我的周末

400字
主题:快乐体验、动物喜爱、师生同行、童年记忆

我的周末 my weekend

i went to beijing zoo on saturday morning.

星期六早上我去了北京动物园。

i went there with my teachers by bus. it took us half an hour to get there. there were many kinds of animals. first, we went to see pandas. they were my favorite animals. how lovely they were! then we watched the elephant show. the elephants were so clever that they were able to answer some math questions. at last, i took some photos of them. i had a great time. i stayed in beijing zoo for 2 hours.

我和我的老师们一起坐公共汽车去了动物园。去到那里花了我半个小时。有各种各类的动物。首先,我们去看了大象。它们是我最喜欢的动物。它们是多么可爱啊! 之后我们看了大象表演。大象是如此的聪明,它们可以回答一些数学问题。最后,我给它们照了一些照片。我玩得很开心。我在北京动物园呆了两个小时。

when i came back home, i was tired but happy. i will remember these lovely animals. i am looking forward to seeing them again.

当我回到家的时候,我又累又开心。我会记住这些可爱的动物的。我期待着再次见到它们。

精选读者点评

这篇作文中英文混排得挺自然,像小朋友边想边写的真实状态。稍显“我的老师们”这个说法有点非常,是两位以上老师?还是笔误?下次可以再核对下哦。

小学六年级英语作文

1650字
主题:成长记录、校园生活、家庭关爱、健康意识、时间管理

文章一:a farewell party

it’s the end of the school year. the students in class three have a farewell party. they invite their parents to the party. many students have performance at the party. look! chen jie is singing songs. zhang peng is playing the piano. sarah is playing the erhu. mike is doing chinese kung fu. what is miss white doing? she is dancing. everybody has a lot of fun. but liu yun isn’t here. she has a cold. she is at home. the classmates are going to visit her after party. they prepare many gifts fot her. and they will take a picture together. 要领点评 写法:这篇习作记叙了一个告别晚会。记叙了学年末的告别晚会上大家都表演了什么节目,以及晚会后大家要去看望刘芸的故事。 时态:这篇习作可采用三种时态来写。由于本单元主要出现的时态是一般将来时和现在进行时,所以这里我们才用一般现在时,现在进行时和一般将来时来写。 句型: 一般现在时:主语 动词原形 其他。 现在进行时:主语 现在分词 其他。 一般将来时:主语 be going to / will 动词原形 其他。 注意:由于本篇文章中所涉及的时态比较多,所以要注意一下时态的变化。学生们都在表演什么节目可以用现在进行时,将要去做什么,要用将来时。另外还要注意,一般现在时在肯定句中,主语是第三人称单数,谓语动词也要用第三人称单数。

文章二:a post card from john

dear sarah, this post card shows you a picture from my holiday. we got kunming on wednesday. on the first day we visited stone forest. it’s very beautiful. i love it very much. on thursday kathy and i got lost in the city. we asked a policeman for help. he helped us find the hotel. on friday we went to a small village. we saw folk dances and ate some fresh vegetables from the farm. we enjoyed ourselves. last day we went shopping ane bought some presents for friends. tomorrow we will be back home. john 要领点评 写法:这是一封明信片,按照时间顺序记叙了约翰假期去昆明度假这几天的活动。分别记叙了游览石林,迷路,看民族舞,购物,买礼物等活动。 时态:这篇文章由于是记叙已经发过的事,所以大部分可以采用一般过去时来写。 句型:主语 动词过去式 其他。 要领点评 写法:这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期里的活动,记叙了假期里去北京做了哪些活动以及对活动的感受。 时态:这篇文章可采用两种时态来写。由于本单元主要讲述的是一般过去时的用法,所以这里大部分我们采用一般过去时比较合适。 句型:主语 动词过去式 其他„„ 主语 will 动词原形 其他 注意:活动的相关表达法可采用旧知识和新知识相结合去写,但要注意动词过去式的变化规则。例:eat 的过去式为ate,为不规则变化。

文章四:zoom’s weekend

zoom had a busy weekend. on saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. he did his homework and went fishing on saturday afternoon. on sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. he played football and watch tv on sunday afternoon. zoom was too tired. 要领点评 写法:这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了zoom的周末活动。 时态:这篇文章可以用三种时态来写,由于本单元主要讲的是一般过去时态,所以我们采用一般过去时态比较合适。 句型:主语 动词过去式 过去时间。 注意:活动的相关表达法采用新旧知识结合的方法,但要注意动词过去式的拼写。

文章五:a bad cold

i’m not feeling well today. i think i have a bad cold. i have a headache. i have a fever. my nose hurts. my throat is sore. i have to take some medicine and stay in bed. my parents will take me to the hospital. what a bad cold! i hope i can be better soon. and i want to go to school. 要领点评 写法:这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙了得病、病的症状、服药及治疗的全过程。写出了小作者希望快点康复,好去上学的愿望。 时态:这篇文章可以采用一般现在时来写。如果主语是第三人称单数,动词别忘加s。 句型:要用feel 加形容词,和表示“患某种疾病“的用法have 表示的疾病的单词。 注意:在表示疾病时,可以使用-ache,hurt 和sore。不要只用一个单词,以避免枯燥。要写出得病后的简单治疗及心情,不能只写得病的情况。常见病句:my nose is hurt。因为be后面要加形容词,而hurt是动词,因此应使用sore;东西放在床上要用on the bed。生病,是卧床不起,应该说stay in bed。 表示吃药时,通过用take some medicine,不用eat。 词汇量要控制在40~60之间。

精选读者点评

这篇告别party写得灵气十足泼!陈洁唱歌、张鹏弹琴、sarah拉二胡,画面一下子跳出来了。miss white跳舞那句非常有味儿,可是“she is dancing”后面要是加个“with a big smile”,是不是更像亲眼看见?刘芸生病在家那段,同学要去看她、带礼物、拍照,暖乎乎的,结尾可以再轻轻推一把:比如“等她回来,黑板上说不定已画满小星星”。

我最喜欢的电影 my favorite movie

300字
主题:友情、文化认同、兴趣差异、中外交流

i often go to movies with my friend,mary.my favorite actor is shi _iaolong.she has a new movie,good boy.it‘s a very e_citing action movie.mary likes the actor,jin chenwu.she really likes his movie,chinese.it’s a very successful action movie,but i think it‘s boring.one interesting thing∶mary is english,but she likes beijing opera!she often goes to see beijing opera on weekends.mary’s mother likes it,too.

我经常和我的朋友去看电影,最喜欢的演员是释小龙。她有一部新电影,好孩子。这是一个非常令人兴奋的动作片。玛丽喜欢的演员,金晨雾。她真的很喜欢他的电影,中国。这是一个非常成功的动作片,但是我认为它很无聊。一有趣的∶玛丽是英语,但她喜欢北京歌剧!她经常在周末去看北京歌剧。玛丽的母亲喜欢它,太。

精选读者点评

“释小龙”是男生哦,别用“她”啦!还有“金晨雾”,是不是记混名字了?查查演员表吧~