我的房子作文

350字
主题:家庭、亲情、成长、生活、空间、爱

i have a nice house. it is big and tidy. in my house, there are three bedrooms, a big living room, a study, a bathroom and a kitchen. my grandparents often stay in the living room. they like to watch tv there. my father often reads in the study. he likes reading newspaper and history books. my mother usually stays in the kitchen. she always cooks delicious food for us. i study in my bedroom. there are many books in it. i like reading stories.

我有一个漂亮的房子。这是大和整洁。在我的房子,有三间卧室,一个客厅,一个书房,一间浴室和一间厨房。我的祖父母经常呆在客厅里。他们喜欢在那里看电视。我父亲经常读的研究。他很喜欢看报纸和历史书。我的妈妈通常呆在厨房里。她总是为我们做可口的饭菜。我在我的卧室里的研究。有很多书。我喜欢读故事。

this is my house. i love it very much!

这是我的房子。我非常喜欢它。

精选读者点评

“study”当“书房”写对了,可后面又写成“读的研究”,哎哟,中英文混搭得挺有创意啊!再翻翻词典,把动词和名词分清楚哈~

七年级英语作文带翻译

250字
主题:亲情、节日、团聚、成长、温馨、传统

today is my grandpas birthday. our family went back to my grandpas home in the morning. we got together to have a big family dinner to celebrate his birthady. we bought a big birthday cake and gave some presents to my grandpa.

in the afternoon, we went to the park to go boating. we had a good time. my grandpa had a nice time on his birthday.

今天是爷爷的生日,我们全家早晨回到爷爷家。我们举行了大型家庭聚会来庆祝爷爷的生日。我们买了一个大生日蛋糕,并且送给爷爷一些礼物。

下午我们去公园划船。我们玩得很开心,爷爷过了一个愉快的生日。

精选读者点评

句子太“平”啦!比如“我们买了蛋糕”,试试改成“蛋糕盒刚打开,奶油香就扑到鼻尖上”?多写点鼻子眼睛耳朵尝到的、摸到的,爷爷的皱纹、蛋糕的甜味、船桨划水的声音……写出了灵魂才动人啊!

保护动物

300字
主题:关爱动物、文明游览、成长感悟、环保意识

6月23日星期日睛

今天是个风和日丽的好天,我和同学贺松去了北京动物园。动物们是那么可爱,大家都非常喜欢它们。一只熊挥动着胳膊向人们要吃的,一个游客就投进去了什么东西。我想都没想就走过去说:“不要那样做。你的做法对它们没好处。如果真的喜欢它们,就应该爱护它们。”他的脸红了,并且回答说他不会再那么做了。

june 23rd sunday sunny

it was a fine day today and the sun was bright. i visited beijing zoo with my classmate, he song. the animals were so interesting that all the people loved them. when a bear asked for some food by waving its ann, a visitor threw something to it. at once i went up to him and said without thinking,don do that. its bad for it. if you really love them, take good care of them. his face turned red and answered he wouldn do that again.

精选读者点评

“我想都没想就走过去说”,这句亮点突出!孩子心里有杆秤,比大人还稳。后半段英文里“without thinking”翻得准,但中文写“脱口而出”更活。再读两遍,试试把熊挥胳膊那句加点声音?比如“啪嗒啪嗒拍着前掌”呢!

我的朋友 my best friend

400字
主题:真挚友谊、同伴成长、学科热爱、彼此支持

i make many friends in school. but i have only one best friend. her name is susan. she is my classmate, too. susan is a beautiful and lovely girl. she is taller than me. we often stay together. people say we like sisters. actually, i regard her as my sister. she works very hard on her study. we often study together and help each other. her favorite subject is math. she thinks math is interesting and challengeable. she is good at math and our math teacher likes her very much. besides, she is popular in my class, because she is outgoing and attractive.

我在学校有很多朋友,但的朋友只有一个,她的 名字叫苏珊。她也是我的同班同学。苏珊是一个漂亮又可爱的女孩子,她比我要高一些。我们经常待在一起,有人说我们亲如姐妹。实际上,我真的把她当作自己的 亲姐妹。她学习很努力,我们经常在一起做功课,互相帮助。她最喜欢数学,因为她觉得做算术题很有趣也很有挑战性。她的数学学得很好,我们的数学老师非常喜 欢她。此外,她在我们班上也很受欢迎,因为她很活泼,很吸引人。

精选读者点评

苏珊“challengeable”写错了,是challenging哦!还有“but i have only one best friend”前面句号别丢~

姐姐的婚礼

400字
主题:家庭温暖、人生仪式、爱与责任、代际情感

today is my sister’s wedding. i take part in it with my parents. we get to the hotel at about 6:00 p.m.. my sister and her husband is waiting for the guests in front of the lobby. she is so beautiful today that i have never seen. of course her husband is handsome, too. i met him before, and he is so kind to me. the ceremony starts at 7:00 p.m.. they e_change their rings and vows and thank for their parents. and then we enjoy the wedding feast. the dishes are so delicious that i eat too much. i show my best wishes to them, hoping their love last forever and a happy life.

今天,我和爸爸妈妈参加了一个姐姐的婚礼。我们下 午六点就到酒店了,姐姐和她的丈夫在酒店门口迎宾。姐姐今天很美,她的丈夫也很帅。我们以前见过面,他对我很好。仪式七点钟开始,他们在仪式上交换了戒指 和誓言,并感谢父母的养育之恩。接着酒席就开始了。那些菜都很好吃,以致我吃得太饱了。我祝姐姐和她的丈夫百年好合,生活美满幸福。

精选读者点评

姐姐穿婚纱的样子,你写得文意清晰!“她今天很美,我从没见过”,这句比“美若天仙”还让人心头一颤。后面“吃得太饱”也尤其真,像小孩攥着糖纸舍不得扔。

七年级英语作文带翻译-爱的力量 the power of love

450字
主题:情感力量、人际联结、心灵疗愈、人性温暖、生命韧性

we always say that love has great power to fi_ anything. but what power does love have and how it works? in my opinion, love is the firmest connection between people. the relationship between people may be connected due to various reasons, but love helps people understand and accept each other. so people can keep their relationship much longer. besides, love can heal a wounded heart. sometimes, we may be hurt by others or we may suffer some une_pected accidents. they of course will depress us. but love given by others can pull us out of depression. because they love us, they will be around us and help us.

我们常说爱有巨大的力量可以弥补任何东西,但是爱 到底有什么力量?它是怎样给我们力量的呢?我认为,爱是维系人与人之间的关系最牢固的纽带。人与人之间的关系可能会因为种种原因而形成,但是能让人们相互 理解、相互接受,所以关系能维系得更久。另外,爱能治愈一颗受伤的心。有的时候,我们肯能会被他人伤害,或是遭遇到意想不到的灾祸,这都会使我们感到沮 丧,但是他人给予的爱却能把我们脱离沮丧,因为他们爱我们,所以他们会相伴左右,向我们伸出援手。

精选读者点评

“fi_ anything”“une_pected”,这两个空,你心里明明知道是fix和unexpected,却没写全,太可惜啦!下回写完记得回头扫一眼拼写哈~

七年级英语作文带翻译-my friend and me

200字
主题:成长记录、身份认同、语言学习、家乡情怀

my friend and me

my name is huang hongyan. hongyan is my given name and huang is my family name.i have a pair of big eyes, and a big nose, cherry small mouth.im 14 years old. im from guizhou.

now im a student in ciass two,grade seven.

我的朋友和我

我的名字是黄红艳。红岩是我的名字和黄是我的姓。我有一双大眼睛,和一个大鼻子,樱桃小嘴。我14岁了。我来自贵州。

现在我是一个七年级二班的学生。

精选读者点评

名字写成“红岩”啦,课本里“红艳”才对哦~还有“ciass”拼错了,擦掉重写哈!

和谐的宿舍生活

550字
主题:人际和谐、集体生活、自我修养、大学适应

dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life. but sometimes the harmony in the dormitory will be disturbed in tne wav or another.

as is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members. on the >;;ne hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study. on the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together.

there are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. firsdy, you have to evaluate your life ityle and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. secondly, when an annoying situation arises, you‘ll just have to earn to tolerate each other and co-e_ist. thirdly, you‘ll have to share with each other and make good friends. in conclusion, ve should try our best to dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.

宿舍生活是大学生活不可或缺的一部分。但有时在宿舍的和谐将wav或另一个不安的。

众所周知,和谐的宿舍生活对大学生来说很重要,对所有成员都有好处。在一方面,我们可以好好休息,把我们的心投入学习。另一方面,我们将有一个良好的心情和享受在一起。

创建和维持和谐宿舍生活的几种方法。首先,你必须评估你的生活ityle和试图摆脱你的坏习惯,如果有任何。第二,当一个恼人的情况出现时,你只需要一个能容忍对方和并存。第三,你必须与别人分享,做好朋友。总之,我应该尽我们的努力去宿舍生活,为了良好的学习和良好的生活。

精选读者点评

宿舍生活写得挺着实!“好好休息”“享受在一起”这些话,读着就让人想起自己大一时的上下铺,美中不足第二段两个“一方面”后面都缺主语,读着有点飘,顺手补一个?

把祖母送进医院

250字
主题:祖孙情、儿童担当、家庭温暖、应急意识、代际互助

peter is only five (years old). he lives with his grandma. one day his grandma had a cold. peter was so worried that he began to cry. then he had an idea. he found his parents telephone number and gave them a call. when his parents heard the news, they hurried back home and took peters grandma to the hospital.

彼得只有五岁。他和奶奶一起住。有一天,他奶奶感冒了。彼得很着急,他开始哭泣。然后他有了一个主意。他找到了他父母的电话号码,给他们打个电话。当他的父母听到这个消息,他们匆忙赶回家,带着彼得奶奶去医院。

精选读者点评

五岁娃打电话叫爸妈救奶奶,这细节太真了!连“开始哭泣”都写得让人鼻子发酸,比好多成年人都懂什么叫“急中生智”。

动物的初一英语作文

550字
主题:快乐时光、家庭陪伴、好奇探索、童年体验

关于动物的初一英语作文

on sunday morning, my parents took me to the zoo. we din go there for a long time.

last week, my classmates told me that the zoo added some funny entertainment facilities. i was very curious. so, i asked my parents to took me there and they promised to. we got there at 9 oclock. there were many people. most of them were parents and children.

we first went to see the animal. i like parrots most. and then we saw the animal shows. elephants, tigers, lions and monkeys did wonderful shows for us. people were happy, especially the children.

after that, we went to e_perienced the entertainment facilities. my mum was too scared to be with us. so, only my dad and i played. it was so e_citing, but i was a little dizzy. however, i was very happy.

it was a great day.

星期天早上,我父母带我去动物园。我们很久没去那里了。

上周,我同学告诉我动物园新增了一些好玩的娱乐设施。我很好奇,所以我叫我妈妈带我去,而且她答应了。我们9点就到那了。那人很多,大部分是家长和孩子。

我们首先去观看动物。我最喜欢鹦鹉。接着我们看了动物表演。大象,老虎,狮子和猴子给我们表演了精彩的节目。人们都很高兴,特别是小孩子。

之后,我们去体验了娱乐设施。我妈妈很怕,不敢跟我们一起。所以,只有我和爸爸玩。它很刺激,但是我有一点点头晕。但是,我还是很开心。

这真是很棒的一天。

精选读者点评

鹦鹉那段写得活!“我最喜欢鹦鹉”后面要是加一句它怎么叫、怎么歪头,就更像你亲眼看见的了。

七年级英语作文带翻译-how to succeed?

350字
主题:成功之道、品格修养、成长动力、自我塑造

everybody is eager to be a successful person in his life. but not all people can always succeed. people who are lazy and want to succeed only by daydreaming can hardly succeed. a successful person must possess some good characters, such as diligence, strong will, perseverance, etc. he must keep on learning and make himself a capable person. sometimes he should be more fle_ible to change with the situations. all in all, serf-confidence is thefirst step on the road to success. and hard work is the key element of success.

每个人都渴望成为一个成功的人。但并不是所有的人都能成功。懒惰和想要成功的人,只有靠做白日梦是不可能成功的。一个成功的人必须具备一些良好的品格,如勤奋、坚强、毅力等。他必须不断地学习,使自己成为一个有能力的人。有时他更灵活地改变情况。总之,自信是走向成功的第一步。而努力工作是成功的关键要素。

精选读者点评

这篇作文中英文混排有点十分呀!“fle_ible”漏了个x,还有“serf-confidence”应该是“self-”吧?标点也多是英文句点,中文段落里看着有点跳。今后把“自信是第一步”“努力是关键”这两句拎出来,写得挺稳的。

a duty report

300字
主题:热爱英语、勤奋学习、语言重要性、校园生活

good morning, dear teacher and classmates. i’m billy. today is sunday. it’s november 27th. it’s very fine.

i like english very much. do you like english? i think english is very important, because many people speak english every day. we have seven english lessons every week. in english, listening, speaking, reading, writing are important. we should work hard at them. i believe if you study hard, you will be good at english. thank you.

早上好,亲爱的老师和同学。我是比利。 今天是星期天。这是11月27日。这是非常精细的。

我非常喜欢英语。 你喜欢英语吗?我认为英语是很重要的,因为很多人每天都会说英语。我们有充分的一周七天英语课。在英语中,听,说,读,写是很重要的。我们应该在他们的努力工作。我相信,如果你努力学习,你将擅长英语。 谢谢。

精选读者点评

billy这封英文自我介绍,开头问候尤为有礼貌!“good morning, dear teacher and classmates”读起来像站在讲台前微微鞠躬的样子。值得注意的是“it’s very fine”后面那句中文翻译“这是很是精细的”,“精细”是不是想写“晴朗”?下次查查词典,这个小错改掉就更棒啦!

初一英语作文带翻译-i have a happy family

200字
主题:家庭生活、亲情温暖、日常陪伴、平凡幸福

hello, everyone! i’m cherry. here is a picture of my family. in this photo, i’m reading the newspaper, my father likes soccer, and he is watching a soccer game on tv. it is very interesting, he thinks. my mother is very kind, and she is cooking dinner for my family. i have a happy family.

大家好!我是樱桃。这里是我家的照片。在这张照片中,我看报纸,我父亲喜欢足球,他正在看足球比赛在电视上。这是很有意思的,他认为。我妈妈是个非常善良的,她在做晚饭给我的家人。我有一个幸福的家庭。

精选读者点评

这句“他正在看足球比赛在电视上”读着拗口,试试把“在电视上”挪到前面哦!

初一学生简单英语作文范文带翻译-my favorite movies

300字
主题:兴趣爱好、偶像崇拜、中西文化、语言学习

hello,boys and girls!my name is jenny.i‘m 14 years old.my birthday is on october 31st.i‘m a movie fan.i like action movie and science movie. my favorite actor is jackie chan.he is a great action actor. he has many movies .

for e_ample.the around the world is 80 days,rob-b-hood and rush hour.these movies are very e_citing. i really like rob-b-hood very much,because they are e_citing.

i like action movie movies very much.

你好,男孩和女孩!我的名字是珍妮,我14岁,我的生日是十月三十一日,我是一个电影迷,我喜欢动作片和科幻片。我最喜欢的演员是成龙,他是一个伟大的动作演员。他有许多电影。

例如。周围的世界是80天,宝贝计划和高峰。这些电影是非常令人兴奋的。我真的很喜欢宝贝计划,因为他们是令人兴奋的。

我非常喜欢动作片电影。

精选读者点评

珍妮同学,英文段落里“e_ample”“e_citing”漏了字母,中文部分“宝贝计划”和英文“rob-b-hood”对不上哦,查查资料,下次写清楚名字,老师才看得懂你多爱看!

保护我们的眼睛

400字
主题:爱眼护眼、健康习惯、视觉珍视

how to protect our eyes .our eyes is very important.we can see many beautiful things with our eyes.without eyes the life will get dark.so we must protect our eyes.

to protect our eyes,first we shouldn read books or magazines too long.we can stop for a while to let our eyes have a rest.during these time,we can enjoy the hills,flowers,trees.then wo shouldn read books under the strong lights or weak lights.its bad for our eyes.at last,we should keep doing the eye e_ercise.

lets peotect our eyes,see more beautiful things.

我们的眼睛是非常重要的,我们可以用我们的眼睛看很多美好的东西,没有眼睛,生活就会变得黑暗,所以我们必须保护我们的眼睛。

来保护我们的眼睛,我们首先应该没读过书或杂志太长。我们可以停止一段时间,让我们的眼睛有一个休息。在这段时间,我们可以享受的山丘,鲜花,然后窝不应该阅读的书籍在强光或弱光。它的坏我们的眼睛。在最后,我们应该继续做眼部运动。

让我们保护我们的眼睛,看到更美的东西。

精选读者点评

眼睛是心灵的窗户,这句老话你用得挺巧!只是“our eyes is”要改成“are”,小错误别放过哦~

我的家庭 my family

200字
主题:亲情、温暖、和睦、成长

my family

i have a happy family. there are my father, my mother, my brother and i.

my father works a long way from home. and my mother is a housewife. my brother is a student who studies in the school.

in a word, my family is full of happiness.

我的家庭

我有一个幸福的家庭。有我的父亲,我的母亲,我的弟弟和我。

我父亲离家很远。我的母亲是一位家庭主妇。我弟弟是一个在学校学习的学生。

一句话,我的家庭充满了幸福。

精选读者点评

句子太“平”啦!像流水账,读不出温度。试试把“父亲离家很远”改成“爸爸的电话总在晚饭后响起,声音沙沙的”,是不是就活了呀!

初一年级环保的英语作文

600字
主题:环境保护、人类责任、生态意识、家园守护、可持续发展

我们大家应该都知道保护环境人人有责!

we should all know that environmental protection is everyones responsibility!

我们生活的地球是很脆弱的,地球上的自然资源也是有限的,如果我们从现在开始保护环境和地球的话,我们生活的地球一定会变的更美好!

the earth on which we live is very fragile, the earths natural resources are limited, if we start from now on the protection of the environment and the earth, the earth we live will be more beautiful!

保护环境从我做起从我们大家身边的小事做起吧!

environmental protection starts from me to start from the us side of the little things!

保护环境就是保护地球还是间接的保护我们人类自己,如果环境被破坏的话,那么我们赖以生存的家园就很有可能被沙漠吞噬 !

protecting the environment is to protect the earth or indirectly to protect ourselves, if the environment is destroyed, then the survival of our home will likely be the desert!

我在这里向全世界的人们呼吁 保护环境人人有责 ! 如果我们还在这样的破坏环境的话,我们的家园即将遭到崩溃 。 那时我们便没有去处了, 保护环境人人有责 , 从小事开始作起吧,

im here to protect the environment is everyones duty to the people of the whole world! if the damage to the environment we are such a case, our home is about to be apart. at that time we had no place to go, protect environment is everyones responsibility, from small start,

如我们不乱扔垃圾, 随地吐痰等。

if we do not littering, spitting etc..

保护环境人人有责!

protect environment is everyones responsibility!

精选读者点评

这个“保护环境人人有责”写了五遍,像小喇叭循环播放~后半段英文拼写和标点有点乱,比如“spitting etc。”多了一个点,“apart”该是“fall apart”,下次写完自己轻声读一遍,耳朵会帮你揪出不少小尾巴。

私家车的好处

450字
主题:交通发展、生活改善、社会变迁、出行自由

the advantages of private cars

私家车的好处

many years ago, the private car is e_pensive, there are not so many people can afford it. since our country has joined wto, the economy develops fast, more and more people have money to buy what they want, now as people’s life standard has improved in general, private car is no longer belongs to the rich people, most families can afford. owning the private cars has many advantages, first, people can save time. they can drive their cars to go where they want directly, they don’t have to waste to time to wait for the bus. second, it is much convenient for people, they can drive their cars to go travel, enjoying the beautiful scenery all the way.

很多年以前,私家车是很贵的,并没有多少人能够买得起。自从我们国家加入了wto, 经济快速发展,越来越多的人有钱去买他们想要的,如今随着人们生活水平整体的提高,私家车不再仅仅属于富人,大部分家庭可以买得起。拥有私家车有很多好处,第一,人们可以节省时间。他们可以驾着自己的车直接去想要去的地方,不必花费时间来等公车。第二,对于人们来说也很方便,他们可以驾着车子去旅游,享受沿途美丽的风景。

精选读者点评

“wto”写成小写,还漏了“the”,但后半段中文写得真溜!“驾着车子去旅游”这句画面立体饱满像亲眼看见车窗掠过油菜花田。下次英文时态别总用is/are,试试has developed/have bought。

我和我的朋友me and my friend

250字
主题:友谊、成长、兴趣、交流、青春

hello everyone! my name is zhang li, i am twelve years old, and i am in class four, grade one. i like playing football,running, swimming and drawing. yang hua is my friend, he is my desk mate. he istaller than me. we have the same hobbies. we often play football or go swimmingtogether after school. this is me and my friend. we would like to be yourfriends too.

大家好!我的名字叫张力,我12岁了,我在初一班。我喜欢踢足球、跑步、游泳和素描。杨华是我的朋友,他是我的同桌。他比我高。我们有相同的爱好。我们放学后经常在一起踢足球。这就是我和我的朋友。我们很乐意也成为你们的朋友。

精选读者点评

张力同学,英语段落里“class four, grade one”得改成“class four, grade seven”啦,初一不是一年级哦!中文部分“素描”写得得当,比“画画”更见功底。

myself

200字
主题:成长、自信、责任、才艺、集体、学习

myself

hello, everyone.

大家好!

my name is zhu wei_in。i am from class 4, grade 6,_inbeijiang primary school.

我是朱炜欣。我是新北江小学六年级4班的学生。

im doing well in my study, besides im the monitor of my class and i get on well with my classmates.

我学习成绩优秀,是班上的班长,并且我和同学们相处很融洽。

im a happy and talented girl. im good at penmanship and many of my calligraphy have won prizes.

我是一个开朗又多才多艺的女孩,书法是我最擅长的,曾多次获奖。

精选读者点评

中英文混搭得挺有个性!话说回来“zhu wei_in”这下划线是手滑?还有“inbeijiang”少了个空格哦~下次写完自己读一遍,耳朵会帮你揪出小毛病!

我的自我介绍my self-introduction

250字
主题:成长、友谊、才艺、校园生活、个性表达

my name is yang yang, i am thirteen years old. i am a student from class 3, grade 2. i am very friendly and easy-going. i like to help others. all my friends and classmates like me very much. i like playing basketball and volley ball. i often play with my classmates after school. i am good at singing, i won the first prize in the singing match last year. id like to be a friend of you, how about you?

我的名字叫杨洋,我13岁。我来自二年级3班。我很友善也很随和。我喜欢帮助别人。我的朋友们和同学们都非常喜欢我。我喜欢打篮球和排球。我放学后经常跟同学一起打。我很擅长唱歌,去年的歌唱比赛我还赢得了一等奖。我很乐意做你的朋友,你呢?

精选读者点评

杨洋同学,中英文混写挺有个性!略显作文课上建议统一用中文哦~“二年级3班”这个年级写法要注意啦,13岁一般读初中啦,是“初二3班”还是笔误?再检查下哈!