小学四年级描写季节的英语作文

150字
主题:酷暑感受、自然不适、生活困扰、情绪宣泄

in summer, the weather is hot, the air is humid, and the wind doesn blow at all. in summer, everything seems tired--e_cept the mosquito and the fly. they are everywhere. they bring diseases to people. no one likes to walk or work under the summer sun. because the wicked sun will burn your skin. so the hot summer confines you to your room. hot weather makes me drowsy and i can study effectively. i hate summer. i wish it would go away quickly.

精选读者点评

蚊子苍蝇真饱满“except”拼错啦,记得补个r,下次试试把“wicked sun”画成个小火球呀!

what is family

300字
主题:亲情、成长、归属、感恩、陪伴、幸福

what is family?

everybody has his own family. what is family?

i don think everyone really knows. there are si_ letters in the word family. i think, f means father, a means and, m means mother, i means i, l means love and y means you. so family is the short form of father and mother, i love you.

don you think so? father and mother love us, and we love father and mother. thats a happy family.

什么是家庭?

每个人都有自己的家庭。什么是家庭?

我不认为每个人都知道。“家庭”这个词有六个字母。我认为,“福”是指“父亲”、“意思”、“意思”、“母亲”、“我”意思是“我”、“我”意思是“爱”和“你”的意思是“你”。所以“家庭”是“爸爸妈妈,我爱你”的短形式。

你不这么认为吗?爸爸妈妈爱我们,我们爱爸爸妈妈。这是一个幸福的家庭。

精选读者点评

这个“family=father and mother, i love you”的拆解灵气满满!后半段中英文混搭有点小乱,但孩子那份想把爱说清楚的劲儿,扑面而来。

四年级优秀英语作文-weekends

250字
主题:时间安排、健康生活、阅读习惯、兴趣爱好、自我提升

i have a busy weekend.i get up at 7:00.i eat breakfast at 7:30.i do morning e_ercises at 9:00.i often play table tennis.i like it and i am good at it,too.i am going shopping at 10:00.then,i am going to go home at 11:00.i am going to bookstore in the afternoon.i need to read some books to improve my kowledge.i think i have a good weekend.

我有一个忙碌的周末。我7:00起床。我在7:30吃早餐。我上午做早操。我经常打乒乓球。我喜欢它,我擅长它,太。我10点去购物。然后,我会在11点回家。我要去书店在下午。我需要读一些书来提高我的知识。我认为我有一个美好的周末。

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这周末安排得真满当!打乒乓那段最激情澎湃儿,动作和心情都写出了灵魂。就是“太”字是不是多打了?还有“我要去书店在下午”这句,读着有点拗口,试试调换下词序吧!

暑期难忘的一件事

300字
主题:家庭温暖、童年记忆、生活体验、感恩之心

an unforgettable thing in the summer vacation

it was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.

in the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.

in a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.

在暑假里难忘的事 这是一个阳光明媚的一天今天,当我得到了在早上,我决定去看我的爷爷和奶奶。我乘巴士中午到了那里,他们都很高兴见到我,我很高兴,太。 下午,我的爸爸叫我帮他给我送水,我很高兴看到这花儿在风中微笑着。 总之,今天是难忘的一天,因为我看到我的亲人和帮助的人。

精选读者点评

这“花儿在风中微笑着”灵气满满!孩子心里有光,笔下才冒得出这样的句子,比“开心”“高兴”表现力棒后头那句“帮助的人”有点飘,帮谁?怎么帮?补半句话就落地了。