我最喜欢的节日

300字
主题:传统节日、家庭团聚、年俗文化、童年记忆、亲情温暖

my favourite festival is spring festival. before spring festival we usually clean and decorate our house. my mother always go shopping and buy some new clothes for me. sometimes we go to flower fair and buy some beautiful flowers. during spring festival. i can get lucky money from the adults. and we often get together and have a big meal. i can eat dumplings too. so i like spring festival best.

我最喜欢的节日

我最喜欢的节日是春节。春节之前我们通常要打扫并装饰我们的房子。我的妈妈总是去购物并给我买新衣服。有时我们去花市买一些漂亮的花。在春节期间,我能从大人那儿拿到压岁钱。我们经常聚在一起吃大餐。我还能吃到饺子,所以我最喜爱春节。

精选读者点评

春节过成了小太阳!压岁钱、饺子、花市全冒热气儿,读着就暖。可是“my mother always go shopping”这句动词漏了-s,像汤圆少包一颗芝麻,得补上才圆满。

小学六年级精卫填海英语作文

1050字
主题:坚持、勇气、成长、信念、传承、责任

小学六年级精卫填海英语作文

today, i read an article from a phrase book called jingwei reclamation story.

jingwei reclamation is a fairy tale. legend yan emperor had a daughter named little girl, little girl love swimming very much, one day the girl im very glad to e to the east china sea, so she swim and swim ah, perhaps too devotion forgot the time. it grew dark down, and at once, the dark clouds are gathering winds, this girl is mountain of pressure waves, gradually lasses sank.

after the little girl drowned, the soul into a bird called jingwei. the bird is very hated the sea, vowed to fill the sea. day and night so she bit twigs and small stones to fill the sea, no matter what difficulties can not give up the idea of her reclamation. while the east china sea was always laughed at him, but she has been to throw stones and branches into the sea.

after reading the story of jingwei reclamation, i was jingwei persevere to the end of the spirit. although jingwei is a bird, but constant efforts for their own goals, adhere to the stone branches into the sea every day, may really like the east china sea, jingwei is doing on one hundred cannot fill and level up the sea, but i believe that jingwei tenacity can achieve a goal.

jingwei persist spirit is worth me to learn. want to go to school when i practice calligraphy, first love, but after a few days don want to learn it, so until now my handwriting is so so, after reading this article, i regret, if i can insist on practicing, i think my words will be very beautiful. my classmates? don learn from me, no matter what things must stick to it.

今日,我从一本成语书中读了叫《精卫填海》的故事。

《精卫填海》是一个神话故事。传说炎帝有个女儿叫女娃,女娃很爱游泳,有一天女娃来到东海十分高兴,于是她游啊游啊,也许是游的太投入了忘记了时光。天色渐渐暗了下来,转眼间,浓云密布狂风四起,女娃被这排山似的巨浪所压,渐渐的女娃沉了下去。

女娃淹死后,灵魂化作一名叫“精卫”的小鸟。小鸟十分憎恨大海,发誓必须要填平大海。于是她日夜不停地衔树枝、小石子来填大海,无论遇到什么困难都无法打消她填海的念头。虽然东海总是嘲笑他,但她一向不断的往大海里丢石头、树枝。

读完《精卫填海》的故事,我被精卫坚持到底的精神所感动。精卫虽然是一只小鸟,却为自我的目标不断的努力,每一天都坚持把石头树枝投入大海中,可能真像东海说的一样,精卫就是干上一百年也不能填平大海,但我相信精卫坚韧不拔的精神必须能够到达目的。

精卫坚持到底精神很值得我学习。想当初我学练字的时候,刚开始很喜欢,可是学了几天后就不想学了,所以直到此刻我的字写得还马马虎虎,读了这篇文章后,我很后悔,如果当初我能坚持练下来,我想我的字必须会很漂亮。同学?可不要向我学习,无论干什么事必须要坚持到底。

精选读者点评

精卫衔石那段力道十足!“游啊游啊”“沉了下去”“衔树枝、小石子”,像在眼前动起来。就是“女娃被这排山似的巨浪所压”,“所压”太文了,孩子平时说话会这么说吗?试试换成“巨浪一下子把她拍下去了”。

小学六年级英语作文-we have only one world

350字
主题:环境保护、公民责任、低碳生活、可持续发展、校园文明

it’s our duty to protect the environment. i think we should keep our schools and cities clean and tidy.

here are some of my views:

don’t spit in public and throw rubbish everywhere .and we should plant trees and flowers around the city. it’s important to recycle paper and water. don’t forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room. we had better walk or ride bikes to school to keep our streets clean. we must do our best to make our world more and more beautiful in the future. do you think so ?

保护环境是我们的责任。我认为我们应该让我们的学校和城市保持整洁。

以下是我的一些看法:

不要随地吐痰,到处扔垃圾,我们应该在城市周围种树。回收纸和水是很重要的。离开房间时别忘了关灯。我们步行或骑自行车上学,以保持我们的街道清洁。我们必须尽力使我们的世界越来越美丽。你这么认为吗?

精选读者点评

这个“别忘了关灯”写得真好!小细节里有大心意,比喊口号真的是多了。后面那句“你这么认为吗”,语气像轻轻推了读者一把,挺巧的。

save water

300字
主题:水资源、日常应用、生命必需、环保意识

water is very important for us. we must drink water everyday. we can’t live without water. water is everywhere around us.at home, we use water to wash clothes, to wash dishes, to cook rice, to clean the flat, to have showers, to make drinks, to clean our teeth, to have a bath and so on. at work, people use water to put out fires, to grow vegetables, to make things in factories and so on. we also can swim in the sea. water is important for us, isn’t it?

水对我们来说很重要。我们必须每天喝水。没有水我们不能活。水在我们周围无处不在,在家里,我们用水来洗衣服,洗盘子,做饭,洗衣服,洗澡,清洁牙齿,洗澡等等。在工作中,人们用水来灭火,种植蔬菜,在工厂里制造东西等。我们还可以在海里游泳。水对我们很重要,不是吗?

精选读者点评

水真像空气一样,看不见摸不着,可少了它,啥都停摆了!你把“洗衣服”写了两遍,是手快了,还是格外爱洗衣服?

我爱我的兄弟

250字
主题:亲情、成长、矛盾、守护、家庭、认同

today, most family have one child, while i am not one of the only children, i have a brother. my brother is two years older than me, my feelings about my brother are both hate and like. my brother will grab my things without my permission, then i will hate him so much, but when i am bullied by others, he will protect me, then i love him so much.

今天,大部分家庭有一个孩子,然而我不是独生子,我有一个兄弟。我的兄弟比我大两岁,我对他的感情是又爱又恨。他会不经过我的同意就拿我的东西,然后我会很恨他,但是当我被其他人欺负的时候,他会保护我,然而我又很爱他。

精选读者点评

“又爱又恨”这四个字太精准无误!后文全在给它打样,抢东西时咬牙切齿,被护着时鼻子发酸,这种拧巴劲儿就是亲兄弟本味啊。

六年级英语作文带翻译-成功在于坚持 stick to success

250字
主题:坚持精神、成长哲思、人生挑战、自我超越

almost all people work hard for success, but not all people can success. many people ask how to make success. i think the answer is persistence. the way to success is full of failure and difficulty. people should never give up when meet them. if you give up, you can be successful. no matter how hard it is, persistence must be there.

几乎所有的人都为成功而努力奋斗,但是并不是所有的人都能取得成功。很多人问怎样才能取得成功。我认为答案是坚持不懈。通往成功的道路充满失败和困难。在遇到遭遇失败和困难的时候,无论如何都不能放弃。如果你放弃了,那你就不可能有机会成功了。不管有多艰难,是一定要坚持不懈的。

精选读者点评

英文段里“can success”语法错了,得改成“can succeed”;中文“遇到遭遇”重复了,划掉一个~

家乡的六年级英语作文

950字
主题:热爱家乡、亲近自然、季节之美、童年记忆、生命律动

关于家乡的六年级英语作文

my hometown is a small town, where beautiful scenery, the green trees and colorful.

spring, the branches out the pale green branches, grass lazily opened his eyes, the flowers are in full bloom, red, blue, yellow, purple, various and colorful. flowers are an into_icating fragrance, attracted a large group of butterflies, butterfly dance in the air, the picture is really beautiful!

summer arrived, the leaves more green, but also go fishing in the river, that the trees like some of the fighters. fragrance flowers are also more attractive. also opened a lotus, lotus leaf is green, is a pale pink lotus, beautiful! our children like to eat lotus root, lotus pond teeming with fish in the water swimming in droves, were we to catch up, alive, to see the appearance of begging, it is really poor!!!!

autumn, geese fly south, while arranged in chevron, then formed a glyph. under the blue sky, the sky is a piece of golden scene, the wheat is yellow, the leaves are yellow, pieces of the leaves leave the tree mothers arms, ravel alone. farmer uncle in this season of coke, also very busy, because of their hard sweat cultivation of wheat mature, they are all busy wheat harvest!

winter arrived, each snowflakes falling from the sky to the ground, the whole world a piece of white, snow is a flower, white, a knead in hand will melt into water droplets.

my hometown is beautiful, i love my hometown!

我的家乡是一个小镇,那里风景优美,绿树成阴。

春天,树枝抽出了嫩绿的枝条,小草懒洋洋地睁开眼,花儿们也纷纷盛开了,红的、蓝的、黄的、紫的,千奇百怪,五光十色。花儿们发出阵阵醉人的芳香,引来一大群蝴蝶,蝴蝶在空中翩翩起舞,那景象可真美!

夏天到了,树叶更绿了,还去河里摸鱼,那一棵棵树像一些战士一般。花儿们也更加芬芳诱人。荷花也开了,荷叶是绿的,荷花是淡粉红的`,真美啊!我们小孩子最喜欢到荷塘采莲藕吃,一条条鱼在水中成群结队地游来游去,一被我们捉上来,就“活蹦乱跳”,看它乞求的样子,真可怜!

秋天,大雁往南飞,一会儿排成人字形,一会儿又排成一字形。天空湛蓝湛蓝的,天空下是一片金黄的景象,麦子是黄的,树叶也是黄的,一片一片的树叶离开大树妈妈的怀抱,独自一人“旅行”。农民伯伯在这个季节可乐了,也很忙,因为他们辛勤的汗水培育的麦子成熟了,他们都忙着割麦子呢!

冬天来到了,一颗颗雪花从天上飘落到地上,整个世界一片洁白,雪花是花状的,白白的,一捏在手中就融化成晶莹的小水珠了。

我的家乡真美丽,我爱我的家乡!

精选读者点评

这篇作文里“小草懒洋洋地睁开眼”“树叶离开大树妈妈的怀抱”真立体拟人用得不生硬,是孩子自己看见的、心里长出来的句子,比抄范文强多了。但是“千奇百怪”形容颜色有点跑偏,下次试试“争奇斗艳”呀!

my parents 我的父母

650字
主题:亲情、成长、责任、平凡、关爱、日常

my parents

i have a busy father and a kind mother.

my father is a businessman. he is 42 years old. he is short. he likes reading newspapers after meals. he watches tv in the evening. he goes to work by car. he has got a nice black car. he often plays golf with his friends on the weekend. he does not often eat dinner with us.

my mother is a housewife. she doesn’t work. she stays at home. she is beautiful. she has long hair. she does housework in the morning. she often goes shopping in the afternoon. she is kind, but she is strict to my study. she likes reading. she watches tv at night, too.

i love my parents. and they love me too my fathers day

my father is very bsuy. every day he goes to work by subway. he teaches math at school, his math is very good! in the afternoon, he eats lunch at school. after lunch, he reads newspapers. then he goes home at 5:30. he eats dinner. then, he takes a bath in the evening. he watches tv at living room. after watching tv, he goes to bed at 10:00.

我的父母

我有一个忙碌的父亲和一个慈祥的母亲。

我父亲是个商人。他42岁。他个子矮他喜欢在饭后看报纸。他在晚上看电视。他开车去上班。他有一辆漂亮的黑色轿车。周末他经常和他的朋友们打高尔夫球。他不常和我们一起吃晚饭。

我的母亲是一位家庭主妇。她不工作。她呆在家里。她是美丽的。她有长头发。她早上做家务。她经常在下午去购物。她很善良,但她对我的学习很严格。她喜欢读书。她晚上看电视。

我爱我的父母。他们也爱我,我的父亲节

我的爸爸非常繁忙。他每天乘地铁去上班。他在学校教数学,他的数学很好!下午,他在学校吃午饭。午饭后,他看报纸。然后他回家5:30。他吃晚饭。然后,他在晚上洗澡。他在客厅看电视。看完电视后,他10点上床睡觉。

精选读者点评

“我父亲是个商人”和后面“他每天乘地铁去上班。他在学校教数学”,这爸到底干啥的?职业前后打架啦!

mary

250字
主题:友谊、成长、学习、合作、跨文化、青春

mary is my new friend.i got to know her only yesterday. but we like to each other at first sight. she is a tall , outspoken ,13-year-old girl. she is good at english ,and i do well in maths.we helped each other yesterday with our homework.we both like playing pingpang,and we had a match yesterday afternoon. she is easy going .and i m so glad to be her friend.

mary是我的新朋友。我认识她昨天才。但我们喜欢彼此一见倾心。她是一个身材高大,心直口快,13岁的女孩。她擅长英语,我做好数学。我们互相帮助昨天与我们的功课。我们都喜欢打乒乓球,我们有一个昨天下午的比赛。她随和。我真是太高兴是她的朋友。

精选读者点评

mary写得挺活,像真在说话!“一见倾心”用得俏皮,唯独中文里一般说“一见如故”更自然~作业互帮那段十分如在眼前感,要是把“昨天才”改成“才刚认识”,读着就顺溜多啦!

六年级英语作文-可爱的学生们

200字
主题:童真、幽默、成长、同学情、校园生活

there are many lovely students in our class. everyone has a lot of lovely stories. yuan jun hang is one of them.

one day, just when the class was over , yuan jun hang put a pose and said: look, i have strong muscles! i looked at him and replied: really ? this is fat.

then everyone burst out laughing.

我们班上有很多可爱的学生。每个人都有很多可爱的故事。元君航就是其中之一。

有一天,刚刚下课的时候,元君航摆了一个姿势,说:“看,我有强壮的肌肉!”我看着他回答说:“真的吗?这是脂肪。”

然后每个人都大笑起来。

精选读者点评

元君航那句“我有强壮的肌肉”真鲜活!后一句“这是脂肪”反差感拉满,全班笑出声的画面一下就蹦出来,记叙文就得这样抓瞬间!

the meaning of diy

250字
主题:实践体验、亲子互动、自我表达、生活美学

what is diy, it is short for do it yourself. people nowadays chase for creativity, they want to do things by themselves. diy is a good way to e_perience life, parents can make cakes with their children, it is a good chance for them to play together. a presents made by ourselves also reflects our sincere. diy is a popular trend, let’s do it.

什么是diy,这是自己动手的英文缩写。现在人们追求创意,他们想要自己动手做事情。diy是一种体验生活的好方式,父母可以和孩子一起做蛋糕,这是他们一起玩的好机会。一件我们做的礼物也体现了我们的诚意。diy是一种流行的趋势,让我们来动手吧。

精选读者点评

“diy”翻成“自己动手”挺准,还知道用“做蛋糕”举例子,生活味儿有了!但“a presents”写错了,单复数得盯紧;后半段中英文混着来,像没换好气,喘得有点急。