的工作the best job

300字
主题:童真、反讽、职业认知、家庭互动、成长启示

betty is a lazy girl. she doesn study hard, and she doesn help her mother with the housework, either. what are you going to be when you grow up, betty? mother asks. you e too lazy. no job will ever fit you. ut i know one, says the girl, im going to be father christmas, you want to be father christmas? mother is surprised, ut why? ecause he works only one day in a whole year.

贝蒂是一个懒惰的女孩。她不努力学习,她也不会帮她的妈妈做家务。“你长大了想要做什么,贝蒂?”母亲问道。“你太懒惰了。没有工作会适合你。”“但我知道有一份工作,”女孩说,“我要做一个圣诞老人,”“你想成为圣诞老人吗?”妈妈感到很惊讶,“但是为什么呢?”“因为他一年只需要工作一天。”

精选读者点评

贝蒂这灵巧的小宝贝!结尾神转折,笑出声了~值得注意的是“lazy”翻成“懒惰”稍重,换成“懒得动”更像孩子口气,试试?

我的毛衣 my sweater

250字
主题:亲情、感恩、成长、陪伴、付出

my mother buys me a lot of clothes, among these clothes, i like the sweater which is knitted by my mother best. my mother is good at knitting sweater, she knits the sweater for me in the winter, i feel so warm when i put on it. i am so thankful to my mother, for she taking care of me all the time, i will return her love when i grow up.

我的妈妈给我买了很多的衣服,在这些衣服当中,我最喜欢妈妈给我织的那件毛衣。我的妈妈很擅长织毛衣,她在冬天给我织了那件毛衣,当我穿上那件毛衣的时候,会感觉到很暖和。我很感激我的妈妈,她一直在照顾着我,等我长大了,我要回报她的爱

精选读者点评

毛衣暖,字也暖!“织”和“穿”两个动词一前一后,把温度刻画得真鲜活。可是“回报她的爱”有点像广播稿结尾,试试换成你昨天帮她捶背、今天悄悄热好牛奶啊!

小学三年级英语作文

200字
主题:师爱、成长、观察、表达、尊重

my teather

our art teather is not too young and not too old .he has black hair two big and black eyes ,a small nose and a big mouth .look, he is wearing a white jacket ,a blue hat ,brown pants and a pair of old shoes.he is very funny.he is a good art teather .we all like him.

我们的美术老师不是很年轻,但也不是很老。他有一头乌黑的头发,两只大又黑的眼睛,一个小鼻子还有一张大嘴。看!他穿着白色上衣,蓝色的帽子,棕色的裤子和一双旧鞋子。他很有趣,他是一位很优秀的美术老师。我们都喜欢他。

精选读者点评

黑头发、大眼睛、小鼻子、大嘴巴,这画像从漫画里蹦出来的!后半段中英文对照也挺用心,就是“teather”拼了两次错,悄悄圈出来啦~

我不是小公主-三年级英语作文翻译

250字
主题:亲子理解、自我认同、劳动意识、情感唤醒、家庭角色

i am a lazy girl, when my mother asks me to help her with her housework, i will find some e_cuses and then run away. someday, my mother says to me that i am a little princess, then i am very angry, i argue that i am not a princess. since then, i am not lazy anymore, i just want to show to my mom that i can be a useful person.

我是一个懒惰的女孩,在妈妈叫我去帮助她做家务的时候,我会找一些借口来逃离。有一天,妈妈对我说我是一个小公主,我很生气,我争辩说我不是。打从那时起,我再也不偷懒了,我只是想要向妈妈展示我也能成为一个有用的人。

精选读者点评

小公主这称呼真引人共鸣啊!后半段“不偷懒”写得相当真心,连理由都带着点赌气的可爱劲儿,你妈要是看见这句,准会笑出声。

my fault

250字
主题:诚信、责任、友谊、反思、担当、成长

last week, my friend asked me to go to the park with him, i was so happy to say yes. but when that day came, i forgot about our date, i overslept and then stayed at home, watching the tv series. when my friend called me, i suddenly thought of our date, i was so sorry, it is my fault. i must take some action to make up my fault.

上周,我的朋友叫我和他一起去公园,我很开心地答应了。但是那天到来的时候,我忘记了我们的约定,我睡过头了,并且呆在家里看电视剧。在朋友打电话来的时候,我突然想起了我们的约定,我很抱歉,那是我的错误。我必须做一些事情来弥补我的错。

精选读者点评

哎哟,中英文混搭得挺自然啊!唯独“i was so happy to say yes”这句,中文里说“开心地答应了”就足够,加“so”反而像在翻译腔里打滑~

小学三年级简单英语作文带翻译-我的一天my day

300字
主题:日常习惯、健康生活、语言学习、时间管理、亲子互动

today is sunday.i get up early.because i play sports.i wear my t-shirt and my skirt.then i go to the playground to play ping-pong with lucy.we are happy.after that,we eat breakfast .i like drinking milk but she likes drinking juice.at 10:00,i play the piano.then i eat lunch at 2:30. i will go to school to study english. after that,i will go home and eat dinner.then i will go to bed.

this is my day. do you like it?

今天是星期天。我得到了早期。因为我做运动。我穿我的衬衫和我的裙子。然后我去操场打乒乓球和露西。我们是幸福的。之后,我们吃早餐。我喜欢喝牛奶,但她喜欢喝果汁。10:00,我发挥的钢琴。然后我吃午饭在2:30。我将去学校学习英语。之后,我回家吃晚饭,然后我就上床睡觉了。

这是我的一天。你喜欢吗?

精选读者点评

时态全乱套啦!“get up”“play”“go”都该用过去式才对呀~还有“play the piano”前面少了个冠词,得加“the”!

save earth

500字
主题:环境保护、生态平衡、人类责任、可持续发展

this is the earth. the green part is land. the blue part is sea. the white part is clouds. our earth is very beautiful and interesting. there are rivers, streams, seas and lakes. there are hills and mountains. there are woods, jungles and forests. there are many countries and cities. there are many people live in them. do you think the earth is very wonderful?

many years ago, the earth is very clean. but nowadays there is much pollution on the earth. there is air pollution, land pollution and water pollution.people are cutting down the forests.

many wild animals, birds and insects lose their homes. people are killing animals for their food and their skins. its very cruel. people are polluting the land, the water and the air. people must stop doing this. we must save the earth.

这是地球。绿色的部分是陆地。蓝色的部分是海洋。白色的部分是云。我们的地球非常美丽和有趣的。有河流,小溪,大海和湖泊。有山丘和山脉。有森林、丛林和森林。有许多国家和城市。有许多人居住在里面。你觉得地球很神奇吗?

许多年前,地球是非常干净的。但现在地球上有很多污染。有空气污染,土地污染和水污染。人们砍伐森林。

许多野生动物,鸟类和昆虫失去家园。人们猎杀动物为他们的食物和他们的皮。这是非常残忍的。人们正在污染土地,水和空气。人们必须停止这么做。我们必须拯救地球。

精选读者点评

地球真美啊!绿色陆地、蓝色海洋、白色云朵,像一幅水彩画,但后半段突然变沉重了,心里装着大事呢。

三年级英语作文范文带翻译欣赏

400字
主题:童年好奇、人物个性、学习习惯、生活趣味、成长细节

my classmate qiangqiang

我的同学强强

qiangqiang is my classmate. he is nine years old. he doesn study hard. he talks a lot in class, so the teacher is often angry with him. he doesn like to do his homework, but he likes sports. he plays football very well. in fact, he is the best player in our class.

强强是我班同学,他9岁了。他学习不用功,上课总说话,所以老师经常对他发火。他不喜欢做作业,可是他喜欢运动。他足球踢得好,实际上他在我班踢的。

qiangqiangs father has a clock, and it is very nice. it sings in the morning to wake up qiangqiang. what sings in the clock? one day he wondered. so he opened the clock and took it to parts. but he couldn put the parts back.

强强的爸爸有一个钟,很漂亮。它早晨唱歌把强强叫醒。“是什么东西在钟里唱歌?”有一天他想弄明白。于是他打开钟,把它拆了,可是却按不回去了。

词义 解析:

classmate:同学

2.often:经常

3.angry:生气的

4.homework:家庭作业

5.football:足球

6.clock:钟

7.wonder:怀疑

8.part:部分

词组解析:

be angry with:对……生气

精选读者点评

强强拆钟那段画面真满眼睛一亮,像看见他踮脚够表盘的样子。最后一句“按不回去了”,停在这儿真好,比写“爸爸骂他”高明十倍。中英文混排不是问题,但“he is the best player in our class”译成“踢的”太省了,缺了“最”字那股劲儿,孩子心里明明有,笔没跟上。