my dream job我梦想的工作-英语作文

300字
主题:梦想、成长、责任、探索、奋斗、远方

my dream job is want to be a reporter. why i want to be a reporter? because i want to report all of the news to all people. i know that this job is a very great job, because i need to report the latest news day by day. i also want to write article to those newspaper or magazine. if i have been graduated high school, i want to study the university where is in beijing. if i have been graduated the university, i will work in a tv station and travelling around the world.

我梦想的工作是想成为一名记者。为什么我想成为一名记者?因为我想向所有人报告所有的消息。我知道这项工作是一项非常好的工作,因为我需要每天报告最新的新闻。我还想给报纸或杂志写文章。如果我已经毕业了,我想去北京的大学去学习。如果我已经毕业了,我将在一个电视台工作,环游世界。

精选读者点评

这个“reporter”写得挺激情澎湃儿!动词用得活,比如“report all of the news”“travelling around the world”,扑面而来。美中不足“want to be a reporter”和“is want to be”语法上绊了个小跟头,下回主谓搭配多瞄两眼哈~

my school我的学校

200字
主题:校园生活、同学情谊、成长体验、热爱母校

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my school

我的学校

my school is a nice and huge.i very like it.

我的学校是一个漂亮并大的地方.

its hvae five big teaching building.one playground ,its red and gueen,and two dining room.we

它有5个大教学楼.一个操场,它是红色和绿色的,和两个食堂.我们

have good teacher,we like she.at

有一个好老师,我们喜欢她.在

school i have many friend.we be close friends.we are very lucky.

学校我有许多朋友.我们非常要好.我们非常幸运.

do you like my school?

你喜欢我的学校么?

精选读者点评

句子像小火车,一节一节往外冒,但没连上轨道呀!“it's hvae”“we like she”“we be close friends”,这些地方悄悄改一改,读起来就顺溜多啦~

my weekend plan英语作文

300字
主题:时间安排、家庭生活、自主学习、日常活动

i am going to have a busy weekend ! on saturday , i`m going to clean my room and do homework. then , in the evening , i `m going to the supermaket with my mother . on saturday, i`m going to the bookstore on foot . i`m going to buy some books. then, i`m going to go home and read the new books. in the evening , i`m going to watch tv. that will be fun! what about you? what are you going to do on the weekend?

我将有一个繁忙的周末!上周六,我真的要打扫房间,做功课。那么,到了晚上,我`要去超市与我的母亲。上周六,我真的要去书店步行。我真的打算买一些书。然后,我真的要回家读书的新书。到了晚上,我真的要去看电视。这将是有趣! 那你呢?你有什么打算做在周末?

精选读者点评

这周末安排得真满当!超市、书店、看书、看电视,样样不落,只是“上周六”是不是该改成“这个周六”?还有“去超市与我的母亲”,读着有点拗口,试试“跟妈妈一起去超市”!