愉快的课间

400字
主题:童趣、智慧、互动、轻松、成长、校园

the bell rang and the class was over. the classroom became noisy. some students went out of the classroom. i was just chatting with some of my classmates when li hong came to me. she smiled and said to me, whats four minus four? do you know? its zero. that is easy. answered i. but li hong shook her head and said its wrong. its eight. why? thats impossible! you will understand if you cut down four corners of a desk. said li hong. is that a joke? oh, yes. we all laughed. during the class break, we had a good rest. we often have a pleasant break.

铃声响了,下课了。教室变得嘈杂。一些学生走出教室。我只是和我的一些同学聊天,当李洪来到我的时候。她笑着对我说:“四减四?你知道吗?这是零。“很简单,”我回答,但李洪摇了摇头,说:“这是错误的。八,为什么?这是不可能的!”如果你把桌子的四角剪下来,你会明白的,“李洪说。”那是个笑话吗?”哦,是的,“我们都笑了。课间休息时,我们休息得很好。我们经常有一个愉快的休息。

精选读者点评

这个“四减四等于八”的谜题真有意思!把桌子四角剪掉,剩下八个角,孩子自己发现的数学小惊喜,比干讲算式生动多啦~美中不足“answered i”“came to me”这些英文直译得再顺一点,比如“我答道”“李洪朝我走来”,读着更自然。

小学六年级英语作文带翻译-日记

300字
主题:成长困惑、亲子关系、学习压力、童年渴望、自我表达

today is saturday,but i do not have a good rest. i have to go to my teacher’s home to learn pianoin the morning. i get there at 8:30 and i start to practice. i stay there forthree hours. my teacher teaches me a lot. but i don’t like it. i want to go outand have fun with my friends. my mother never let me go out. sometimes, i amvery angry, but it doesn’t work. therefore, i don’t like weekends. i want to goto school. i have friends and classmates there.

今天是星期六,但我没有好好休息。我要去老师家学习弹钢琴,早上。我到达那里时,我开始练习。我在那里住了三小时。我的老师教我很多。但我不喜欢它。我要去和我的朋友玩得开心。我妈妈从不让我出去。有时,我很生气,但它不工作。因此,我不喜欢周末。我想去上学。我有朋友和同学那里。

精选读者点评

标点用得真“自由”!逗号当句号,句号当逗号,连英文里“piano”都漏了空格,下次写完自己轻声读一遍,耳朵会帮你揪出一半毛病。

愉快的周末 happy weekend

250字
主题:童年、快乐、自然、友情、日常、成长

my english name is lisa, china name is zhu yuhui. im an student. i am chinese. i like read books,running,shopping and draw pictures.in the sunday,me and my friends going to park. park has green trees,has red flowers,has small grass,has small dog,has lots of bird......my friends some fly kites, some read books,some take pictures,some watch dog......they every is very happy,my also is very happy.

我的英文名字叫丽莎,中国名字是朱玉慧。我是一个学生。我是中国人。我喜欢读书,跑步,购物和画画.星期天,我和我的朋友去公园.公园有绿树,红花,小草,有小狗,还有很多鸟……我的朋友有的放风筝,有的阅读书籍,有的拍照,有的看狗……他们都很高兴,我也很高兴。

精选读者点评

标点太“省”啦!中英文混用时,句号逗号别偷懒,中文用全角,英文用半角。还有,“an student”得改“a student”,冠词小错别漏掉哦。

做家务

250字
主题:孝心、劳动教育、亲子关系、自我认知、生活体验

some day, our teacher tells me that we should help our parents with the housework, so i decide to help my mother. after school, i ran to home, saying to mom that i want to share housework, she is very happy, she gives me the job to clean the window. i think it will be easy, but when i do it, i find it hard. i know i should help my mother.

一天,我的老师告诉我我们要帮助我们的父母做家务,所以我决定帮助妈妈。下课后,我奔回家,对妈妈说我想要分担家务,她很高兴,给我清理窗户的任务。我以为这会很简单,但是我做的时候,我发现很难。我知道我应该要帮助妈妈。

精选读者点评

这个“奔回家”真场景直观生动感!脚步声都听见了~然而“clean the window”建议改成“clean the windows”,毕竟家里窗户不止一扇呀。

a picture带翻译

500字
主题:童年、自然、闲适、欢乐、日常、户外

let me say something about the picture.

there are two tall trees in it. under the tree there is a long chair. and there is an old man reading about swimming. near the old man, there is a boy painting. i think he loves painting very much. ne_t to the painting boy, there are two boys playing football. they are happy. but the football is in the river. near the river, there are three children fishing. they go fishing about twice a week and they always go to the people’s park. they like fishing. in the river, there is clear water and some fish swimming in it. the sky is clear, the sun is shining brightly, the weather is warm.. there are two birds flying in the sky, they are happy. wow, that is a fun picture!

dear friends, can you draw the picture?

让我谈谈画面。

有两个高大的树木在里面。树下还有很长的椅子。并有一位老人念叨游泳。附近的老人,还有一个男孩的画。我觉得他喜欢画非常多。旁边画的男孩,有两个男孩踢足球。他们很高兴。但足球是在河中。附近的河流中,有三个孩子钓鱼。他们去钓鱼大约一周两次,他们经常去人民公园。他们喜欢钓鱼。在河边,有清澈的水,有些鱼游了。天空晴朗,阳光明媚,天气温暖。有两种鸟在天上飞,他们很高兴。哇,这是一个有趣的图片!

亲爱的朋友们,可以绘制的图片?

精选读者点评

画面“说”活了!动词用得真大胆,“念叨游泳”“画的男孩”“游了”,错得可爱,像刚学会用翅膀扑腾的小鸟。建议下次写完大声读一遍,耳朵会帮你揪出“ne_t”和“两种鸟”这种小尾巴。

彩虹作文中英对照

250字
主题:自然之美、生命感悟、童心想象、希望象征

rainbow

lt rained this afternoon.after the rain,mountains were more beautiful and trees were greener.the nature became fresher .the rainbow was in the sky. the rainbow is made up of water drops.they get together in the sunlight and form the colou red bow. the rainbow makes a in wonderful picture with its colourful lights.the rainbow brings dreams to pople.

the world is beautiful,and life is beautiful as well.

中文彩虹

今天下午下雨了。雨后,山更美丽了,树更绿了,大自然变得清新了。由水滴组成的彩虹挂在天空。在阳光的照射下,形成红色的弓状。彩虹是精彩图片和多彩的灯光,彩虹的人带来的梦想。

世界是美好的,生活也是美。

精选读者点评

彩虹那段写得条理清楚!水滴、阳光、彩色光,像小镜头一格格推过去。可是“红色的弓状”是不是想说“七彩的弧形”?下回试试画个简笔彩虹再写。

六年级英语作文带翻译-my routine

350字
主题:成长记录、语言学习、校园生活、家庭日常、兴趣表达

hi, my name is susannah huang. my life is wonderful.

from monday to friday, i usually get up at 6.30. i brush my teeth and wash my face at 6.35.and then i have breakfast. for breakfast, i have bread and milk. at 7.00 i go to school. i always get to by bus. i have classes from 8.00am to 5.30pm. on saturday and sunday, i usually get up at 9.00.

on weekdays, i have many classes, chinese、maths、english and other subjects. my favourite subject is english.

i like my life and my study very much.

嗨,我的名字是苏珊娜黄。我的生活很精彩。

从周一到周五,我通常在6.30起床。我刷牙,并在6.35.and洗了把脸,然后我吃早饭。对于早餐,我有面包和牛奶。在7.00我去上学。我总是坐公共汽车前往。我上课早上8:00至下午五时三十分。在星期六和星期天,我通常在9.00起床。

平日里,我有很多课,中国,数学,英语等科目。我最喜欢的科目是英语。

我喜欢我的生活和我的研究非常多。

精选读者点评

这篇作文里“my life is wonderful”和“我的生活很精彩”都写得相当亮,像小太阳照进本子,可后头全是时间表啊!早餐几点、上课几点……你心里那个“精彩”,藏哪儿了?下次试试把“精彩”变成一个小故事啊!

一个有趣的周末

500字
主题:家庭温暖、成长记录、生活观察、节日陪伴、双语表达

i am ruby. i’m 13. now let me tell you something about my weekend.

i often read books, do housework and play sports on the weekend. but last sunday was my grandma’s birthday. so i bought presents for my grandma on saturday morning. then i went to the bookstore in the afternoon. i like reading story-books. i found them very interesting. so i bought some story-books and a notebook. then i went home.

on sunday morning i visited my grandparents with my parents. we went shopping together. in the afternoon we went fishing. we had a big dinner in the evening. after dinner, we watched tv together. we were very happy.

i am going to dongguan ne_t weekend. i think it is going to be busy. i hope everyone can enjoy their weekends.

我是红宝石。我13。现在让我告诉你一些关于我的周末。

我经常看书,做家务,周末做运动。但上星期日是我奶奶的生日。所以我在星期六早上给奶奶买了礼物。然后我下午去书店。我喜欢读故事书。我发现他们很有趣。所以我买了一些故事书和一个笔记本。然后我回家。

星期日上午我和父母一起去看望我的祖父母。我们一起去购物。下午我们去钓鱼。我们在晚上吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐。晚餐后,我们一起看电视。我们很高兴。

下周末我要去东莞。我想这将是忙碌的。我希望每个人都能享受他们的周末。

精选读者点评

这个“i am ruby”开头表达清爽,像推开一扇小窗,后头全是生活气儿!奶奶生日、书店淘书、钓鱼、东莞计划……事事有影儿,句句带温度。客观来说“i found them very interesting”这句,咱试试换成“翻两页就笑出声”,是不是更活呢!