my teacher

1050字
主题:教育情怀、人格影响、教学艺术、师者风范、成长记忆、育人差异

two secondary school teachers i remember show how different people can be though engaged in the same profession.

mrs. wang, my philosophy teacher, sent us to sleep less than ten minutes when she started talking in class. when a head nodded, she would point at the dozing student and made threatening remarks. she said that she was bored teaching us. some students in her eyes had no desire to learn. but the other teacher mr. li always had bright eyes in a smiling face and encouraging words which showed that he loved chinese history he was teaching and wanted us to love it too.

when it came to their attitudes to their students, they were different too. after mrs. wang finished her day’s lessens she felt that she had finished her job. once when i asked her a question outside class about a term, she continued with preparation to leave and said that i could bring my question to class ne_t week. before i knew it she had put her keys into her handbag and walked out of the door. in the history class, however, a question even after the bell would still be given attention to by mr. li. he would rush to the board in a last minute attempt to clear up. often he was seen with a number of students standing outside the classroom, discussing the day’s assignment.

their methods of teaching were not like as well. mrs. wang stuck to the te_tbook and trained us how to memorize minute facts. however mr. li brought in films, maps, slides, tapes, anything that would help us learn. once the whole class went to see the ’film lin ze_u’ in order to better understand the history of the opium war from 1840 to 1842.

owing to these contrasts, i do not think i can forget either of my past teachers.

两位中学老师我记得展示不同的人可以尽管从事相同的职业。

王太太,我的哲学老师给我们睡觉不到十分钟当她开始在课堂上说话。当一头点了点头,她会指着打瞌睡的学生并且做了一个威胁的言论。她说她是我们无聊的教学。一些学生在她的眼中没有学习的欲望。但是其他老师李先生总是明亮的眼睛在一个笑脸和鼓励的话语,表明他爱中国历史教学和希望我们也很喜欢。

他们对学生的态度,他们是不同的。王太太后完成了一天的减少她觉得她已经完成她的工作。课外一旦当我问她一个问题关于一个词,她继续准备离开,说下周我可以把我的问题带到课堂上。之前我就知道她已经把她的钥匙放在她的手提包,走出了门。历阶级,然而,一个问题即使在贝尔仍被李先生给予关注。在最后一分钟他会急于董事会试图澄清。经常有人看见他的学生站在教室外面,讨论当天的任务。

他们的教学方法也不一样。王太太坚持教材和训练我们如何记住分钟的事实。不过李先生带来了电影、地图、幻灯片、录音带,任何可以帮助我们学习。一次全班去看“电影林则徐“为了更好地理解鸦片战争从1840年到1842年的历史。

由于这些差异,我不认为我可以忘记我过去的老师。

精选读者点评

王老师那段气场拿捏住“头一点,她就指”,这动作多利落,比说“严厉”进步巨大后头“钥匙塞进包,人就出门了”,像亲眼见。再想想,李先生擦黑板那句,能不能也加个手部小动作?比如粉笔灰沾在袖口上!

不喜欢春节

350字
主题:童年、失落、传统、代际、感知、变迁

i don’t like spring festival any more

spring festival was my favorite chinese festival when i was a child. at that time, i had a great time. every year at that time i could dress new clothes, get lucky money from relatives and seldom receive criticism from my mother. everything seems such wonderful. however, as i grow up, i find spring festival is less and less interesting. i just feel that as usual. what’s worse, with the fireworks, i find spring festival is a noisy festival. so i don’t like it any more.

在我还是个孩子的时候春节是我最喜欢的中国节日。那时候,我过得很开心。每一年那个时我都可以穿新衣服,从亲戚那里得到压岁钱而且很少被妈妈批评。所有的事情好像是那么的美好。然而,随着我的成长,我越来越觉得春节已变得无趣。我只是觉得它就像平时一样。而且,我觉得因为烟花爆竹,春节变成了一个嘈杂的节日。所以我不再喜欢它了。

精选读者点评

“小时候盼过年”和“长大嫌吵闹”的反差写得真真切切!压岁钱、新衣服、妈妈不骂人,三个细节就把童年春节托住了。后半段“像平时一样”这句,轻飘飘的,反而最触动心弦。

如何选专业

750字
主题:代际协商、成长自主、现实理性、教育价值、人生抉择

when students finish their high school, most of them will to go study in college, the first thing they do is to choose the major. choosing the major is a big problem for every college student, not only for chinese students, but also for the students around the world. students will face the factors such as their interest is more important or the future of the major worth being first concerned.

当学生读完高中,大部分人会去大学学习,他们要做的第一件事就是选择专业。选择专业是对每个大学生来讲都是件大事,并不仅仅对于中国的学生,对于全世界的学生来说都一样。学生仍然面临着他们的兴趣更重要还是专业的将来更重要的问题。

on the one hand, most parents care about the future of the major. when students decide the major, parents will interfere with their own opinion, they want their children can have a bring future, so they care much about the needed talent of the society. thus the children can find a promising job and earn more money.

一方面,大部分父母关注专业的未来。当学生选择专业时,父母会干涉,他们想要孩子有一个光明的未来,所以他们很关注社会需要什么样的人才。这样孩子可以找到一份有前途的工作,赚更多的钱。

on the other hand, students want to choose the major that they are interested. this is often contradicting with their parents’ opinion. some students want to learn art, but most parents won’t be allowed it because it is hard for students to find a job. everyone admits that interest is the first factor, with it, students will feel happy.

另一方面,学生想要选择他们感兴趣的专业。这经常和父母的意见相左。一些学生想要学艺术,但是大部分父母不会同意,因为这很难让学生找到工作。每个人都觉得兴趣是第一个要素,有了兴趣,学生才会感到快乐。

when choosing the major, students should considerate their parents’ opinion, most parents are open-minded, they will respect the kids’ willingness.

当选择专业的时候,学生应该考虑他们父母的意见,大部分父母是开明的,他们会尊重孩子的意愿。

精选读者点评

这篇作文把选专业这事写得挺实实在在!中英双语对照,思路也清楚,相当是“兴趣vs就业”这个矛盾抓得准。可是英文段里动词时态乱了,“will to go”“decide the major”都得调一调,中文里“考虑ate”这种拼写混进来有点扎眼,顺手改掉更干净。

英语六级作文范文点睛佳句

950字
主题:差异认知、社会发展、文化反思、理性判断、现代性、个体觉醒

131. large and small enterprises differ in that the former usually involves conglomerates and the latter private individuals .

大企业和小企业的区别在于前者通常涉及联合大企业,后者涉及私营的个人。

132. both automobiles and bicycles offer a convenient means of public conveyance , with one of the marked differences between the two centered on pollution caused by the former .

汽车和自行车都提供公共运输的便利方式,两者的显著区别之一在于前者引起污染。

133. alcohol and tobacco are both highly addictive substances . however , unlike tobacco , which is known to cause cancer , studies indicate that alcohol does offer some health benefits when consumed in moderation .

酒和烟都是很容易上瘾的东西。但是,研究显示,与公认为引起癌症的烟不同,酒如果适量饮用确实对健康有益。

134. one mans treasure is another mans junk .

一个人的宝贝对于另一个人来说是垃圾。

135. aids is no longer one of the top 10 american killers , but the same cannot be said for many countries .

艾滋病不再是美国的十大杀手之一,但许多国家的情况并非如此。

136. individualism was unheard of a short 30-odd years ago during the tumultuous cultural revolution . things have changed today , however ,with color returning to the streets of chinese streets , people gaining a greater degree of self-determination and reform yielding monumental changes in traditional practices .

人们在三十多年前混乱的文化_时期没有听说过个人主义。然而,今天的情况不同了,中国的街道上又恢复了色彩,人们获得了更大的自主,改革带来了传统方式的巨变。

137. social inequities of the past are rapidly giving way to e_panded social consciousness .

过去社会的不公平正在被扩大的社会觉悟迅速取代。

138. many claim that the worlds highly developed countries bear sole responsibility for the plight of less-developed nations . i seriously doubt their contentions will bear the brunt of close scrutiny .

许多人声称世界上最发达的国家应该对欠发达国家的困境承担全权责任。我非常怀疑他们的观点能经受住仔细审查的冲击。

139. although media reports e_pound on the volume of scientific and technological achievements , recent surveys indicate that the rapidity of transforming same into productive forces leaves much to be desired .

虽然媒体详细报道大量的科技成就,但是,最近的调查显示,把它们迅速转化为生产力还需要做出很多努力。

140. the popular belief in the invincibility of man is constantly rebuked by revaluations of mans fallibility .

认为人类无敌的普遍看法经常遭到重新评价人类易犯错误的特点的非难。

精选读者点评

这个“色彩重回街道”的比喻亮点突出!后半句节奏也顺,但“文化_时期”中间那个下划线是漏删的编辑痕迹吧?顺手改掉哈。

应该禁止燃放烟火吗?

2050字
主题:公共治理、生活智慧、代际关系、城市文明

应该禁止燃放烟火吗?should fireworks be banned?

in recent years, banning fireworks in a large number of chinese cities has aroused a heat discussion among the public. some are against it while some are for it. as far as i am concerned, banning fireworks is necessary and advantageous.

近年来,在中国许多大城市都有禁止燃放烟花的政策,这一禁令已引起社会大众的热烈讨论。有些人支持也有人表示反对,我认为禁止燃放烟火是很有必要且有益的。 there are a few points accounting for my view. first, banning fireworks is good for keeping air quality. setting off fireworks is one of the sources of air pollution because it will produce a lot of sulfur dio_ide and other hazardous gases, which may lower air quality if they are emitted unlimitedly. second, banning fireworks is helpful for people’s health. the hazardous gases from setting off fireworks are a potential harm for people’s health because these gases are the causes of some serious disease like respiratory diseases. besides, fireworks are also a threat for people. the e_plosion of fireworks is so fast that people will be hurt without awareness. in addition, setting off fireworks will produce noise, which has a negative influence on people’s health and life. 我的理由有如下几点。首先,禁止燃放烟火有利于保证空气质量。燃放烟火是一大空气污染的来源,因为燃放烟火会释放出大量的二氧化硫和其他有害气体, 如果这些有害气体不能得到控制将降低空气质量。其次,禁放烟火有助于人们的身体健康。燃放烟火而释放出的有害气体对人们的身体健康有潜在危害,因为这些有害气体会导致人们患上严重的疾病,例如呼吸道疾病。另外,烟火还会威胁到人们的安危。烟火燃爆十分迅猛,无警觉的人们常常会受到伤害。最后,燃放烟火爆竹会产生噪音,会对人们的身体健康和日常生活带来负面影响。 for above reasons, i consider that banning fireworks is advantageous. in addition, i think that other healthy and meaningful ways of celebrating festivals should replace setting off fireworks. 综上所述,我认为禁止燃放烟火是十分有利的。此外我想应该有比燃放烟火更好、更有意义地庆贺方式。

你在生活中感到了很多压力吗?上学,上大学,找工作,买房子,组建家庭和养育孩子。似乎我们的生活很忙,有无尽的责任。旅行可以帮助我们释放压力,我们也能有机会看看世界,开阔眼界和找到真正的自己。 当我们谈到旅游,一些人会找借口,旅游太贵了,迟些再去,最后,旅游计划就成为了纸上谈兵。如果我们先不急着买房子,开始我们的中国梦,只是拿出一小部分的钱,打包行李,上路,然后开始我们的旅行,这是多么的见到和快捷啊。 a trip abroad could also make you appreciate home even more. when we stay with our family for a long time, it is naturally for us to have fight, then we will begin to hate our family, if we just take a trip and leave home for some time, our mood will be different. we will miss our family and then home sweet home, the family connection will be stronger. 一场国外的旅行能让你更加的欣赏家庭。当我们和家人相处久了,很自然会发生争吵,然后我们开始讨厌家人,如果我们出去旅行,离开家里一段时间,我们的心情就会不同。我们会想念家庭,回到甜蜜的家,家人间的联系会更加的紧密。 travel is a good way to relieve our stress, so let’s have a trip and give up the e_cuse. first, when you on your way to the cinema, you may stick in traffic jam and cannot arrive on time. if you make it, you may have problem of finding a parking spot. as you know, not every cinema has enough places for you to park. the time you have wasted on the road can do different kinds of things. if you choose to stay at home to watch movies, you don’t need to worry about these problems. you’re not only saving your precious time but also parking fees and gas. 首先,你去电_的路上很有可能会碰到交通堵塞,不能按时到场。就算你按时到了,你也很有可能找不到停车位,并不是每个电_都有足够的地方给你停车的。而你在路上所浪费的时间可以用来做很多其他的事情了。如果你选择在家看电影,你就不必担心这些问题了。你不仅仅节约了你的宝贵时间,也省下了停车费和油钱。 其次,你可能会为了买张电影票花上好几个小时来排队。这真的很烦人。如果票卖完了,你就得改天再来了。有时候你成功买了张票,但是位置却不够好——你很可能离屏幕太近或是太远。当你看电影时,就会感觉到不舒服,这个时候你就会后悔你的选择了,你应该躺在自己的沙发上看电影。 last, the atmosphere of the theater is not always as good as you think. people around you allow eating anything they want, which means they will make a lot of noise while they’re chewing. what’s worse, you may seat ne_t to the person who talks on the phone while you try really hard to listen to what the actress says, or a young couple who seat behind you happily discuss about how the movie will end. this is annoying, isn’t it? 最后,电_的气氛并不会像你想象中的那么好。你周围的人会不停地吃东西,当他们嚼东西的时候就会发出声响。而坐在你旁边的人可能会在你听主演说什么的时候,电话说个不停;而在你身后一对年轻的情侣会积极的讨论电影如何结局。这很烦人,不是吗? 因为这些原因,我认为人们应该考虑去电_看电影是否值得,特别是我们有条件可以在家看的时候。如果选择在家看电影,那么以上提到的问题都可以避免。因此,在家中看电影会更为舒适和方便。

精选读者点评

这篇作文中英文混杂得有点乱,像边查词典边写。建议统一用中文写,把“sulfur dio_ide”改成“二氧化硫”,“e_plosion”补全成“爆炸”,别让拼音和下划线抢了你观点的风头。

快乐的六一作文

900字
主题:友谊、感恩、成长、责任、温暖、希望

汉阴县子卿子钦;望着伊微笑

那个学校的条件十分的艰苦。校园内全是土房子,另一个是乒乓球台,用砖头砌成的,上面是两块木板,七位老师才四个办公桌。教室里的窗户连玻璃也没有,夏天还好,可是到了冬天,寒风呼呼的吸,一定会把人冻坏的。

六一儿童节是我们小孩的节日,今年的六一儿童节,十分有意义,使我难忘。

早上8点,同学门到操场上去举行“手拉手城乡通庆六一“活动。学校邀请友爱小学的同学来我校和我们一起度过这个快乐的节日。

前几天,我们学校每个班抽了六个同学去友爱小学参观。我们班也抽了六位同学去高粱友爱小学参观,听同学回来说,老师带领着同学们在校门欢迎参观的学友,热情主动的介绍他们学校的情况。听参观的同学给我们汇报友爱小学的情况,那个学校的条件十分的艰苦。校园内全是土房子,只有两件运动器材,一个篮球场,已经破烂不堪了,另一个是乒乓球台,用砖头砌成的,上面是两块木板,那里只有一个办公室,七位老师才四个办公桌。教室里的窗户连玻璃也没有,夏天还好,可是到了冬天,寒风呼呼的吸,一定会把人冻坏的。和我们学校比起来,我们可幸福多了。

在操场上学校给我们每个人发了一个轻气球,在校长的一声令下,全校两千多个学生一齐把气球送上了天,气球越飞越高,又如一颗颗流星划过天空一样,这样庆祝会就开始了。学友们表演了一个又一个精彩的节目,有双簧,有舞蹈,有歌唱,一个又一个精彩的节目目不暇接。让领导们,观众们脸上洋溢着笑容。

最让我难忘的一个节目是四年级的同学穿着篮球服唱《改变自己》这首歌。他们有序的走上__台,做好准备工作,音乐一响,四个人一齐唱歌一齐做动作,他们的动作一致,配合得很默契,唱出了激情飞扬,使我情不自禁的和他们一起唱了起来。

节目的最后,领导们给友爱小学的同学发书包,来表达我们的心意。友爱小学的同学十分的有礼貌,向领导们敬了一个队礼,他们在那么艰苦的环境下都努力学习,可我们的学习环境这么好,还不努力学习。从今以后,我一定要一丝不苟的学习,不能辜负老师和家长对我们的期望。

联欢会渐渐接近尾声,这欢乐的笑声,动听的歌声,优美的舞蹈,将永远留在我们心中。

精选读者点评

“寒风呼呼的吸”,这句太棒了!风会“吸”,不是刮,不是吹,是吸,一下子把冷劲儿、土房的漏风感全拽出来了。再翻翻后头,还有没有这样实实在在动词?

网购

250字
主题:消费方式、时代变迁、理性判断、多元共存

recently, we often show that shopping online is better than in store, but is this really the case? actually, there is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of shopping online is better than traditional shopping. some people consider that online shopping will replace the mall shopping, stores will disappear in the future, while others argue that stores would unlikely to be disappeared, it has its own advantages.

近来,我们经常听说网上买东西比在实体店更好,但情况真的如此吗?事实上,人们并未就这个观点达成一致意见,一些人认为网购将会代替商场购物,商场未来会消失,而另一些人则争辩说商场不可能会消失,它有自己的优势。

精选读者点评

这个对比角度挺新鲜!但“mall shopping”和“stores”在前后句里混着用,容易让读者糊涂,到底说商场还是小店铺?顺手改个称呼更清爽。

北京和伦敦的异同英语作文

200字
主题:城市差异、文化对比、生活观察、中外交流

北京和伦敦的异同英语作文

whats the differece between bejing and london.

in london, people drive the cars on the left of the streets ,but in bejing the cars go on the right. its always cloudy in london but seldom in bejing . its always sunny. in london, many people drive to work. but in beijing, more people choose to go to work by bike or by bus. whats more, in beijing many people speak english while in london, few people speak chinese. and students in beijing work much harder than those in london.

精选读者点评

标点和大小写太随意啦!“bejing”写了两次,“in london”开头没大写,这些小地方,恰恰最见基本功。

三代人眼中的儿童节

550字
主题:成长记忆、时代发展、家庭传承、节日文化、童年幸福

六一儿童节趣闻作文:三代人眼中的儿童节

今天,我日思夜盼的六一儿童节终于来临了。看着街道上那华丽的彩灯,我忍不住问爷爷:“爷爷,你们小时候儿童节怎么过的呀?是不是也能收到许多精美的礼物呢?”爷爷笑着说:“当然没有啦,我们那个时代,还没有听说过儿童节呢,一年到头,也就过一个春节,而且只有在那一天,全家人才能真正填饱肚子,哪有你们现代人这么幸福啊!”

听了爷爷的话,我心中有了新的疑问:是不是爸爸妈妈小时候也没有儿童节呢?我迫不及待地找到了爸爸,问了他这个问题。爸爸告诉我,那个时候,一到儿童节,学校和幼儿园都会举办不同形式的活动,组织孩子们开联欢会,老师还为上台表演的小朋友搽胭脂、口红。那些爱美的女生在表演结束后,谁也不愿意洗去脸上的妆,兴奋地到处跑,引得路人注目。

相比爷爷、爸爸的儿时,我们的儿童节就太丰富多彩啦。早上起来,大街小巷都会看见“欢度六一儿童节”的大条幅。小朋友们一蹦一跳地跟着爸爸妈妈,有的去游园,有的去看动漫电影,一个个神采飞扬,浑身透着幸福的气息。晚上,小朋友们一边吃着满桌的美味佳肴,一边玩弄着节日的礼物。

啊,时代在进步,不知十年,甚至二十年的六一儿童节会是个什么样子。不过,我相信,它肯定比现在更有趣,更丰富。

精选读者点评

这个“三代人”的角度真巧!爷爷没听过儿童节,爸爸有联欢会,你有游园和动漫电影,三句话就把时代变化钉在纸上了。结尾那句“不知十年后……”留得干净,像刚剥开的橘子瓣,清亮亮的。

中国发生的变化 the changes happened in china

700字
主题:中国速度、时代变迁、国际认知、数字生活、文化自信

it is known to all that china developed so fast in the last decades. a lot of foreigners have witnessed its change. they speak highly of the great changes. when they talk about this big old countries, they no longer think about the poor situation, but the vitality impresses them.

众所周知,中国在过去的几十年里发展迅速,很多外国人都见证了它的变化。

他们高度赞扬了这些变化。当他们谈论到这个古老的大国时,想到的不再是贫穷的情景,取而代之的是有活力的印象。

one of the most obvious changes is the improvement of life standard. many years ago, the government put forward the slogan to aid the poor, then a lot of young talents worked in the countryside taught the poor people how to use technology to sell products. with the support of local government, people’s life standard have made great improvement.

最明显的变化就是生活水平的提高。许多年前,政府就提出要帮助穷人脱贫的口号,所以很多青年才俊去农村工作,教贫困的人使用技术来销售产品。在当地政府的支持下,人民的生活水平取得了很大的提高。

made in china was used to believed to be the bad quality, but now these three words present the products with low price and good quality. since the popularity of taobao, many foreigners feel like finding a door to another world, because the products they bought surprised them. they also surprised by the new online payment, alipay and wechat.

中国制造过去被认为是质量不好的产品,但是现在这三个字的产品代表的是物美价廉。自从淘宝的流行,许多外国人都觉得找到了进入另一个世界的大门,购买到的产品让他们让他们惊喜。他们也惊讶于新的在线支付方式——支付宝和微信。

the changes show china is developing fast. its influence can be seen everywhere, and many foreigners have been attracted by its charm.

这些改变显示了中国正处于快速发展中,其影响随处可见,而且许多外国人也已经被它的魅力所吸引。

精选读者点评

“made in china”这句韵味十足!前后对比一下,意思就活了。倒是“a lot of foreigners”重复两次,换换说法?比如“some visitors”“many western friends”?试试看~

环境的变化

400字
主题:生态保护、今昔对照、家园意识、儿童观察、责任觉醒

同学们,请你们留心发现所处的环境的变化吧!这些变化,有的令人欣喜若狂,有的令人无奈,还有的令人伤心。现在,我要把我的发现告诉大家。

很久以前,我们地球的空气清新;小河清澈见底,活泼好动的小鱼在河里自由自在地游来游去;小鸟在树上欢蹦乱跳;牧童正牵着牛上山呢!山上树木茂盛,百花齐放,百鸟争鸣。果树上的果实一个紧挨着一个,等着休息的人们去摘呢!当时的人们经常上山去打水,喝着甜甜的泉水,人们立刻把一天的疲倦忘到九霄云外去了……

而现在,我们虽然过着幸福美满的生活,但是空气却被工厂排出来的毒气污染了;清澈见底的小河已成了一条“垃圾河”,令人呕吐的气味扑鼻而来;公路上的汽车川流不息;山上的树已经变成了一本本有趣的书了。天空也经常变脸,这突如其来的天气给人们造成了很大的不便……

经过这两个环境的对比,你们看出了环境的变化了吗?现在,我要大声地把人们唤醒:“别再污染环境了,快救救地球吧!”

精选读者点评

这个“山上的树已经变成了一本本有趣的书了”独具匠心!既写出了砍伐的实情,又带着孩子气的幽默和心疼,比直说“树全被砍光了”有力多啦,批到这儿忍不住画了个五角星!

发展中的儿童节

500字
主题:成长记忆、代际差异、节日文化、社会发展、童年幸福

今天,我日思夜盼的六一儿童节终于来临了。看着街道上那华丽的彩灯,我忍不住问爷爷:“爷爷,你们小时候儿童节怎么过的呀?是不是也能收到许多精美的礼物呢?”爷爷笑着说:“当然没有啦,我们那个时代,还没有听说过儿童节呢,一年到头,也就过一个春节,而且只有在那一天,全家人才能真正填饱肚子,哪有你们现代人这么幸福啊!”

听了爷爷的话,我心中有了新的疑问:是不是爸爸妈妈小时候也没有儿童节呢?我迫不及待地找到了爸爸,问了他这个问题。爸爸告诉我,那个时候,一到儿童节,学校和幼儿园都会举办不同形式的活动,组织孩子们开联欢会,老师还为上台表演的小朋友搽胭脂、口红。那些爱美的女生在表演结束后,谁也不愿意洗去脸上的妆,兴奋地到处跑,引得路人注目。

相比爷爷、爸爸的儿时,我们的儿童节就太丰富多彩啦。早上起来,大街小巷都会看见“欢度六一儿童节”的大条幅。小朋友们一蹦一跳地跟着爸爸妈妈,有的去游园,有的去看动漫电影,一个个神采飞扬,浑身透着幸福的气息。晚上,小朋友们一边吃着满桌的美味佳肴,一边玩弄着节日的礼物。

啊,时代在进步,不知十年,甚至二十年的六一儿童节会是个什么样子。不过,我相信,它肯定比现在更有趣,更丰富。

精选读者点评

爷爷没过过儿童节,爸爸的胭脂口红还带着粉香,你笔下三代人的六一,像三枚不同年份的糖纸,皱巴巴的、亮闪闪的、绚烂多姿的。最后一句“时代在进步”稍显直白,试试把“十年后”换成你悄悄藏在书包里的那个小愿望!

英语作文范文

300字
主题:城乡选择、生活方式、人生阶段、价值取向、环境与人

1、一些人喜欢住在城市,因为城市生活有许多便利。

2、但有些人喜欢住在农村。

3、我认为,……

where to live —in the city or in the country

some people like living in the city because city life has many advantages. they think there are more job opportunities in cities, life there is more colorful and meaningful than that in the country, and there are more modern conveniences in cities for people to enjoy.

but some other people prefer to live in the countryside. they say life in the countryside is closer to nature and better for their health, life there is quieter and that country people are more honest than city people.

i would like to live in a city when i am young to earn enough money and i live in the countryside when i am old for having a quite life.

精选读者点评

这个“年轻拼城市、年老归田园”的想法真有意思!后半句“为 having a quite life”拼写和冠词都漏了,但思路分外清晰,像自己心里早想好的话。

大学英语命题作文

800字
主题:成长过渡、知行合一、现实关切、身份转变、未来规划

what is the purpose of students studying hard all these years, of course for the better future. every parent wants their kids have advantage over others, so they can be outstanding and have a good job. students learn in campus, they are in the stage of studying knowledge while getting a job soon, there is necessary for them knowing something about society.

学生这些年努力学习的目的是什么,当然是为了美好的将来。每个父母都想要他们的孩子比别人有优势,因为他们就能突出,找到一份好的工作。学生在大学里学习,他们处于学习和找工作的阶段,对于他们来说,了解社会的一些事是必要的。

before study in college, students focus all their attention on study for entering a good college, they don’t need to care about other things, it is also what their parents tell them. after entering college, it is a little different, at this stage, study is no more the only task, students should have access to society. they should make some preparation for the job hunting, knowing society helps them get use to the society quickly. some students only care about score, when they find a job, the employer will ask him something about the public news, but students have no idea, this is so bad. what’s more, getting familiar with the society makes students find their own positions, they will know what they want and fight for it.

在上大学前,学生全部的精力都集中在学习,为了进入一所好的大学,他们不需要关心其他事,这也是他们的父母告诉他们的。进入大学以后,会有点不同,在这个阶段,学习不再是的任务,学生应该接触社会。他们应该为找工作做准备,了解社会帮助他们快速适应社会。一些学生只关心分数,当他们找工作的时候,雇主会问他们关于社会新闻的事,但是他们没有看法,这真是糟糕。而且,熟悉社会让学生找到自己的位置,他们知道自己想要的,并为之奋斗。

the atmosphere of society is very different from campus, in order to better adjust to finding a job, students should get to know society.

社会环境和大学校园是不同的,为了更好地适应找工作,学生应该了解社会。

精选读者点评

最后一段太像喊口号啦!“社会环境和校园不同”,这话谁不知道?你倒是说说,哪儿不同?食堂阿姨换人了?快递柜多了三个?写具体点,我爱看细节!

手机与课堂 cellphone and class

750字
主题:师生关系、教育智慧、技术伦理、课堂生态、学习专注

when cellphone became popular among students many years ago, many teachers were so worried about students’ attention in the class would be distracted, so they forbid students to bring cellphone in the classroom. as the time went by, though it has been admitted to use cellphone in the classroom, the schools still try to find a way to limit it.

很多年前,当手机在学生中流行起来的时候,许多老师都担心学生在课堂上的注意力会被分散,所以他们禁止学生带手机进课堂。随着时间的流逝,尽管学生得到许可可以在教室里使用手机,但是学校仍然试图想办法限制手机的使用。

cellphone seems to be the teachers’ enemy in the classroom. when they are teaching knowledge, they find most students are lowering down their heads to play cellphone. it must frustrate teachers so much. in order to focus students’ attention, they figure out all the ways. recently, it has been reported that the students’ cellphones were handed in and then destroyed in a college. surely, the public condemned the school’s e_treme regulation, which is not a wise choice to do it.

手机在课堂上似乎是教师的敌人。当他们在传授知识时,发现大多数学生都在低头玩手机。教师肯定会感到很沮丧。为了集中学生的注意力,他们想尽一切方法。最近,据新闻报道,一所高校的学生_交出手机并且被学校摧毁。公众肯定会谴责学校这种极端的做法,这并不是明智的选择。

cellphone has been part of our life. even the teachers can’t live without cellphone, let alone to grab it from students. the way to catch students’ attention is to make their lessons vivid and interesting. at the same time, it is important to let student realize what they will miss if they can’t focus attention.

手机已成为我们生活的一部分就算是教师也无法离不开手机,更不用说从学生身边抢走手机。吸引学生注意力的方法是使课堂生动,有趣,与此同时,让学生意识到他们不集中精力听课玩手机将会错过什么知识也是很重要的。

精选读者点评

手机进课堂这事,你写得挺确实是!“老师敌人”“低头玩手机”,画面感一下就来了。后半段说“让课变生动”,比光喊“别玩手机”强多啦!然而英文段里“e_treme”拼错了,下回留心哈~

不文明行为 about impolite behaviors

650字
主题:理性认知、文化平等、行为自觉、代际进步、全球视野

we have seen many news about how rude chinese tourists were, such as throwing away rubbish at will, jumping the queue or speaking loudly in public. the media from home and abroad always spread the negative information about chinese tourists, while it is just small part, not presenting the truth.

我们看到许多新闻关于如何中国游客是如何的粗鲁,比如随手扔垃圾,插队或在公共场合说话声音很大。国内外媒体对中国游客也总是传播负面信息,然而这只是一小部分,并不代表事实的_。

i have been to many foreign countries. everytime before i started my journey, i told myself to be polite and well behaved and i made it. but i found that many bad behaviors happened among foreigners, whom we used to believed the most polite people in the world. they jumped the queue and spoke loudly in the public. so it is not fair to criticize chinese tourists all the time.

我去过许多国家。每次在我开始旅程之前,我都告诉自己要有礼貌、自律,我做到了。但是我发现许多外国人却做了很多不良行为,我们曾经认为他们是世界上最有礼貌的人,但是他们却插队,在公众场合大声说话。所以总是批评中国游客是不公平的。

it is true that some chinese tourists don’t realize their bad behaviors, but now, most people behave themselves well and act very politely. when we see the negative information, there is no need to self-denial, as it happens in every country. we are happy to see that the young generation is spread the positive image to the world.

的确,一些中国游客没有意识到他们的不良行为,但现在,大多数人都非常有礼貌,行为检点。当我们看到负面信息时,不需要马上进行自我否定,因为每个国家都会发生这样的事。我们很高兴能够看到年轻一代向世界传播正面的形象。

精选读者点评

这篇作文里“我”的经历格外真实!去国外前提醒自己礼貌,回来后发现老外也插队,这个转折太有说服力了。结尾那句“年轻一代传播正面形象”,写得轻巧却有力,比喊口号强多了。

我和雷锋比童年

250字
主题:苦难与幸福、感恩、成长责任、时代变迁

雷锋的童年是在苦难中度过的,他小的时候就失去了亲人,他的爸爸是被日本人打死的,哥哥是给地主打工活活累死的,弟弟是饿死的,妈妈是被逼死的。他吃不饱,穿不暖,更谈不上上学了。直到中国共产党领导全国人民解放全中国,雷锋才过上好日子。

而我是有一个幸福的家庭,我有慈爱的爷爷和奶奶,我还有疼爱我的爸爸和妈妈,我不仅吃穿不愁,还有美丽的学校,明亮的教室,有敬爱的老师和花朵一样的同学。和雷锋的童年相比,我的童年幸福多了。

我应该珍惜现在的生活,好好学习,以优异的成绩报答亲人。

精选读者点评

雷锋的爸爸被日本人打死,哥哥累死,弟弟饿死,妈妈被逼死……这几个“死”字写得真沉啊!你把历史压在纸上了。

今天过大年

600字
主题:代际差异、年俗变迁、童年滋味、家庭记忆、幸福感知

今天过大年,我和爸爸、妈妈去了奶奶家拜年。一进门,奶奶就赶紧端了一大盘子糖,让我随便抓了一把,我高兴地装了满满两大口袋,奶奶还给我了有压岁钱。这时候也来了许多叔叔、阿姨拜年,房间立刻显得拥挤,我和爸爸、妈妈赶紧出门拜年。

我们来到对门的爷爷家,爷爷同样给了我很多糖,我的口袋已经快要装不下了。我们又去了楼下的奶奶家、阿姨家、叔叔家等很多人家拜年,他们都高兴地给了我许多糖和瓜子等很多好吃的,我的口袋再也装不下一块糖了,我的肚子也装不下一块糖了。感觉自己成了一个糖果精灵了。收获真不少。但我觉得过年一点意思也没有。因为我家的糖罐早已经满满的了,什么奶糖、巧克力、棒棒糖还有进口糖,早已对我来说不稀罕了。

可是,拜年收糖对妈妈小时候来说,却是一件最令她高兴的事。一大早,天还没亮,妈妈和舅舅就手拉手,赶紧跑出去拜年。可惜去的太早,别人家还没开门呢。妈妈和舅舅只好在门口耐心地等着,一直等到他们给妈妈一块或两块糖,妈妈才离开,再去第二家拜年。那时候,不熟悉的人家给一块或两块糖,只有关系很亲的人家才最多给四五块糖。如果能给到5块糖,妈妈高兴地跳起来。等口袋装满了糖,妈妈和舅舅就急忙跑回家,把糖全部倒出来,一人一头堆到床上,比一比谁挣的糖多。数完后,再赶紧跑出去,再挨家挨户拜年。这就是妈妈小时候的拜年和我的拜年。

精选读者点评

糖堆成山,人却说没意思,这个“不稀罕”写得真扎心!后半段妈妈的故事像老胶片突然放映,光一打进来,你自己的年味儿反而更亮点突出。

英语作文-is money everything?金钱就是一切吗?

550字
主题:价值判断、物质与精神、人生追求、生命意义

at present some people think that money is everything. they say that you can do everything if you have money. you can live in a beautiful house, keep a lu_urious ear and have all sorts of delicious food. i don think so. indeed, money can buy a lot of things we need. but there are many, many wonderful things in the world that cannot be bough; with money. for e_ample, knowledge cannot be bought with money. one cannot be rich in knowledge unless he studies hard. time cannot be bought with money, either. who can buy even a second with money? there are still many other things that cannot be bought with money: health,life, happiness,friendship, love and so on. just think, if a person hasn these things at all, is the money still useful? now, do you think money is everything?

现在有些人认为钱是一切。他们说如果你有钱,你可以做任何事情。你可以住在一个漂亮的房子,保持一个豪华的耳朵,并有各种美味的食物。我不这么认为。事实上,钱可以买到我们需要的很多东西。但也有许多,许多美好的事物在世界上是买不到的钱。例如,知识是不能用金钱买的。一个人如果不努力学习,就不可能有丰富的知识。时间不能用金钱买来,也不能用金钱来买。谁能用钱买哪一个?还有许多其他的东西,买不到钱:健康,生活,幸福,友谊,爱情等。试想,如果一个人没有这些东西,是不是钱还是有用的?现在,你认为金钱是一切吗?

精选读者点评

这篇作文观点很清晰!“知识不能买”“时间买不到”这几个例子选得尤其真的是,读着就让人点头。话说回来“豪华的耳朵”这句翻译有点迷,是不是想写“豪车”?顺手改一改,整篇就更稳啦~

大学生英语作文-宅生活

450字
主题:健康意识、代际差异、科技影响、生活平衡、身心发展、城市生活

personally, i don’t think staying indoors for most of the day should be advocated. instead, people in all ages, their physical conditions permitting, should be encouraged to spend more time outdoors. the brilliant sunshine, the pleasant green space, the interactions with other people, etc. are all good for people’s health, both physically and psychologically.

如今越来越多的人,特别是26年代或30年代,倾向于留在室内的大部分课余时间,尤其是在节假日。有些花的时间多数网上聊天,博客,购物,约会和玩电脑游戏。有些坐不住与他们的眼睛紧盯着电视屏幕,白天和黑夜。 市民的意见,当谈到这样的消磨时间而变化。人大量维护,待在室内便宜,舒适,最重要的,很安全。然而,其他人看不惯室内时间过长停留。他们担心,缺乏体育锻炼和与他人面对面的面对面沟通会危害到人们的身体和心灵。 就个人而言,我不认为呆在家里最多的一天中应该提倡。相反,人们在所有年龄段,他们的身体条件允许,应该鼓励花更多的时间在户外。灿烂的阳光,宜人的绿地,与其他人的相互作用等,都是对人民的健康都好,无论是身体上和心理上。

精选读者点评

这个“26年代或30年代”太让人悬着的心了,是想写“二三十岁”吧?手误还是没留神?下回写完自己小声读一遍,耳朵比眼睛更早发现不对劲。

童年的变化

850字
主题:代际差异、生活变迁、家国发展、珍惜当下、童年记忆、时代进步

一天吃完晚饭,我和爸爸正在散步,我说:“爸爸,说说你以前的事吧!”“好!”时间一分一秒流逝,一幅幅图画像电影一样在我们眼前显现……

爸爸说他的童年是穿着打补丁的衣服,脚上根本没有一双像样的鞋子,而我们什么的服装、品牌鞋子多得是。爸爸以前吃的是地里的红薯、玉米。那时他们桌上虽然没有很多油,没有我们现在吃的鸡、鸭、鱼、肉等,偶尔吃个鸡蛋都是一种奢侈,但他们吃着没有污染的绿色蔬菜和香喷喷的大米饭。

除了吃、穿和我们当今的孩子有很大的区别,比如建设方面区别也很大。

爸爸小时候的道路全是黄泥土路,下雨走在路上你的鞋子保证会“毁容”。住的是用泥巴做成的低矮、潮湿的小房子,里面点的煤油灯,光线微弱,晚上那时候的大人只能借着微弱的灯光做家务,暑假里,每到夜幕降临时,蛙叫虫鸣,爸爸就和他的同伴一起在月光下的树林里捉迷藏、追逐着荧火虫、玩战争游戏……有时也和同伴们一起骑着大水牛在田野里奔跑、冲锋……

而我们走着宽阔的水泥路,住着高楼大厦,可以在鸟语花香的体育活动场所任意玩耍,家中客厅里五颜六色的灯都是几百元一个,孩子们写作业时用的是护眼灯,所以我们现在的孩子应该珍惜现在的生活,在这优越的环境里认真学习。

另外,那时候没有通讯设备。比如电话、手机等。要想给几十里外的亲人传达问候,或有什么急事,也要用双脚跑去。而我们现在的孩子的家里都有电话或手机,有摩托车,甚至有小汽车,随便到哪个地方去也都有汽车坐,方便快捷。

那时候就不更用提彩色电视机、网络了。爸爸小时候拥有一本连环画、故事书都是的幸福,现在我们可以随时打开电视看精彩的动画片,打开电脑可以玩好玩的游戏,随时可以查阅所需的学习资料。

短短的几十年,祖国就发生了如此翻天覆地的变化,让我们生活变得越来越好了,我们当今的孩子一定要努力学习,将来建设祖国,让下一代的孩子有更好的学习环境。

文章中作者用文字记录了自己与父辈童年的不同,全文语言平淡,文字不够生动,对两代人童年的不同,只是简单地进行了对比描写,段落之间的内容衔接不够紧凑,过渡不自然。

精选读者点评

这个“打补丁的衣服”“鞋子毁容”真立体后头要是多来几个这样的小镜头,比如补丁怎么歪着、泥巴怎么吸住脚丫子,整篇就抓人眼球。

经典英语作文范文-私家车的利与弊

550字
主题:利弊分析、现代生活、交通发展、环境保护、理性消费

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recently years, with the rapid development in our country, more and more people own their private cars. some people think that private cars should be restricted, while others think that private cars should be encouraged. as far as i concern, i think owning a private car has both advantages and disadvantages. 最近几年,随着我国经济的快速发展,越来越多的人们拥有私家车。一些人认为应该禁止私家车,而一些人认为对其应该鼓励。就我看来,私家车有利有弊。 一方面,私家车给车主们提供了方便和舒适。如果你有了车,就不用搭乘公车或者挤地铁上班了。你可以想象在上下班高峰期公车上是多么的拥挤,速度是多么的慢。有了车,你就不必担心这个问题了。更棒的是,你随时可以开着你的车到任何地方去。开着私家车去旅游方便又灵活。你想停就停,不用担心其他乘客的感受。我想,这就是私家车的好处吧。 另一方面,私家车的缺点也显而易见。车子发出的噪音难以忍受,排出的尾气也对人的身体有害。不计其数的车涌入街头,人们发现找位置停车比以前困难多了。更为糟糕的是,成千上万的人死于或者在车祸中受伤。 to sum up, private cars provide us with convenience as well as harm. whether or not afford a private car depends on personal details. 总的来说,私家车带给我们方便的同时,也带来了伤害。至于是不是要购买私家车,取决于个人情况。

精选读者点评

这个“你想停就停,不用担心其他乘客的感受”真有味把私家车的自由感一下就拽出来了,比干讲“方便灵活”有力多了。后面说车祸那段,如果也用这种带体温的句子,比如“后视镜里一闪而过的刹车灯,可能就是别人的一生”,会不会更悬着的心。

不一样的儿童节

400字
主题:代际差异、生活记忆、感恩意识、时代变迁、家庭传承

随着快乐“六一”的来临,每家每户的小孩都非常高兴快乐,但他们可曾想过父母童年时的六一是怎么样的。

根据爸爸妈妈的口述中发现,他们基本上没有儿童节,就算有也只是吃几个鸡蛋而已,这也算是不错了,要知道他们哪个年代里是吃不饱穿不暖的,更不用说是哪里游玩。

爸爸回忆起往事津津有味,他说他7岁开始就干活,9岁就担着担子去卖菜,到了我这个年龄,不是去打工就是在家里做家务,他们的衣服都很简单,夏天要么穿着一件破背心,要么就不穿,冬天里只穿一件,从爷爷传下来的破棉袄,穿的时候还要系一根麻绳,防止棉絮流出。他们吃了就更不用说了,有的时候有饭吃,没有的时候只能吃番薯粥,一天只有两餐,饿了只能忍着,爸爸去上学时,从不骑车,而是步行,每天5点起床,走2个小时才到的。那时的童年好苦啊!

现在我们应该珍惜这每好的童年,要知道父母的童年比我们的差太远了。

精选读者点评

爸爸卖菜、走两小时上学这些细节真动情!但“每好的童年”是错别字哦,改过来就更棒啦~

a matter of approach新东方版

600字
主题:师者风范、教学艺术、育人初心、师生关系、教育温度、成长印记

a matter of approach

two secondary school teachers i remember show how different people can be though engaged in the same profession.

mrs wang, my philosophy teacher, sent us to sleep less than ten minutes when she started talking in class. when a head nodded, she would point at the dozing student and made threatening remarks. she said that she was bored teaching us. some students in her eyes had no desire to learn. but the other teacher mr li always had bright eyes in a smiling face and encouraging words which showed that he loved chinese history he was teaching and wanted us to love it too.

when it came to their attitudes to their students, they were different too. after mrs wang finished her days lessens she felt that she had finished her job. once when i asked her a question outside class about a term, she continued with preparation to leave and said that i could bring my question to class ne_t week. before i knew it she had put her keys into her handbag and walked out of the door. in the history class, however, a question even after the bell would still be given attention to by mr li. he would rush to the board in a last minute attempt to clear up. often he was seen with a number of students standing outside the classroom, discussing the days assignment.

their methods of teaching were not like as well. mrs wang stuck to the te_tbook and trained us how to memorize minute facts. however mr li brought in films, maps, slides, tapes, anything that would help us learn. once the whole class went to see the film lin ze_u in order to better understand the history of the optium war from 1840 to 1842. owing to these contrasts, i do not think i can forget either of my past teachers.

精选读者点评

这作文酣畅淋漓!两个老师对比太鲜明了,尤其是“她把钥匙塞进包里就走人”那句,画面感一下就来了,你平时肯定爱观察,这点尤其好。