周末的小学生英语作文

200字
主题:日常、快乐、友情、成长

today is sunday. i got up very early in the morning. after breakfast i went to the bookstore. i wanted to buy a book robinson crusoe. i looked for the book for quite some time but couldn’t find it. the shop assistant then came to help me. i was very glad that i got the book at last.

in the afternoon i called on my friend wang lin. he just came back from beijing. we talked a lot.

in the evening i watched an interesting play on tv. i enjoyed it very much. i had a wonderful time.

精选读者点评

用英语写日记,真勇敢!动词时态基本正确,“got up”“went”“looked”都用对了。但“robinson crusoe”书名要大写首字母哦,robinson crusoe。

暑假计划

200字
主题:自我提升、社会实践、亲情联结、文化体验

高中暑假打算英语作文:暑假计划

the following plan may reveal the intensity of my desire to travel, work and study in this vacation. in the first few days i want to climb mount hua shan with several friends to refresh ourselves. then i tend to visit relatives, senior school teachers and former classmates(老同学). besides, to find out the best ways to cultivate my abilities, i will find a part time job and conduct some social investigation.

精选读者点评

这个“refresh ourselves”用得表达真妙!爬华山后接见老师、老同学,像亲眼见,可“senior school teachers”建议改成“former teachers”,更自然些。

六年级作文校园访友

550字
主题:自然之美、生命活力、童真视角、四季感悟、诗意校园

上午一场秋雨,把焉了一个夏天的大地唤醒了。虽说已是初秋,但那小草也依然在雨后明媚的阳光下发出耀眼的光。怀着满怀的兴奋和愉快,拼命吸着雨后那清新的空气,我们要到校园里去访友去。

一进校园,一片翠绿跃进我的眼帘,定睛一看,哦,是小草弟弟呀,咦?都秋天了,小草弟弟你为什么还那么绿呀?你肯定是不舍的这美好的世界,一定还想向世人展示你那翠绿吧。

走进花园,一股泥土的清新迎面扑来,石榴大嫂,抱着她的孩子们――石榴笑盈盈的像一位热情好客的主人欢迎我们的到来,冬青大哥也在秋风下唱着歌欢迎我们,月季妹妹和玫瑰妹妹也跳起欢快、优美的舞蹈,园中的一切生物都在欢迎我们的到来。

音乐楼前边的石桥爷爷,饱经沧桑在您的另一端的音乐楼里,培养出了多少精英,我看到了一种古老、坚韧和无私。

你好!荷花姐姐,你开的花好美啊,白的像一白雪,粉的像粉霞,像诗中说的一样,朵朵“出淤泥而不染,着青泥而不娇”像传说中的仙女一般,婀娜多姿,亭亭玉立。你好,柳树姐姐――春天的使者,虽已过秋天,你还是那么美丽,那飘逸的长发,你探着身子想看看自己的倒影,那长发在秋风下随风飘摇,更美丽了。

小鱼弟弟,你藏什么呢?你总是那么胆小,一点声音你就害怕,是不是我们来得太突然,吓到你们了,打扰你们捉迷藏。

精选读者点评

小草弟弟、石榴大嫂、石桥爷爷……这满纸的“拟人全家福”,读着读着就忍不住笑出声!可转念一想:小草真在初秋还那么绿?冬青大哥真在秋风里唱歌?,童话感很足,但大地和植物,是不是也该有点自己的脾气和真相呢!