my life

300字
主题:童年生活、日常节奏、祖辈陪伴、学习压力、真实感受

everybody has their life. our lives are different.

on weekdays, i must get up early. but i don’t like it. because i am very tired. then i have breakfast and go quickly to school. the classes begin at half past seven. i think the time is too early.

after school, i go to my grandmother’s home and have lunch there. but the lunch is hodgepodge(大杂烩). it’s very unsavory(难吃的). i don’t like it at all. after lunch, i go to school at one thirty in the afternoon.

there are three classes in the afternoon. i am very angry. because i am too tired.

in the evening, i have supper in my grandparents’ home. the supper is very good. i like it a lot. after supper, i go back to my home right now.

that is my life on weekdays. i think it’s very well. what do you think about it?

精选读者点评

“hodgepodge”“unsavory”用得真溜!查词典了吧?客观来说“very well”配“that is my life”,像端着碗说“这饭真香”,可后头全是苦瓜味儿……

第21-22期

250字
主题:友谊力量、互助精神、校园生活、情感支持

making more friends

i like to make friends, i can share my happiness and sorrow with friends.

friends are very important part of our lives, without them, i will be very lonely.

i learn it when i was very small.

it was friday, i went to school to join the english contest, before i went into the classroom, i found i did not bring the admission card, i felt so worried, without admission card, i could not walk into the classroom.

my friend li looked at me and asked me what happened, i told him the truth, then he asked me to stay here and he rushed to our classroom.

ten minutes later, he came back with my admission card.

i was so thankful, friends are very important.

精选读者点评

开头两段像背课文,但后面那个“相当钟”真放心不下!li冲出去那一刻,我手心都出汗了,把“着急”写成“手心出汗”,试试?

未来的生活高中英语作文

250字
主题:科技发展、生活变革、人类探索、未来图景

as time goes by, there are going to be big changes in our everyday lives in the future. for e_ample,

as time goes by, there are going to be big changes in our everyday life.

for e_ample, when we are hungry, we don need to cook in a hurry.

just take some pills, and everything will be ok.

when we are free, we can go anywhere by spacecraft.

it will be very cheap, just like taking a ta_i now.

and of course, if we want to see what is like under the sea, just travel down there in a flying object like ufo.

maybe there will be a lot of cities and people living there.

i think itll be very easy to travel anywhere, not only in our world, but also in space and in the deep sea.

精选读者点评

这“e_ample”写得真逗,下划线漏了x,但想法飞得比飞船还高! pills管饱?太空打车比地铁便宜?海底ufo观光……脑洞开得我笑出声~只是“everyday lives”和“everyday life”混着用,小细节悄悄改一改哈。

高中英语作文范文

250字
主题:成长、归属感、校园生活、亲情、自然、情感认同

my birthday party

today is my birthday and im so e_cited about it.in the morning i put a note on the table for my mum and it said, oday is my birthday,don forget it!at school,i got many gifts and cards for my classmates and had a lot of fun.but i was still e_pecting the birthday party after school. judging by her system, it is not hard for us to know, every student who studies in the school should live at school. really so, i live at school all the day. the environment in the school is also the most. there is a river in the school side. and water in river is limpid, in which there is several small fish and some shrimps etc. this is my school, my family.

精选读者点评

开头那张小纸条真有生活味儿!“别忘了”三个字,是孩子踮脚写完又偷偷藏好的样子。但是“e_cited”“e_pecting”漏字母啦,下次写完自己读一遍?