们这般来回报父母。

精选读者点评

“be grateful to our parents”这个标题真干净!后面英文段里“e_pect”少了个x,记得补上哦~“shelter”当动词用有点生硬,换成“stand in front of us as a shelter”试试?

my hobbies我的爱好,英语作文翻译

250字
主题:成长、学习、生活、健康、兴趣、探索

my hobbies

different people have different hobbies, i often cycling to play with my classmates. it is especially good for health. it is good e_ercise.and its one of my hobbies,i enjoy reading very much.for reading books,i can get lots of knowledge from reading,and get a sense of the outside world,its wonderful.我的爱好

不同的人有不同的爱好。我经常骑自行车玩和同学一起玩。它特别对健康有好处。这是很好的锻炼。除此之外读书是我的另一个嗜好,我很喜欢读书。至于读书,我可以从中学到很多知识,并且对外面的世界有了了解,那真是太美好了。

精选读者点评

骑车 读书,动静结合,真有你的!但“e_ercise”少了个r,下次拼写前多瞄两眼哈~

my hobby我的爱好是游泳

250字
主题:成长、热爱、坚持、快乐、自我表达

my hobby

everyone has his or her own hobby.today i am going to talk about my hobby.my hobby is swimming.i like it very much,although i don swim very well.and i go to swim with my friends every summer.my swimming coat is blue,because blue is my favourite color.i enjpy swimming in the sun,its really cool.

i hope i can learn to swim well this summer.

我的爱好

每个人都有他或她自己的爱好。今天我要谈谈我的爱好。我的爱好是游泳。我非常喜欢它,虽然我游泳不太好。和我去游泳,每年夏天,我和我的朋友们。我的大衣是蓝色,因为蓝色是我最喜欢的颜色。我enjpy游泳在阳光下,它真的很酷。

我希望我能学好游泳这个夏天。

精选读者点评

蓝泳衣写得文意清晰!后半段中英文混着跑,像小鱼跳出了水,漏字、错拼、语序乱,但那份想游好的热乎劲儿,老师摸到了。