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小学一年级英语作文

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小学一年级英语作文,语言简洁明了,符合低龄学习者表达习惯,人称与动词时态基本一致,体现初步语法意识。

小学一年级英语作文

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主题: 快乐、成长、友谊、学习、生活

小学一年级英语作文

hello, everybody! my name is michael. im a happy boy. because i laugh every day. i have a big family. there are three people in my family, my mother, my father and i.

my parents are managers and im a student. i study in grade seven, class eleven, dongzhou middle school. its a nice place. there are many students in my class. i have a good teacher, miss jiang.

my favorite lessons are english and maths. i like dogs very much. i have only one dog. its name is doudou. its a pretty dog.

oh, i forgot to tell you something about my old friend. his name is tad. his hobby is playing basketball. so he is taller and stronger than i. he has two big eyes and long hair. he is my best friend.

this is me, a happy boy!

精选读者点评

一年级能写这么多英文句子,真不简单!“i’m a happy boy”这句着实亮,像小太阳照进本子,只是“grade seven”得改哦,你才一年级呢,别偷偷跳级啦!

名师·深度剖析

作文类型:自我介绍、记叙文

【形容词】

happy、big、nice、good、favorite、pretty、taller、stronger

【好词好句】

1. "i'm a happy boy. because i laugh every day."

2. "it's a nice place."

3. "he is my best friend."

【修辞手法】

【文字校对】

• "im"应为"i'm"

• "its"应为"it's"

• "tad"应为"tad"

• "jiang"应为"jiang"

• "doudou"应为"doudou"

【写作亮点】

✓ 语言简洁明了,符合低龄学习者表达习惯

✓ 人称与动词时态基本一致,体现初步语法意识

✓ 通过对比("taller and stronger than i")展现基础比较级运用

✓ 结构清晰,从自身→家庭→学校→爱好→朋友逐层展开

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