有趣的科学课

500字
主题:童年趣事、师生互动、观察推理、合作学习、课堂欢乐

今天,在科学课上,老师让我们做了一个游戏,老师选一个同学,在他的背后粘上一个动物,让这个同学问:“我会飞吗?”或“我身体大吗?”之类的问题。剩下的同学只许答:“是或不是,会或不会。”然后让这个同学猜,猜出来了,就说一句:“我是___。”

我本来只是想举举手装个样子,谁知,老师居然叫我了,而且还是第一个叫我。幸好我有准备,上了台,老师让我先面朝大家,在我背上粘图片。这时,申新宇说了一句:“蚂蚁不好!”还没等她说完,王琪一把抓住申新宇,低声说:“小声点,别让人听见了,听见了就不好玩了!”老师这时把卡片换了一张。

科学课作文我问:“我会飞吗?”“不会!”“会游泳吗?”“不会!”“食草还是食肉?”“食肉!”“力气大吗?”“不大!”“个子小吗?”“小!”“我是蚂蚁!”我托口而出,同学们一阵欢呼。

下一个是林淼,林淼的背上粘的是七星瓢虫,她问了几个问题。然后,她开始猜,可是她猜了几遍也没有猜住。

林淼失败后,老师把张然叫了上来,张然一下子就猜住了。

谷恒霖是我们中说得最失败的一个。他几乎说遍了所有的动物也没有把猫说出来。最后,在我们的帮助下,他猜对了。

马超凡是最后一个上来,他也是猜得的,只提了二个问题就ok了。

我喜欢科学课。

精选读者点评

这个“蚂蚁”猜得出彩!背上的小秘密被同学嘴快泄露,你却临场转成悬念,老师换卡那一下,写得像电影镜头咔嚓定格。再把林淼、谷恒霖他们猜错时的神态加一两个小动作,比如林淼揪衣角、谷恒霖挠后脑勺,整篇就活了。

迎接元旦

900字
主题:传统节日、童年记忆、集体欢庆、文化体验、成长瞬间

today, the campus held a grand qingyuan dan activities, we are early to come to school qingyuan dan.

commencement of the event, we went to a classroom, you see a brilliant classroom, classroom middle of two intersecting lines. line, there are colorful ribbons, in the middle of the intersection there is a large wreath, hanging from the windows wa_ flower, beautiful to watch. close to the riddle on the blackboard one by one card, one by one they like the little face, as if to say: came for me, ah, seize me that you certainly imagine not.!

first, the school programs, is to give last year‘s entry red cross will be issued listing the students. they can be happy, for it is very lucky on television, they bloom everybody laugh.

is behind the activities of our class, and first riddles, the host asked the students to the blackboard to find puzzle cards, take one to know one, i took two. host selection up to read, i am the first to be elected to, and they are all guessed it!

after a child, the teacher and several classmates asked me to guess riddles, holding a ticket hall, we have one to the venue, we have almost desperate, because we arrived late, almost no riddles, but also drawing huge crowds, i walked around, not a riddle, when i suddenly saw a lantern riddles, so ben, such as tiger, call to run soon as the past, a grasp, so i shouted: find. we are very e_cited to said: fantastic! but i said: captured the farmer ah, to be guess it! i looked at the e bar! i think i learned my answers are wrong, we think hard, but also have no idea. after a while child, i feel tired, and himself, said: fried tofu, not old, ah. zhou ying-chun 1, received revelation, said: yes i. we asked her: why? zhou ying-chun said with confidence: fried bean curd is not on the old well, so i thought. we want several times, said: well, it has. we came in right answers fast to accept the award goods team behind.

soon, to us, i said: yes i. teachers are the answer a bit, when my heart is like a ping-pong, pound, to jump, we saw the teacher said with a smile: yes, take away bar! the teacher gave me a small pendant, and we ran back to the classroom and told the teacher that we guessed right, and i also gave the teachers a small pendant, the teacher smiled and said: it‘s beautiful, thank you.

followed by reading our class of wang wan-yu, tang yunjie come accompanied by the beautiful sound of the violin and the sweet sound of, let us enchanted.

after the cultural performance, we began to enjoy myself all at home, and bring schools to the dish, my favorite is the lin anqi of scrambled eggs, fresh and delicious e_treme.

this qingyuan dan activities, i had a good time, ah!

精选读者点评

“青园旦”写成“qingyuan dan”,还夹着“wa_ flower”“e_cited”“e bar”,不是错别字,是拼音和英文在打架!但读着鲜活传神,像小麻雀扑棱棱飞进教室,连猜谜时喊“找着啦!”都带着喘气儿。建议下次把“riddle cards”换成“谜语卡”,把“fried tofu”换成“豆腐”,字就站稳了。

儿童节.狂欢日

550字
主题:童年、快乐、成长、友情、节日、校园

耶!我等啊等,盼啊盼,终于,6.1来到啦!第一步跨进教室,马上“哧”的一声,男生拿着喷雾到处喷,来喷我们女生,哼哼,没喷雾我就偷,左翻右翻,总算找到了一瓶。一场喷雾大战就此开展……

冒雨集会后,开始了活动。一下楼,哇噻,人山人海,挤得我都喘不过气来;人来人往,蚊子都飞不过来;校园打破了往常沉闷的读书气氛,到处都是欢声笑语,满地是灿烂的笑脸。

拉着诗敏和雅琳,我们三人挤过了一班又一班,来到了猜谜游戏前:呃,这个不会,下一个,哦,作业一定要用心,不会,算了,还是走吧。

来到了挤气球游戏的班级,我们三人不约而同的冲了进去,举着小手争先恐后的抢气球,抢了两个,我和雅琳一组,诗敏和雅艳一组。

“一二三,开始!”我和雅琳拼命地挤,“砰”有人美滋滋地去领奖了,我眼巴巴的看着,不行!我使出吃奶的劲,挤啊挤,“砰”又有一人去领奖了。突然,气球一扁,啊,破了,我们欢呼雀跃,一瞧,哎,漏气了啊~时间如流水般悄悄流逝,最后,只剩下我们组和诗敏组了。诗敏挤得满头大汗,脸通红。几位高年级的在一旁催:“快点,不行换人!”无可奈何,只好让出去了。

不久,诗敏她们喜气洋洋的归来,真后悔,早知道不让拉!5555555~可惜世上没有后悔药,不然,我一定全吃光!我们又去了许多好玩的地方,比如……

儿童节,狂欢日!

精选读者点评

这“哧”的一声历历在目!喷雾还没喷到纸上,我鼻尖先闻到清凉味儿了。还有“蚊子都飞就是来”,亏你想得出来!略显后头猜谜那段,三个“不会”连着甩,读着有点喘不上气,试试把第二个“不会”换成动作?比如“挠挠头,踮脚去看下一条”呀!

最难忘的一件事

300字
主题:童年记忆、集体活动、成长趣事、师生互动、纯真喜悦

每个人都有最难忘的事,我也不例外,大家来听听我最难忘的事吧!

我最难忘的一件事要数四年级的那次元旦联欢晚会了。详情请我慢慢到来。

“你偷我们组的气球”,“不,是你拿我们组的气球”……看,为了装扮教室,几个平时要好的同学都吵起来了,都想让我们班在全校有个好表现。

吵吵闹闹、雀喧鸠聚、一齐众咻、众口喧嚣……

好不容易挨到了晚会开始。本来,爸爸是要来的,我等不及了。所以就先开始了。我猜中了一个——自行车,得了一等奖。哈哈!旗开得胜。我原本是想再多猜几个的,可还有好多节目没参加呢!

我又去玩了“瞎子穿鞋”的游戏,我走着走着竟然撞到了语文老师。

这一天我真开心,不但得到了战利品,还收获了快乐。

一年级:华威

精选读者点评

开头太像喊喇叭啦!“大家来听听我最难忘的事吧”,这句删掉,直接从“四年级元旦晚会”开讲,干净利落!