我们的新老师

300字
主题:师者形象、校园生活、人物观察、成长记忆

our new teacher

our new teacher is science teacher. he’s very strong. he has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. he often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes。

our science teacher is very kind. and he is very smart, isn’t he? today, we have science class. we are very happy. because he is so funny. who is he? he’s a mr. zhou.

作文翻译:

我们的新老师是科学老师。他是非常强壮的。他有一个大嘴巴,两个大耳朵,两个大眼睛和一个不太大的也不太小的鼻子。他经常穿着一件黑色的新衬衫和棕色的裤子,还有两双大鞋子。

我的科学老师很和蔼。他很聪明,是吧?今天,我们有科学课。我们非常高兴。因为他非常有趣。他是谁?他就是周老师。

精选读者点评

这个“大嘴巴”“大耳朵”真有神但“两个大眼睛”读着别扭,人本来就有两只眼睛呀,改成“炯炯有神的双眼”试试?还有,“两双大鞋子”让人笑出声,是穿了两双?还是脚尤其大呀!

雨天英语作文翻译

300字
主题:季节感知、气候记忆、个体归属、冷暖哲思

a rainy day

today is a rainy day and it’s cold with the temperature of 5℃. there are only a few people on the street and they all wear thick down coats and boots. they walk quickly and seem to go somewhere to escape from cold.

it has been cold for a very long time and this winter is colder than ever, but i like it very much because i was born in winter. besides, in my oppion, only the coldness makes a real winter.

作文翻译:

雨天

今天是一个雨天,而且很冷,温度只有5℃。街上人很少而且他们都穿着厚厚的羽绒服和靴子。他们都走得很快似乎要走去某个地方来逃离寒冷。

这个冬天已经冷了好长一段时间了,而且往年的冬天都要冷。但是,我非常喜欢它,因为我是在冬天出生的。此外,我个人认为,只有寒冷才能造就真正的冬天。

精选读者点评

描写传神“5℃”“厚羽绒服”“快步走”,冷气都从纸里冒出来了。后半段突然转到“我生在冬天”,像悄悄掀开衣角露了点暖意,这个弯儿转得挺灵。

教师节英语作文-我有一个好老师

500字
主题:师生情、童年记忆、成长遇见、纯真赞美

hello! i’m summer i like english very much, because of my english teacher, anne today, i would like to introduce her to you.

in my eyes, she’s not a teacher, but a lovely girl and a good friend of mine. she is not tall. she is thin with long hair. her face is round. there are two small eyes on her face. she likes smiling. when she smiles, her eyes just like the moon at the beginning of the month. i think she is very beautiful girl.

she’s very kind, like an old friend. she can singing, dancing and drawing. she can speak very good english. she can tell us many stories and play games with us. when we have an english lesson, we feel very happy. all of us are interested in her lesson.

i have a good teacher. i think i’m very lucky.

译文:

您好!我是夏天。我很喜欢英语,因为我的英语老师,安。今天,我想向大家介绍她给你。

在我眼里,她不是老师,而是一个可爱的女孩和一个好朋友。她个子不高。她是瘦瘦的,有头长头发。她的脸是圆的。有两个小眼睛在她的脸上。她喜欢微笑。当她微笑,她的眼睛就像月亮在月初。我觉得她是很漂亮的女孩。

她很亲切,就像老朋友一样。她能唱歌,跳舞和绘画。她能讲很好的英语。她可以告诉我们很多故事,玩游戏和我们在一起。当我们有一节英语课,我们感到非常高兴。我们所有的人都对她的课感兴趣。

我有一个好老师,我认为我很幸运。

精选读者点评

夏天同学,你笔下的anne老师生机勃勃!“眼睛像月初的月亮”这个比喻让我眼前一亮,不是套话,是心里真画面感十足。然而“she can singing”“very good english”这些表达,下次试着翻翻课本p32的动词搭配和形容词用法?