我最喜欢的老师

250字
主题:师爱、才艺、亲切、美好、活力、温暖

my favorite teacher 我最喜欢的老师

my favorite teacher is miss huang. she is a beautiful lady. she has two big eyes, a high nose and a small red mouth. there is always a smile on her face.

miss huang likes singing and collecting posters. she is good at playing the piano. in the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. she is good at dancing, too. sometimes she teaches us dancing.

miss huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. her favorite color is blue. because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.

this is my favorite teacher. our classmates all like her very much.

精选读者点评

黄老师眼睛真亮啊!写她笑的样子,我眼前就浮出人影了,只是“美丽女士”太笼统,试试把“笑”拆开写?比如嘴角怎么翘、眼睛弯成啥样!

小学六年级上册英语作文

200字
主题:团圆、年味、亲情、习俗、成长记录

小学六年级上册英语作文

this morning, i got up at si_ oclock. then i brushed my teeth and washed my face. after that, i had breakfast with my parents. at noon, i went to my grandparents house and visited my aunts, uncles and cousins. in the afternoon, we made dumplings together. in the evening, we had dumplings, sweet and sour pork, and lots of nice dishes for dinner. after dinner, my parents and i went home. we set off fireworks and went to bed then.

精选读者点评

动词时态用得挺稳,全篇都用过去式,连“set off”都记得加-ed!唯独“si_ o'clock”这空填“six”就更棒啦~

六年级英语作文带翻译

300字
主题:节日生活、同伴交往、快乐体验、日常活动

六年级英语作文带翻译

i had a wonderfulspring festival holiday.i went to the park with my friends.we met at eight o‘clock at the school gate.we went to the park by bike.it was a sunnyday.we sat under a big tree and talkedwith each other.we talked about some movies andfunny things.then we hadhamburgers and some drinks for lunch.then we played some games.

we went home at 5pm.although we were all fell tired,we were very happy.it was great fun!

我度过了一个愉快的春节。我和朋友去了公园。我们八点在校门口碰面,然后我们就骑自行车去公园。那是个晴朗的日子,我们坐在一棵大树下互相聊天。我们聊了一些电影和趣事。然后我们午餐就去吃了些汉堡喝了些饮料。接着我们玩了些游戏。

下午五点我们就回家了。尽管我们都觉得很累,但是我们很开心。真是太有趣了!

精选读者点评

这篇英文写得挺顺溜!动词时态基本都对,像“went”“sat”“talked”用得稳当;中文翻译也通顺,没硬译的痕迹。美中不足“we were all fell tired”这句语法错了,得改“we all felt tired”,小错别留着哈!

小学六年级英语作文

1650字
主题:成长记录、校园生活、家庭关爱、健康意识、时间管理

文章一:a farewell party

it’s the end of the school year. the students in class three have a farewell party. they invite their parents to the party. many students have performance at the party. look! chen jie is singing songs. zhang peng is playing the piano. sarah is playing the erhu. mike is doing chinese kung fu. what is miss white doing? she is dancing. everybody has a lot of fun. but liu yun isn’t here. she has a cold. she is at home. the classmates are going to visit her after party. they prepare many gifts fot her. and they will take a picture together. 要领点评 写法:这篇习作记叙了一个告别晚会。记叙了学年末的告别晚会上大家都表演了什么节目,以及晚会后大家要去看望刘芸的故事。 时态:这篇习作可采用三种时态来写。由于本单元主要出现的时态是一般将来时和现在进行时,所以这里我们才用一般现在时,现在进行时和一般将来时来写。 句型: 一般现在时:主语 动词原形 其他。 现在进行时:主语 现在分词 其他。 一般将来时:主语 be going to / will 动词原形 其他。 注意:由于本篇文章中所涉及的时态比较多,所以要注意一下时态的变化。学生们都在表演什么节目可以用现在进行时,将要去做什么,要用将来时。另外还要注意,一般现在时在肯定句中,主语是第三人称单数,谓语动词也要用第三人称单数。

文章二:a post card from john

dear sarah, this post card shows you a picture from my holiday. we got kunming on wednesday. on the first day we visited stone forest. it’s very beautiful. i love it very much. on thursday kathy and i got lost in the city. we asked a policeman for help. he helped us find the hotel. on friday we went to a small village. we saw folk dances and ate some fresh vegetables from the farm. we enjoyed ourselves. last day we went shopping ane bought some presents for friends. tomorrow we will be back home. john 要领点评 写法:这是一封明信片,按照时间顺序记叙了约翰假期去昆明度假这几天的活动。分别记叙了游览石林,迷路,看民族舞,购物,买礼物等活动。 时态:这篇文章由于是记叙已经发过的事,所以大部分可以采用一般过去时来写。 句型:主语 动词过去式 其他。 要领点评 写法:这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期里的活动,记叙了假期里去北京做了哪些活动以及对活动的感受。 时态:这篇文章可采用两种时态来写。由于本单元主要讲述的是一般过去时的用法,所以这里大部分我们采用一般过去时比较合适。 句型:主语 动词过去式 其他„„ 主语 will 动词原形 其他 注意:活动的相关表达法可采用旧知识和新知识相结合去写,但要注意动词过去式的变化规则。例:eat 的过去式为ate,为不规则变化。

文章四:zoom’s weekend

zoom had a busy weekend. on saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. he did his homework and went fishing on saturday afternoon. on sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. he played football and watch tv on sunday afternoon. zoom was too tired. 要领点评 写法:这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了zoom的周末活动。 时态:这篇文章可以用三种时态来写,由于本单元主要讲的是一般过去时态,所以我们采用一般过去时态比较合适。 句型:主语 动词过去式 过去时间。 注意:活动的相关表达法采用新旧知识结合的方法,但要注意动词过去式的拼写。

文章五:a bad cold

i’m not feeling well today. i think i have a bad cold. i have a headache. i have a fever. my nose hurts. my throat is sore. i have to take some medicine and stay in bed. my parents will take me to the hospital. what a bad cold! i hope i can be better soon. and i want to go to school. 要领点评 写法:这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙了得病、病的症状、服药及治疗的全过程。写出了小作者希望快点康复,好去上学的愿望。 时态:这篇文章可以采用一般现在时来写。如果主语是第三人称单数,动词别忘加s。 句型:要用feel 加形容词,和表示“患某种疾病“的用法have 表示的疾病的单词。 注意:在表示疾病时,可以使用-ache,hurt 和sore。不要只用一个单词,以避免枯燥。要写出得病后的简单治疗及心情,不能只写得病的情况。常见病句:my nose is hurt。因为be后面要加形容词,而hurt是动词,因此应使用sore;东西放在床上要用on the bed。生病,是卧床不起,应该说stay in bed。 表示吃药时,通过用take some medicine,不用eat。 词汇量要控制在40~60之间。

精选读者点评

这篇告别party写得灵气十足泼!陈洁唱歌、张鹏弹琴、sarah拉二胡,画面一下子跳出来了。miss white跳舞那句非常有味儿,可是“she is dancing”后面要是加个“with a big smile”,是不是更像亲眼看见?刘芸生病在家那段,同学要去看她、带礼物、拍照,暖乎乎的,结尾可以再轻轻推一把:比如“等她回来,黑板上说不定已画满小星星”。