孩子内心世界的探究实验

700字
主题:代际理解、心理成长、隐秘空间、情感转化、自主意识

大人们,总想走进孩子的内心世界。

我们的内心世界其实也可以比作 (注:红磷 氧气点燃后=五氧化二磷),红磷燃烧产生的火苗便是幼小的我们内心的小萌芽,氧气就是外界,内心的萌芽受到了外界的影响后便产生了‘情’!人类世界,‘情’字当头!“五氧化二磷”,抛开化学常识/原理,用文学的角度来剖析,‘五氧’、‘二磷’、‘化’分别指什么呢?‘五氧’=外界姿采的世界,‘二磷’=内心原有的单调天地,‘化’即为将外界多彩的世界融进那个逼仄的小弄堂(内心)里;也就是说,我们的内心世界是在外界的影响下不断发生着变化的!当我们内心的火焰越来越高(注:当我们渐渐明白了感情,开始让那种酸酸甜甜的感觉在内心滋生蔓延时,其实,某种热情或者说某种情感就开始燃烧了,并且放射出越来越高的火焰),直至到了需要“防患于未然”的地步时,大人们便打开了“灭火器”给我们给予降温,待到逐渐冷却后,“和平谈判”就开始了,大人们给我们讲了一大堆的‘不准’、‘不许’、‘不该’、‘不要’等“法条律例”,事实大家都知道, 过程中,在没有冷却的情况下,禁止打开止水夹,否则适得其反!就好比加热的试管不能立即用冷水冲洗,否则就会炸裂一样(注:在我们固执的时候,外界越是尝试调和,内心越是愤懑不满,会不自觉做出不敢预料的事情,或许就会像试管炸裂一样、严重)!在我们静下来的时候,内心的门也就打开了,大人们可以进入“馆”内参观,但是,每个“参馆”内都有不能完全敞开展示的展品,那是我们埋藏在心底里的秘密,所以,大人们只能了解到我们内心世界的1/5左右。

结论:在我们了解了足够多(或者一定量)的东西后,大人们只能在我们的内心世界获得1/5左右的了解。

洛阳市第五十九中学初三:李玉丛

精选读者点评

这个“五氧化二磷”比喻太灵了!红磷是孩子,氧气是大人,一碰就着火,情字原来真能烧起来。你写“试管炸裂”那段,我读着心口一紧,下课得找你聊聊这火苗现在旺不旺。

april fool day

300字
主题:理性玩笑、人际尊重、行为边界、心理影响、道德自省

its ok to be paranoid on april fools day .

on april first its ok to be suspicious about believing anything, too good to be true! according to a psychologist who has researched past april fools pranks.

“most of us have fun playing harmless april fools tricks on each other but some folks inflict cruel and unusual punishment on their friends when their prank gets out of control. says robert r. butterworth, ph.d., who has developed a list of questions that should be asked before planning an april fools prank:

could the prank cause undue an_iety when uncovered? . could it be misinterpreted by others as a serious event? . does it involve deceiving more than a few people? . is an element of fear or risk involved? . if you were on the receiving end of the prank, would you be upset?

精选读者点评

这个标题真有意思!“愚人节允许偏执”,把心理学和节日文化揉一块儿了,读着就让人想往下看。第二段那个“too good to be true”加得妙,像聊天时突然压低声音提醒朋友。就是第三段人名和学位缩写堆一起,有点喘略显气,试试拆成两行哦!

四月的愚人节是偏执狂

450字
主题:节日伦理、行为分寸、信任危机、心理安全、公共善意

就在四月的愚人节是偏执狂。

“我们最有乐趣在彼此玩耍而不伤人,四月愚人节恶作剧但有些人施以残酷和不寻常的他们的朋友时,他们的恶作剧失控的惩罚。”罗伯特r. butterworth,博士,谁制定了一个计划,应该是四月愚人节恶作剧之前问的问题列表:

可以恶作剧引起过度焦虑的时候发现了?它可能被误解的人。作为一种严肃的事件?。它涉及欺骗超过几人?。是恐惧或风险因素?。如果你是在恶作剧,接收端,你会难过吗?

its ok to be paranoid on april fools day .

on april first its ok to be suspicious about believing anything, too good to be true! according to a psychologist who has researched past april fools pranks.

“most of us have fun playing harmless april fools tricks on each other but some folks inflict cruel and unusual punishment on their friends when their prank gets out of control. says robert r. butterworth, ph.d., who has developed a list of questions that should be asked before planning an april fools prank:

could the prank cause undue an_iety when uncovered? . could it be misinterpreted by others as a serious event? . does it involve deceiving more than a few people? . is an element of fear or risk involved? . if you were on the receiving end of the prank, would you be upset?

精选读者点评

这句“就在四月的愚人节是偏执狂”利落!开头就劈面撞来,像把小刀划开纸,锋利、意外、还带点冷幽默。后头英文混搭得也自然,不是硬塞,是喘气时漏出来的那种节奏。