interest is the best teacher

400字
主题:内驱力、学习动机、跨文化、自我发展、热爱、成就

兴趣是的老师“interest is the best teacher

it’s well known to all that interest plays an important role in one’s life.an old saying goes: “interest is the best teacher.” i quite agree with this idea. i began to be crazy about english when i was a little girl. i got interested in foreign cultures and customs in particular. to meet my curiosity, i read english stories everyday. it seems to be the best “meal” of a day. as a result, i make great progress in english learning. interest is the key to success. a person who is interested in something will devote himself to it. meanwhile, a big miracle will be made.

大家都知道,兴趣在我们的生活中扮演重要角色。古人云:“兴趣是的老师。”我非常同意这个观点。当我还是个小女孩的时候就对英语很狂热。我对外国文化和风俗尤其感兴趣。为了满足我的好奇心,我每天都看英语故事。这似乎成了我一天中最美的一餐。结果,我在学习英语上取得了很大进步。兴趣是通往成功的钥匙。一个对某事感兴趣的人会投入到这件事上。于是,伟大的奇迹就发生了。

精选读者点评

兴趣真能“喂饱”人啊!每天读英语故事像吃饭一样香,这个比喻形象极了,后文要是能把“香”在哪儿写细点,比如哪天读到什么故事突然开窍了,就更打动人啦。

电影暮色的英语作文

550字
主题:爱与勇气、身份差异、青春抉择、责任担当、纯真情感

i like watching movies very much. my favorite movie is twilight. it is a beautiful love story between vampire and mankind. the main characters are named edward and bella. they can’t help loving each other. edward is a vampire who has lived hundreds of years, while bella just a ordinary high school student. they are classmates. when bella recognizes that edward is a vampire, she still chooses to love him under the pressure of every aspect. and edward also pick the choice to protect bella at all costs. this is their beginning of love.

我非常喜欢看电影。我最喜欢的电影是暮光之城之暮色。讲的是吸血鬼和人类之间的唯美的爱情故事。主角是爱德华和贝拉。他们无可救药的爱上对方。爱德华是一 个活了数百年的吸血鬼,而贝拉只是一个普通的高中生。他们是同学。当贝拉知道爱德华是吸血鬼时,她还是顶着方方面面的压力选择爱他。而爱德华也选择不惜一 切代价来保护贝拉。这就是他们爱情的开始。

i like this movie so much that i have seen it four times. i think the movie stars in it are very beautiful and handsome. secondly, the plot is very attractive and e_cited. and the scenery is beautiful too. in a word, i just like it the moment i see it.

我非常喜欢这部电影,所以我看了四遍了。我觉得那里面的电影明星非常漂亮,英俊。其次,它的情节很有吸引力,让我很兴奋。风景也很漂亮。总之,第一次看到它时,我就是喜欢它了。

精选读者点评

“i like watching movies very much”,开头太直白啦!试试换成“每回片头音乐一响,我就自动坐直了”,画面感立马出来~

钱是一切吗?is money everything

1100字
主题:价值观、精神追求、人生选择、教育理想、内心丰盈

钱是一切吗?is money everything

there is no doubt that money is very important, we can’t live without money. most things we need to keep living are bought by money. everybody works hard to make the ends meet. money can satisfy people with they want, it seems that money is everything, but i don’t think so. 毫无疑问,钱是很重要的,没有钱,我们无法生存。我们需要生存的大部分东西是用钱买来的。每个人都努力工作来维持生计。钱可以满足人们所想要的一切,似乎钱就是一切,但是我不这样认为。 there is something that money can’t buy. the sense of happiness is one of them. though with a lot of money, we can buy the big and lu_ury house, the sense of happiness is from the heart. if the person works very hard to buy the house and he has less time to stay at home, because he needs to pay the bill, then i don’t think he is happy. 有一些东西是钱买不到的。幸福感就是其中一样。虽然有了很多钱,我们能买到很大很豪华的房子,但是幸福感是从心底发出来的。如果一个人很努力工作,买到了房子,但是没有什么时间呆在家里,因为他需要还债,这样我就不觉得他是幸福的。 for the poor people, though they don’t have much money, i see they live with laughter all the time. when i lived in the country, my life was simple. the food i ate was vegetables and sometimes i had the meat. i did not care much about it. when i moved to the city, i felt lonely, though i earned more money, i missed the country life. 对于穷人来说,虽然他们没有很多钱,但是我看见他们一直活得很开心。当我住在乡村的时候,我的生活是简单的。我吃的食物是青菜,有时候也吃肉。我对吃什么不怎么介意。当我搬到城市里去的时候,我觉得孤单,虽然我挣了更多的钱,但是我想年乡村的生活。 money is not everything, the happiness is nothing with money. 钱不是一切,幸福和钱无关。

经过四年的大学学习,我很快就要毕业了。我在寻找工作中,同时,我也尝试着弄清楚自己喜欢什么样的工作。在我内心深处,我想要成为一名老师,同时我也想走得更远些,成为一名大学教师是我最喜欢的工作。 在大学里,我觉得很自由,我学到的知识是多样的。不想在高中,老师关注考试,因此他们的主要目的就是让学生拿到高分数,进入到理想的大学。大学教师以不同的方式教育学生,他们关注学生的批判性的思维。我喜欢这样的自由氛围。 in order to achieve my dream and get the job i like, the first thing i need to do is to get the further study. i have passed the postgraduate entrance e_am and i feel very e_cited. i will learn as more as possible and improve myself as the e_cellent student. i believe i can get the job i like. 为了实现我的理想和得到自己喜欢的工作,我首先要做的事情就是进行深造。我已经通过了研究生入学考试,我觉得很兴奋。我会尽可能的多学习知识,提高自我,做到成为优秀的学生。我相信自己能找到喜欢的工作。

篇三让孩子做决定let the kids make choice

精选读者点评

钱买不到笑声,可你写乡下吃青菜也香、城里挣得多却想家,这句子真像从心窝里掏出来的!后半段转到当老师,劲儿还在,但“批判性思维”“自由氛围”这些词,像借来的衣服,穿得有点紧。试试把“大学老师怎么上课”换成你亲眼见过的一件事啊!

英语作文-my middle school我的中学

250字
主题:成长、期待、新起点、观察、认同、喜悦

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i was very e_cited and curious about my middle school life, when i got to my middle school for the first time, the scene on campus gives me a surprise and leaves me a deep impression. the better environment and atmosphere, the bigger play ground, the more knowledgeable teachers and the spacious and well-lighted reading room, which are attractive for me. so i feel very happy and satisfied

我很兴奋,我的中学生活很好奇,当我进入中学的时候,校园里的景象给了我一个惊喜,给我留下了很深的印象。良好的环境和氛围,更大的操场,更知识渊博的老师、宽敞明亮的阅览室,这是吸引我的。所以我感到非常高兴和满意

精选读者点评

“excited”拼成“e_cited”,还知道用下划线代替字母,挺有创意!别忘了下次别让下划线“藏猫猫”啦~校园描写里“宽敞明亮的阅览室”这句最亮,光是读着就觉着窗明几净,连呼吸都轻了两分。

那一处风景作文

1100字
主题:生命韧性、无声之美、记忆温度、精神风景、热爱力量

当我看见许多美丽的风景时,都会忍不住赞叹。可是,真正能使人不能忘记而又念念不忘的风景又有多少呢?

而在我的心底有一处风景,虽然很普通,但是她在我心目中是胜过无数美丽而使人陶醉的风景。那就是——海

我会这么想,是因为一个炎热的暑假,妈妈带我们一家去看海。我们经过漫长的车程和船程,终于到达了目的地——上川岛。我站在宾馆的门口,隐隐约约地听到了海浪翻滚地声音,仿佛已经看见了那美丽而动人的风景。我把背包交给爸爸,就立刻朝着发出海浪声的地方跑去。到那里,我踩着柔软的海沙,听着海浪的声音,海风迎面吹来。但我非常的累。所以等我喘过气,回过神来,我惊讶的站在那里一动也不动。那蔚蓝而广阔的大海和无边无际的蓝天形成了一条线,就像老天爷用针和线将她们两个缝了起来,而又看不见线的痕迹,真是天衣无缝呀!并且在这里我所看到的景象是欢快的,和睦的,一家人开开心心地像天真无邪的小孩子一样玩耍,没有一个人是愁眉苦脸的;在这里可以将一切烦恼和不开心的事都抛到九霄云外去,尽情的享受着美丽动人的风景;在这里翻滚地海浪所发出的声音会在你耳边不停地回响,而海浪仿佛会随着空气进入你的体内,一次次漫湿你那枯干的心灵。当我换好衣服进入海里游泳时,那平常学习累坏了,疲劳的身体一下子变得无比的舒适。到了晚上,你在海边散步时,一阵阵微微的海风吹过,十分舒服。又抬头看看天上又有许多烟花看,让这个完美的风景更加完美无瑕。早上,起床到海边走走,看看日出。那太阳就像是从海中刚淋浴完似的。可是我们时间有限,就要回去了。在回去的路上我一直在回忆着那风景,那美丽的景象不停地在我眼前重现。

曾几何时,那道美丽的风景深藏在我心里,每当我回想起来,便多了一份深沉,一份感动,一份信心.

大家还记得26年春晚那个扣人心弦,赢得观众赞不绝口的节目千手观音吗?那舞蹈唯妙唯肖,婀娜多姿,那动作整齐划一,那音乐悠然典雅.那些舞者用心舞蹈,看了使人荡气回肠......谁能想到这些舞精灵们是弄哑人呢?他们伴随着音乐偏偏起舞,用舞蹈来编织梦想.她们无法听到音乐,但却用心去感受音乐,音乐已经深深镶嵌在她们灵魂里,她们用心感受声音,感受美,表演的淋漓尽致,感人至深.她们全身心地投入舞蹈,在那个无声世界里感受另一种美好的境界,灯与影的交错使她们分外妖娆.....是什么,让她们拥有如此美好的布翼?是什么,让她们如此执着执著?是什么,让她们配合的如此完美?是心中那份炽热的感情,是他们对音乐对艺术如痴如醉的热爱,是他们对音乐对美好世界的渴望与追求.虽处于无声世界,但却无声胜有声,只因为心中最美的念想.

这个节目虽早已过去,甚至与淡出人们的视野.但那一个个自信灿烂的面容却成为了我心中最美的风景!

精选读者点评

海真饱满浪声、沙软、风扑脸,连喘气的停顿都像在海边,但后半段“千手观音”怎么突然跳进来了?这海和聋人舞者之间,缺一句悄悄话啊。

生命需要勇气

500字
主题:珍爱生命、直面挫折、自强不息、敬畏自然、向上生长

树,砍断枝条还能再生;草,烧了还能再长。悬崖上的一棵松树茁壮生长着,不需要谁来施肥,也不需要谁来灌溉。一粒种子,可以掀翻压着它的石块。顽强地向上生长……植物是那么珍惜生命,不放弃一点生存的机会,它们凭着勇气克服重重困难,努力的生长,尽管它们也许长得并不茂盛,但这种毅力和勇气不得不让我佩服。

我们人类也应该这样,遇到任何困难都要勇敢的面对它,只要我们努力的去做,再大的挫折都不怕。可是在生活中,很多人一遇到困难就逃避。前段时间我就在报纸上看到,有一个大学生,家里很穷,国家帮助他上了大学,但他在学校因受了一点小小的挫折就跳楼自杀了。这样做既辜负了父母的期望,有辜负了国家对他的关心。连一粒种子都能顽强不屈,_比自己重几百倍的石头,向上生长,他怎么就那么懦弱,不热爱生命呢?如果我是他的话,我会勇敢的去面对生活,克服困难。不是有句话说“不经历风雨,怎能见彩虹”吗?不管遇到什么事,我们都应该勇敢地去面对。

每当我看到那些在风雨中昂首挺胸的花草,我就会告诉自己要好好珍惜生命,要像它们一样有勇气战胜困难,是生命充满光彩。

精选读者点评

树能再生,草能再长,松树在悬崖上自己活得好好的,你写植物这段,真有劲儿!后半段突然转到大学生跳楼,语气太急,像一口气没喘匀。建议把“报纸上看到”换成你亲眼见过的、摸得着的人和事,哪怕只是楼下修车师傅手上的老茧。

抓住机遇 seize the opportunity

750字
主题:成长困惑、现实挑战、价值权衡、人际信任、职业规划

明年我就要毕业了,现在我开始担心我的将来,我不知道自己应该从事怎么样的工作,我从网上看到招聘信息,不知道该不该把握那些机会。我的老师告诉我要抓住每一个机会,这样我就能知道自己想要的是什么。

graduate season is a sad and busy season. after four years’ study, it is time to say goodbye to your classmates, the building of the deep relationship makes it hard to say goodbye. at the same time, finding a job is the most important thing for students, because they need to find their places in the society. as there are many opportunities for graduate students, they always don’t know how to do. 当机会来临的时候,我会毫不犹豫地抓住。

今天,随着多媒体的快速发展,人们接触到各种各样的信息,他们可以通过电话,商业广告和网络等等渠道得到信息,但是发达的媒体也给居心不良的人提供了骗钱的途径。人们必须当心信息,这样才不会被骗。

i have the e_perience of almost getting cheated. one day, when i was at home, i got a call, at first, i did not know who called me, the person said he was my teacher, he called my name and told his name to me. i could recognize my teacher’s voice, the person in the phone was my teacher’s voice, so i let down my guard, and talked happily. at last, my teacher asked me to send some money to his credit card, because he hadn’t carried cash. at the moment, i felt so curious, my teacher would never did such thing, he was a good teacher, so i called my teacher with his another number, until then i realized that i almost got cheated, my teacher was at home at the moment. 稳定性是人们考虑的另外一个重要的因素。人们不想要经常换工作,所以他们想要找一份能够从事一生的工作,虽然钱挣得不多,稳定感能给他们带来欣慰。

i take both factors when i find a job, no matter where i go, i always put my family in the first place. 当我找工作的时候,我两样因素都考虑,无论我去哪里,我总是把家庭放在第一位。

精选读者点评

毕业季的慌乱写得真真切切,“不知道该不该把握那些机会”,这句话底下全是心跳声。中英文夹杂不是毛病,是呼吸节奏;那句“当机会来临的时候,我会毫不犹豫地抓住”,突然就亮点突出,像黑屋子里自己擦亮的一根火柴。

爱情的英语作文-爱 即无期待

800字
主题:爱的本质、关系边界、精神自由、无条件关怀

你身旁有个心爱的ta吗?你会对ta有所要求和限制吗?

其实对于大多数爱情而言,“在一起”势必会带来一些要求,任何一方都难免会对另一方有所期望!可是,很多时候,现实和理想的落差正好就是将两人关系疏远的根本。少点制约,多点自由吧!

i once had a friend who grew to be very close to me. once when we were sitting at the edge of a swimming pool, she filled the palm of her hand with a little water and held it before me, and said this:

我曾有个朋友,我们的关系很亲密。有一次我们坐在游泳池边上,她载手掌里盛了点儿水,捧在我面前,说:

you see this water carefully contained on my hand? it symbolizes love. as long as you keep your hand caringly open and allow it to remain there, it will always be there. however, if you attempt to close your fingers around it and try to posses it, it will spill through the first cracks it finds.

你仔细看我手上这水了吗?那代表爱。只要你充满关爱地弯曲着你的手指,并允许它保持在那儿,它会永远在那儿。但是,如果你试图把你的手指在它周围合起并试图占有它,它会通过它找到的缝溢出去。

this is the greatest mistake that people do when they meet love… they try to posses it, they demand, they e_pect… and just like the water spillin out of your hand, love will retrieve from you.

这是人们当他们遇到爱时犯的的错误…他们试图占有它,他们要求,他们期待,那样就像溢出你的手掌的水一样,爱会从你身边撤退。

for love is meant to be free, you cannot change its nature.

因为爱意味着自由随意,你不能改变它的本性。

if you have people you love, allow them to be free beings. give and don e_pect. advise, but don order. ask, but never demand. it might sound simple, but it is a lesson that may take a lifetime to truly practice. it is the secret to true love. to truly practice it, you must sincerely feelno e_pectations from those who you love, and yet an unconditional caring.

如果你有爱的人,允许他们自由随意的存在。给予而不指望;建议而不命令;请求而不要求;可能听起来简单,但这需要一辈子去实践。这就是真爱的秘诀。真正去实践它,你必须对那些你爱的人没有期望,并给予无条件的关爱。

精选读者点评

这水的比喻恰到好处!手摊开,水才留得住,把“爱需要自由”写得又轻又准。后半段英文夹杂稍乱,但意思没打折,改用中文重述一遍试试?

欢度国庆

850字
主题:热爱祖国、节日喜悦、自然之美、阅读成长、文化传承、青春朝气

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仰望天空,阳光明媚,我的心情更是明媚;俯视大地,生机勃勃,我的笑容更是生机;聆听鸟鸣,悦耳动听,我的心中不禁涌起愉悦之情!多么美好的国庆,多么快乐的国庆呀!

鸟儿在空中自由地飞翔,云朵在空中悠悠地飘动;蝴蝶在花丛中婆娑起舞,蜜蜂在花丛中来回穿梭。大家都在欢庆国庆,大家都在准备着、舞蹈着,为国庆节欢呼:“亲爱的祖国,生日愉快!”

我在快艇中度过了美好时光,度过了祖国的生日。登上快艇,发动机器,奔驰在水面上,一股凉风迎面扑来,几近中午的炎热被轻轻拂去,取而代之的是阵阵凉爽,我张开双臂,感受着自然的气息。凉飕飕的风撩乱了我的发丝,却把野花的芬芳灌入我的鼻中,空气中略带着几份清香,使人感到心旷神怡。快艇后方,一条白线标致着我们驶过的水路,两侧的浪花像一朵朵盛开的白莲点缀在幽静的水面上,一颗颗水珠像珍珠一般,又如天女散花,晶莹透亮。我注视着青山绿水,觉得山是那么的高耸,水是那么的清澈,山倒映在水中,山围绕着水;水映衬着山峰,水照映出山。我觉得,这些风景的搭配是何等的协调呀!

我在书香中度过了美好时光,度过了祖国的生日。漫步在书店中,翻阅着书籍,我沉思:以往,我们中华民族就是靠着智慧与勇气,登上了成功的顶峰,取得了胜利,才创造出了今日的辉煌,所以,我们要忆苦思甜,要不忘国耻,振兴中华。我捧起书,读着书中的每文章,不禁被吸引住了,于是,我在书的海洋中遨游,与主人公一起探索书中的奥妙,与朋友们一起分享读书的快乐:〈〈一路风景〉〉使我浮想联翩,〈〈纯真年华〉〉使我如醉如痴……在书中,我学到了周恩来“为中华之崛起而读书”的品质,学到了杜甫“漫卷诗书喜欲狂”的痴情,学到了赵普“半部论语治天下”的伟略……在书香中遨游的我,度过了一个快乐的黄金周。

国庆,给人一种快乐、喜庆的感觉。花儿在国庆开放的格外美丽,草儿在国庆生长的格外翠绿,鸟儿在国庆飞翔的格外自在,城市在国庆装饰的格外繁华,而我们,在国庆长假中显得格外兴奋、愉悦!

啊,国庆!祖国的生日!啊,国庆!欢乐的假期!

精选读者点评

快艇那段提气!风、水、山、花全活了,像电影镜头唰唰过,尤其“白莲浪花”“天女散花”,小手一挥就撒出诗来,留着,别删!

偶像的力量 the power of idol

1350字
主题:榜样力量、理性娱乐、社会观察、青年成长、消费反思

由于多媒体的发展,人们受到了电视和商业广告的影响,他们总是在关注着娱乐,所以他们会成为娱乐的粉丝。特别是青少年,他们追逐偶像。偶像给大众带来了很大的影响,他们的力量是很大的。

today, weibo is very popular for people to share the information. the celebrities open their accounts and they record their lives on it. many fans will keep their eyes on their idols’ accounts, they want to know everything about their idols. when the celebrities post the news about helping the poor people, then the fans will try their best to help the poor people. the fans will follow their idols’ words. 今天,微博对于人们来说很流行,他们使用微博来分享信息。名人开了账号来记录生活点滴。很多粉丝会观察偶像们的账号,想要了解有关偶像的一切。当名人们张贴了有关帮助穷人的消息时,粉丝会尽的努力去帮助穷人。粉丝们会追随着偶像的话语。

as the power from idol is so effective, so the idol should keep the positive image to the public. 由于偶像的力量是如此的有效,因此偶像应该在大众面前保持积极的形象。

the idols have the responsibility to keep the positive image, so that their power can be used in the proper way. 偶像有责任保持积极的形象,这样他们的力量才能用在适当的方面。

由于经济的发展,越来越多的人过上了好生活。有了更多的钱来满足物质方面的问题,因此人们追求娱乐。老一代人喜欢在广场跳舞,年轻人喜欢唱歌。对于我来说,我最喜欢的娱乐方式是旅游。

on the one hand, travel can broaden my vision. going to the different place can let me see the different scenery. every time when i go to a place, i will talk to the local people and get to know their culture. i learn so many things from life instead of the book. 一方面,旅行可以开阔我的视野。去不同的地方能让我看到不同的风景。每次当我去一个地方,我会和当地的人聊天,了解他们的文化。我从生活上学到了很多书本上没有的东西。

on the other hand, i will make friends during the trip. when i take the train, i will always find someone who has the same interest with me. we will talk a lot on the train, though our destination is different, we keep in touch and share our opinion all the time. 另一方面,在旅途中我会交朋友。当我坐火车,我总会发现和我有着相同爱好的人。在火车上我们会聊很多,虽然我们的目的地不同,但是我们会一直保持联系,彼此分享意见。

going to travel is my favorite form of entertainment, i learn a lot and i will continue my travel when i have the time and money. 一方面,随着收入的提高,人们倾向于在黄金周出游。经常有报道过多的游客使得交通阻塞。在一些旅游景点,人们可以看到上千个人头,而不是看到景色,经常有不愉快的事件发生在游客间。由于到处都是人,谁还有心情去欣赏景色呢。

on the other hand, on the golden week, the business men always raise the price of the products, they want to earn the great profit from the tourists. the tourists have to buy the products in the special situation, they spend a lot of money to buy the products. 另一方面,在黄金周期间,商人总是提高产品的价格,他们想要从游客那里挣很多的利润。旅客在特殊情况下不得不买这些产品,他们花费了很多钱来买这些产品。

in all, golden week is not a good time for people to go out for travel. people can just stay at home or go to visit the sites which are near home, so that they won’t get tired and spend too much money. 总的来说,黄金周对于人们来说不是一个出游的好时机。人们可以留在家里或者去家里附近的景点看看,这样他们就不会累,也不会花费很多的钱。

精选读者点评

这篇作文里“旅行能让我和当地人聊天,学书本外的东西”这句尤其亮!后面坐火车交朋友那段也自然,像在讲真事。话说回来中间突然冒出英文段落,又没翻译,读着有点跳,下次试试全用中文写啊!

我最喜欢的球员 my favorite player

250字
主题:成长、榜样力量、体育精神、青春热爱、文化认同

i like to play basketball very much. i will ask my friends to play match every week. yao ming is my favorite basketball player. he is so great, he not only plays so well, but also has the fans from all around the world. i fall in love with basketball because of yao. though he is retired, he is still the great idol in my heart.

我很喜欢打篮球。我每周都会叫上朋友去打比赛。姚明是我最喜欢的篮球运动员。他很伟大,不仅篮球打得好,而且在全世界都有粉丝。我喜欢上篮球也是由于姚。虽然他已经退役了,但是他在我心中仍然是最伟大的偶像。

精选读者点评

英文段里“yao ming”要大写哦,中文段“由于姚”太简略啦,补全名字更清楚~还有“so great”重复了两次,试试换词。

a disturbing age

500字
主题:价值观引导、社会责任、代际沟通、行为边界、生命健康、身份认同

when i was in middle school some of my classmates were smoking cigarettes. these classmates were both boys and girls. another problem was the tendency toward vandalism and theft. although only a very few persons were involved in these situations. i often felt uneasy and unsure about their actions. we have been taught to strive to be good citizens and cultivate good character, but at such a young age it is disturbing. many adults smoke, yet young people today should worry about the possibility of cancer. also people should know crime is bad and not rewarding, yet my classmates feel pressure from our society to cultivate another image. perhaps now is the time both parents and teachers should spend more time talking to teenagers about the problems they are facing.

我在中学的时候我的一些同学在吸烟。这些同学都是男孩和女孩。另一个问题是偷窃和破坏的倾向。虽然只有极少数人参与这些情况。我经常对他们的行为感到不安和不确定。我们已经学会努力成为好公民,培养良好性格,但在这样小的年纪是令人不安。许多成年人吸烟,但现在的年轻人应该担心癌症的可能性。人们应该知道犯罪是坏的,而不是有益的,但我的同学感到压力从我们社会培养另一个形象。也许现在是时候父母和老师应该花更多的时间与青少年谈论他们所面临的问题。

精选读者点评

吸烟、偷东西、破坏公物……这些事写得挺委实,不绕弯子。但“极少数人”后面那句“我经常感到不安”,语气突然软了,像被谁按了静音键,你真只是一旁看着?还是也偷偷递过火?

英语作文带翻译what is happiness

550字
主题:真实感受、生活点滴、人际温暖、精神满足

e believe that happiness is that they have much money so that they can live a better life. however, others regard happiness as having a good job or making a progress.

幸福是什么?不同的人有不同的看法。有些人认为幸福就是他们有很多的钱,让他们过上更好的生活。然而,其他人则认为幸福是有一份好的工作或者进步。

actually, happiness is a true feeling from our inner heart!

实际上,幸福就是来自内心的真实感受!

we can consider carefully what our feeling is when we are in the following situations.

我们可以认真想想当我们遇到下面的情形时我们的感受是怎么样的。

first, we help an elderly across the road, or give some solutions to our classmates’ learning problems.

首先,我们帮助老人过马路的时候,或者帮助同学解决学习上的问题。

second, we get some help from others when we are in need.

第二,在我们需要帮助的时候得到他人的帮助。

third, we make new friends, or have a meal with families, or have a conversation with parents and so on.

第三,我们交新朋友,和家人吃东西,或者和父母聊聊天等。

everyone would appreciate the people who give us a hand. what’s more, we are glad when we stay with friends and families. all of these stand for we are happy.

大家都会很感激那些曾经给予我们帮助的人。而且,和父母或者朋友呆在一起我们也会很开心。所有这些都说明了我们很幸福。

happiness is just simple like these!

幸福就是那么的简单!

精选读者点评

这个“幸福是来自内心的真实感受”写得观点鲜明!后面举的三个例子也分外接地气,帮老人过马路、解同学难题、和爸妈吃饭,全是咱们天天能碰到的事。句子有点小毛刺(比如“making a progress”该说“making progress”),但意思像清泉水一样透亮。

反思 self-examination

700字
主题:代际理解、情感边界、自我觉察、亲密关系、成熟责任

as a child, my parents give me all their love and i think it is a necessary thing, so i am very naughty. when my parents teach me a lesson, i will be mad at them. as i grow up, i make many friends and sometimes we will have argument. then i learn that both of us need to give in, so the friendship will last long. why shouldn i be nice to my parents as what i do to my friends? i start to make self-e_amination.

因为还是孩子我父母给了我他们所有的爱,而我也认为这是理所当然的,所以我很淘气。当我父母教训我时,我会对他们生气。随着我的长大,我交了很多朋友,有时我们会发生争吵,我知道我们都需要让步,这样友谊才会持久。我为什么不像对待朋友那样善待父母呢?我开始自我反省。

people are easy to be angry to the person they love, because they know deeply in their hearts that they won be abandoned, so they leave the worst situation to the close person. this is most peoples evil side. they are nice to the strangers and are impatient to the families. families and the close friends will stand by our sides all the time, they deserve us to treat them nice.

人们很容易对自己所爱的人发怒,因为他们内心深处知道他们永远都不会抛弃自己,所以他们把最糟糕的状态留给身边的人。这是大多数人邪 恶的一面,他们对陌生人很好,却对家人很不耐烦。家人和亲密的朋友会一直在我们身边,他们值得我们对他们好。

i realize my mistakes and try to control my emotion when i talk to my parents. they are happy to see my change. when we grow up, we will understand life is not easy, but at least we are lucky to have families and friends around.

我意识到自己的错误并在与父母聊天的时候试图控制自己的情绪。他们很高兴看到我的变化。我们长大了,我们就会明白,生活并不容易,但至少我们很幸运,有家人和朋友在身边。

精选读者点评

“邪 恶的一面”这词儿用得真狠,但没写歪,你敢把心里那点别扭劲儿直接掏出来晒,比堆十个好词强多了。后头“最糟的状态留给身边的人”,我读着愣了三秒。

感恩老师英语作文带翻译

350字
主题:教育温度、自我突破、师者力量、学习信念、心灵唤醒

im not that kind of student who good at english and learn very quickly.i can say that i love english more than other subjects.even i can say english is a headache for me in the passed days.

however, this not last long since i met the current english teacher.he/shes such a good teacher who can absorb students attention to the lecture.and make the class so vivid that we don feels so boring.and she/he can make us feel rela_ and being encouraged, nobody has the feeling as a looser.

im really appretiate the god arranged such a teacher for us.

我不是那种擅长英语和学习的学生,我不能说我爱英语比其他科目都多,甚至连我也能说英语对我来说是一个令人头痛的日子。

但是,这不会持续很长时间,直到我遇到现在的英语老师。他/她是一个如此好的老师,能够吸引学生的注意听讲。把课很生动,我们不感到无聊。她/他能让我们感到放松和鼓励,任何人都没有感觉一个宽松的。

我真的很欣赏上帝安排这样的老师给我们。

精选读者点评

“头疼”真立体“英语是头痛”比“英语很难”有力多了,还带点小幽默,改掉几个语法硬伤,就是地道的口语风。

成长的烦恼

600字
主题:成长悖论、情绪自觉、生命接纳、快乐守恒

when we are little, we are eager to grow up, so that we can break free of parental discipline even leave them far. since we were a little child, we have to be governed by teachers in school and endure parent’s ramble at home. these are our growing pains. besides, study, friendship, sometimes campus romance may trouble us. however, as we grow up, we gradually find that things mentioned above are not pains at all. there are much more serious things brother us. for e_ample, we may be less sensitive to the simple happiness and loss them gradually. it’s hard for us to laugh from our heart. moreover, we are in the age that we are eager to grow up but afraid to grow up either. the ambivalence afflicts us a lot. however, no matter what happens in our growth, they are parts of our lives. we must accept them actively and do not let the pains prevent us from happiness.

小的时候,我们都渴望长大,以便能脱离父母的管束,甚至离他们远远的。自从孩提起,在学校我们就被老师管着,在家又得忍受父母的絮絮叨叨。这就是我们成长中的烦恼。此外,学习、友情,有时候甚至校园恋情都会来叨扰我们。但是,随着慢慢长大,我们逐渐发现以上这些根本称不上是成长的烦恼,还有很多更烦恼的事让我们纠结不已。例如,我们慢慢地对一些简单的快乐麻木了,于是就失去这些快乐了,我们变得很难发自内心地微笑了。还有,我们正处在渴望长大但又害怕长大的阶段,这种矛盾情绪折磨着我们。但是,不管在成长的过程中遭遇到什么,它们都是我们生活中的一部分,我们要乐观地接受,不让烦恼挤走快乐。

精选读者点评

中英文混搭得挺有想法,但“brother us”“e_ample”这种笔误得圈出来,别让粗心抢了思想的风头。

眼泪错乱落

650字
主题:青春、失恋、身份认同、情感真相、语言困境、自我觉醒

we may really only be the case now. i finally realized that if you love a person, even if he proposed to break up with you, and say love you, you will not care. you still love him humble.

yin house

i really love you. it can bother you is so, so hurt my heart.

every time i was around a lot of girls, you get angry, you will _ipi_iaolian, and took me into her arms, she said to me: clan house, do not be angry with me! i was just goofing around with them, they are just the way of wildflowers, but you are my final destination.

do not know how, i heard your voice, i immediately got a soft heart, no longer angry.

i was too stupid, right? yes, because you are like that.

im not going to warn you spin around the girls, because i know that there is no use.

because, you are the honey, but they are the bees, you can not help but want to fly here.

i thought this really can be like you said, you will soon lose them.

but why this is the cruel truth?

one night, i saw you hug a handsome quiet girl, walked into ktv, look on your face, and when i promise to be your girlfriend the same time proud, happy.

im just looking to see mongolia. suddenly aware you are my boyfriend, and you, being hugged the other girls.

i immediately stepped forward, looking at you with incredible eyes, that you give me an e_planation. then you just give me an e_planation, ill believe it. but you do not, no.

instead, you use the impatience looked at me, opening: yin house, get out.

why? im weird.

break up, we quickly break up! you impatiently.

then you hug the girl went into the ktv.

i am a person walking on the road, lights shining on me figure is so bleak.

this lonely night, after all, made me a person to carry.

i love the people, he fell in love with someone else.

yes ah, my name is yan house, inna house, marriage wrong, wrong marriage.

after all, it is an indulgence.

love, now in my eyes, but nothing is the most despicable thing.

我们也许

精选读者点评

这个“阴屋”名字反复出现,像一根扎进纸里的刺,你写得越用力,它越晃眼。后半段中文突然冒出来,像门被推开一条缝,光漏进来,但没接着推到底。试试把“阴屋”和“嫣华”“姻祸”这些谐音全写在稿纸边,圈出最疼的那个。

敬畏生命

900字
主题:生命平等、成长代价、敬畏意识、情感共通、存在尊严、伦理自觉

“在非洲的戈壁滩上,有一种叫依米的小花,花成四瓣,每瓣各成一色,红、白、黄、蓝。通常,它要花费五年的时间来完成根茎的穿插工作,然后,一点一点地积累养分,在第六年春才在地面上吐绿绽翠,开出一朵小小的四色鲜花。尤其让人惊叹的是,这种极难长成的依米小花,花期并不长,仅仅两天工夫,它便随母株一起香消玉殒了。”

我静静的站起身,小小的花儿,竟有如此强的毅力。

门前又传出几声嬉闹,我伏在窗口望着他们,又是那群小孩子。

他们笑得太大声了。

记得丰子恺曾劝告过小孩子不要肆意用脚踩蚂蚁,不要肆意用火或用水去残害蚂蚁。

下楼。

可以说,我没有把握让他们真的走掉,真的放过那群可怜的蚂蚁。

在孩子的眼里,生命是死是活仿佛没有什么差别,就像《皇帝的新装》里面那个小孩一样,之所以他敢说出真相,是因为他不会去害怕自己被杀死,那么,眼前的这群小朋友和他又有什么差别呢?他们会去肆意残杀动物,是因为他们对自己的生命都没有一个完整的概念啊!他们不像猎人,猎人是为了生存,而他们,从一开始仅仅只是出于贪玩的心理罢了。出于形象问题,我还是放弃了直接出去对他们大吼大叫的念头。

我悄悄的在自家门的后面滴上几滴蜜。效果还不错。

生命的成长总是伴随着欢乐的笑声和辛酸的泪水,生命的成长也总是伴随着成功的喜悦的喜悦和失败的打击。这不只说的是人类啊,作为生命,必当如水一般容纳一切。

能够静静享受自然带给我们的滋味,倾听南归的大雁拍打双翅的声响,羚羊飞驰时风的呼啸与它的喘息,品味流水的清纯,桂花那淡淡的香。

不同的生命理所应当应该拥有不同的生命历程,然而上帝却又赋予了我们诸多相同的东西:爱,怜爱,苦恼,善良。正是因为如此,我才能真正去做到保护这些小东西;正是因为如此,它们才会走进人类的屋子啊!

它们竟又一次将我折服——它们拥有着有些人一生都欠缺的情感,信任。

它们竟再一次使我清醒——它们拥有着有些人一生都无法获得的情感,宽恕。

当然,我只能说是“某些人”,所谓的某些人,总以为人类是最伟大的,当然,另一些人,更比凡人更加敬畏生命,就是那些但凡吃肉都要想向上帝忏悔的人啊,他们是否令人尊敬呢。

至少我觉得是如此吧。

精选读者点评

依米花那段写得真静,像在纸上慢慢洇开的墨。后头蚂蚁那儿,你伏窗看小孩的镜头着实有电影感,但“他们笑得太大声了”这句,怎么读都像你心里突然硌了颗小石子。

亲近水关注水珍惜水

650字
主题:生态、乡愁、敬畏、守护、变迁、希望

雪,纷纷扬扬,飘飘洒洒。坐在窗前的我望着这皑皑的白雪,觉得它是那么洁白,那么纯净,不容得人们有丝毫玷污!望雪思水,这白雪让我想起了“她”——水。

一放长假,我定会去老家,一回老家我定会亲近“水”,她让我流连忘返!夏天,去水库游泳,水清清的、凉凉的;鱼儿在水里自由游弋;仰望天空,朵朵白云在蓝天悠闲地散着步。冬天,轻盈的雪花从空中飘落下来,给柳树披上一件白色的纱衣,给房屋戴上一顶白色的帽子,给大地盖上一层厚厚的被子,岁寒三友——“松、竹、梅”无论多么寒冷,依然挺立在那里,小伙伴们在雪地里打雪仗、堆雪人、搭城堡……欢声笑语令每个过路人止步欣赏一番!一切都是那么难忘、那么美好、那么和谐!

可不知什么时候起,小溪里的水发出一阵阵臭味,行人路过时会自觉不自觉地加快脚步,水的颜色也越来越黑,漂满垃圾的水面看了让人作呕,一辆装载有毒化学品的车侧翻后在新安江泄漏,150公里外的杭州桶装水被一抢而空,多地市民相继请环保局长下河游泳……是谁让她失去了本色?

长此以往,我不禁想:假如江河湖海都变臭了,或者干涸了,世界上再也没有一滴干净水,那么,花朵将枯萎,小草会低下头;人们望着荒芜的良田无计可施;夏季没有雷声,冬季没有雪景;我曾游玩的水库也将成为遗失的记忆……

想到这,我不敢再继续!趁现在到处还都有水,还有可治之机,我要向人们呼吁:请不要再往小溪里扔垃圾!请不要再直接排放污水!请不要把水染成黑色!请不要……

假如你去亲近水,关注水,珍惜水,相信她会还你一片清澈!

精选读者点评

雪写得真灵动,像从天上直接飘进本子来!后头水变黑那段,读着心一揪,你把“臭”字藏在句子里,比直说更吓人。结尾喊话有点急,喘口气再喊?

五一劳动节趣事作文

900字
主题:劳动价值、知足常乐、自我奋斗、家庭温暖、生态意识、经典启迪

五一劳动节趣事作文

劳动是产生一切知识,一切力量,一切道德,一切幸福的源泉,劳动是生活的基础,是创造人类文化幸福的基础。

我们终于迎来了五一劳动节这个值得庆祝的节日,令我意义深重。这一天,我们一家人去了美丽的三门峡公园游玩。一路上,那些唱着歌儿的小鸟,那芬芳的花香,嫩绿的小草,翩翩起舞的蝴蝶,蓝蓝的天空和波光粼粼的湖水以及姿态优美的白天鹅像磁铁般深深地吸引住了游客的目光,令游客们赞叹不已。

我们一家人却非常特殊,每个人手里都拿一个塑料袋,一边看着美丽的风景,一边捡拾着周围的垃圾。妈妈意味深长的告诉我;“今天是五一劳动节,我们每个人都应该劳动,而这次劳动非常特殊,要捡拾垃圾,使我们共同的家园更美好。”妈妈这句话深深地感动了我,于是,我低下头努力捡拾垃圾,在这过程中我不断的鼓励自己,鼓励自己要捡拾更多的垃圾。我心里一直在想:“今天是五一劳动节,我们更应该努力劳动,应该美化环境,绿化地球,使我们共同的家园更加干净。

劳动是光荣的,劳动是幸福的,劳动可以创造美。同时,劳动也是辛苦的,但是过程却是快乐的,收获更是幸福的。这一天,让我学会了劳动,也体会到了劳动的快乐,更加证实了一句话:幸福就在有益于人类的劳动中。

我读过许多故事,故事的结局大多都是美满的。可我今天读的这个故事,结局却和想象中的不一样,那就是《渔夫和金鱼的故事》。

从前,在一个村庄里,住着一对老夫妇。老两口靠打鱼为生,过着贫苦的生活。有一天,渔夫在打鱼的时候,打上来一条会说话的金鱼。金鱼说:“只要你放了我,我就会帮你实现愿望。”

从此,从新木盆到漂亮的房子,从漂亮的房子到当富婆,又从富婆想当女王,渔夫的老婆要求越来越高,到最后她还要当日月星辰的主人。终于,这个无礼的要求让金鱼非常生气,就又让他们过上了像以前一样贫穷的生活。

这个故事告诉了我们两个道理:第一,人不要太贪婪,贪婪会给自己带来不幸;第二,靠别人得到的幸福是短暂的,而靠自己劳动得到的幸福是永久的。

我现在的幸福是爸爸妈妈给的,随着爸爸妈妈工作环境的变化,我们家的条件越来越好,我们住上了漂亮的房子,我也有更好的学习条件,这些都是靠他们自己的劳动和努力得来的。他们用勤奋创造了幸福的生活。

精选读者点评

“劳动节捡垃圾”写得像春游小记,画面感挺足,小鸟唱歌、蝴蝶跳舞、天鹅摆pose……可后半段突然插进《渔夫和金鱼》,像作文本里掉进一页语文书,没接住。下次试试:捡的每一片纸屑,能不能也讲出一个小故事。

有魅力的女孩 the attractive girl

750字
主题:美育观、成长启示、平凡力量、人文温度、价值选择

在中国美的标准被认为是那些拥有白皮肤、大眼睛的人,因为大家都受到商业广告的影响。所以女孩子们都穿得很漂亮,买很多化妆品让自己看起来很漂亮,有吸引力。我见过很多漂亮的女孩,但是只有那些有趣的女孩才能够吸引我的注意。

the charm of a person is not from appearance, but from inside. i met a person when i joined my friend’s party. the girl was playing cards, while other girls played tricks and made the boys feel embarrassed. then the girl laughed and put her cards on the table and asked to play other games as it was so boring. what she did made the boys set free from the awkward situation. i admired her so much and made friends with her. later i found that her life was so e_cellent. though she did not make up often, she dressed neatly, and her room was tidy. when i asked her question about the brands, she could offer me some advice. bur she never showed off it. 一个人的魅力不是来自外表,而是来自内在美。在我参加一个朋友的聚会时,我遇到过一个女孩。那个女孩当时在打牌,其他女孩则在捉弄人,旁边的男孩们感到很尴尬。女孩笑了笑,把她的牌放到了桌上,说玩其他的游戏,因为这个游戏太无聊了。她的所作所为让男孩们从尴尬的局面中解脱出来。我很钦佩她,所以和她交了朋友。后来我发现,她是非常优秀的,虽然她不常化妆,但是她衣着整齐,房间也很整洁。当我向她资询牌子问题的时候,她也会给我一些建议。但是她从不炫耀。

the girl was full of charm to me, and i learned a lot from her. 这个女孩对我来说是充满魅力的,我从她身上学到了很多东西。

当我们还是孩子的时候,我们的母亲一直陪伴着我们,照料着一切。孩子们的常见问题是挑食。这也是母亲最烦恼的问题之一。据一则新闻报道,一位美国的母亲受到了这个问题的困扰,她就学着去把食物弄成各种各样的卡通图片形状。当她的孩子看到这些样式时,高兴极了,就把食物吃光光了。

精选读者点评

这个“打牌解围”的细节明快利落!女孩笑一笑、推牌、换游戏,几个动作就把人栩栩如生可感,比直接说“她善良幽默”有力多了。后头写她房间整洁、不炫耀,也自然。唯独“卡通食物”那段跟前文气质不太搭,像突然换了个频道。

雷锋叔叔,您在哪里

650字
主题:善良本心、社会责任、精神延续、人性温度、价值坚守、榜样力量

当我听到山东老奶奶摔倒地上,而没有人搀扶的时候;

当我听到佛山2岁小妹妹,被两辆车三次碾压,十多个路人见死不救的时候;

当我听到无锡市有个男孩落水,自己的爸爸以为是别人家的孩子而没出手相救而被眼睁睁的淹死的时候;

当我看到地铁里抱小孩的阿姨吃力而焦急的抱着孩子而无人让座和帮助的时候;

当我在公交车上看到老爷爷和老奶奶无人让座的时候;

我的心总是一次一次的难过和悲伤

这个时候,我多么的想念您啊,雷锋叔叔!

雷锋叔叔,您在哪里?

您在大雨天送老奶奶和孙子回家,老奶奶和小孙子踏实而安静的脸庞,让我感到无比的温暖;

您在学校义务搬运砖,还带动了大家一起努力和冲刺的激烈场面,让我久久不能忘怀;

您总是艰苦朴素,一双袜子补了一遍又一遍,却给灾区捐助100元钱;

您总是为身边的人想得那么周到,照顾得那么周全;

您走到哪里都会有您为人民服务的身影,并带给人们笑脸和温暖;

为什么身边很少看到您的身影,看到您的笑脸?

为什么我们害怕一个人出门,爸爸妈妈总说社会不安全?

为什么我们不能像您们那会一样,孩子们自己出去种植树木和自发的去为人民服务,为社会服务?

我好想告诉您,您有一个传人,他叫郭明义

他和您一样不计报酬、不问回馈,在奉献中充实自己,在助人中愉悦自己

还有很多像您和郭叔叔这样的人,只是我们不知道

我好想让雷锋叔叔的精神传遍世界每一个角落

我好想让每个人都变成您的传人

都拥有您“把有限的生命,奉献到无限的为人民服务之中去”的精神

请和我们一起来发扬您的精神

饱受您的感染

让我们人人都变成雷锋的传人

精选读者点评

这个“雷锋叔叔,您在哪里?”问得真放心不下!开头连用五个“当我听到/看到……”排比,节奏像心跳一样咚咚响,把人一下子拽进现场。倒是中间几处标点有点小迷糊,比如“老奶奶和小孙子踏实而安静的脸庞,让我感到无比的温暖;”后面那个分号,换成句号更顺气儿。