优秀四年级英语作文-饭后散步walk after dinner

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主题:亲情陪伴、慢生活、城市夜景、日常之美、健康习惯

when i finish the dinner, my parents and i will take a walk, because it is the healthy lifestyle. there is a road along the river near my house, many people like to walk that road at night. it is also my favorite road, because the scenery is very beautiful. the colorful lights will be showed at night, it is the good place to walk.

当我吃完晚饭,父母就会和我一起散步,因为那是健康的生活方式。在我家附近,有一条沿着河边的路,很多人喜欢在晚上走那条路散步。那也是我最喜欢的路,因为风景很美。缤纷绚丽的灯光会在晚上发射出来,这是一个散步的好地方。

精选读者点评

这个“showed”用得有点急,灯不是被展示出来的呀~试试“light up”?还有“the good place”听着像在指唯一好地方,加个冠词“a good place”更自然哦!

额外奖励 extra reward

250字
主题:亲情、成长、鼓励、快乐、日常、感恩

last saturday, my mother took me to the supermarket, because i did well in school. and she would buy five things to me for my good behave. when we got to the supermarket, i was so e_cited. there were so many things. i picked up a bag of candy, two bags of chips, a piece of chocolate, and a doll. it was a happy day.

上周六,妈妈带我去了超市,因为她说我在学校表现得很好。 她还答应给我买五样东西。来到超市的时候,我真的是太激动了。太多东西了。我挑一袋糖果,两袋薯条,一块巧克力还有一个洋娃娃。那天真的是太开心了。

精选读者点评

excited拼错了,是e-x-c-i-t-e-d;“five things to me”应为“for me”;中文部分“挑一袋糖果”缺量词“了”,后面也少“了”。小毛病攒一起,读着就卡壳啦。

student of the week

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主题:乐于助人、日常观察、责任意识、生命关怀

li ming likes sports very much. he walks to school every day. on wednesday morning, he saw a little boy. the boy was climbing a tree. then the boy fell. the boy shouted for help. the boy broke his leg. li ming carried the little boy home. his parents drove him to the hospital. now, the little boy is ok.

李明非常喜欢运动。他每天步行去上学。星期三早上,他看到一个小男孩。男孩在爬一棵树。然后男孩跌倒了。男孩大声喊救命。男孩摔断了腿。李明带着小男孩回家。他的父母开车送他去医院。现在,小男孩是好的。

精选读者点评

李明扶人那句写得真利索!“ carried the little boy home”,没加半句废话,动作干净,像他本人一样确实是。

我幸运的一天-四年级英语作文翻译

250字
主题:传统节日、代际互动、友情延续、文化传承、生活温情

today, i wake up early in the morning, because it is the new year’s day, when i go out and say hello to the eldership, they will give me the lucky money, i have receive a lot of lucky money. what’s more, when i go to the street, i happen to meet my old friends, we have lost touched for many years, it is a surprise for me.

今天,我早早就起来了,因为今天是新年的第一天,在我走出去的时候,我对长辈打招呼,他们就会给我利是钱,我已经收到了很多利是钱。而且,在我走上街的时候,偶然间遇到了我的老朋友,我们已经很多年没有联系了,这对我来说真是个惊喜。

精选读者点评

开头“today, i wake up early”这句英文冒出来得有点突然啊!中文作文里夹英文,像吃汤圆咬到一颗糖,甜是甜,但硌牙。建议统一用中文写,节日气氛反而更浓。

生日蛋糕

250字
主题:亲情、成长、责任、希望、感恩、进步

today is my birthday, when i go home after school, i find a big cake in front of me, then my mother and father say happy birthday to me, i feel so surprised and happy. i am 10 year-old now, it means i grow up, i should be more mature and learn to think about my parents. i make a wish, i hope i can make a big progress in my study.

今天是我的生日,当我放学回家后,我发现一个大大的生日蛋糕在我面前,然后我的爸爸和妈妈对我说生日快乐,我觉得很惊喜和开心。我现在十岁了,这意味着我长大了,我应该变得更成熟些,学着为父母着想。我许了一个愿望,我希望我能在学习方面有很大的进步。

精选读者点评

蛋糕写得真香!“大大的”“惊喜和开心”,这俩词儿,光读就嘴角上扬~平心而论“十岁”后面那句,像老师在念班规,悄悄换成“我偷偷把书包背得更直了”,是不是更有你自己的影子呀!

熟能生巧-小学四年级英语作文带翻译

250字
主题:亲情、坚持、榜样、生活、成长、道理

today, when i go home, i smell the delicious food, i rush to my mom, she is cooking the new food for me. i am so curious about how she could such great food, she tells me that she has practice many times when i am at school. i learn from my mom that practice makes perfect, i should follow her in my study.

今天,当我回家,我闻到了美味的食物,我冲去妈妈那里,她正在给我煮新的食物。我很好奇她是如何能煮出这么美味的食物,她告诉我她在我上学期间已经练习了很多次。我从妈妈身上学到了熟能生巧,在学习方面,我应该向她学习。

精选读者点评

英文段里“i smell”“i rush”太急啦,像没换气就跑完百米!中文段“新的食物”有点怪,妈妈是第一次做这道菜?还是你头回见?建议改个更准的词,比如“刚学的菜”或“新研究的菜”。

四年级英语作文-水很重要

250字
主题:水资源、生命保障、环保意识、健康生活

we live in a world which is surrounded by the water, we need to take in water every day, without water, no one can live for a long time. some people even die of lacking water, so water is very important. we should not waste water, we can use it in recycle. we also need to drink more water, so we can keep healthy.

我们生活在一个被谁环绕的世界,我们需要每天摄入水分份,没有水,没有人可以长时间的生存。一些人甚至死于缺水,所以水是很重要的。我们不应该浪费水,可以循环使用。我们也需要多喝水,这样才能保持健康。

精选读者点评

水是命根子,这点写得真明白!值得注意的是“被谁环绕”这句漏字啦,是“水”不是“谁”,快改过来~

如果我有一双翅膀

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主题:童年想象、故土眷恋、文化向往、心灵自由

i always imagine how nice if i can fly, i am so free, i can fly to the place i want to go to. if i have the wing, i will fly to my hometown and see its beautiful scenery, the trees must be so green and the water must be so clean. i also want to fly to the great wall, i have heard about it long time ago, i want to appreciate its beauty.

我总是想象如果我能飞,那该多好啊,我能飞去我想要去的地方。如果我有一双翅膀,我会飞去家乡,看看它美丽的风景,树肯定油绿,水也肯定很清澈。我也想要飞去长城,我在很久之前就听说过长城,我想要欣赏它的美丽。

精选读者点评

句子像小纸船,晃晃悠悠飘着,“树肯定油绿”这句真巧妙!平心而论“i always imagine how nice if i can fly”语法小卡壳啦,试试“i wish i could fly…”呢!

小学四年级我的周末英语作文

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主题:休闲生活、时间安排、亲情陪伴、成长日常

i think everyone likes weekend. because it’s time for rela_ and fun. now i want to talk about my weekend.

i often spend saturday for fun. such as playing basketball with my friends, watching movies and tv shows, having a trip with family and so on. and i always spend sunday for homework and have some rest. sometimes i visit my grandparents with my parents. it’s very interesting to visit them.

我想每个人都喜欢周末,因为这是放松和玩耍的时间。现在我想谈谈我的周末。

星期六我通常用来玩,比如和朋友打篮球,看电影和电视节目,和家人旅行等等。星期天我通常用来做作业和休息。有时候我会和父母去看望爷爷奶奶。看望他们是件很有趣的事。

精选读者点评

周末安排得挺的确!打篮球、看电影、陪家人,生活味儿足。略显“rela_”漏了x,下次检查拼写哈~

a busy

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主题:忙碌、快乐、成长、日常、学习、友谊

yesterday i was busy.

first i went to the children s palace.i played the piano and read some books.

then i went to my friend s home. we played the badminton and some games.

ne_t i went to the bookshop bought some books.

after i did my homework and go to bed .

yesterday i was busy but i was very happy.

昨天,我很忙。

首先,我去了少年宫。我弹钢琴,阅读一些书籍。

然后我去了我朋友的家中。我们打羽毛球和一些游戏。

接下来,我就到书店买了一些书籍。

之后我做功课和睡觉。

昨天,我正忙着,但我还是很开心。

精选读者点评

句子太短啦!“i played the piano and read some books”,两个动作挤一起,像赶集似的。试试拆成两句?比如“i sat down at the piano. my fingers danced across the keys.”多带点画面感呀~

我的爱好my hobby

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主题:成长、兴趣、友谊、健康、学习、家乡

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i am cendy. i am in nanhai e_perimental primary school. i am in class 9, grade 4. i am tall and thin. i live in dali. i have many good friends. i often play with them.

i have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books. but i like to read books the best. because of reading books is good for my study. i also like riding bikes. because of it does a lot of good to my body.

what’s your hobby? can you tell me?

我叫cendy。我在南海实验小学4年级9班。我又高又瘦。我住在大理。我有很多好朋友。我经常和他们一起玩。

我有很多爱好,骑自行车,画画和看书。但我最喜欢看书。因为看书对我的学习有好处。我也喜欢骑自行车。因为它对我的身体有好处。

你的爱好是什么?你能告诉我吗?

精选读者点评

cendy同学,英文段落里“because of reading books is good…”这句语法有点小卡壳啦!“because of”后面得接名词或短语,不能接句子哦~试试改成“because reading books is good…”?顺口多啦!

小学四年级英语作文-钓鱼 go fishing

400字
主题:亲情、坚持、陪伴、收获、童年经历

today, i went fishing with my elderly brother. it was interesting, especially when we caught fishes. fishing needs a lot of patience, because it takes a long time to catch a fish. firstly, we prepared some baits and then put the fishing rod in the water. and then wait. i didn’t have much patience and looked at the fishing rod frequently. my brother told me not to do that, otherwise i would never catch a fish. my brother was good at it and he got five but i got none. i was a little upset. but brother told me that i can go fishing with him ne_t time. i look forward to it.

今天,我和我的哥哥去钓鱼。这十分有趣,特别是钓到鱼的时候。钓鱼需要很多耐心,因为等鱼上钩需要很长时间。首先,我们准备了鱼饵然后把鱼钩放到水里,然后就是等待鱼儿上钩。我没有耐心,所以总是去看鱼竿。哥哥告诉我不能那样做,否则我是钓不到鱼的。哥哥很擅长钓鱼,他钓到了五条,但我一条也没钓到,这让我很沮丧。但是哥哥说下次钓鱼还会带上我,我很期待。

精选读者点评

句子太长啦!“首先……然后……然后……”读着喘唯独气,试试断开?比如“我们备好鱼饵。甩竿入水。静等。”,三个短句,画面就活了。