日出 sunrise-一年级简单英语作文

400字
主题:自然之美、时间流转、光明降临、静观感悟、天地壮丽

i once saw sunrise. it was very amazing and beautiful. the night before, we lived in the top of mountain. about 4 p.m., we went out of the tent. it was so dark outside that we could not see anything. it was very quiet and seemed that everything was sleeping.about twenty minutes later, the sky turned to white slowly. and we can see the outline of mountains. suddenly, the clouds turned to brighten and slowly, the sun rised slowly. it was red, but after it appeared totally, it became golden. its light irradiated to everywhere. the sky was totally golden and it was really beautiful.

我曾经看过日出,景色很惊奇很美。前天晚上,我们到山顶过夜。大约四点的时候,我们走出帐篷,外面一片漆黑,什么也看不到。周围很安静,好像万物都在沉睡。大约过了20分钟,天空开始慢慢变白。我们可以看到山的轮廓。突然,云朵渐渐地变得明亮起来,太阳缓缓升起。开始它是红色的,但是它完全升起后就变成金色的了。它的光芒照射到每一个角落。天空完全变成了金色的,甚是好看。

精选读者点评

这个“云朵渐渐地变得明亮起来”,细处见功连光怎么爬过云边都看见了,眼睛真亮。

一年级英语作文带翻译-写作业doing homework

250字
主题:学习生活、时间安排、课业压力、日常作息

i am in the fifth grade, i study chinese, math and english. my teachers leave many homework every day. after school, i stay in school doing homework about one hour. i go back home, after i eat my supper, i start doing homework again. i often sleep at eleven o’clock in the evening, because i have so many homework.

我是五年级学生,我学习语文、数学和英语。每天我的老师们都会布置许多作业。放学后,我会在学习里做一个小时左右。我回到家,吃了晚饭之后,开始继续做作业。我经常晚上11点才睡觉,因为我有太多作业了。

精选读者点评

作业描写细腻连“吃完晚饭才开始做”都记下来了,生活味儿足。就是“i am in the fifth grade”这句,中文作文里混英文,像吃饭时突然咬到一粒沙,硌得慌。

mother and i

350字
主题:亲情、成长、习惯、热爱、责任、语言学习

my name is wu jiawei. my english name is jerry. i like fruits very much, but i don’t like eating vegetables. sometimes i like riding a bike and doing some e_ercises on the playground. i don’t like reading some books, but i like drawing pictures. i like many animals, and i like english so much. my mum is young, she is always very tired because she is very busy. everyday she gets up early in the morning and cooks breakfast for us. in the evening, she often reads some newspaper before she goes to bed. i love my mum, and she loves me too!

我的名字是吴加味。我的英文名字是杰里。我非常喜欢水果,但我不喜欢吃蔬菜。 有时我喜欢骑自行车,在操场上做一些运动。我不喜欢看书,但我喜欢画画。 我喜欢许多动物,我非常喜欢英语。 我的妈妈很年轻,她总是很累,因为她很忙。每天早上她起得很早,为我们做早餐。在晚上,她经常在睡觉前看一些报纸。 我爱我的妈妈,她也爱我!

精选读者点评

“杰里”这名字读着过瘾!水果和自行车那段,读着像蹦跳的糖豆,但“e_ercises”少了个r,下次检查拼写时,手指点着字母慢慢滑过去哈~

一年级英语作文-吉姆的家庭

200字
主题:亲情、成长、校园、身份、语言、生活

a picture is on my desk. this is a picture of jims family. the man is jims father. a woman is behind jim. she is his mother. they are teachers. a girl is in the picture, too. she is jims sister. her name is kate green. jim and his sister are in the same school. they are english.

一张照片在我的桌子上。这是一幅吉姆家的照片。那人是吉姆的父亲。一个女人在吉姆背后。她是他的母亲。他们是老师。一个女孩也在照片里。她是吉姆的妹妹。她的名字叫凯特。吉姆和他的姐姐在同一所学校。他们是英语。

精选读者点评

照片里那句“they are english”让我愣了一下,是国籍?母语?还是拼写小迷糊?下次写完读一遍,听听顺不顺耳。

一年级英语作文-我是无名之卒 i am nobody

250字
主题:自我认同、生活哲学、价值选择、内心安宁

everybody likes to make a difference, so that they can be remembered. being the spot can make people feel the sense of pride. but i don’t like to be somebody, i just want to be nobody. i can do whatever i want and without other people’s e_pectation, i feel no pressure. i am enjoying the quiet life, i take every moment and live my life.

每个人都喜欢做大事,这样他们就能够被人记住。成为焦点能让人们感受到自豪。但是我不喜欢成为重要的人,我只想做个无名之卒。我能够做任何自己想做的事情,没有别人的期望,我会感到轻松。我享受着平静的生活,感受着每一刻,过着自己的生活。

精选读者点评

这个“无名之卒”写得真自在!后两行中文里,“感受着每一刻”比前面的“享受平静”更有力,悄悄把“感受”圈出来,试试把前文也换成这种带体温的动词。

a chinese boy

200字
主题:家庭、成长、教育、语言学习、身份认同

im a chinese boy. my name is chen dong. i am twelve. i have two sisters. my sisters and i are all students.

my father is a teacher. he is a chinese teacher. he teaches in no. 19 middle school. my mother is a teacher, too. she teaches english in the no. 11 middle school.

我是一个中国男孩。我的名字是陈董。我十二岁了。我有两个姐妹。我和我的妹妹都是学生。

我的父亲是一个老师。他是一个语文老师。他在19中学教。我的母亲是一名教师。她在11中学教英语。

精选读者点评

名字写成“陈董”啦,是“陈东”吧?小朋友常会听错音,下次写完自己读一遍就发现啦~

clocks

150字
主题:生活场景、英语启蒙、双语对照、时间管理、家居陈设

there are many clocks in the browns house. they are in different rooms.a big clock stands in a corner of the sitting room. it is a very, very old clock, but it still keeps good time. mr. brown winds it once a week.

棕色的房子里有许多钟。他们在不同的房间里,一个大时钟站在客厅的一个角落里。这是一个非常,非常古老的时钟,但它仍然保持良好的时间。一周内,布朗先生一次风。

精选读者点评

这句“very, very old”翻得灵气十足!叠词感扑面而来,比单写“very old”有味道多了,但“风”字得改,“上发条”才准。

一年级英语作文-my friend and i

350字
主题:友谊、成长、爱好、家庭、学习、个性

my friend and i both are from china. my friend is short, handsome, honest and funny. his father is soldier, he is about thirty-eight, his mother is a housewife, she is little heavy.

his likes play the piano. i would like play the piano. he doesn’t like study, he likes play. he and i both are good friend, we often play basketball together. i like writing now, but my friend doesn’t like writing. my study is hard-working and i am very kind. i have some books and like to read books.

my friend and i both are good friend!

我和我的朋友都来自中国。我的朋友是短,英俊,诚实和有趣。他父亲是军人,他大约三十八岁,母亲是一位家庭主妇,她很小。

他喜欢弹钢琴。我想弹钢琴。他不喜欢学习,他喜欢玩。他和我都是好朋友,我们经常一起打篮球。我喜欢写,但我的朋友不喜欢写。我的学习很努力,我很善良。我有一些书,喜欢读书。

我的朋友和我都是好朋友!

精选读者点评

句子主谓搭配要注意啊,“他母亲是家庭主妇,她很小”?“小”指什么?体重?年纪?身高?写清楚才不让人猜。