我的房间my bedroom

200字
主题:我的空间、日常习惯、学习生活、温馨小屋

i have a small bedroom. there is a small bed, a desk, a chair, a closet and a bookshelf in my bedroom. there is a lamp on my desk, i do my homework on the desk every night. i like to read before i go to bed. i have many books in my bookshelf. i like my bedroom.

我有一个小卧室。卧室里有一张小床,一张书桌,一把椅子,一个衣柜,还有一个书架。在书桌上有一个台灯,我每天晚上在书桌上做作业。我喜欢在睡觉之前读书。我的书架里有很多书。我喜欢我的卧室。

精选读者点评

小床、书桌、台灯……这些词像一颗颗小纽扣,把生活别得整整齐齐。最后一句“我喜欢我的卧室”真干净,不绕弯,也不喊口号,就是心里话。

烟花firework

150字
主题:传统节日、家庭陪伴、视觉之美、童年记忆

in the spring festival evening, my father and i will go to see the firework. the fireworks have many colours, red, yellow, green, blue and others. i can see many fireworks in the sky, they are very beautiful. i like fireworks very much.

在春节的晚上,爸爸和我会去看烟花。烟花有好多颜色,红色、黄色、绿色、蓝色和其他的。我可以看到很多烟花在天空里,它们非常美丽。我非常喜欢烟花。

精选读者点评

句子太短啦!试试把“红黄绿蓝”串成一句话?比如“像打翻的调色盘,红的似火、黄的如金……”

一只可爱的猫 a cute cat

250字
主题:温情、责任、善意、归途、陪伴

after school, i saw a cute cat on the road, it is white and small. i saw the cat follow me on the way home, i thought it must lose the way. so i asked people if they lost a cat, but they said they hadn a cat. at last, an old woman told me her cat is white and small, suddenly, the cat rushed to woman. it found its host. how cute the cat is!

当我放学回家后,我在路上看到一只可爱的猫,它是白色的,有点小。我发现它一路上跟着我,它可能迷路了。因此我问人们是否有丢失猫,但是没有说养有猫。最后,一位老年妇女告诉我她的猫是白色,有点小的,猫冲向了妇女。它找到了它的主人。

精选读者点评

猫冲向老奶奶那句灵动自然!白、小、急,三个词全在动作里蹦出来了,比写“它飞奔过去”激情澎湃多了。下回试试把“我问人”那段也改成眼睛看见的:谁摇头?谁摆手?谁从门缝探出头啊!

三年级英语作文-我的烦恼my vexation

250字
主题:亲子关系、隐私意识、情感冲突、代际理解、自我成长

when i got home, i was very surprised to find my mother reading my diary. i was too angry to say a word. my eyes were swimming in tears.

as soon as my mother saw me, her face turned red and she said to me, sorry! my daughter! i…i only want to … i didn want to hear her e_cuse. i need to have my own secrets and my parents should respect that.

当我回到家时,我很惊讶的发现我的母亲看我的日记。我太生气说不出话来。我的眼睛被泪水中游泳。

当我妈妈看到我,她的脸红了,她对我说,“对不起!我的女儿!我…我只是想…”我不想听到她的借口。我需要有自己的秘密和父母应该尊重。

精选读者点评

哎哟,中英文混搭得挺有创意!值得注意的是“eyes were swimming in tears”直译成“眼睛在泪水中游泳”,老师笑出声,下次试试“泪水在眼眶里打转”?还有,“e_cuse”少了个“x”,小心被当成密码本啦~

三年级宠物的英语作文

650字
主题:生命尊严、责任意识、人文关怀、人与动物关系

三年级有关宠物的英语作文

many young people trend to keep pets, who can treat the pet as their friends and don’t feel lonely. pets are lovely and loyal to their masters. many touching stories have been happening between animals and human being. when we keep pets, we have the duty to take care of them.

许多年轻人想要养宠物,他们可以把宠物当作他们的朋友,不会感到孤独。宠物是可爱的,忠于他们的主人,有许多感人的故事发生在动物和人类之间。当我们养宠物的时候,有义务照顾它们。

when we are watching touching stories among human being and animals in the screen, while cruel incidents are happening in the real life. it had been reported that some pets were abandoned by their owners because they did not want to raise these creatures anymore, so the fastest way to get rid of the pets was to leave them directly. the abandon behavior was criticized by the public, they felt sorry for these lovely animals and at the same time, they blamed the cold-blooded and irresponsible pet owners.

当我们在荧幕上看到人类和动物之间的感人故事时,而残酷的事件却在现实生活中不断发生。据报道,一些宠物因为主人不想养了而被抛弃,所以摆脱它们的最快的方法就是直接遗弃。遗弃的行为受到了公众的批评,他们对这些可爱的动物感到遗憾,同时,他们指责冷血和不负责任的宠物主人。

when we keep pets, we need to keep our responsility. pets’ lives are as precious as our human being, so if we don’t want to keep them, at least we need to find someone to look after them instead of abandoning them.

我们养宠物时就要有相应的责任。宠物的生命和我们人类一样宝贵,如果我们不想养它们了,至少需要找到人照顾它们,而不是抛弃。

精选读者点评

第三段那个“荧幕上感人故事”和“现实中直接丢弃”的对比,写得真有劲!但“cold-blooded”用得有点重,孩子你是不是刚学这个词?试试“heartless”更贴切些~

开心的一天 a happy day

250字
主题:童年趣事、自然观察、友情陪伴、生活体验

today, i go to the zoo with my friends, i never see so many animals before, i see the panda, the giraffe and the monkey. i am so impressed by the money, they are so active and naughty. the audience throws the food to them, the moneys fight for it, it is so funny. i have a good time with my friends, i broaden my eyesight.

今天,我和朋友去动物园,我以前从来没看到那么多的动物,我看到了熊猫,长颈鹿和猴子。我对猴子印象很深刻,它们是如此的活跃和淘气。观众扔给它们食物,猴子们在争夺食物,那是多么的有趣啊。我和朋友们度过了愉快的时光,我也开阔了视野。

精选读者点评

句子太短,像一串糖葫芦,得串起来!“我看到熊猫、长颈鹿和猴子”后面直接跳到“我对猴子印象深刻”,中间缺了呼吸感。试试加个过渡?比如“可最让我挪不开眼的,是猴山那边……”

family

250字
主题:亲情、成长、陪伴、温暖、责任、爱

i have a family.there are my father,my mother,my sister and i.

my father is a merchant , nearly fifty years old.he is good at playing basketball.so i often play it with my fahter.i have an patient mother. she is a teacher. she likes cooking and she often cooks some delicious food for me.my siter is a student.she is good at english.

i love my family.

我有一个家庭,有我的父亲,我的母亲,我的姐姐和我。

我的父亲是一个商人,年近五十岁。他篮球打得好。所以我经常玩我的父亲。我有一个病人的母亲。她是老师。她喜欢做饭,她经常做一些好吃的食物给我。我姐是一个学生。她擅长英语。

我爱我家。

精选读者点评

句子太“直”啦!“我经常玩我的父亲”,这可吓我一跳,赶紧改成“和爸爸一起打篮球”;“病人的母亲”?是想写“耐心的”吧?拼音敲错啦~再通读一遍,把中英文混搭的地方理顺,家的味道就更暖了。

三年级英语作文带翻译-珍贵的照片

250字
主题:亲情激励、自我成长、家庭温暖、荣誉感、奋斗精神

in my bedroom, there is a picture hung in the wall, in the picture, my parents cheer for me, they are smiling happily. this is the very precious picture for me, i won the basketball match, my parents were very proud of me. every when i see the picture, i tell myself to work hard and make my parents be proud of me.

在我的房间里,墙上放着一张照片,在照片中,我的父母为我欢呼,他们笑得很开心。这张照片对我来说很珍贵,我赢得了篮球赛的冠军,我的父母为我感到自豪。每次当我看到这张照片,我就告诉自己要努力学习,让我的父母为我感到自豪。

精选读者点评

这张照片真有温度!爸妈的笑容写在脸上,也印进你心里了,后半段“告诉自己要努力”稍显口号化,试试加个具体画面?比如晨读时瞥见照片,手心还攥着没背熟的单词……

我家的一张照片

300字
主题:亲情、和睦、温暖、成长、关爱

look, this is a photo of my family. there are si_ people in the photo. the two people sitting in the middle with grey hair are my grandparents. my grandmother is three years older than my grandfather. they are all kind. the tallest one is my father standing behind my grandpa. my mother stands ne_t to my father. my lovely younger sister stands close to my grandpa. and the one close to my grandma is me. i have a happy family. we love each other.

看!这是我家的一张照片。照片里面有六个人。坐在中间、头发有点灰的那两个是我爷爷奶奶。我奶奶比我爷爷大三岁。他们都很善良。站在我爷爷后面的那个是我爸爸。我妈妈站在我爸爸旁边。我可爱的妹妹靠着我爷爷。靠着奶奶的就是我了。我有一个幸福的家庭。我们都彼此爱着大家。

精选读者点评

标点用得真用心!中英文段落都加了句号,还知道中文用全角、英文用半角,这细节很多初中生都忽略呢。话说回来“si_”和“ne_t”这两个空缺,是打字漏了还是故意留白?下回补上就更棒啦~

小学三年级英语作文-祝妈妈生日快乐

250字
主题:亲情、感恩、成长、节日、家庭、爱

today is my mother’s birthday. she is 40 years old, she is very beautiful. i use my pocket money to buy a small birthday cake, and i make a birthday card too. they are my gifts to my mother. in the evening, i put the candles on the cake, surprise her. i say: “happy birthday to you!” she is very happy.

今天是我妈妈的生日。她40岁了,她很漂亮。我用我的零花钱买了一个小生日蛋糕,我还做了一张生日卡。它们是我送给我妈妈的生日礼物。晚上的时候,我把蜡烛插到蛋糕上,给她一个惊喜。我说:“祝你生日快乐!”她非常高兴。

精选读者点评

中英文混搭挺有生活味儿!但“she is very beautiful”这句,换成“妈妈眼角有笑纹,可眼睛亮亮的”是不是更立体可感感?试试看~

my friend

250字
主题:友情、健康生活、日常习惯、少年形象

i have a good friend. we are in the same class. his name is bill. he is 13. he likes sports very much. these sports are tennis, soccer and basketball. he plays tennis twice a week. he plays soccer twice a week. he plays basketball once a week. he often likes to wear black t-shirt and blue pants. his phone number is 5352375. everyone likes him.

我有一个好朋友。我们在同一个班。他的名字是比尔。他是13岁。他非常喜欢运动。这些运动是网球、足球和篮球。他一星期打两次网球。他踢足球一周两次。他打篮球一周一次。他经常喜欢穿黑色t恤和蓝色的裤子。他的电话号码是5352375。每个人都喜欢他。

精选读者点评

bill的运动安排真规律!可“打两次网球”“踢足球一周两次”读着有点重复,试试合并成一句?比如“他每周打网球、踢足球各两次,篮球一次”,顺多了!

小学三年级英语作文欣赏带翻译

300字
主题:生命共存、生态责任、和谐共生、仁爱之心

《animals are our friends (动物是我们的朋友)》

i like all kinds of animals, such as birds, monkeys, pandas, and tigers. i think they are our friends. we can live in the world without them.

我喜爱各种各样的动物,例如:鸟、猴子、熊猫和老虎。我觉得它们是我们的朋友。没有它们,我们无法生活在这个世界上。

animals are part of nature. they can be separated from us. if we want to live happily, we must keep the balance of nature. we should love nature and animals, and stop doing harm to them.

动物是自然界的一部分,不能将它们与我们分开。如果我们要生活得开心些,我们就必须保持自然界的平衡。我们应该爱自然、爱动物、再也不要伤害它们了。

词义 解析:

kind:种类

精选读者点评

这个“i like all kinds of animals”写得真顺口!后面对应的中文也工整,看得出你一边查词典一边认真对译呢。但是“tigers”前少了个冠词,下次试试加个“the”?还有,“we can't live in the world without them”这句多有力啊,建议把它扩成一句带画面的小例子,比如“没有蜜蜂传粉,果园就结不出果子”,读着就活了。

小学三年级春节英语作文

250字
主题:亲情、年味、成长、陪伴、节日、学习

this winter holiday i stayed at home. i am happy because my father and my mother could spend more time with me during the spring festival. besides, on the eve of the spring festival, we had a great family reunion dinner and then we watched spring festival party on cctv1. sometimes, i reviewed my lessons. i had a very wonderful holiday.

整个寒假我都呆在家里,我很高兴因为春节期间我的爸爸和妈妈能够花更多时间和我在一起。而且,在新年前夕,我们一家吃了团圆饭,然后我们看中央电视一台的春节联欢晚会。有时,我复习功课。我度过了一个非常愉快的假期。

精选读者点评

中英文混搭得挺自然,像平时说话一样!话说回来“cctv1”建议写成“中央电视台综合频道”,更规范~

我的朋友 my best friend

200字
主题:友谊、童年、陪伴、日常、成长、邻里

i have many friends, and my best friend is my neighbor. he’ name is li hua, he is eleven years old. he is tall. he likes playing football. after school, we often play football together. he has a dog, he walks dog every day. i like to play with him.

我有很多朋友,而我的朋友是我的邻居。他的名字叫李华,他11岁了。他很高。他喜欢踢足球。放学后,我们经常在一起踢足球。他有一只狗,他每天都会去遛狗。我很喜欢跟他玩。

精选读者点评

li hua这名字拼错了,漏了“i”;“he’ name”明显打错了,得圈出来改。后半段中文写得比英文顺多了,但“我的朋友是我的邻居”有点绕,换成“我最好的朋友就住我家隔壁”是不是更像你平时说话哦!

小学三年级英语作文及翻译

250字
主题:祖孙情、生命活力、代际共鸣、成长记忆

i lived with my grandparents before i was si_ years old. i remembered all the things when i lived with my grandpa. he is very lovely, though he is more than 70 years old, he is never old in his heart. my grandpa is interested in all the fashionable things, including the cellphone and the tv. he is as young as me. i love my grandpa.

在我六岁以前,我和爷爷住在一起。我记得和爷爷住在一起时的所有事情。爷爷很可爱,虽然他已经年过70岁了,但是在他心中,他从来不认为自己老。爷爷对所有潮流的东西感兴趣,包括电话和电视。爷爷和我一样年轻。我爱爷爷。

精选读者点评

英文部分“si_”明显是“six”拼错了,中文里“年过70岁”重复啰嗦,“年过七十”或“七十多岁”更顺;“爷爷很可爱”这个表达在中文里稍显别扭,小朋友说说还行,写进作文里建议换成“慈祥”“和蔼”“风趣”之类更贴切的词。