初二经典英语作文-the weekend 周末

300字
主题:日常劳动、亲子互动、自我记录、生活实践

it was sunday and i didn have to go to school. i finished my homework the day before. so i decided to help mother do housework. i washed some clothes after i got up. then i went shopping with a basket. i bought some meat, eggs and some vegetables in the market. after i came back, i started to cook dinner for the whole family. in the evening, i sat at the table and began to write down on my notebook what i had done during the day.

今天是星期日,我不用去学校。我前一天完成了我的作业。所以我决定帮妈妈做家务。我起床后洗了一些衣服。然后我拿着篮子去购物。我买了一些肉,还有鸡蛋和蔬菜。我回来后,我开始为全家人做饭。在晚上,我坐在桌旁开始在我的笔记本写下什么我白天做了什么。

精选读者点评

“洗衣服—买菜—做饭—记日记”串成一条线,动作干净利落,像小陀螺转得稳当!就是“what i had done during the day”直译成“什么我白天做了什么”,语序卡住了,读着绊脚。下次试试“今天干了啥”,再翻成英文,顺多了。

my happiest day--八年级英语作文带翻译

350字
主题:成长记忆、家庭温暖、真挚情感、节日仪式感

i am 13 years old now. yesterday was my birthday. my parents had a birthday party. i invited some friends to the party.

in the morning my mother got up early and began to cook. my father helped her with cooking. they were so busy that they had no time io talk with me.

when all my friends arrived, my mother brought delicious food and a big birthday cake. my father gave me new clothes and some books as presents. i was moved to tears. my friends sang birthday songs for me and gave me some presents. i had a wonderful birthday.

我现在13岁。昨天是我的生日。我的父母有一个生日聚会。我邀请了一些朋友来参加晚会。

早晨我妈妈起得很早开始做饭。我爸爸帮她做饭。他们很忙,没有时间和我交谈。

当我所有的朋友来的时候,我的母亲带来了美味的食物和一个大的生日蛋糕。我父亲给我新衣服和一些书作为礼物。我感动地流泪。我的朋友为我唱生日歌,给了我一些礼物。我有一个美好的生日。

精选读者点评

句子太“平”啦!像流水账,缺了心跳声,你拆开看看,“妈妈起得早”后面能不能加一句她系着围裙哼歌?蛋糕上蜡烛怎么晃的?眼泪是热的还是凉的?写活一个镜头,整篇就熠熠生辉。

我的周末

400字
主题:快乐体验、动物喜爱、师生同行、童年记忆

我的周末 my weekend

i went to beijing zoo on saturday morning.

星期六早上我去了北京动物园。

i went there with my teachers by bus. it took us half an hour to get there. there were many kinds of animals. first, we went to see pandas. they were my favorite animals. how lovely they were! then we watched the elephant show. the elephants were so clever that they were able to answer some math questions. at last, i took some photos of them. i had a great time. i stayed in beijing zoo for 2 hours.

我和我的老师们一起坐公共汽车去了动物园。去到那里花了我半个小时。有各种各类的动物。首先,我们去看了大象。它们是我最喜欢的动物。它们是多么可爱啊! 之后我们看了大象表演。大象是如此的聪明,它们可以回答一些数学问题。最后,我给它们照了一些照片。我玩得很开心。我在北京动物园呆了两个小时。

when i came back home, i was tired but happy. i will remember these lovely animals. i am looking forward to seeing them again.

当我回到家的时候,我又累又开心。我会记住这些可爱的动物的。我期待着再次见到它们。

精选读者点评

这篇作文中英文混排得挺自然,像小朋友边想边写的真实状态。稍显“我的老师们”这个说法有点非常,是两位以上老师?还是笔误?下次可以再核对下哦。

扶摔倒老人的初二英语作文

250字
主题:善良、责任、瞬间抉择、平凡英雄、人间温情

this afternoon when i was crossing the street after school,i saw an old woman with a heavy basket fell over herself. one of her legs was hurt and she couldn move any more. she groaned on the ground with pain. i was hesitating if i should go to help while a kind cleaner rushed to her.he helped her stand up and took her to the nearest hospital.

今天下午放学后,我过马路时看到一个提着重篮子的老妇人摔倒了。她的一条腿摔坏了,动不了。她躺在地上痛苦地呻吟着。正在我犹豫要不要过去帮忙的时候,一个清洁工抛向了她。他把她扶了起来,并送她去了最近的医院。

what a what a warm-hearted man he was!

这位清洁工真是一个好心肠的人。

精选读者点评

这个“抛向了她”太吓人啦!清洁工是飞过去的?还是扔过去的?赶紧改成“跑向”“奔向”,一个字错,意思全歪咯~

一场篮球赛

300字
主题:集体荣誉、体育精神、校园生活、团队合作

last friday afternoon, there was a basketball match between class one and class four. it was the final match of basketball games. almost all students went to the playground to enjoy this match. the students of the two classes are the most e_cited. they tried their best to cheer for their team. this match lasted for half an hour. it was very e_citing. both teams did very well. at last, class four won the games and the scores were47:39.

上周五下午,一班和四班进行了一场篮球比赛。这是篮球赛的决赛,几乎所有的学生都去操场观看了这场比赛。这两个班的学生是最激动的,他们尽的力给他们的球队加油。这场比赛持续了半个小时,令人激动。两个队都打得很好。最终,四班赢得了比赛,比分是47:39。

精选读者点评

这个“e_cited”和“e_citing”拼写漏了字母,下次写完记得检查一遍哦~

我的优点和缺点

450字
主题:自我认知、人格修养、成长反思、内在驱动

a greek proverb says the hardest thing is knowing yourself ,in my opinion,knowing yourself is the hardest but the most important.only knowing yourself ,you can improve yourself.

有句希腊名言说“最困难的事情就是认识自己”,我认为,认识自己是最难的,但是也是最重要的。只有认识自己,才能取得进步。

to me,i have three merits. they are filial piety, honest and hardworking. filial piety and honesty are the two basic qualities that people should have. and working hard can help to get knowledge and improve myself. however, no one is perfect. i have some week points, too. for e_ample, i never make plans for my life and study. as a result, sometimes i am a little laziness because i don’t have tasks that must be finished.

对我来说,我有三个优点:孝顺、诚实、努力。孝顺和诚实是人类所具备的两个最基本的条件。努力能让你获得知识提高自己。然而,人无完人,我也有些缺点。比如,我从来都不为自己的生活和学习做计划。所以,我有时候有点懒,因为我没有给自己制定必须完成的任务。

through knowing myself well,i hope i can change and be better.

通过对自己的自我认识,我希望我可以改变自己,做得更好。

精选读者点评

“孝顺、诚实、努力”这三点写得表达清爽!更是是把孝顺和诚实并列说成“基本品质”,有分量。稍显“懒”字前面少了个“儿”音,口语里常说“懒惰”或“有点懒”,别漏字哦~

初二校园安全的英语作文带翻译

500字
主题:安全意识、集体协作、制度建设、心理影响、行为规范

campus security

campus security does have a serious effect on our students’ life. for e_ample, theft and robbery can lead to financial difficulties and increase juvenile delinquency. in addition, if things are stolen all the time, there can be worries and horrors among students. more severely, they can distrust each other.

校园安全对我们学生生活有着很重要的影响。例如,盗窃和抢劫可能导致财政困难,还会增加青少年犯罪的几率。此外,如果东西总是被偷,在学生中会造成忧虑和恐惧。更严重的是,他们会互不信任。

therefore, we must take effective security measures to prevent these criminal facts. firstly, we students must work together to watch out any suspicious people on campus. still, the security division could hire more guards to respond promptly to accidents and other emergencies. thirdly, there could be more monitors in the public places. of course, we should be more careful with our properties and don’t leave them unwatched.

因此,我们必须采取有效的安全措施来防范这些犯罪行为。首先,我们们必须一起注意校园里的可疑人物。然而,保卫科可以雇佣更多的保安来及时应对事故和其他紧急情况。第三,可以在公共场所多装监视器。当然,我们应该更加地小心,不要让它们无人看管。

精选读者点评

校园安全这段写得挺当真,例子也贴生活!可是“worries and horrors”这词儿太重了,“horrors”一般指惨案现场,换成“fear”或“anxiety”更准;还有“criminal facts”听着像法律文书,学生作文里说“crimes”或“theft cases”就自然多了。

my school trip

350字
主题:校外活动、师生互动、天气影响、个体感受、集体经历

yesterday,we took a bus to go to the window of the world. in the bus, our music teacher mr.zhou sang a song. and some classmates slept, some sang, others laughted. after getting off, we did some shopping. we bought some food and drink. after shopping,we arrived at the window of the world. oh, my god! the queue is huge! so, i didn’t play anything. i just went shoppig. because, yesterday was so hot. and i didn’t like this trip. but some classmates thought that was good.

昨天,我们坐公共汽车去了世界之窗。在公交车上,我们的音乐老师周先生唱了一首歌。而有些同学睡,有的唱,其他人都笑了。下车后,我们做了一些购物。我们买了一些食品和饮料。购物后,我们到达了世界的窗口。 哦,我的上帝!队列是巨大的!所以,我没玩什么。我只是去购物。因为,昨天是这么热。而且我不喜欢这次旅行。但有些同学认为这是不错的。

精选读者点评

这个“oh, my god!”用得呼之欲出!后文写排队热得只想躲进商店,情绪一点没假,但“世界之窗”四个字在全文里只出现两次,一次标题一次结尾,像借了名字却没走进去。下次试试,让“窗”真的透点光进来呢!

present

200字
主题:亲情、友情、成长、喜悦、感恩

hello, i’m hu cong! i have lots of presents. i get birthday cards from my friends. they are very beautiful. i get two tennis balls from my father. they are very interesting. i get a watch from my mother. my brother gives me a book. i like it very much. looking at so many presents, i am very happy.

你好,我是胡从!我有很多的礼物。我收到生日贺卡从我的朋友。他们非常漂亮。我从我父亲2网球。他们是非常有趣的。我得到一个手表从我的母亲。我哥哥给我一本书。 我很喜欢。看着这么多礼物,我感到非常高兴。

精选读者点评

胡从同学,贺卡“十分漂亮”、网球“无比有趣”,两个“格外”连用,读着像在数糖果,真可爱!值得注意的是“我收到生日贺卡从我的朋友”这句,词序悄悄跑偏啦,试试把“从”字挪个窝呀!

八年级经典英语作文-self-introduction

200字
主题:成长、兴趣、交流、学习、个性

my name is yin _iaopei. i’m 13 years old. my birthday is on november 23rd. my telephone number is 18224011972. my favorite food is salad. my favorite color is black. my favorite sport is ping-pong. i can play ping-pong and sing, but i can’t play it and sing well. i want to join the sports club.

我的名字是_笑培。林13岁。我的生日是11月23日。我的电话是18224011972.我最喜欢的食物是沙拉。我最喜欢的颜色是黑色。我最喜欢的运动是乒乓球。我可以打乒乓球和唱,但我不能发挥它唱好。我想加入体育俱乐部。

精选读者点评

哎哟,中英文混搭得挺有创意!客观来说“林13岁”这句漏了动词,“发挥它唱好”听着像绕口令,下次写完自己小声读一遍,卡壳的地方就是该改的地儿。

八年级英语作文-i have three friends

400字
主题:友情、学科偏好、校园生活、个人兴趣

i have three friends. they’re bill sonia and mary.

bill is my best friend. he likes sports and he likes p.e. why? because he thinks it is interesting. he has p.e on friday. and my best friend is sonia, too. but she doesn’t like p.e. she thinks p.e is difficult. she likes science. because she thinks science is interesting. she has science on monday. ok, the last friend----mary. what’s mary’s favorite subject? oh! her favorite subject is music. i ask her:“why do you like music?” she says:“because it’s rela_ing.” and she has music on tuesday and thursday.

我有三个朋友。他们是比尔索尼娅和玛丽。

比尔是我的朋友。他喜欢运动,他喜欢体育 为什么?因为他认为这是有趣的。他上周五体育课。和我的朋友是索尼娅了。但她不喜欢体育课她认为体育课是困难的。她喜欢科学。因为她认为科学是有趣。她在周一的科学。 ok,最后朋友----玛丽。什么是玛丽最喜欢的科目? 哦!她最喜欢的科目是音乐。我问她:“为什么你喜欢的音乐。”她说:“因为这是放松的。”她对周二和周四的音乐。

精选读者点评

这个“rela_ing”拼写很有趣,像在打字时被风吹歪了键,但孩子,你猜对了意思!后面“放松的”翻译也表达得体,说明语感在线。客观来说“he has p.e on friday”和“she has science on monday”这两句,动词时态悄悄溜走了哦~

校园生活初二英语作文

400字
主题:热爱学习、积极向上、师生互动、青春体验

校园生活初二英语作文

my name is lily, a grade eight student. i like my school life very much because it’s really enjoyable. in school, i spent the time with my lovely classmates and teachers. they all help me a lot with my study and life.

i have si_ courses each day from monday to friday and forty minutes each. the courses i learn in school are chinese, mathematics, english, geography, sports and so on. i like englishmost because it’s very interesting and my teacher is so lovely and kind. in one word, my school life makes me happy and i learn a lot in school.

我的名字叫莉莉,一个八年级的学生。我非常喜欢我的学校生活,因为它真的很有趣。在学校里,我和我可爱的同学和老师在一起。他们都帮助我学习和生活。

从周一到周五,我每天有六门课程,每门课40分钟。我在学校学的课程有语文、数学、英语、地理、体育等。我最喜欢英语,因为它很有趣,我的老师也很可爱。总之,我的学校生活让我快乐,我在学校学到很多东西。

精选读者点评

英语作文里“si_”这空没补上,是想写six吧?还有“lovely teacher”初中生用得有点嫩,换成“patient”或“helpful”更自然些。后半段中文翻译倒是挺顺溜。

八年级学生英语作文

350字
主题:个性认同、青春梦想、性别表达、成长期待

i’m a student. i will go to high school this september. i’m very e_cited about it. it is my dream to go to high school. i’m a lovely girl with a active and optimistic mind. i also curious about everything. i like advanture, too. being a girl, maybe is a little strange. people always say that i’m brave, as i can go to climbe mountain alone. my appearance is a little like barbie dolls, while my character just like boys’. maybe you will ask me to behave like girl, but that’s me.

我是一名学生。今年九月我要去上高中了。我很兴奋。因为去上高中是我的梦想。我是一个积极、乐观可爱的女孩。我对一切都很好奇。我也喜欢冒险。作为一个女孩,也许那样有点奇怪。人们总是说我很勇敢,我可以一个人去爬山。我长得有点像芭比娃娃,而我的性格却像男孩子。也许你会叫我表现得像女孩子些,但这就是我。

精选读者点评

这个“e_cited”拼写漏了个字母,但读到这儿忍不住笑了,你兴奋得连键盘都按不准啦!后半段中英文混着来,像在用两种语言同时心跳,挺鲜活的。话说回来“barbie dolls”记得加复数s哦。

帮助妈妈做家务

400字
主题:劳动体验、生活趣味、家庭温情、自我反思、童年真实

after dinner, my first job was to get the dirty dishes to the kitchen. then i began to wash them. i turned on the tap and water covered all the dishes in the sink. then i added some detergent to the water. maybe i put too much, so it was full of bubbles in the sink. it was just like a bubble bath for dishes and bowls. i caught a bowl to wash. it was slippery. pang! the bowl slipped from my fingers. it dropped into the sink and broke another bowl and a dish. it was terrible! there was only one dish left.in the end, my mother cleared the pieces and helped me clean the dishes. i think ill do a better job ne_t time.

晚饭后,我的第一份工作是把脏盘子拿到厨房去。然后我就开始洗碗。我打开水龙头,水覆盖了放在水槽里所有的盘子。然后我放了一些洗洁精到水里。也许我放太多了,水槽里充满了泡沫。就像是盘子和碗的泡沫浴。我拿住一个碗去洗。很滑。“砰”碗从我的手指滑落。它掉进水槽里把另一个碗和盘子打破了。这真是太可怕了!只剩下一个盘子了。最后,我妈妈清理残局并帮我洗盘子。我想下次我会做的更好的。

精选读者点评

“pang!”这个拟声词用得灵动自然!碗滑落的慌乱感一下就出来了,比写“突然掉下去”效果很好后面“泡沫浴”的比喻也俏皮,看得出你观察细、有童心。美中不足“ne_t time”拼错了哦,记得检查拼写~

初二英语作文-你如何与你的同学相处得很好

300字
主题:人际交往、校园生活、行为规范、友善互助

today, many students say they don’t know how to get on well with their classmates. they are in trouble. now, i will give you some advice. first of all, believe everyone. believing is very important. believe others and you can be believed. secondly, give a hand when your classmates need help. last, whenever being on time is very important. if you follow the advice above, i believe you can get on well with everyone.

今天,许多学生说,他们不知道如何和他们的同学相处得很好。他们有麻烦了。现在,我会给你一些建议。首先,相信每个人。相信是很重要的。相信别人,你可以相信。其次,当你的同学需要帮助时,请给予帮助。最后,每当准时是很重要的。如果你遵循以上的建议,我相信你可以和每个人相处得很好。

精选读者点评

“相信别人,你可以相信”,这句翻译有点绕,是想说“你信别人,别人才会信你”吧?把“you can be believed”改成“others will believe you”,意思就顺多了。