历史文化遗产被破坏原因高中英语作文

550字
主题:保护与发展、传统与现代、责任与行动、文化自觉、城市记忆、遗产守护

historical and cultural cities destroyed monuments events occur repeatedly。 for both historic city, behoove protection of the ancient city historic。 it is through the city construction planning, respectively, and the new regional evoke reserve can not only protect historical sites, and can conduct modern generation construction。 this in europe has long e_perience for reference。 but our country currently e_ists generally heavy construction development, light the conservation of historical thoughts。 in some places, keen on the struggle historic city, but the real motives but in investment, investment is not the protection of cultural relics in mind。 in some places, borrow economic development fame, allow foreign real estate developers vast destroy gujie old alley。 this kind of phenomenon, even beijing, fuzhou, yangzhou and suzhou, and other famous ancient city are different degree to e_ist。

历史文化名城破坏古迹的事件不断发生。既为历史名城,理应保护古城的历史风貌。这就是通过城市建设规划,分别划出保护区和新建区域,既能保护历史古迹,又能进行现代代建设。这在欧洲早有经验可以借鉴。但我国目前普遍存在重建设开发,轻古城保护的思想。有些地方热衷于争当历史名城,但真正的动机却在引资招商,并不把文物保护放在心上。有些地方,借发展经济为名,听任中外房地产商大片拆毁古街旧巷。这种现象,连北京、福州、扬州和蘇州等古城也都程度不同地存在。

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英文夹杂中文写法挺有想法,但“behoove”“e_perience”这些拼写得改,别让小错误抢了观点的风头!后半段讲北京福州苏州的例子相当真心,要是能把“借发展经济为名”那句再咂摸两遍,加个具体人或事,就更打动人了。

高三经典英语作文-私家车带翻译

1100字
主题:科技利弊、现代生活、可持续发展、社会进步、责任意识

作文一:

nowadays more and more families own private cars. private cars, as the product of modem civilization, have been playing a vital role in peoples daily activities. first, private cars are a convenient means of transportation. you can go wherever you like. secondly, there is no doubt that private cars will have a great impact on the economic growth. the rapid car industry growth will contribute much to keeping the countrys economy growing at a higher rate in the near futrue.

but every coin has two sides. the development of the private cars will bring about a series of problems. for e_ample, the polluted air given off by cars will do great harm to our health, too many private cars will lead to traffic jams and a great deal of energy will be wasted and so on.

so i think we should take advantages of private cars and make them serve us better. meantime we hope that satisfactory solutions to these negative problems will be found soon.

现在,越来越多的家庭拥有私家车。私家车作为现代文明的产物,在人们日常生活中扮演了重要的角色。首先,私家车是很方便的交通工具,你可以开车到处跑;其次,毫无疑问私家车对经,济的增长起到很大的作用。在不远的将来,快速发展的汽车工业在保持国家以较高速度的增长方面将做出很大的贡献。

当然,任何事物都有其两面性。快速发展的私家车会导致一系列问题。例如,汽车排出的废气对人体有很大的伤害,太多的私家车会导致交通阻塞,很多能源被浪费等。

所以我认为我们.应当充分利用私家车的优势,更好地为我们服务。同时,我们也希望不久这些消极的问题将会得到圆满的解决。

作文二:

nowadays more and more private cars have entered thousands of ordinary families. privatecars are used every day to carry i people to and from work. at weekends, private cars take families on joyful outings. most of people living in the city like private cars very much. what is more, the development of the car industry will stimulate other industries, such as iron and steel production. so the private car benefits the growth of economy.

private cars, like everything else, have more than one face. private cars have also given rise to a series of problems. for e_ample, the street are crowded with cars. they not only cause traffic accidents which injure or kill a large number of people each year, but also make great noise and give off many poisonous gases. but i believe we can solve all of the problems in the near futrue.

现在越来越多的私家车进入了普通家庭。人们每天开着私家车上下班。周末,私家车可以载着家人出门愉快地郊游。城市的人们大多数都非常喜欢私家车。更重要的是汽车工业的发展会刺激钢铁等其它行业的发展。因此,私家车有利于经济增长。

像任何事物一样,私家车也有多面性。私家车也带来一系列严重的问题,例如,街道因车辆多而拥挤不堪,不仅引起交通事故,每年造成大量的人员伤亡,而且私家车还制造噪音,排放废气。但是我相信我们会很快解决这些问题。

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这篇作文结构挺清楚,正反两面都说了,还举了例子。但“e_ample”拼错了,“futrue”也写漏字母啦!还有“the street are crowded”主谓不一致,得改。结尾那句“圆满的解决”有点空,能具体说说怎么解决吗?比如推广新能源车?

高三必修同步地理练习题文综

300字
主题:一带一路、区域合作、产业联动、人文交流、可持续发展

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丝绸之路经济带将是世界上最长、有发展潜力的经济大走廊。在古老的丝绸之路上活跃着十几万的浙江人,对沿线社会经济等产生了巨大的影响。读材料完成下列各题.

材料一 古丝绸之路示意图

材料二 近年来一批浙江人在当地(虚线范围内)河谷地带承包大片农田种植棉花,然后就近加工成棉纱、棉布或衣服销售到沿线区域,取得很好的经济效益。

(1)说出古丝绸之路经过的主要自然带。(4分)

(2)分析在当地农工商结合发展棉花产业的区位优势。(10分)

(3)十几万浙江人活跃在当地,阐述对当地经济发展的积极影响。(8分)

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这题答得真利索!第(2)问把“河谷水源 浙江经验 就地加工 市场近”全点到了,连分都卡得准,看来平时地理笔记没白抄~

携一抹姿态

550字
主题:对立统一、绿色发展、企业良知、代际公平、生态文明、责任伦理

整个世界就是一个矛盾的统一体,生态平衡与经济发展就其中对立统一的一对儿,难到此二者真的就象鱼和熊掌一样不可兼得?不,我们要携一抹坚定的恣态,守卫平衡,发展前进!

环保部部长潘岳曾痛心疾首的说:“中国改革开放26年取得了西方100年的经济成果,但西方100多年的环境问题也在中国的26年中集中体现。”

残橹摇矣,岸边木棉轻飞絮

浮光掠影,物是人非声声叹

今年6月,媒体曝光了哈药集团制药总厂的平重污染问题:工厂周边废气排放严重超标,恶臭难闻,部分污水处理设施因检修没有完全启动,导致河水变成墨绿色,大量废渣不是不分地点简单焚烧,就是直接倾倒在河沟边上,事实上,该厂已不是第一次遭环保指责,对如此污染,当地百姓早已怨声载道,无奈投诉未果罢了,如此傲慢排污,哈药总厂总有自已的“底气”。这些年来,该厂业绩节节攀升,是当利税大户,尽管在环保问题上屡屡不达标,也没有受到制裁,面对质疑,其管理者竟说没钱投入环保,一个年销售额50亿,一年广告费投入达5亿的企业,却哭穷无钱治污,我不禁这样想:一个医药企业连当地百姓健康都不当回事,他们的产品怎么能让人放心呢?

不惜一切代价追求经济效益,必然破坏环境,最终损害公众的根本利益,以子孙的福祉为代价追求经济发展,能行之多远呢?

我们的发展是否应当摆一种心态,携一抹姿态,在追求生态平衡的基础上稳步前行。

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这句“残橹摇矣,岸边木棉轻飞絮”真好!画面静得能听见风声,又暗含时光流逝的怅然,和后文哈药厂那段形成冷热对照,你无心插柳,倒把议论文写出诗味来了。

小学生建党90周年作文

400字
主题:国家发展、时代变迁、综合国力、教育振兴、经济腾飞、制度优势

中国改革开放30年,保证了和平稳定,建立起全面的物质生产体系,经济建设取得显著成就。中国已经由初级工业经济转变为高级工业经济,包括钢铁、家用电器在内的许多工业产品生产居世界第一位。

中国改革开放30年,中国的国际地位不断提高。快速经济增长使中国在世界经济中的地位不断上升。

中国改革开放不断深入的同时,经济发展水平大幅度提高。1978年中国人均gdp为381元,按照1980年1美元兑换1.53元人民币汇率计算,约合149美元。2026年中国人均gdp上升到2640美元,比改革开放前增长了17倍。

教育发展是衡量一个国家发展水平和发展潜力的重要指标。改革开放30年,中国教育发展取得长足进步。1978年中国普通高等学校毕业生数只有16.5万,占当时中国人口总量96259万的0.0171%。2026年中国普通高等学校毕业生数达到377.5万,占当年中国人口总量131448万的0.2871%,30年间增长了16.7倍。

没有共产党,就没有新中国

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这段数据真扎实!就是“2026年”是不是笔误?现在才2024年呢,小心闹笑话~

私家车的好处

450字
主题:时代进步、民生改善、交通变革、消费升级、城乡发展

many years ago, the private car is e_pensive, there are not so many people can afford it. since our country has joined wto, the economy develops fast, more and more people have money to buy what they want, now as people’s life standard has improved in general, private car is no longer belongs to the rich people, most families can afford. owning the private cars has many advantages, first, people can save time. they can drive their cars to go where they want directly, they don’t have to waste to time to wait for the bus. second, it is much convenient for people, they can drive their cars to go travel, enjoying the beautiful scenery all the way.

很多年以前,私家车是很贵的,并没有多少人能够买得起。自从我们国家加入了wto, 经济快速发展,越来越多的人有钱去买他们想要的,如今随着人们生活水平整体的提高,私家车不再仅仅属于富人,大部分家庭可以买得起。拥有私家车有很多好处,第一,人们可以节省时间。他们可以驾着自己的车直接去想要去的地方,不必花费时间来等公车。第二,对于人们来说也很方便,他们可以驾着车子去旅游,享受沿途美丽的风景。

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中英文混搭得挺有创意,but“e_pensive”中间那个下划线是笔误还是在玩密码?wto全大写才规范哦~

八年级八一建军节晚会作文

800字
主题:拥军优属、军政同心、家国情怀、时代使命、融合发展、长治久安

今天,我们欢聚一堂,共同庆祝“八一建军节”,借此机会,我谨代表____天城县委、县人民政府向你们表示节日的祝贺和亲切的慰问,对你们长期以来始终不渝支持天城经济发展、社会进步所做出的贡献表示衷心的感谢。

改革开放以来,特别是“__”以来,天城经济始终保持较快增长势头,支柱产业发展壮大,特色经济迅速崛起,城市建设日新月异,社会各项事业不断向前推进,综合实力进一步增强,人民生活水平显著提高。__年,全县完成国内生产总值63亿元,比__年增长23.2%,位居全州第一,全省第五。现在,全县上下呈现出一派经济欣欣向荣,社会安定团结的大好局面。所有取得的这些成绩,是县委正确领导的结果,是全县50万各族人民共同努力的结果,同时,也是你们无私奉献,积极参与建设的结果。

______同志指出:“全面推进建设有中国特色社会主义事业,努力增强我国的经济实力、国防实力和民族凝聚力,实现中华民族的伟大复兴,始终需要广大军民同心同德,艰苦奋斗。”在今后的工作中,天城县人民政府要认真学习、深刻领会______的重要指示精神,切实站在全局的高度,进一步提高对“双拥”工作重大意义的认识。现在,天城正面临着实现经济社会发展新跨越的艰巨任务。面对前进道路上的各种困难和风险,要实现我们的奋斗目标,必须动员和调动全县上上下下、方方面面的力量,尤其是要紧紧依靠广大军民的团结一心、共同奋斗。实践证明,坚如磐石的军政军民团结,是我们能够顶住压力,抗御风险,战胜困难,不断前进,最终实现我们发展目标的一个重要法宝。没有人民军队的支持,没有军政军民团结,就不会有改革发展稳定的大好局面,也就不会有天城今后的更大发展。因此,天城县人民政府将站在民族振兴、人民幸福和国家长治久安的战略高度,从全县工作大局出发,充分认识“双拥”工作的重大意义,切实做好拥军优属工作,积极主动为驻弥部队解决教育、训练、值勤以及生活中的难题,进一步巩固和发展军政军民关系。

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这稿子写得挺像模像样,但“八一”讲话怎么读着像县政府工作报告?开头那句“欢聚一堂”太熟了,熟得让人想打哈欠。你真觉得战士们爱听“gdp63亿元”“全省第五”这些话?试试把“慰问”换成一句他们训练完擦汗时能点头的委实话呢!

高速路上的交通堵塞

450字
主题:春运现象、出行选择、政策影响、生活观察、社会变迁、家庭叙事

according to chinese holiday plan, on the seventh day of the new year, people need to go to work, so on the si_th day, it means a lot of people will go back to the place they work. as chinese economy develops so fast, more and more people own private cars, they like to drive home. what’s more, the highway is free in the certain time, which means there will be more people choose to drive their cars. the truth is that traffic jams happened, my sister witnessed it, she drove home yesterday, it took her almost a day to reach her working city. how terrible it is, she said she would never drove home on the holiday.

根据中国的节假日安排,在新年的第七天,人们需要上班,因此在第六天,这意味着很多人会返回到他们工作的地方。随着中国经济的快速发展,越来越多的人拥有私家车,人们喜欢开车回家。而且,在一定的时间内,高速路是免费的,这意味着会有更多的人选择开车回家。事实上,交通堵塞真的发生了,我的姐姐就目睹了这一切,她昨天开车回家,花费了几乎一天的时间才回到她上班的地方。真是恐怖啊,她说她在节假日再也不开车回家了。

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第六天返程高峰写得挺实!姐姐堵车那句“几乎一天”相当立体可感感,比光说“很堵”强多啦~平心而论“si_th”拼错了,下次检查下哈!

该不该抵制日货

1250字
主题:理性、责任、发展、传承、担当

近几年来钓鱼岛事件成为了国人最为关注的话题,保卫钓鱼岛,保卫我们的祖国,成为了每位国人应尽的职责。如今,保卫钓鱼岛的热潮在中华大地上奔涌,保卫钓鱼岛的激情在每一位炎黄子孙的心目中燃烧。各种口号也就随之既出:钓鱼岛是我们的!日本人绝不可侵犯!誓死保卫钓鱼岛!强我中华!就此,国人们开始号召和组织起了抵制日货这一行动。

那么,当今的中国,当今的国情,我们该不该抵制日货,抵制是不是最有效的办法,抵制日货是否有利于中国的发展,因此,我们理应分析抵制日货到底是利大于弊,还是弊大于利

通过网络,我们可以观察到各国的gdp统计数据的排名,中国的排名虽然名列前茅,但如果按人均来统计,中国的排名仅仅能够达到一百名左右,而日本却居前几。

关于中日之间的贸易关系,中日双边贸易额__年为1700亿美元,__年突破了1900亿美元。__年日本对外投资总额为288亿美元,相比__年有所下降,但对中国的投资却增加了8.6亿美元,此外,中国对日本的投资也有了明显的增长。

单从数据上发现,中国和日本的经济联系已经达到了紧密的程度,一旦中国坚决的抵制日货,消除中日间企业的合作,那么,对中国的经济发展想必会产生负面的影响。

再从另一个角度看,中国地大物博,人才济济,拥有巨大的发展空间,中国的迅速发展会为许多国家造成威胁,那么,如果中国和日本斗成了两败俱伤,那正和了其他国家的意。所以,从这两个角度看,让中国从根本上抵制日货是不可行的,何况让中国的每一个人都不买日货也是不可能的。

如此一来,就剩下了国人们小规模和短时间的抵制,这样的抵制虽然不会产生巨大的作用,但是对于社会安定会起到一定的作用,每当国人感到自己的民族和信仰遭受外界的侮辱和威胁时,那么一定会感到亢奋从而发起行动,_就是最常见的,这样的活动一来使国人的情绪得到缓解,二来让国家也就更明白了民心所向,都说得民心国家必安、失民心国家必危。由此一来小规模的_相比让国人们都把情绪压制在家,而引起的一系列谬论更能使社会安稳。

再从历来看,中国第一次举行的抵制日货大赛还是在上个世纪的广州举行的,那时候的中国十分落后,经济萧条,人民生活在水生火热之中,再回到二十一世纪的中国,可谓繁荣富强,朝气蓬勃,高速发展。那么人民的精神素质是不是该理应提高,而不是逗留在上个世纪,在国家面临问题时,是不是该有新的观点和行动。

作为二十一世纪的中国人,每个人的手中都掌握了国家的未来,我们是新生代,我们有新鲜的想法,观点,更重要的是我们拥有智慧和去创造的双手。

作为二十一世纪的中国人,我们更是一些拥有理性的人,作为一个理性的人,我们就不应该再把不同历史阶段的事物带回到同一时代去衡量,一味的抵制说明不了爱与恨,有时正说明了想法的愚昧,但是作为中国人,我们不卑不亢的民族精神要永远地继承。

在今天,我们拥有更好的条件去建设,因此我们拥有比抵制更有效的办法,那就是让中国货彻底的强大!让中国货无敌于天下!

我们要继承中华名族的传统美德,用的方式去爱国,积极工作,积极创新,争取为中国的发展贡献自己的一份力量!

初二:1285399730

精选读者点评

这篇作文立意挺高,能跳出“喊口号”想问题,分外喜欢你写“小规模抵制像情绪减压阀”这句,有生活味儿,也真!然而第三段数据空着好几处,是忘填了?还是没查到?顺手补上就更扎实啦。

百年中国梦

1150字
主题:国家发展、时代使命、制度优势、全球视野、历史自觉、道路自信

中国遇到的挑战将会更尖锐——发展之路的挑战、民生现实的挑战、世界竞争的挑战,这些挑战将决定中国发展的质量,更决定中国在世界的地位!“中国梦”,让人惊喜让人憧憬!

人们都在为中国而骄傲,因为,中国连续三十多年一直保持经济健康快速增长,这是世界发展极为罕见的现象。而___在履新后提出“中国梦”的伟大构想,揭示出中国发展的根本动力。

纵观世界历史,美国爆发的次贷危机,是世界资本主义进入虚拟阶段所爆发的第一场全新形态的危机。这场对世界经济产生重大影响的全球性危机让主要经济国家面临经济环境困难重重的危机状态。有专家认为,由于美国的庞大有毒资产没有得到处理,且主要资本主义国家在危机中不是通力合作,而是激化矛盾,互相拆台,世界经济在未来三年有极大的再度探底的可能性,并且可能长期走不出萧条阴影,由于美国的金融机构负债能力长期难以恢复,美国的进口将长期难以振兴,在欧洲,由于欧盟各国为了控制债务增长必须大幅度压缩财政赤字,也会导致进口显著萎缩,因此世界贸易也会在未来陷入长期萎缩。

与美国、日本、欧洲等地的经济长期萎缩和萧条不同,中国却在世界经济发展中一枝独秀。中国保持着超过7%的经济增长率,让世界各国惊羡不已,中国合理的经济政策和中国特色的发展道路,是中国经济成功的关键,正是在这个层面上,几乎世界各国都很难理解中国发展的奥秘,这也是实现“中国梦”理想的基石。

改革,是___的惊天之作,是中国成为世界第二大经济体的根本动力。履新以来,___、李克强强调得最多的就是“改革”。___在广东考察时反复强调,改革开放是我们党的历一次伟大觉醒,正是这个伟大觉醒孕育了新时期从理论到实践的伟大创造。实践证明,改革开放是当代中国发展进步的活力之源,是我们党和人民大踏步赶上时代前进步伐的重要法宝,是坚持和发展中国特色社会主义的必由之路。现在我国改革已经进入攻坚期和深水区,我们必须以更大的政治勇气和智慧,不失时机深化重要领域改革。深化改革开放,要坚定信心、凝聚共识、统筹谋划、协同推进。改革开放是决定当代中国命运的关键一招,也是决定实现“两个100年”奋斗目标、实现中华民族伟大复兴的关键一招。实践发展永无止境,解放思想永无止境,改革开放也永无止境,停顿和倒退没有出路。是的,改革是时代发展必须回应的关键问题,改革也是一个系统工程,引一发动全身!有着长期地方工作经历的___对改革的艰巨性、复杂性、系统性有着十分深刻的理解,所以,___的这一要求回应了时代呼唤,对于增强改革的理性思维,凝聚更多的改革智慧,用好事关民族复兴的关键一招,不断推进改革取得实效,有着十分重要的现实意义。尤其是___把改革与实现“两个100年”奋斗目标紧密联系起来,更加突出地凸显出改革对中国前途命运的决定作用。

精选读者点评

查资料真下功夫了!美国次贷危机那段写得比新闻联播还扎实,但“中国梦”三个字在全文里飘来飘去,像风筝没系线,你心里那个梦,到底长啥样?画个草图试试?

图表图画型范文三

450字
主题:社会变迁、经济腾飞、民生改善、制度变革、城市化、居民自主权

四级作文题目: changes in the ownership of houses in china

it can be seen from the chart that there have been dramatic changes in the ownership of houses in china in the past 50 years. while the percentage of state-owned houses has dropped from 70% in 1950s to 20% in 1990s, that of private houses has soared from 30% to 80% during the same period of time.

a number of factors could account for the change in the chart, but the following are the most critical ones. first, thanks to the policy of reform and opening-up, the nations economy has been developing at a considerably high speed in the past decades. therefore, people have more e_tra money to improve their housing. secondly, other relevant state policies and the boom of real estate industry provide citizens with more opportunities to choose their own dwelling places. last but not least, people have attached greater importance to their quality of life. thus more of them have purchased houses in their own favor.

in a word, this chart is a perfect inde_ of chinas fast e_panding economy and peoples rising standard of living. although a series of problems have arisen in the process, it is reasonable for us to believe that they can be solved in the near future with effective measures taken by both the government and the public.

精选读者点评

这图表描述得挺清楚,数据对比一目了然!但“e_tra”“inde_”“e_panding”这些拼写漏字母,是打字太快?还是没检查?下次写完默读一遍,小错就跑不掉了。

汉语热

350字
主题:文化传播、国家崛起、语言价值、全球认同、青年责任

nowadays,there is a dramatic increase in the number of people who learn chinese in foreign countries, such as the united states,canada and the other countries.why the chinese is more and more well received?

many different reasons contribute to the craze for chinese learning.firstly,in the past decades,china has witnessed a dramatic improvement in economy.chinese political and economic influences prompt more foreigners to learn chinese. secondly,with the great leap in economy,china has created more job opportunities.as a result,if a foreigner thorough understanding the chinese ,he or she will have better opportunities to get promoted. finally,the unique chinese culture also attracts great attention from foreigners.

we should be proud of this phenomenon,but we can never take it for granted.as a chinese,i think we should work harder for the sake of our country .only when china develops further can this phenomenon last longer.

精选读者点评

开头两个“dramatic”连用,像叠词似的,读着激情澎湃!可“the chinese”得改成“chinese”,语言课上咱不讲冠词,但母语者真不这么说。

图表图画型

550字
主题:健康改善、社会发展、民生进步、经济腾飞、公共卫生、人类福祉

17. health gains in developing countries

it can be seen from the chart that there have been dramatic changes in life e_pectancy and infant mortality in developing countries in the past decades. as the chart shows, people’s life e_pectancy soared from 40 years old to 60 years old from 1960 to 1990. meanwhile, infant mortality declined from 200 to 150 deaths per thousand births.

the change in the chart may be attributed to a number of factors, but the following are the most critical ones. first, developing countries’ economy has been developing at a considerably high speed in the past decades. therefore, people have more e_tra money to improve their health. secondly, the advances in medical sciences and boom of medical industry provide citizens with more opportunities to cure their diseases. last but not least, people have attached greater importance to their quality of life, thus they have spent more money and time to build up their bodies.

in a word, this chart is a perfect indicator of developing nations’ fast e_panding economy and people’s rising standard of life. although a series of problems have arisen in the process, it is reasonable for us to believe that they can be solved in the near future with effective measures taken by both the government and the public.

(或if this trend continues, developing countries will soon approach the developed countries in terms of health care. people will live longer and healthier lives. the result of this will be happier and more productive populations.)

精选读者点评

这个图表描述得挺清楚,数据变化一目了然!但“e_pectancy”“e_tra”“e_panding”这些单词漏字母啦,是打字太快?下次写完记得扫一眼拼写~

图表图画型

450字
主题:社会变迁、经济转型、民生改善、制度演进、城市化、人民福祉

15. changes in the ownership of houses in china

it can be seen from the chart that there have been dramatic changes in the ownership of houses in china in the past 50 years. while the percentage of state-owned houses has dropped from 70% in 1950’s to 20% in 1990’s, that of private houses has soared from 30% to 80% during the same period of time.

a number of factors could account for the change in the chart, but the following are the most critical ones. first, thanks to the policy of reform and opening-up, the nation’s economy has been developing at a considerably high speed in the past decades. therefore, people have more e_tra money to improve their housing. secondly, other relevant state policies and the boom of real estate industry provide citizens with more opportunities to choose their own dwelling places. last but not least, people have attached greater importance to their quality of life. thus, more of them have purchased houses in their own favor.

in a word, this chart is a perfect indicator of china’s fast e_panding economy and people’s rising standard of life. although a series of problems have arisen in the process, it is reasonable for us to believe that they can be solved in the near future with effective measures taken by both the government and the public.

精选读者点评

图表描述很清晰,数据对比一目了然!“soared”“dropped”用得准,场景直观生动感。唯独“e_tra money”拼错了,是extra;“e_panding”也漏了x,得圈出来改。

庆祝国庆节

800字
主题:国家崛起、人民当家、时代奋进、山河巨变、文化自信、强国梦想

人们永远不会忘记那一天——1949年10月1日!在这一天,国旗与太阳一同冉冉升起,国歌谱写了中国新的命运!_____站在__台上,台下站着三十万人,___激动地宣布道:“中华人民共和国中央人民政府在今天成立了,中国人民从此站起来了!”这庄严的宣告,这雄伟的声音,使全场三十万人一齐欢呼起来。

犹记得,曾经华夏5000年的灿烂文明史,在帝国主义的铁蹄下,在法西斯的枪炮声中,惨遭蹂躏。终于,东方睡狮在共产党人的呐喊声中觉醒,它仰天长啸。经过无数革命先烈浴血奋战,终于,在1949年,我们伟大的祖国旧貌换新颜。人民为了成为了自己的主人,我们有了开始。

改革开放发展经济,我们要把祖国发展成为世界经济强国。30年来,中国的巨大变化使我感到惊讶,但在惊讶之余,我觉得更多的是喜悦。现在,生活中处处是改革开放的影子,人们的衣、食、住、行都有了很大的变化,改革的春风已吹遍千家万户。曾经的沿海小渔村已发展成国际知名的经济发达城市,西部内地城市也在“西部大开发”的号角声中蓬勃发展。以前的农民知识少,只知道耕作。可现在不同了,农民对学习不仅越来越重视,而且“活到老,学到老”的概念已经深入人心,有了知识生活当然也会越来越富裕。人们脱离吃不饱,穿不暖的苦日子,个个搬进了高大的楼房,穿上了漂亮的新衣服。彩电、冰箱、手机……村村通了公路。这些原来想都不敢想的东西和事,如今成为了现实。如今的农村给人们的感觉是生机勃勃,气象万千。村村通公路,新农村建设给农民兄弟的生活带来勃勃生机,气象万千。祖国正在向经济强一步步迈进。

祖国的变化更是三天三夜也讲不完的。60年来,我们做出了许多令世界刮目相看的成绩。青藏铁路,一条边外国工程都完成不了的任务,我们做到了,2026年,神舟王号的发射成功,圆了中华民族的千年飞天梦,2026年,中国首颗探月卫星“嫦娥”一号飞向了茫茫太空,拜访了月宫的嫦娥和玉免,同样是2026年,成功举办了北京奥运会。我们向世界证明了中华儿女那一颗永不言败奋发向上的进取之心!

精选读者点评

“毛__”“神舟王号”“2026年”……这些硬伤得圈出来,孩子,查证史实比写漂亮句子更关键。再翻翻课本附录的时间轴吧。

出国旅游的英语作文

450字
主题:时代变迁、民生改善、国际视野、社会进步

traveling abroad

it can be seen from the chart that there have been sharp increases in the number of people traveling abroad in city _ in the past decade.

as the chart shows, the year 1995 witnessed only about 10,000 people from this city touring abroad. in 2000, the number soared to nearly 40,000. last year, more than 120,000 people in the city chose to spend their vacations outside china.

a number of factors account for the change in the chart, but the following are the most critical ones.

first, thanks to the policy of reform and opening-up, the nation’s economy has been developing at a considerably high speed in the past decades. therefore, the people have more e_tra money for traveling.

secondly, other relevant state policies and the boom of touring industry provide citizens with more opportunities to go out and see the world.

last but not least, people have attached greater importance to the quality of life, thus they spend more money and time traveling and sight-seeing.

in a word, this chart is a perfect indicator of china’s fast e_panding economy and people’s rising standard of life. the trend of traveling abroad will further stimulate the development of our economy and broaden people’s horizons.

精选读者点评

数据用得挺顺,1995、2000、去年三组数字一摆,变化就站起来了!就是“e_tra money”“e_panding”是手滑打漏了吧?下次写完记得眯眼扫一遍拼写~

图表图画型范文一

450字
主题:时代变迁、民生改善、对外开放、生活质量、社会进步、全球意识

四级作文题目:traveling abroad

it can be seen from the chart that there have been sharp increases in the number of people traveling abroad in city _ in the past decade. as the chart shows, the year 1995 witnessed only about 10,000 people from this city touring abroad. in 2000, the number soared to nearly 40,000. last year, more than 120,000 people in the city chose to spend their vacations outside china.

a number of factors account for the change in the chart, but the following are the most critical ones. first, thanks to the policy of reform and opening-up, the nations economy has been developing at a considerably high speed in the past decades. therefore, the people have more e_tra money for traveling. secondly, other relevant state policies and the boom of touring industry provide citizens with more opportunities to go out and see the world. last but not least, people have attached greater importance to the quality of life, thus they spend more money and time traveling and sight-seeing.

in a word, this chart is a perfect indicator of chinas fast e_panding economy and peoples rising standard of life. the trend of traveling abroad will further stimulate the development of our economy and broaden peoples horizons.

精选读者点评

数据变化写得清清楚楚,1995年1万,2000年4万,去年12万,三个数字串起来,就是一条向上的线,画面清晰!

一建军节军民联欢晚会上的讲话

850字
主题:拥军优属、军政同心、高质量发展、长治久安、家国情怀、时代使命

尊敬的驻天城人民解放军、武装警察部队官兵,预备役军人、民兵:

今天,我们欢聚一堂,共同庆祝“八一建军节”,借此机会,我谨代表____天城县委、县人民政府向你们表示节日的祝贺和亲切的慰问,对你们长期以来始终不渝支持天城经济发展、社会进步所做出的贡献表示衷心的感谢。

改革开放以来,特别是“__”以来,天城经济始终保持较快增长势头,支柱产业发展壮大,特色经济迅速崛起,城市建设日新月异,社会各项事业不断向前推进,综合实力进一步增强,人民生活水平显著提高。__年,全县完成国内生产总值63亿元,比__年增长23.2%,位居全州第一,全省第五。现在,全县上下呈现出一派经济欣欣向荣,社会安定团结的大好局面。所有取得的这些成绩,是县委正确领导的结果,是全县50万各族人民共同努力的结果,同时,也是你们无私奉献,积极参与建设的结果。

______同志指出:“全面推进建设有中国特色社会主义事业,努力增强我国的经济实力、国防实力和民族凝聚力,实现中华民族的伟大复兴,始终需要广大军民同心同德,艰苦奋斗。”在今后的工作中,天城县人民政府要认真学习、深刻领会______的重要指示精神,切实站在全局的高度,进一步提高对“双拥”工作重大意义的认识。现在,天城正面临着实现经济社会发展新跨越的艰巨任务。面对前进道路上的各种困难和风险,要实现我们的奋斗目标,必须动员和调动全县上上下下、方方面面的力量,尤其是要紧紧依靠广大军民的团结一心、共同奋斗。实践证明,坚如磐石的军政军民团结,是我们能够顶住压力,抗御风险,战胜困难,不断前进,最终实现我们发展目标的一个重要法宝。没有人民军队的支持,没有军政军民团结,就不会有改革发展稳定的大好局面,也就不会有天城今后的更大发展。因此,天城县人民政府将站在民族振兴、人民幸福和国家长治久安的战略高度,从全县工作大局出发,充分认识“双拥”工作的重大意义,切实做好拥军优属工作,积极主动为驻弥部队解决教育、训练、值勤以及生活中的难题,进一步巩固和发展军政军民关系。

精选读者点评

这篇讲话稿格式挺规范,称呼、问候、感谢、展望都齐了,但“__”“______”这么多空着,是忘记填还是故意留白?下次交稿前记得检查一遍哈~

考研英语二大作文范文及点评

550字
主题:城乡变迁、人口流动、社会转型、现代化进程、区域发展、统计表达

growing urban population and declining rural population

from the graph, we can see that the urban population was growing and the rural population was declining from 1990 to 2026. the number of the urban population rose from 300 million in 1990 to about 460 million in 2000, and to about 685 million in 2026, while the rural population decreased from about 820 million in 1990 to 800 million in 2000 and to about 690 million in 2026. its obvious that in the past two decades, the urban area witnessed a steady growth, but in the latter decade, the rural population had a remarkable decline.

there are two reasons for this phenomenon. on one hand, the economic boom led to the regular improvement of people’s living standard, and further resulted in a steady growing urban population. on the other hand, from 2000, the countryside urbanization oriented by the government gave rise to a conspicuously declining rural population.

in conclusion, based on the above analysis, the urban population will be growing, while the rural population will continue to drop in the future.

点评:本次考研英语二大作文是图表作文,这也是历年大作文的典型题目之一。针对图表作文,我们一般采用三段式来谋篇布局, 第一段概述图表的信息,指出变化的趋势和不同,第二段分析造成这一趋势以及变化不同的原因,第三段则根据以上分析展望未来的变化。在写作过程中注意衔接词的使用以及同义词的搭配使用,使文章更加出彩。

精选读者点评

这图看得真清楚!数据列得整整齐齐,1990到2026年城乡人口此消彼长,一眼就抓住了核心趋势。尤其“685万”“690万”这两个数挨着写,反差感一下就出来了,你心里是真有这幅图的。