我的妈妈 my mother

300字
主题:师者仁心、言传身教、教育坚守、生命影响

高中英语作文:我的妈妈 my mother

my mother is a teacher of primary school. she teaches in countryside, and there are only several teachers in her school. therefore, e_cept for math, she also teaches chinese and music. my mother is a good teacher and she is popular among her students. she cares every student in her class, both in study and life. her class seems to be rela_ed and lively, but students can learn a lot from her. to some e_tend, she is strict to her students. when they make mistakes in study, she would point it out directly and tells the student correct it by himself or herself firstly. if they can’t, my mother helps them at last. besides the study, my mother is a good teacher in life. she focuses on healthy growth of her students. so she always cares about their life. no matter what happens to them, she is ready to listen and help.

精选读者点评

妈妈教语文音乐数学,一个人撑起整个学校,这画面太有力量了!结尾那句“她 ready to listen and help”写得真自然,像你心里滚烫的话直接流出来。

我眼中的好老师

300字
主题:师德、育人、责任、发展、榜样、教育

描写老师的高中英语作文:我眼中的好老师

there are many standards to judge whether a teacher is good or not, such as popularity among students, the scores of students or his or her title. i am lucky to have met many good teachers who have their own characteristics. in my mind, a good teacher first should be rich in knowledge, especially in his or her own subject, which is the basic requirement to a good teacher. secondly, a good teacher should be patient. as we all know that not all students can do well in study, so that it requires teachers to be patient enough to help the poor students. finally, a good teacher should be creative and able to keep pace with the times. it means that our teachers should continually get new information and knowledge to enrich themselves.

精选读者点评

英语表达挺稳,句式不花哨但清楚,especially in his or her own subject这句拿捏有度!只是“poor students”听着有点刺耳,换成“students who struggle”试试?

刘备三顾茅庐

250字
主题:智慧、谋略、信任、胜利、人物风采

单福胸有成竹。他对刘备说:“不能让曹军入境,关云长率军从左迎击,张飞率军切断曹军的后路,主公和赵子龙率军正面迎敌。”

由于单福调遣得当,刘备的军队大获全胜,曹将吕旷、吕翔被杀,三千兵马被活捉。刘备更加信任单福了。

曹军主将曹仁听说先锋被杀,率领大军杀向新野,在城外摆了个“八门金锁阵”。单福叫赵云破了“八门金锁阵”,又把曹军打得大败。曹仁带着残兵败将回到许昌,向曹操汇报说:“有个叫单福的人当了刘备的军师,这人足智多谋,十分厉害。”

我读了这些片段后,感受到单福很有才华,很聪明,能力大,足智多谋,令我佩服不已。

精选读者点评

单福这名字起得真好,“单”是孤胆,“福”是天助,可你写他破阵时,怎么不写写他额角的汗、手指的颤?光列“调遣得当”,像在念兵书目录啊!

高中我最难忘的人作文

1000字
主题:自立自强、成长感悟、贫富对比、教育渴望、亲情温暖、责任担当

好像说的是她们有个亲戚知道,她正在上大学,愿意捐助她学费。我和米莉姐姐度过了一点幸福的时光。让我难忘的米莉姐姐她让我知道了我们生在福中不知福的毛病。

“怎么办呢?要上学,却没有钱,难道要我自己去赚吗?对,只有这样。”说完,她转身就走了。我也跑下楼去跟着她,走到她的身边:“米莉姐姐,我也想和你一起去。”姐姐看了看我,对我吃惊的说:“你怎么知道我的名字。”“姑姑告诉我的,还告诉了我你的很多情况。”“哦!你这个小机灵鬼你是叫昊子吧!那走吧!”

那时,她搬到我姑姑家隔壁。有一次,我倒姑姑家去,在姑姑家门口,我正好碰见了她,由于我很急,还不小心撞了她一下,差点和她撞了个满怀,可她没有埋怨我,只是说了一句话:“以后要小心点。”就迈着沉重的步伐走了进去。

只见米莉姐姐来到一招聘的地方,可不知怎么的,走了,也许年龄不对吧。接着,她又跑了好几个地方,都没有找到合适的工作。最后,她拉下脸回家了。

一大早,她又出去了,到了附近的一个打印部,来到老板面前,对老板说了一阵话,我疑惑不解,难道她要当打字员,还是.......只见她手里拿着一叠纸,我并没有想,也跟了上去。她又走道家里,过了好久,她才慢慢走了出去,我只看见她一手拿着刚才的白纸,另一个手拿着胶水出来了,她要去干什么?我看见她正在发广告,我走上前去一看,原来她在音乐学院上学,她想用自己学到的音乐知识,开个学电子琴的补习班,来赚钱。

她没有收到学生,第二天她到更远的地方去贴广告了。

终于有几个小朋友对学电子琴特别喜欢,就来到她这报名,这一天她的脸上才露出点点微笑,可我看得出来他还是有许多忧愁,才过了几天,补习班里就有了十几个学生了,正在她忧愁时,她接到了奶奶的一个电话,电话里好像说的是她们有个亲戚知道她家经济困难,而她正在上大学,愿意捐助她学费。听到这个消息后,米莉姐姐十分高兴,这下她又可以园了自己的学业了。当假期结束后,亲戚将捐出的钱寄给了她,而自己开的补习班又赚了一半的学费,学费凑齐了,当我看见她捧钱时的时刻。也许是因为自己赚到了钱,而露出的那种说不出的喜悦吧!

“喂,妈妈,你好吗,马上又可以上学了,呵呵!”听到她的笑声,我突然发觉到,我们现在家庭富裕的小孩生在福中不知福,他们那些穷苦的人想读书还读不起呢,还要靠自己流汗去赚钱。

我和米莉姐姐度过了一点幸福的时光。让我难忘的米莉姐姐,她让我知道了我们生在福中不知福的毛病。

精选读者点评

米莉姐姐贴广告那会儿,你写她“一手白纸,一手胶水”,多立体可感感!胶水瓶子沉不沉?她手指头有没有沾上糊糊?下次试试加这点小细节,人就活了。

大卫加勒特 david garrett

550字
主题:成长、坚持、才华、突破、榜样、音乐

last week, my english teacher showed us a famous violin player, the guy was not only looking young and handsome, but also played so well. after watching the video, i searched many information about him. the violin player is david garrett, he is from germany. he showed great talent in violin when he was a child. david loved to play the violin, he practiced so hard. he was practicing when other children were playing outside. the hard working helped david stand out, he got the amazing skill. an agent found him by chance and decided to sign him, since then, david recorded his album and got famous around the world. he broke the world record and being the violin player who can play the fastest. when people listen to him play, no one will ignore his skill, though he is really handsome.

上周,我的英语老师给我们展示了一个的小提琴手,他不仅看起来年轻又英俊,而且也拉得一手好提琴。看完视频后,我搜索了很多关于他的信息。小提琴演奏者是大卫?加勒特,他来自德国。他在小提琴方面表现出极大的天赋当他还是个孩子的时候。大卫喜欢拉小提琴,他是如此刻苦地练习。他在练习的时候,其他孩子都在外面玩。努力付出帮助大卫脱颖而出,他练就了惊人的技巧。经理人偶然找到了他,决定签下他,从那以后,大卫录制了自己的唱片,在全世界都有名气。他打破了世界纪录,成为拉得最快的小提琴演奏者。当人们听他演奏,没有人会忽视他的技巧,虽然他真的很帅。

精选读者点评

大卫练琴时别人在玩,这句画面感太强了!建议把“他拉得一手好提琴”换成“弓子一搭上弦,教室都静了”,试试?

责任的作文

600字
主题:友情、陪伴、自我突破、教育温度、内在力量

我的同桌叫小静,是个善良单纯的孩子。她活泼开朗,就是不善于表达,在学习上不太留心。从三年级下半学期开始时,我就坐在小静的右侧,并接收到了老师交给我的一个任务:帮助一下小静。

从那时起到现在,我一直在帮助小静,所以我俩成为了一对要好的朋友。就是因为她学习不太好,她试着跟每个人玩,但几乎每个人都不愿和她玩,她愿意跟我玩。当时,我还有同情她的心理,但到了现在,她居然能够独立地主动完成作业!我真佩服她能克服“贪玩”的困难。她的转变来源于一次委屈的哭,她认为自己做什么事都做不好,是个“笨蛋”,她伤心地哭了。我主动去安慰她:“你的岁数比我们都大,你哭了,我们自然也哭;你有失误,我们也会有失误,或许比你失误更重。人没有十全十美的,人无完人!现在,你应该发挥你的特长,发扬下去。虽然你的特长是美术,也不比别人画的好,但是只要你坚持下去,总有一天你会成功,凡事皆有可能成功,如果你不去试,肯定成功不了!”往后,在她有困难时,我总说:“你其实挻聪明的,就是你的潜力没发挥出来!”在我们的共同努力下,小静的学习成绩提高了!

“工夫不负有心人”。这句俗语传了多久?不知有多少年了,数也数不清。我的愿望达成了,我的责任也尽到了,不过老师交给我的任务是“永久”的。可我也没有听到她在这方面哪怕是一句简单的“谢谢!”虽然很伤感,但是我也挻满足的。

责任,说它是任务,不是有一“任”字吗?不是,我理解它是心里的一种想法和做法,是要拿出实际行动来见证的!

精选读者点评

小静哭那处写得真让人心焦!“你哭了,我们自然也哭”,这句太有孩子气的真诚了,比啥大道理都打动人。后头安慰的话稍显老成,像背来的,留点她自己嘀咕的笨拙感反而更真。

第50-51期

250字
主题:榜样力量、奋斗精神、职业坚守、文化影响、青春记忆

第50期

my favorite male actor

i like to watch movie, i had watched many movies, jackie chen is my favorite male actor.

when i was small, i watched jackie chen’s action movie, he can beat many guys at the same time, he is many teenagers’ hero.

in the last ten years, jackie chen has aimed at the foreign market, he took many movies and cooperated with foreign stars, he has achieved great success.

jackie’s success teaches us a lesson, the secret of achieving success is hard work.

jackie got wounded when he shot films, he has many scars on his body.

now he is over 50, but he is going on his playing, we are happy to see jackie chen’s movie.

精选读者点评

句子主谓宾基本清楚,but “i had watched”时态不对哦,“小时候看”该用一般过去时!还有“he is many teenagers’ hero”这句,冠词漏啦,补个“a”试试?