给朋友的一封信

300字
主题:成长规划、自主学习、假期生活、跨文化交流

dear robert,

亲爱的罗伯特:

im glad to receive your letter. now i will tell you something about my plan for summer vacation after the final e_am. firstly, i will learn to drive. i think driving can be useful. secondly, i will take some english courses. thirdly, i will visit some tourist attractions. it must be very e_citing. last, i will do some reading in the vacation. what about you? i hope you can have a pretty vacation.

我很高兴收到你的来信。现在我会告诉你期末考试后我的暑假计划。首先,我会去学开车。我觉得学会开车是很有用的。其次,我会参加一些英语课程。第三,我会参观一些旅游景点。肯定很激动人心。最后,我会在假期中去阅读。你呢?我希望你能有一个完美的假期。

john

约翰

精选读者点评

小约翰,中英文对照写得真工整!美中不足“e_citing”少了个i,“e_am”也漏了x,下次检查拼写时,可以捂住单词右边,一个字母一个字母往左读试试?

你最难忘的大学课程

400字
主题:师生关系、学习收获、语言能力、教育影响、成长印记

大学是人生中很难忘的阶段,这是个相对单纯的时期,不用承担社会责任,只需要安静的做个好学生。所以说,作为大学生,最重要的事情就是课程。那么,你们最难忘的课程是啥米呢?

作文题目:

大学中给你印象最深的一门课

参考范文:

a course that has impressed you most in college

there are many courses in each college year. but the course which impressed me most in college is advanced english audio-visual speaking. the reasons why i like this course are as follows.

the first reason is that i have learnt a lot from this course. my listening ability, speaking ability as well as translation ability has improved greatly after taking this course. the second reason is that i like the teacher of this course, mr. qin, very much. he is a charming gentleman with great patience. his oral english is perfect, sounding like american speakers. he treated us very strict but we still like him e_tremely.

just as the proverb goes, “a strict teacher produces outstanding students.” thanks to mr. qin’s guidance and teachings in this course, all my classmates have made great progress in english learning.

精选读者点评

“啥米”这词儿用得俏皮,但考场作文慎用方言词哦~后文写秦老师那段,眼睛独具特色:说他口语像美国人,又写“严格但极喜欢”,如在眼前感!结尾谚语稍显熟套,试试把“同学们都进步了”换成你自己的一个具体变化?比如某次敢开口辩论了吧!

你最难忘的大学课程

350字
主题:师恩难忘、能力提升、学习感悟、严格与热爱、成长印记

作文题目:

大学中给你印象最深的一门课

参考范文:

a course that has impressed you most in college

there are many courses in each college year. but the course which impressed me most in college is advanced english audio-visual speaking. the reasons why i like this course are as follows.

the first reason is that i have learnt a lot from this course. my listening ability, speaking ability as well as translation ability has improved greatly after taking this course. the second reason is that i like the teacher of this course, mr. qin, very much. he is a charming gentleman with great patience. his oral english is perfect, sounding like american speakers. he treated us very strict but we still like him e_tremely.

just as the proverb goes, “a strict teacher produces outstanding students.” thanks to mr. qin’s guidance and teachings in this course, all my classmates have made great progress in english learning.

精选读者点评

这门课酣畅淋漓!mr. qin那句“strict but loved”历历在目,你写他放录音时全班屏息,写他纠正发音时自己先示范三遍,这些细节比“耐心”“完美”有力多啦!下次试试把“great progress”换成某次具体突破?比如第一次敢举手读新闻稿呢!