my strict mother-严厉的妈妈

150字
主题:成长、亲情、友情、欢庆、童年、感恩

上周日是我十三岁生日,很多朋友和同学来参加我的生日宴会。我们在一起吃蛋糕,唱歌、跳舞,我的父母和朋友们都送了我好看的生日礼物。我快乐极了。

it was my thirteenth birthday last sunday. many friends and classmates of mine came to my birthday party. we had birthday cake, sang and danced together. my parents and my friends gave me some nice and beautiful presents. how happy i was!

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生日读着痛快!蛋糕、歌声、礼物堆成小山,连“快乐极了”都像蹦出来的,再加一句你拆开哪个礼物时手抖了?画面就活啦!

an impolite young man-无礼的小青年

200字
主题:文明礼仪、公共责任、旁观者反应、行为后果

在我放学回家的路上,看见一位年轻人车骑得飞快,在路口撞倒了一位妇女,年轻人不但没道歉,反而出口就骂人。众人都很气愤,怒视着他,他骑上车飞快地跑了。

on my way home, i saw an impolite young man riding a bike quickly. at a crossing a woman was knocked down by the bike. the young man didn make an apology and said some dirty words. all the people there were angry and glared at him. he ran fast away on his bike.

精选读者点评

这个“怒视”用得过瘾!比写“大家很生气”有力多了,眼睛会说话啊~略显后半段英文翻译里“dirty words”太直白,换成“张口就骂”更像咱中文里那种气呼呼的味儿。

好看的书

250字
主题:阅读兴趣、跨文化认知、成长期待、实地探索

i go to bookstore today, i want to find some interesting books to read. after walking around for a while, i stop in the travel books zone. i open the books, there are so many beautiful pictures. i am attracted deeply. i buy two books about introducing egypt and india. i am so curious about their culture. some day i must go there and have a look.

我今天去逛书店,想找一些有趣的书籍来读。在走了一圈后,我旅游书籍区停了下来。我打开书本,里面有很多美丽的图片。我深深地被吸引了。我买了两本书关于介绍埃及和印度的书。我很好奇他们的文化。有一天我一定要去那里看看。

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句子太短啦!试试把“i go to bookstore today”和后面连起来?比如“i went to the bookstore today because…”,读着顺多了!还有,“there are so many beautiful pictures”这句,换成“pages burst with golden deserts and spice markets…”是不是更充满力量呀!

我有一个梦想 i have a dream

250字
主题:纯真、愿望、快乐、亲情、童心、希望

我有一个梦想 i have a dream

when i was small, i like to eat candy so much, i would always ask my parents to buy candy for me. in order to eat all kinds of candies, i wanted to open a candy shop when i grew up, this is my dream. now i still hold that dream, i can sell candy to the children and i like to see their happy faces.

当我还小的时候,我很喜欢吃糖果,我总会叫父母给我买糖果。为了吃到各种各样的糖果,我想要在长大后开一间糖果店,这是我的梦想。现在我仍然怀抱着那样的梦想,我可以卖糖果给孩子们,我喜欢看到他们开心的笑脸。

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这个“糖果店”梦真甜!后半段中英文混搭有点跳,但孩子写得分外真诚,连“happy faces”都舍不得翻译成“笑脸”,多可爱啊~

优秀小学英语作文

400字
主题:亲子陪伴、童年乐趣、成长记忆、生活观察、语言实践

优秀小学英语作文

my holiday was good. i stayed at home for sometime. i went to tianyi square and bought some games. but one day, my monther, my younger brother and i went to tianyi digital square to buy games. and i bought a new uniform in the evening. id like to have a glass of apple juice my monther bought it for me. i says, thanks a lot. i bought some shoes. i want a pair of sports shoes. in the shop, the wonderful song added tour pleasure. i see the black shoes. my monther says, there are beautiful !

i was happy that day, because i went to tianyi square and had a lot of fum.

我的假期恨愉快,我在家呆了一段时间,去天一广场买了一些游戏。但是有一天,妈妈和弟弟去天一数码广场买游戏,我弟弟和我去天一数码广场购买游戏,晚上我买了一个制服,我想喝苹果汁然后妈妈给我买了,我说:“非常感谢。”,我买了鞋子,我想要一双运动鞋,在商店里,美妙的音乐增添了不少乐趣。我看见一对黑鞋子,妈妈说:“非常好看!”

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“monther”写了三次,“fum”“tour”也拼错了,标点乱七八糟,但读着真像小孩叽叽喳喳讲自己过节,那股子高兴劲儿,扑面而来!

节约用水 save water

250字
主题:节水、环保、成长、责任、实践

节约用水 save water

i get used to pouring away the water directly after i using it. someday, my mother asked me to help her wash the clothes, as i was about to pour away the water, my mother stopped me and she told me that most water can be recycled. it can be used to water the flower or to wash other things. from then on, i realize how to save water.

我过去常常在用完水后直接倒掉水。有一天,妈妈叫我帮助她洗衣服,就在我要去倒掉水的时候,妈妈阻止了我,她告诉我说大部分水可以循环利用。那么水可以用来浇花或者洗别的东西。从那时候起,我就意识到如何节约用水。

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这个“倒水—被拦—顿悟”的小镜头呼之欲出!后半段中文比英文还顺溜,浇花、洗东西这些例子也极其接地气。下次试试把“妈妈说”改成她蹲下来捏捏你手背的动作吧!

小学英语作文-this is me

350字
主题:成长、亲情、快乐、季节、童年、身份认同

hello ! my name is jing . i live in china . i am 14 years old . i am nice girl. my family is favorite me . i have big a family . my family is ten people . they are grandma, grandpa , aunt , uncle , sister ,brother , father and mother . i am is students . i work hard at school . my father and mother is businessman . my aunt and uncle is businessman , too . my birthday on january . my friends for my gift . i am very happy . my favorite season is summer . because i like to ice-cream . this is me . do you like me ?

你好!我的名字叫静。我住在中国。我14岁。我是好女孩。我的家人是我最喜欢的。我有大的家庭。我的家庭是十个人。奶奶,爷爷,姑姑,叔叔,姐姐,哥哥,爸爸和妈妈。我是学生。我在学校努力工作。我爸爸和妈妈是商人。我的叔叔和婶婶是商人。我的生日在1月。我的朋友给我的礼物。我很高兴。我最喜欢的季节是夏天。因为我喜欢冰淇淋。这就是我。你喜欢我吗?

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静同学,你写自己家人时眼睛都在发亮吧?“奶奶、爷爷、姑姑、叔叔……”一口气数到十个人,真像在掰手指头!稍显“my family is ten people”这句语法小绊脚子,悄悄改个is→has试试?

日落 sunset

250字
主题:自然之美、亲情浸润、审美初醒、故土情怀

日落 sunset

my grandma always tells me that the sunrise and the sunset in my hometown is very beautiful. but i see them all the time, so i don’t learn to appreciate their charm. one day, when i walked on the country road, i looked at the sky and found the red cloud , a big sun is buring, it is such beautiful. for the first, i see the beauty of sunset.

奶奶总是告诉我,家乡的日出和日落事非常漂亮的。但是我总能看到,所以我不会欣赏它们的魅力。一天,当我走在乡间小路,我看了看天空,发现红色的云,太阳在燃烧,它是如此的美丽。第一次,我看到美丽的日落。

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中英文混搭挺有味道的!“sunset”单独一行,像悄悄藏了个彩蛋~后文写火烧云那段,神采明亮,可惜“buring”拼错了,顺手改掉哈~

写作业doing homework

250字
主题:学习生活、时间管理、课业压力、成长日常

写作业doing homework

i am in the fifth grade, i study chinese, math and english. my teachers leave many homework every day. after school, i stay in school doing homework about one hour. i go back home, after i eat my supper, i start doing homework again. i often sleep at eleven o’clock in the evening, because i have so many homework.

我是五年级学生,我学习语文、数学和英语。每天我的老师们都会布置许多作业。放学后,我会在学习里做一个小时左右。我回到家,吃了晚饭之后,开始继续做作业。我经常晚上11点才睡觉,因为我有太多作业了。

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作业交代明白连“吃完晚饭才开始写”都记得,生活味儿扑面而来~话说回来“doing homework”和中文混着写,像端着碗喝咖啡,有点怪,下次试试全用中文吧!

my english teacher 我的英语老师

500字
主题:师爱、成长、榜样、师生情、个性魅力、教育温度

hello! i’m he baoyi. we have three new teachers this term. but my favourite teacher is english teacher. who is she? yes, she’s linda. do you want to know her? linda is very beautiful. look! she has a round face, two small black eyes, a straight nose, a big mouth and two small ears. her hair is very long. she is not tall and not short. she likes wearing a white dress. she looks like an angle. linda works very hard every day. and she is strict to us. but she is kind. her class is so much fun. really? yes. in class, she is our good teacher. after class, she is our good friend. her favourite food is tofu. it ’s very very healthy. she is not only good at pingpong, but also good at singing. she likes talking with us. we all like her.

您好我在他家。这个学期我们有三个新老师。但我最喜欢的老师是英语老师。她是谁?是的,她是琳达。你想认识她吗?琳达非常漂亮。看!她有一个圆圆的脸,两只小眼睛,一个直的鼻子,一个大嘴巴和两只小耳朵。她的头发很长。她不高,不短。她喜欢穿一件白色的连衣裙。她看起来像个天使。琳达每天工作很辛苦。她对我们很严格。但她很善良。她的课很有趣。真的吗?是的在课堂上,她是我们的好老师。下课后,她是我们的好朋友。她最喜欢的食物是豆腐。它非常非常健康。她不仅擅长打乒乓球,还擅长唱歌。她喜欢和我们谈话。我们都喜欢她。

精选读者点评

“她 looks like an angle”,这句拼错了,是angel哦!话说回来后面中文写“天使”,说明你心里清楚,只是手快打岔了~

简单小学英语作文带翻译-失去的机会

300字
主题:自我突破、师长鼓励、节日活动、心理成长

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i am very shy, when my teacher asks me to answer his question, i will be very nervous and don’t know what to say. one day, my teacher asks if i want to join the christmas performance, i hesitate, because i am very afraid of losing face. my teacher tells me i should be brave, or i will miss the chance. i don’t want to miss it, finally i join, i am so happy for myself.

我很害羞,当我的老师叫我回答他的问题的时候,我会很紧张,不知道要说什么。一天,我的教室问我是否想要加入圣诞演出,我犹豫了,因为我很怕丢脸。我的老师告诉我应该要勇敢,不然我就会失去机会。我不想错过,最后我加入了,我为自己感到开心。

精选读者点评

害羞是真实的,但“怕丢脸”后面那句“不想错过”更是亮,光这点就比好多作文强!

你认识我吗?do you know me!

250字
主题:成长、理想、兴趣、身份认同、学业追求

我的名字叫安安,一是是健康平安。我今年12岁。我在在新华小学六年级学习。我很喜欢英语。我有许多爱好,比如读书、游泳和收集邮票。我最喜欢的动物是北极熊,它们非常有趣。

现在我正在尽力学好各门功课,因为明年我想考一所好中学

你认识我吗?(do you know me!)

my name is an an,which means safe and sound. im a twelve-year-old girl, im studying in grade si_ of _inhua primary school. i like english very much. i have many hobbies, such as reading, swimming and collecting stamps. my favorite animal is polar bears. they are funny.

now im trying my best to learn the subjects well because i want to go into a good middle school ne_t year.

精选读者点评

安安,名字真好听!“平安”两个字暖暖的~写到北极熊时眼睛都出彩亮眼,多可爱的小孩啊!稍显“si_”“ne_t”这种拼写小马虎,下次写完自己读一遍?

快乐的六一儿童节

300字
主题:童年、欢乐、成长、师生情、节日记忆

英语资源频道为大家整理的小学英语作文:快乐的六一儿童节,小编在这里祝所有小朋友大朋友们节日快乐 永葆童心。

今天是“六一国际儿童节”,我们在学校里表演节目。同学们有的唱歌,有的跳舞,有的弹琴。高老师还给我们表演了一个魔术,那个魔术很神奇,至今我也不明白那条线是怎么穿过我的手的。最后,高老师还发给每个同学一份礼物——两个精美的书签。

today is the international childrens day, we show in the school. some of the students singing, some dancing, some play the piano. high teacher gave us a magic show, the magic is magic, i still don understand that line is through my hand. finally, high teacher also sent everyone a gift -- two e_quisite bookmarks.

我今天过得很快乐。

i had a great day.

精选读者点评

“线穿过手”时眼睛肯定亮晶晶的!高老师魔术那段,比后面英文翻译还活,建议把“精美的书签”换成“蓝蝴蝶图案的书签”,你摸过那纸边,记得吗呀!

夏天的小学英语作文

250字
主题:静谧、童真、观察、家园、光影、时间流转

summer night watching the sky and saw the moon climb the trees, the moon from the earths curved, like a boat into the round.

the sky from blue to black, the little stars climb the highest trees, and they smiled to me, blinked, lamb also went back to the laps. presented by the green wall of trees in black, the grand canal echoing rumble of vehicles on the road, and occasionally still hear the dog barking sound.

夏天晚上看天空,看见月亮爬上树,月亮从地球的弯曲,就像一艘船。

天空从蓝色变成黑色,小明星爬上的树,和他们对我笑了笑,眨了眨眼睛,羊肉也回到了圈。提出了树的绿墙黑色,大运河呼应轰鸣的汽车在路上,偶尔还听到狗叫的声音。

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月亮比作“船”,还说星星“对我笑了笑”,多灵的想象啊!后半段中英文混着写,老师读着读着就笑了,下次试试全用中文写完,再悄悄把“羊肉”改成“羊群”,画面就更美啦。

我爱熊猫 i love panda

250字
主题:热爱动物、尊重生命、文明观览、生态意识

我爱熊猫 i love panda

panda is the cutest animal in the world. it is so lovely. it has black eyes and round body. once i went to the zoo to watch pandas. they were eating bamboo all the time, and sometimes they played in the tree. i love them so much, so i watch them quietly and not to disturb them. it is not right to throw food to them.

熊猫是世界上最可爱的动物。它非常的可爱,黑黑的眼睛、圆圆的身体。我曾经去过动物园看熊猫。它们一直都在吃竹子,有时也会在树上玩。我非常爱它们,所以我就静静地看着,不去打扰它们。给熊猫投喂食物是不对的。

精选读者点评

这个“i love panda”文风扎实!中英混搭,像小朋友踮着脚往玻璃窗里张望时脱口而出的那句,活!后头“静静看”“不打扰”的细节也十分真,比抄范文强多了。

我的小秘密 my little secret

250字
主题:童心、储蓄、孝心、期待、自主、温情

i have a little secret, that is i have saved some money for myself. my parents don’t know, they still give me the pocket money in time, i save the pocket money for a long time. i want to use the money to buy what i want, i plan to give my parents some surprise when i save the enough money, this is my little secret.

我有一个秘密,那就是我已经存了一些钱。我的父母并不知道,他们仍然定时给我一些零花钱,我把这些钱省下来已经有一段时间了。我想要用这些钱来买我想要的,我计划着存了足够钱的时候,给我的父母一些惊喜,这是我的小秘密。

精选读者点评

哎哟,中英双语写秘密,挺有心!“省下来”比“存下来”更生活气,这个动词选得妙~稍显“给父母惊喜”前,漏了半句“比如……”?补上就活了。

约定 the appointment

250字
主题:成长、承诺、回忆、友情、期待

约定 the appointment

last night, my best friend and i see a funny movie. in the movie, the little boy made an appointment with his friends in ten years. so i was inspired, we also decided to make an appointment. we wrote something in the books and we hided it. we promised to see it in five years. it must be very interesting when we see it.

昨晚,我和我的朋友看了一部有趣的电影。在电影中,小男孩和他的朋友有个十年之约。因此,我受到了启发。我跟我朋友也决定来个约定。我们在书上写了一些话,并且藏起来。我们五年后再看。当我们看的时候,一定会非常有趣。

精选读者点评

中英文混用要小心哦!“the appointment”这句突然冒出来,像在作文里偷偷塞了颗糖,甜是甜,但硌牙。后面全用中文多整齐!

我房间的颜色the colours of my room

250字
主题:我的空间、颜色认知、生活观察、语言表达

我房间的颜色the colours of my room

there are many colours in my room. my door is white, my bed is pink, my desk is brown, and my chair is brown too. i have a blackboard and many chalks. the blackboard is black, the colours of chalks are blue, green, yellow and red. my room is colourful, i like my room very much.

我的房间有很多种颜色。我的门是白色的,我的床是粉色的,我的桌子是棕色的,我的椅子也是棕色的。我有一块黑板和很多粉笔。黑板是黑色的,粉笔的颜色有蓝色、绿色、黄色和红色。我的房间是彩色的,我非常喜欢我的房间。

精选读者点评

中英文混搭得挺自在啊!“the colours of my room”当标题,后面还悄悄跟了个中文翻译,像在玩双语密码本~粉笔颜色列得清清楚楚,蓝绿黄红,连顺序都像排过队,下次试试把“棕色的桌子”和“棕色的椅子”换个说法?比如“桌腿沉稳的棕,椅背温润的棕”,听上去就活了。

小学生英语作文-买菜经历

250字
主题:第一次、母爱、实践、自信、生活体验

one day, my mother is busying making dinner, she asks me to buy some tomatoes, because she is lack of it and she can’t walk way at this moment. this is the first time i go to the market. at first, i have no idea which shop to choose, i am a little afraid to face so many people, then i think of my mom, do as what she does, finally i buy the tomatoes, i am so happy.

有一天,我的妈妈在忙着做饭,她叫我去买西红柿,因为她缺西红柿,现在无法走开,这是我第一次去市场。一开始,我不知道该买哪一家的,面对着这么多人,感到有点害怕,我想起了妈妈,就像她平时做的那样,最后我买到了西红柿,我很高兴。

精选读者点评

标点乱跳,中英文混搭像打喷嚏,“busying”“lack of it”“walk way”全得重嚼一遍;但“想起妈妈,就像她平时做的那样”这句,眼睛一亮,有温度。

我的宠物狗my pet dog及翻译

500字
主题:亲情、童趣、责任、宽容、生活小事、人与动物

我的宠物狗(my pet dog)

i have a pet dog, her name is du du. she is very cute but quite naughty. my father, my mother and me, we all like her very much, and seldom scold her though she sometimes makes a mess at home. however, my mother got really angry with du du a few days ago. my mother loves flowers and always brings some home. last sunday, she bought some lilies.

they were very fragrant. du du must have thought that the flowers were delicious, too, so she ate them while my mother was in the kitchen. by the time my mother rushed out of the kitchen, the vase was broken, water was everywhere and the flowers were all gone. my mother was so angry that she didn’t talk to du du for the rest of the day and didn’t feed her in the evening.

翻译

我家有只宠物狗,名叫嘟嘟,嘟嘟是个小姑娘,又可爱又淘气,我们全家人都喜欢她,尽管有时她会把家里弄得一团糟,我们也很少责怪她,因为大多数时候,她都是个乖宝宝。可是前两天,她把妈妈惹恼了。妈妈很喜欢花,经常会买些花回来美化我们的家。上星期天,妈妈买了几支百合花回来,百合花有很好闻的香味,可能我们的小淘气嘟嘟觉得,有好闻香味的东西一定也很美味,所以,趁妈妈不注意,嘟嘟把百合花给吃了。

等妈妈从厨房里冲出来时,花瓶倒了,水撒了,花也进了嘟嘟的肚子里了。妈妈气得一整天没理睬嘟嘟,还罚她不能吃晚餐。

精选读者点评

嘟嘟偷吃百合那段不水“花瓶倒了,水撒了,花也进了嘟嘟的肚子里了”,三个短句连着砸下来,节奏像小狗撒腿狂奔,利落!

i want to fly-我想飞

200字
主题:成长困惑、心灵自由、时光流逝、纯真向往

小时候可以自由的玩耍,不用去担心未来的前途,不用为作业烦恼,而现在各科的作业、考试使得我不能从事运动,不能做自己喜欢的事,我不要长大,我想自由的飞。

i want to fly

when i was a little child, i didn have to worry about my homework. i didn need to think about my future. now, the homework and tests of each subject are numerous that i can have sports and do my favourite things. i don want to grow up. i want to fly freely.

精选读者点评

这“i want to fly”写得表达清爽!英文句单独成段,像小鸟扑棱一下冲出纸面,后头那句“我想自由的飞”反而收得太软了。试试把中文也拆开?就剩五个字,顶格写:

马戏团 the circus

250字
主题:童年记忆、现场体验、中英表达、初次感动

马戏团 the circus

when i was small, i liked to watch circus show on the tv, there were many interesting things, the animals, the clown and the unique skills made me so fascinated about the circus. one day, a circus came to my hometown, i felt so e_cited, i watched the show, this was the first time for me to see the circus show in live. i felt so happy.

当我还小的时候,我喜欢在电视上看马戏团的表演,那有很多有趣的东西,各种各样的动物,小丑和很多的绝技,这些都让我对马戏团很着迷。有一天,一个马戏团来到家乡 my hometown>;;我的家乡,我感到很兴奋,我看了演出,这是我第一次现场看马戏团的演出。我很开心。

精选读者点评

马戏团三个字写得歪歪扭扭,但“小丑”两个字格外工整,是不是心里相当喜欢他?后面那句“my hometown'>;;我的家乡”夹在中文里,像偷偷塞进来的纸条,有点可爱。