我的好朋友 my good friend

350字
主题:友谊、成长环境、学习态度、家庭关爱、双语表达

li hang is my goodfriend. she is my neighbor. she has a big family, because she lives with herparents and grand-parents. she is the only child in her family, so she getsmuch attention. all her families care much about her. she is easygoing. it maybecause of her big family. besides, she works hard in study. she does well in allsubjects, especially english. she says she likes english a lot. and she spendsmuch time in english learning. when we are free, we often play together. we arehappy to be friends.

李航是我的好朋友。她是我的邻居。她有一个大家庭,因为它和父母还有爷爷奶奶一起住。她是家里的独生子女,因此得到很多关注。她的家人都很关心她。她性格外向,这可能是因为她的大家庭。此外,她学习很努力,各科成绩都很优秀,特别是英语。她说她很喜欢英语,并且花大量的时间在学习英语上面。当有空的时候,我们经常一起玩。我们很高兴能够成为朋友。

精选读者点评

这个“because”用得有点急,后半句没说完就拐弯了;还有“all her families”,家人是不可数的哦,悄悄改掉,作文会更亮!

一年级英语作文-夏天 summer

250字
主题:季节特征、气候体验、夏日生活、自然规律

summer is the second season in the year. in the northern hemisphere, summer goes from june to august. summer is the hottest season in the year. sometimes, the temperature reaches 40°c. many people can not stand such hot weather. so they always stay indoors. at night, people would go out for a walk. swimming is the most popular sport in summer. it brings cool to people.

夏天是一年中的第二个季节。在北半球,夏天从六月持续到八月。夏天是一年中最热的季节。有时候温度高达40度,很多人无法忍受这样的热天气。所以他们经常待在家里不出门。晚上,人们会出门散步。游泳是夏天欢迎的运动,它给人们带来凉快。

精选读者点评

英文段里“summer is the second season”这句,和中文“夏天是一年中的第二个季节”完全对应,但英语母语者其实不说“second season”,会说“the season after spring”或直接说“summer”。小细节,改过来更地道。

去书店-一年级英语作文

300字
主题:课外阅读、同伴共读、城市文化空间、学习乐趣

today is saturday. two of my classmates and i go to the bookshop. its the biggest one in my city. there are plenty of books. we go to the cartoon-book zone. and then we stay there for a long time. we find our favorite books and read them there. its very quiet in the bookshop. i like it very much. reading at bookshop or libriary is very enjoyable. finally, we buy some books we like and then we go home together.

今天是星期六,我和我两个同学去书店。这是我所在城市的一个书店,里面有很多书。我们去了卡通专区,并在那待了很长一段时间。我们找到了我们最喜欢的书并在那里看。书店里很安静,我很喜欢。在书店或图书馆看书是一件很享受的事。最后,我们买了一些喜欢的书就一起回家了。

精选读者点评

句子挺顺溜,中英文混搭也自然,像平时说话。只是“it's the biggest one in my city”这句,要是改成“全市最大的那家”,中文味儿更足些~

一年级简单英语作文带翻译-快乐的一天

300字
主题:亲情、日常、成长、幸福、生活体验

today is sunday. i went shopping with my father and mother. first, we went to the department store. my mother bought a beautiful dress. my father bought a pair of shoes. i had a new t-shirt, too. i like it very much. they bought some books for me. and then, we went to the supermarket. we bought some meats, vegetables, drinks and snacks. at four o’clock, we went home by bus. what a happy day!

今天是星期天,我和爸爸妈妈去购物。首先,我们去了百货大楼。妈妈买了一条漂亮的裙子,爸爸买了一双鞋,我也买了一件新t恤。我很喜欢它。他们还给我买了一些书。接着,我们去了超市。我们买了一些肉,蔬菜,饮料和零食。四点钟的时候我们就坐公车回家了。多快乐的一天啊!

精选读者点评

句子挺顺溜,中英文混用也自然!可“meats”要改成“meat”哦,肉是不可数名词,别被s骗啦~

足球

200字
主题:意外、运动、受伤、自理、日常经历

on saturday, i played football with some boys on the playground.when i ran to control the ball, i bumped into another boy. we both fell to the ground. his feet hit my right ankle. there was something hard on his shoes and it made my ankle bleeding. so i put a band-aid here after returning home.

星期六,我跟一些男孩在操场踢足球。当我跑去控球时,我和另一个男孩撞到一块,倒在地上。他的脚踢到了我的右脚踝。他的鞋上有种坚硬的东西使我的脚踝流血了。所以回家后我就贴了块创可贴。

精选读者点评

脚踝出血还坚持踢球?真有你的!务必下次记得检查球鞋,硬物刮伤可比摔跤麻烦多了。创可贴照片没交,老师想看看“战利品”呢~

买东西 go shopping

250字
主题:亲情、责任、环保、成长、劳动、感恩

today my mom is busy, she asked me to go shopping for her. she gave me a shopping list and money. i went to the supermarket, bought a roll of toilet paper, a cake, a large bottle of milk, and two pairs of socks. i put them my schoolbag, because the plastic bag is bad for environment. i was very happy to go shopping, i am glad that i can help mom.

今天妈妈很忙,她让我去帮她买东西。她给了我一个购物清单和钱。我去到超时,买了一卷卫生纸,一个蛋糕,一大瓶牛奶,还有两双袜子。我用书包装它们,因为塑料袋对环境不好。我去买东西感到非常快乐,我很高兴能帮到妈妈。

精选读者点评

哎哟,用书包装购物袋这句条理清楚!环保意识悄悄冒头了,比“我帮妈妈很高兴”当真多了。下次试试把“超时”改成“超市”,别让它偷偷溜进作文里哈~

大火灾 a big fire

300字
主题:见义勇为、互助精神、应急意识、生命至上、社区温情

one night wu gang was lying in bed. then suddenly a loud cry for help woke him up. he looked out of the window and found his neighbour‘s house was on fire.

wu gang hurried to telephone 119 for help. then he ran out at once. he saw many people trying to put out the fire with water, and he quickly joined in. after some time, the firefighters arrived, the big fire was out at last. luckily, no house was destroyed by the fire and all the people were safe.

一天晚上,吴刚正躺在病床上。然后突然大声呼救声惊醒了他。他向窗外望去,发现他的邻居的房子着火了。

吴刚急忙致电119求助。然后他跑了出去一次。他看到很多人试图扑灭了火与水,他很快加入了。一段时间后,消防队员赶到,大火被挖出来了。幸运的是,没有房子被大火摧毁,所有的人都安全。

精选读者点评

写得挺顺!动作连贯,“躺—醒—看—打—跑—加入”,像放电影。略显“躺在病床上”和后文救火不太搭,是笔误?

中秋节的小学一年级英语作文

400字
主题:传统节日、家庭团聚、文化传承、月圆人圆

the mid-autumn festival

中秋节

the mid-autumn festival is one of the most important festivals in china. before the festival, many shops sell mooncakes, round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts or something sweet inside. on the mid-autumn festival, each family get together and have a big dinner.

中秋节是中国最重要的节日之一。节前许多商店都卖月饼,那是一种圆饼,里面有肉、蛋、果仁和其他甜的东西。在中秋节,各家各户都团聚在一起,吃一顿丰盛的晚饭。

in the evening we eat mooncakes and all kinds of fruit, such as apples, pears, grapes and watermelons. we look up at the sky, and enjoy the begger and brighter moon. our grandparents will tell us the story of chang‘e again.

晚上我们吃月饼和各种水果,如:苹果、梨、葡萄和西瓜。我们仰望天空,欣赏那一轮明月。爷爷奶奶又要给我们讲起嫦娥的故事了。

词_析:

important:重要的

mooncake:月饼

nut:坚果

grape:葡萄

grandparents:爷爷奶奶,外公外婆

精选读者点评

“爷爷奶奶又要给我们讲起嫦娥的故事了”,这句真好!“又要”两个字,把年年如此的温情和期待全带出来了,像小手轻轻一推,门后就是暖光。再找找,还有没有这样悄悄有味道的词?

小学一年级英语作文带翻译-我喜欢这节课

250字
主题:课堂变革、兴趣驱动、师生互动、学科魅力、认知转变

today, i have the geography class. i am afraid of the geography class, because i have the bad memory and can’t remember the places. but in this class, our teacher does something different, she shows us many pictures and tells us many interesting things about her trips. i listen to her carefully. i like this lesson, it is vivid and i can learn many things about geography.

今天,我有地理课。我害怕地理课,因为我记忆力不好,无法记住地点。但是在这节课上,我们的老师做了点不同的事情,她给我们展示了很多图片,告诉我们很多有关她旅游的趣事。我听得很认真。我很喜欢这节课,是如此的生动,我也学到了有关地理的很多知识。

精选读者点评

开头中英混用有点跳,但后半段写老师讲课时眼睛亮起来了,这种真实感比“生动”二字有力多啦!

打扫

350字
主题:家庭责任、学习能力、亲子互动、生活技能、自我肯定

today is saturday. i stay at home with my parents. my mother said that today we should do some cleanings. i agreed and i would like to help. i cleaned the windows. it was really a tough job. now matter how hard i tried, they seemed dirty all the same. therefore, i asked for help. my mother teached me a method to clean the windows. it realy worked. and then i cleaned the floor. it was much easier than cleaning the windows. i did it in a short time. my parents praised me.

今天星期天,我和爸妈呆在家里。妈妈说我们应该打扫下房间了,我也有同感并且加入一起帮忙。我负责清洗窗户,这真是一件累活,不管我擦得怎么努力,窗户看上去还是那么脏。我不得不向妈妈求助,妈妈教我一个清洗窗户的方法,结果真凑效了。然后我又清洗了地板,这比擦窗户容易多了,我很快就干完了。爸妈都表扬了我。

精选读者点评

窗户擦得真费劲啊!但你没放弃,还主动请教妈妈,这比“擦干净”更亮!下次试试把“teached”改成“taught”,小细节也闪着光。

一个快乐的女孩

400字
主题:自我认知、童年生活、亲情友情、语言学习

a happy girl 一个快乐的女孩

im a happy girl.my english name is kitty.are you happy? im very happy.i have a good friend.her name is cheng _in ting.she has a pair of big eyes.i like her.

我是一个快乐的女孩,我的英文名字叫kitty。你快乐吗?我很快乐!我有一个好朋友,他叫陈欣。她又一双大大的眼睛,我喜欢她。

i like english.my birthday is in november.im a good girl.im ten years old.im in class seven grade one.my teachers name is yao hui feng.she is a good teacher!i like her.

我喜欢英语。我的生日在11月份。我是个好女孩,十岁。我在一年级七班。我的老师叫姚慧芬。她是个好老师,我喜欢她。

what color do you like? i like pink and perple.i want a rabbit for my birthday.i like to eat hambuger.i like to go to shool.

你喜欢什么颜色?我喜欢粉红色和紫色。我想要个兔子作为我的生日礼物。我喜欢吃汉堡。我喜欢上学。

i have a good mother.i have a good father.

我有一位好妈妈,我有一位好爸爸。

oh,no!im hugry! mumy! im hugry!

噢!不,我饿了。“妈妈!我饿了!”

good bye!再见!

精选读者点评

kitty同学,你写自己“快乐”写了五次,真像只叽叽喳喳的小麻雀!英文句子虽短,但敢写、敢用词,连“perple”都拼出来了,错得挺有勇气。可“hugry”“mumy”这种漏字母的,下次抄三遍,手熟了就记住了。

my parents and i

400字
主题:亲情、成长、日常、幸福、邻里、学习

i am a chinese girl and i study in wuyilu primary school. i get up very early in the morning and then help my mother cook breakfast. after breakfast, i walk to school, because its not far from my house.

i have many friends at school. we often help each other with our lessons.my mother is forty-si_ years old, and she works in meet all supermarket. its near my school. the supermarket is very big, and it sells all kinds of things. the students in my school often buy school things there.

my father is two years younger than my mother. he is in the same supermarket, but he doesn sell things. hes a driver.

my family is a happy one.

我是一个中国女孩,我在五一路小学学习。我早上很早就起床,然后帮妈妈做早餐。早餐后,我步行去学校,因为它离我家不远。我在学校有很多朋友。我们经常互相帮助与我们的教训。我妈妈是46岁,她在满足所有超市工作。它在我的学校附近。超市很大,卖各种各样的东西。我的学校的学生经常有买学习用具。我爸爸比我妈妈年轻两岁。他是在同一个超市,但他不卖东西。他是一个司机。我的家庭是一个快乐的人。

精选读者点评

标点用得挺自觉!但“meet all supermarket”这名字有点怪,是“meihe”还是“mall”?还有“满足所有超市”,翻译腔太重啦,下次试试直接写中文名。

我喜欢玩具

150字
主题:童年记忆、亲子陪伴、启蒙教育、快乐成长

我喜欢玩具(i like toys)

i like toys i like toys very much. there are all kinds of toys in my home. these toys are bought by my father and my mother. i grew up with these toys. it not only brings me happiness, but also inspires my intelligence.

我非常喜欢玩具,在我的家里有各种各样的玩具,它们是妈妈、爸爸买给我的。我是玩着这些玩具长大的,它带给了我快乐,也开发了我的智慧

精选读者点评

英文句子重复啰嗦,像没想好就往下写;“it not only brings…”这句主语错了哦,玩具是复数,该用they!

我可爱的弟弟

250字
主题:手足情、童年记忆、情感变化、家庭温暖

there are are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my brother and i. my brother is two years older than me, i sometimes hate him and sometimes like him. my brother will take away my things without asking me, then i hate him, but he will protect me when i am teased by others, then i love him so much. my brother is good guy.

我的家里有四个人,我的爸爸,我的妈妈,我的兄弟和我。我的兄弟比我大两岁,有时候我讨厌他,有时候我喜欢他。我的兄弟会没问我就拿走我的东西,我会恨他,但是当我被人嘲笑的时候,他又会保护我,我又很爱他。我的兄弟是个好人。

精选读者点评

“my brother is good guy”这句语法小尾巴揪一下哈~“a good guy”才地道!后文“保护我”写得真画面感十足感,拳头攥紧、挡在你前面的样子我都看见啦!

一年级英语作文带翻译-self introduction 自我介绍

200字
主题:成长、友谊、校园生活、语言学习

hello! my name is martin. i am a boy. i am 9 years old. i am in class 8, grade 3. i am tall and thin.

i like playing soccer ball and basketball. i like to eat hot dogs and hamburgers,

i am friendly. i have many friends. do you want to make friends with me?

你好!我的名字是马丁。我是一个男孩。我9岁。我在课堂上三年级。我又高又瘦。

我喜欢踢足球和篮球。我喜欢吃热狗和汉堡包,

我是友好的。我有很多朋友。你想和我交朋友吗?

精选读者点评

马丁同学,中英文对照写得真清楚!“又高又瘦”比“tall and thin”更带画面感,下次试试把“课堂上三年级”改成“三年级八班”?这样老师一眼就看懂啦~

我自己my self

350字
主题:成长、热爱、校园、家庭、个性、幸福

hello! my chinese name is tang jing and my english name is sally.im a happy girl. im 11 years old. march 18th is my birthday.

our school is very nice.im in class 5 ,grade 4.im go to school by bike. i have many teachers. i love them.

i have many habbies.i like swimming,reading and listening to music.my favourite food is rice, my favourite fruit is orange and my favourite colour is red. the dog is my favourite animal.why? because dog are very lovely!

this is me! a happy and lovely girl!

您好我的中文名字叫唐静,我的英文名字叫仙,我是一个快乐的女孩。我11岁。三月十八日是我的生日。

我们学校很好,我在5年级4班,我是骑自行车上学的。我有很多老师。我爱他们。

我有很多的业余爱好。我喜欢游泳,阅读和听音乐最喜欢的食物是米饭,我最喜欢的水果是橘子,我最喜欢的颜色是红色的。狗是我最喜欢的动物。为什么?因为狗非常可爱!

这是我!一个快乐可爱的女孩!

精选读者点评

标点太“省”啦!英文句号后空一格,中文逗号句号占一格,还有“仙”这个英文名得再想想~

我的猫咪my pet

300字
主题:喜爱、陪伴、观察、童年、宠物、亲情

in my family, you can see a cat, the cat is very beautiful.now let me draw it for you. he has got white hair and two big eyes, they are blue and bright. he has got four short legs and his ears are small, his tail is long. i finish it now. how lovely!

after school, i play with him first, he is my best friend. i like him very much!

oh, do you want to know his name? i’d like to tell you, his name is “mimi”.

在我的家里,你可以看见一只猫,这只猫很漂亮,现在让我来给你画吧。他有一双大眼睛,一双大眼睛,一双蓝色的,明亮的。他有四个短腿,他的耳朵很小,尾巴很长。我现在完成它。多么可爱!

放学后,我第一次和他玩,他是我的朋友。我非常喜欢他!

哦,你想知道他的名字吗?我想告诉你,他的名字叫“咪咪”。

精选读者点评

猫的眼睛“蓝得像晴天洗过的玻璃珠”,这个比喻我划了三道线!后文要是能把“玩”写成“他追着我扔的纸团满屋打滚,尾巴翘成问号”,就更活啦~

一年级简单英语作文带翻译-我

200字
主题:成长、友谊、语言学习、校园生活

。更多内容请看本站写作翻译频道。

something about me

关于我

my name is zhang hong.i am a chinese student.i am at _inyi primary school.i am in class three,grade one.i am 11.i have a friend at school.his name is tang haonan.we like english very much.who is your good friend?

我的名字是张洪.我是中国的学生.我是在信义小学上学.我我在一年级三班.我的学号是11.我在学校有一个好朋友.他叫唐浩楠.我们非常喜欢英语。谁是你的好朋友?

精选读者点评

张洪同学,英语句子写得挺顺溜,but“i am at _inyi primary school”这里拼音漏了个“x”,是xinyi吧?还有“学号是11”,这应该是学号11号,还是年龄11岁?中文里写混啦,下次标清楚哈!

足球之乐

350字
主题:劳逸结合、身心发展、教育观念、课外活动、成长需求

afrer a whole days hard studing, i fell very tierd and want to go out to play football for fan. but my teachers always say that it takes too much time and can make us away from studing.so they usually don let us play football.

while teachers reject it, we still want to have a play. i think the playing after school can be a redressal and make our bodies healthier. at the same time, temperate e_ercise won tamper with our studies.

according to that, i think playing football after school have more advantages than disadvantages.

一整天的艰苦学习之后,我非常累,想要出去玩足球的球迷。但我的老师们总是说,这需要太多的时间,可以使我们远离学习,所以他们通常不让我们踢足球。

当老师拒绝它的时候,我们仍然想玩一个游戏。放学后我想玩可以补救措施,使我们的身体更健康。在同一时间,温和的运动不会干扰我们的研究。

根据这一想法,我认为在放学后踢足球比坏处更为优势。

精选读者点评

累成狗还惦记踢球?这股子劲儿真可爱!可“fan”写成“football for fan”有点迷,是想说“fun”吧?下回查查词典哈~