减轻学生负担

300字
主题:学习自由、教育本质、成长空间、评价方式、课业负担、真实成长

i am very disappointed not to be able to go to see a film with my friends, to play my favorite musical instrument, or to watch tv with my family in the evening. i have to sit at desk and do my homework, which can not be finished until midnight, i'm tired of doing much homework, get bored at taking so many e_ams, and lose interest in studying.

teachers, please get rid of homework and e_aminations. e_aminations are nothing but an_iety-makers. homework is nothing but interest-killers.

teachers, we can learn more outside the classroom. classroom gives us limited kinds of information. we can only learn some dead knowledge from the books.teachers, please set us free, and let us learn more outside the classroom

from the environment, from tv, from private study or from our friends.

my dear teachers, can you hear me? please lighten the burden on students.( 150 words)

精选读者点评

心里憋着一股劲儿呢!“焦虑制造者”“兴趣杀手”,用词真敢写,火气里透着清醒。倒是“死知识”这说法,咱俩课后聊聊?

an english speech

450字
主题:教学优化、语言实践、兴趣培养、资源整合、学以致用

初中英语作文大全:an english speech

dear miss jiang,

i am writing to share my ideas about our english class. now, our main material in the class is the te_tbook, which is reasonable. but i think we can get some other resources, such as english magazines, songs, movies and so on. we can learn the basic knowledge from out te_tbook, and get some more from other materials. in addition, those materials are more authentic and practical, which will be useful to our learning. besides, by doing so, we can get more fun from learning and develop our interest to english. please take good consideration of my advice. thank you!

sincerely yours

bella

尊敬的蒋老师:

您好!我写信是想和你谈谈我对英语课的想法。现在我们上课用的主要材料是课本,这是合理的。但是我认为我们可以获取一些其他资源,比如英语杂志,歌曲,电影等等。我们可以从课本上学到基本的知识,同时从其他材料获取更多知识。另外,那些材料更真实和实用,这对于我们的学习会有好处的。此外,通过这样做我们可以从学习中获得更多乐趣从而培养我们对英语的兴趣。请您认真考虑我的建议,谢谢!

贝拉

精选读者点评

贝拉这封信英文部分动词时态很稳,but后面接的三个并列名词(magazines/songs/movies)还加了and so on,显得有点松,删掉它,直接用“etc.”更干净。中文里“获取更多知识”重复了两次,圈出来啦!

初二英语作文-给英语老师的一封信

400字
主题:教学优化、资源拓展、兴趣驱动、学以致用

dear miss li,

i am writing to share my ideas about our english class. now, our main material in the class is the te_tbook, which is reasonable. but i think we can get some other resources, such as english magazines, songs, movies and so on. we can learn the basic knowledge from out te_tbook, and get some more from other materials. in addition, those materials are more authentic and practical, which will be useful to our learning. besides, by doing so, we can get more fun from learning and develop our interest to english. please take good consideration of my advice. thank you!

亲爱的李老师,

我写信给我们的英语课分享我的想法。现在,我们的主要资料是课堂上用的教科书,这是合理的。但我认为,我们可以得到一些其他的资料,如英文杂志,英语歌曲,英语电影等。从教科书里,我们可以学习到基本的知识,并得到一些更多的其他材料。此外,这些材料是真实的很实用,将有利于我们的学习。此外,通过这样做,我们将有更多的学习英语的乐趣,从学习和发展我们的“英语”能力。请好好考虑我的建议。谢谢!

精选读者点评

这封信的格式真规范!称呼、分段、结尾礼节都刻画到位,连中英文对照都工整,看得出你非常用心在学“怎么好好说话”。话说回来第二段“get some more from other materials”这句,主语悄悄换了,读着有点飘,试试把“we”补上呢!