什么是快乐?

550字
主题:人生幸福、价值选择、精神成长、生命质量

many people believe that having a lot of money is the greatest happiness in life. but i don agree with them, because money is not everything. money can make us a true man.

很多人认为拥有很多钱是人生的幸福。但我不同意他们的想法,因为钱不是一切。金钱不能使我们成为一个真正的男人。

the way i see it, good health is much better than a lot of wealth. no matter how much money we have, we’ll not feel happy at all if we are in poor health. in order to be healthy, we must keep a positive attitude and have a good living habit.

在我看来,健康比财富更重要。如果不健康,不管有多少钱,我们都不会快乐。为了保持健康,我们必须要保持积极的态度,形成良好的生活习惯。

apart from good health, we must be diligent at work. as long as we work hard, we cannot just make a good living, but enrich our minds.

除了良好的健康,我们必须勤奋工作。只要我们努力工作,我们不仅可以过上好生活,而且还可以丰富思想。

additionally, we ought to give our helpful hands to others when they are in need. while helping others, we can own a good fame as well as get more social e_perience. its really a good way to kill two birds with one stone. only by doing so can we enjoy the happiest life.

此外,我们应该在别人需要帮助的时候帮助别人。在帮助他人的同时,我们可以拥有一个好名声,并获得更多的社会经验。这真是一举两得的好方法。只有这样我们才能享受幸福的生活。

精选读者点评

“钱不是一切”这句写得干脆!后头“金钱不能使我们成为一个真正的男人”有点突兀,“真正的人”是不是更顺?再翻翻词典,查查man和person的用法差别,小细节里藏着大讲究。

高三优秀英语作文翻译-校园安全 campus security

500字
主题:安全意识、集体协作、制度保障、心理影响、青少年成长

campus security does have a serious effect on our students’ life. for e_ample, theft and robbery can lead to financial difficulties and increase juvenile delinquency. in addition, if things are stolen all the time, there can be worries and horrors among students. more severely, they can distrust each other.

校园安全对我们学生生活有着很重要的影响。例如,盗窃和抢劫可能导致财政困难,还会增加青少年犯罪的几率。此外,如果东西总是被偷,在学生中会造成忧虑和恐惧。更严重的是,他们会互不信任。

therefore, we must take effective security measures to prevent these criminal facts. firstly, we students must work together to watch out any suspicious people on campus. still, the security division could hire more guards to respond promptly to accidents and other emergencies. thirdly, there could be more monitors in the public places. of course, we should be more careful with our properties and don’t leave them unwatched.

因此,我们必须采取有效的安全措施来防范这些犯罪行为。首先,我们们必须一起注意校园里的可疑人物。然而,保卫科可以雇佣更多的保安来及时应对事故和其他紧急情况。第三,可以在公共场所多装监视器。当然,我们应该更加地小心,不要让它们无人看管。

精选读者点评

校园安全这事写得挺实实在在!“忧虑和恐惧”“互不信任”这几个词戳中要害了,比光说“影响很大”有力多了。但是“财政困难”用得有点重,学生丢个水杯、饭卡,真到“财政”层面?换个更贴切的词试试?

高三学生英语命题作文

450字
主题:感恩、奋斗、牵挂、责任、青春、家国情怀

dear mother,

how’s everything going at home? i miss you and dad very much.

i am pretty good in school, so you and dad do not have to worry about me. i am a senior student in high school so that i am busy with my study all the time. i work hard to prepare the college entrance e_amination and i think i do a great job now. teachers care much about me and when i have problems, i always ask them. they encourage me very often, considering that i can go to the university i dream of. of course, i take good care of myself in life. i build good relationships with my friends and classmates, which makes me happy to be with them.

please take good care of yourselves at home. i love you.

truly yours,

christina

亲爱的妈妈:

家里一切都好吗?我很想念您和爸爸。

我在学校很好,所以你们不用担心我。我现在是高三的学生了,因此我一直忙于学习,努力准备高考。我想我现在的状态很好。老师们很关心我,我遇到问题的时候,都会积极地向老师提问。他们会常常鼓励我,对我也有信心,认为我能考上我理想中的学校。当然,在生活上我也能很好地照顾自己。我和朋友以及同学关系很好,和他们一起学习生活,我很快乐。

在家里请你和爸爸照顾好自己,我爱你们。

您亲爱的克里斯蒂娜

精选读者点评

这封信读着真暖!“i miss you and dad very much”后面那个句号,停得格外有分量,像轻轻攥了下拳头又松开。中英文段落并列排布,不是简单复制,是真在用两套语言想同一件事,难得。